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* TeacherStudentRomance: Averted. Deidara wonders if Kagami's hot for her teacher. He dismisses that idea, and he's absolutely right in doing so. Kagami does, however have some very grudging respect towards her teacher, although she'd rather [[GenerationXerox bite her tongue off]][[hottip:*:(Generation Xerox... Because Kisame bit his tongue off! Get it? Hahahaha! ...Yes, even we thought that joke was awful.)]] than admit it.
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* TeacherStudentRomance: Averted. Deidara wonders if Kagami's hot for her teacher. He dismisses that idea, and he's absolutely right in doing so. Kagami does, however have some very grudging respect towards her teacher, although she'd rather [[GenerationXerox bite her tongue off]][[hottip:*:(Generation off]][[note]](Generation Xerox... Because Kisame bit his tongue off! Get it? Hahahaha! ...Yes, even we thought that joke was awful.)]] )[[/note]] than admit it.
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** WordOfGod [[hottip:*: (Jo: That's right, bitches. I'm God.)]] states that that's only what [[UnreliableNarrator Kagami herself]] is willing to believe and accept. Her real DespairEventHorizon was when she was told she'd better leave the Akatsuki HQ. That was a bigger hit than Itachi's death. Not so strange, considering she'd had a year to mentally prepare herself for that. The HQ, however, was the only place she'd ever thought of as a home and while still trying to adjust to Itachi's death, she had to cut off all bonds with that one place. In other words, there's a reason her favourite word is "place".
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** WordOfGod [[hottip:*: [[note]] (Jo: That's right, bitches. I'm God.)]] )[[/note]] states that that's only what [[UnreliableNarrator Kagami herself]] is willing to believe and accept. Her real DespairEventHorizon was when she was told she'd better leave the Akatsuki HQ. That was a bigger hit than Itachi's death. Not so strange, considering she'd had a year to mentally prepare herself for that. The HQ, however, was the only place she'd ever thought of as a home and while still trying to adjust to Itachi's death, she had to cut off all bonds with that one place. In other words, there's a reason her favourite word is "place".
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Deidara and pilaf.
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: CrowningMomentOfFunny:
** Deidara and pilaf.
** Deidara and pilaf.
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* BlackAndWhiteBeauty: Jo, according to Katsuro.
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* EmoTeen: Subverted with Katsuro, who's actually twenty-three and thus not a teen.
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* EmoTeen: Subverted with Katsuro, who's actually twenty-three and thus not a teen.twenty-four.
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* RavenHairIvorySkin: Jo, according to Katsuro.
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* HypnoFool: Katsuro does pretty much anything that Jo tells him to when she hypnotizes him.
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* DistractedByTheSexy: Katsuro about Jo. And alot of other people.
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* DistractedByTheSexy: Katsuro about Jo. And alot a lot of other people.
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--> Maybe there was no solution, just like that. Maybe it'd be bothersome for [Kagami] if [Itachi] always was there to cheer her up when she had bad days. maybe he'd have to accept Kagami just had bad days at times.\\
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--> Maybe there was no solution, just like that. Maybe it'd be bothersome for [Kagami] if [Itachi] always was there to cheer her up when she had bad days. maybe Maybe he'd have to accept Kagami just had bad days at times.\\
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--> "Maybe we should get someone to clean aswell," Hidan said. Kakuzu remarked that'd be way too expensive. Besides, the organization was secret for a reason. "Shut up!"\\
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--> "Maybe we should get someone to clean aswell," as well," Hidan said. Kakuzu remarked that'd be way too expensive. Besides, the organization was secret for a reason. "Shut up!"\\
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"Yes. That's why I'm sacrificing myself for Sasuke. I have to do it, so that things will turn out good for him. Or at least better than they would have otherwise. But he's not more important than you."\\
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"Yes. That's why I'm sacrificing myself for Sasuke. I have to do it, so that things will turn out good well for him. Or at least better than they would have otherwise. But he's not more important than you."\\
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"She was looking for me," Kisame said. Hidan suddenly got quiet. He looked at Kisame as if he was trying to figure something out. He soon gave up. "...Why?"\\
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"She was looking for me," Kisame said. Hidan suddenly got quiet. He looked at Kisame as if he was trying to figure something out. He soon gave up. "...Why?"\\Why?"
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In general, anything regarding Kisame.
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--> Maybe there was no solution, just like that. Maybe it'd be bothersome for [Kagami] if [Itachi] always was there to cheer her up when she had bad days. maybe he'd have to accept Kagami just had bad days at times.
-->Maybe he'd ask Kisame and Pain to help him make her a very very big bananasplit.
-->Maybe he'd ask Kisame and Pain to help him make her a very very big bananasplit.
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--> Maybe there was no solution, just like that. Maybe it'd be bothersome for [Kagami] if [Itachi] always was there to cheer her up when she had bad days. maybe he'd have to accept Kagami just had bad days at times.
-->Maybetimes.\\
Maybe he'd ask Kisame and Pain to help him make her a very very big bananasplit.
-->Maybe
Maybe he'd ask Kisame and Pain to help him make her a very very big bananasplit.
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--> "Maybe we should get someone to clean aswell," Hidan said. Kakuzu remarked that'd be way too expensive. Besides, the organization was secret for a reason. "Shut up!"
"Yesss..." Orochimaru hissed. "Why not put some flyers up, saying that the Akatsuki is looking for a maid, with a convinient description on how to get here..."
"How did that girl get here then, eh?!"
"She was looking for me," Kisame said. Hidan suddenly got quiet. He looked at Kisame as if he was trying to figure something out. He soon gave up. "...Why?"
"Yesss..." Orochimaru hissed. "Why not put some flyers up, saying that the Akatsuki is looking for a maid, with a convinient description on how to get here..."
"How did that girl get here then, eh?!"
"She was looking for me," Kisame said. Hidan suddenly got quiet. He looked at Kisame as if he was trying to figure something out. He soon gave up. "...Why?"
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--> "Maybe we should get someone to clean aswell," Hidan said. Kakuzu remarked that'd be way too expensive. Besides, the organization was secret for a reason. "Shut up!"
up!"\\
"Yesss..." Orochimaru hissed. "Why not put some flyers up, saying that the Akatsuki is looking for a maid, with a convinient description on how to gethere..."
to the HQ..."\\
"How did that girl get here then,eh?!"
eh?!"\\
"She was looking for me," Kisame said. Hidan suddenly got quiet. He looked at Kisame as if he was trying to figure something out. He soon gave up. "...Why?"Why?"\\
"Yesss..." Orochimaru hissed. "Why not put some flyers up, saying that the Akatsuki is looking for a maid, with a convinient description on how to get
"How did that girl get here then,
"She was looking for me," Kisame said. Hidan suddenly got quiet. He looked at Kisame as if he was trying to figure something out. He soon gave up. "...
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* LadyInRed: Jo. She turned up to school one day with purple clothes one day. Everyone commented on how she was not wearing red.
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* LadyInRed: Jo. She turned up to school one day with purple clothes one day. Everyone commented on how she was not wearing red.
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* CasualKink: [[MindControl Genjutsu]] [[AuthorAppeal is very good for S&M.]]
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* BondageIsBad: Subverted with Itachi, who is not a villain after all. May or may not be played straight with Kagami, who's in the gray area.
* CasualKink: [[MindControl Genjutsu]] [[AuthorAppeal is verygood good]] for S&M.]]
* CasualKink: [[MindControl Genjutsu]] [[AuthorAppeal is very
** The prequel has this gem:
-->'''Kisame's POV''': Why did she [Kagami] want to be trained? Why by him? Why wouldn't she let him drink in peace?
In general, anything regarding Kisame.
** Also, this paragraph from an omake had Jo laugh so loud she woke her parents up:
--> Maybe there was no solution, just like that. Maybe it'd be bothersome for [Kagami] if [Itachi] always was there to cheer her up when she had bad days. maybe he'd have to accept Kagami just had bad days at times.
-->Maybe he'd ask Kisame and Pain to help him make her a very very big bananasplit.
** Another one from the prequel:
--> "Maybe we should get someone to clean aswell," Hidan said. Kakuzu remarked that'd be way too expensive. Besides, the organization was secret for a reason. "Shut up!"
"Yesss..." Orochimaru hissed. "Why not put some flyers up, saying that the Akatsuki is looking for a maid, with a convinient description on how to get here..."
"How did that girl get here then, eh?!"
"She was looking for me," Kisame said. Hidan suddenly got quiet. He looked at Kisame as if he was trying to figure something out. He soon gave up. "...Why?"
-->'''Kisame's POV''': Why did she [Kagami] want to be trained? Why by him? Why wouldn't she let him drink in peace?
In general, anything regarding Kisame.
** Also, this paragraph from an omake had Jo laugh so loud she woke her parents up:
--> Maybe there was no solution, just like that. Maybe it'd be bothersome for [Kagami] if [Itachi] always was there to cheer her up when she had bad days. maybe he'd have to accept Kagami just had bad days at times.
-->Maybe he'd ask Kisame and Pain to help him make her a very very big bananasplit.
** Another one from the prequel:
--> "Maybe we should get someone to clean aswell," Hidan said. Kakuzu remarked that'd be way too expensive. Besides, the organization was secret for a reason. "Shut up!"
"Yesss..." Orochimaru hissed. "Why not put some flyers up, saying that the Akatsuki is looking for a maid, with a convinient description on how to get here..."
"How did that girl get here then, eh?!"
"She was looking for me," Kisame said. Hidan suddenly got quiet. He looked at Kisame as if he was trying to figure something out. He soon gave up. "...Why?"
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* {{Tearjerker}}: In Katsuro's opinion, when Itachi reveals his plans to Kagami.
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* {{Tearjerker}}: In Katsuro's opinion, when Itachi reveals his plans to Kagami. In Jo's opinion, how Kagami spent her last time and just the concept of being completely alone.
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* BastardBoyfriend: He [[OutOfCharacterMoment becomes]] this in the omakes.
* CasualKink: He really seems to have a thing for hypnosis [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean in bed.]]
* CasualKink: He really seems to have a thing for hypnosis [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean in bed.]]
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* BastardBoyfriend: He [[OutOfCharacterMoment becomes]] this in the omakes.
hypnofics. Somewhat justified by the fact that if he wasn't, there would be no hypnofics and Katsuro would be depressed and Jo would have to comfort him.
* CasualKink: He really seems to have a thing for hypnosis[[IfYouKnowWhatIMean in bed.]]bed. No AuthorAppeal at all, of course...
* FreudianExcuse: You know the drill...
* CasualKink: He really seems to have a thing for hypnosis
* FreudianExcuse: You know the drill...
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* {{Leitmotif}}: According to Katsuro, Soichiro Arima II from the Kare Kano OST.
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* {{Leitmotif}}: According to Katsuro, Soichiro Arima II from the Kare Kano OST. Jo thinks it should be Soichiro Arima I, but okay...
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* TallDarkAndHandsome: Of course.
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* TallDarkAndHandsome: Of course. Rightout stated... By [[ItMakesSenseInContext Deidara]].
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* FreedomFromChoice: Prefers this because of her ParalyzingFearOfSexuality.
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* KatanasAreJustBetter: Averted.
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* KatanasAreJustPLainBetter: Averted.