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[[caption-width-right:350:[[TheAtoner Kian]] and [[TheMessiah Zoë]]]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:[[TheAtoner Kian]] and [[TheMessiah [[MessianicArchetype Zoë]]]]
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* AGlitchInTheMatrix: [[spoiler:The opening sequence of Chapter 12, has Zoë walking around her hospital room and discover that there are several things off about the objects in the room; such as a get-well-soon card from the long-deceased Olivia and a picture of her university graduation which she only can remember herself being at.]]
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* AGlitchInTheMatrix: [[spoiler:The opening sequence of Chapter 12, has Zoë walking around her hospital room and discover that there are several things off about the objects in the room; such as a get-well-soon card from the long-deceased Olivia and a picture of her university graduation which she only can remember herself being at.at (or even never happened in the first place).]]
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-->'''Zoë:''' I'm a thread without a spool... Oh, for God's Sake, I'm starting to talk like you!
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-->'''Zoë:''' I'm a thread without a spool... spool… Oh, for God's Sake, I'm starting to talk like you!
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** [[spoiler: Zoë with her head shaved and neural access ports all over it, and in a futuristic jumpsuit, just seconds after seeing her as we normally see her.]]
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** [[spoiler: Zoë with her head shaved and neural access ports all over it, and in a futuristic jumpsuit, just seconds after seeing her as we normally see her. This is emphasized by the description of the CosmeticAward: "WHAT IN THE ACTUAL F**K".]]
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Badass Mustache and Badass Beard are being merged into Manly Facial Hair. Examples that don't fit or are zero-context are removed. To qualify for Manly Facial Hair, the facial hair must be associated with masculinity in some way. Please read the trope description before readding to make sure the example qualifies.
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* TimeSkip: Two months pass between Book 2 and Book 3. Zoë's hair is [[BoyishShortHair much shorter]], while Kian has grown out his hair and a [[BadassBeard full beard]].
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* TimeSkip: Two months pass between Book 2 and Book 3. Zoë's hair is [[BoyishShortHair much shorter]], while Kian has grown out his hair and a [[BadassBeard full beard]].beard.
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Not So Different has been renamed, and it needs to be dewicked/moved
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* NotSoDifferent: A WhamLine reveals that [[spoiler: Uminska and Wolf have ''both'' been doing things with WATI...]]
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** [[spoiler: Give Baruti data that suggests Uminska and Wolf are NotSoDifferent and risk Baruti giving it to people who'll delete all records? Or give it to the Hand that Feeds and risk destroying Baruti's life?]] The sadism of this particular choice is hammered home by the fact that [[spoiler: if you choose to give the data to the Hand, you are forced to then tell Baruti what you've done behind his back. Though if you speak to him ahead of time and explain your reasoning, he will at least appreciate your honesty and your relationship will be on better terms.]]
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** [[spoiler: Give Baruti data that suggests Uminska and Wolf are NotSoDifferent aren't so different and risk Baruti giving it to people who'll delete all records? Or give it to the Hand that Feeds and risk destroying Baruti's life?]] The sadism of this particular choice is hammered home by the fact that [[spoiler: if you choose to give the data to the Hand, you are forced to then tell Baruti what you've done behind his back. Though if you speak to him ahead of time and explain your reasoning, he will at least appreciate your honesty and your relationship will be on better terms.]]
