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In addition to improper indentation and again relying on weblinks as examples (Weblinks Are Not Examples), a lot of this isn't to do with the troubled production itself, just existing to make the story more dramatic.
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* TroubledProduction: In October 2021, roughly one month before the game's finalized release date, former developer "Wren" -- who had previously blown the whistle on Creator/DangenEntertainment for its behind-the-scenes abuse and handling of ''VideoGame/DevilEngine'' -- wrote a secondary piece detailing issues with the creation of ''Fight Knight'', which she had also worked on as a writer (though it was later clarified that she was only really part of the team for about a month before her own mental health issues caused her to pull back from her work.) In her writeups, not only did she claim that the lead developers struggled to reach deadlines (she reportedly only joined in development at the behest of lead developer "Boen" -- who she was in a romantic relationship with at the time -- who felt there were multiple problems with the script), she also alleged being the subject of chronic sexual harassment, wage discrimination, and her relationship with Boen devolved into incidents of sexual abuse, rape, and psychological manipulation via ''hypnosis''.
** It should be noted that Wren later recanted her allegations after Boen provided a detailed rebuttal debunking many of her accusations, claiming that Wren had deliberately misconstrued their relationship and that things were more complicated than they appeared.
** Youtuber "Technicals" would in April 2024 release an hour long documentary [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a8FLM_Jwtq4/]] on Fight Knight's development that investigated the game's troubled development, Wren's allegations and her possible motivations for making them.
** It should be noted that Wren later recanted her allegations after Boen provided a detailed rebuttal debunking many of her accusations, claiming that Wren had deliberately misconstrued their relationship and that things were more complicated than they appeared.
** Youtuber "Technicals" would in April 2024 release an hour long documentary [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a8FLM_Jwtq4/]] on Fight Knight's development that investigated the game's troubled development, Wren's allegations and her possible motivations for making them.
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* TroubledProduction: In October 2021, roughly one month before the game's finalized release date, former developer "Wren" -- who had previously blown the whistle on Creator/DangenEntertainment for its behind-the-scenes abuse and handling of ''VideoGame/DevilEngine'' -- wrote a secondary piece detailing issues with the creation of ''Fight Knight'', which she had also worked on as a writer (though it was later clarified that she was only really part of the team for about a month before her own mental health issues caused her to pull back from her work.) In her writeups, not only did she claim that the lead developers struggled to reach deadlines (she reportedly only joined in development at the behest of lead developer "Boen" -- who she was in a romantic relationship with at the time -- who felt there were multiple problems with the script), she also alleged being the subject of chronic sexual harassment, wage discrimination, and her relationship with Boen devolved into incidents of sexual abuse, rape, and psychological manipulation via ''hypnosis''.
** It should be noted that Wren later recanted her allegations after Boen provided a detailed rebuttal debunking many of her accusations, claiming that Wren had deliberately misconstrued their relationship and that things were more complicated than they appeared.
** Youtuber "Technicals" would in April 2024 release an hour long documentary [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a8FLM_Jwtq4/]] on Fight Knight's development that investigated the game's troubled development, Wren's allegations and her possible motivations for making them.manipulation.
** It should be noted that Wren later recanted her allegations after Boen provided a detailed rebuttal debunking many of her accusations, claiming that Wren had deliberately misconstrued their relationship and that things were more complicated than they appeared.
** Youtuber "Technicals" would in April 2024 release an hour long documentary [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a8FLM_Jwtq4/]] on Fight Knight's development that investigated the game's troubled development, Wren's allegations and her possible motivations for making them.
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** Youtuber "Technicals" would in April 2024 release an hour long [[www.youtube.com/watch?v=a8FLM_Jwtq4 documentary]] on Fight Knight's development that investigated the game's troubled development, Wren's allegations and her possible motivations for making them.
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** Youtuber "Technicals" would in April 2024 release an hour long [[www.long documentary [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a8FLM_Jwtq4 documentary]] com/watch?v=a8FLM_Jwtq4/]] on Fight Knight's development that investigated the game's troubled development, Wren's allegations and her possible motivations for making them.
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It should be noted that Wren later recanted her allegations after Boen provided a detailed rebuttal debunking many of her accusations, claiming that Wren had deliberately misconstrued their relationship and that things were more complicated than they appeared.
It should be noted that Wren later recanted her allegations after Boen provided a detailed rebuttal debunking many of her accusations, claiming that Wren had deliberately misconstrued their relationship and that things were more complicated than they appeared.
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* TroubledProduction: In October 2021, roughly one month before the game's finalized release date, former developer "Wren" -- who had previously blown the whistle on Creator/DangenEntertainment for its behind-the-scenes abuse and handling of ''VideoGame/DevilEngine'' -- wrote a secondary piece detailing issues with the creation of ''Fight Knight'', which they had also worked on as a writer. In her writeups, not only did she claim that the lead developers struggled to reach deadlines (she reportedly only joined in development at the behest of lead developer "Boen" -- who she was in a romantic relationship with at the time -- who felt there were multiple problems with the script), she also alleged being the subject of chronic sexual harassment, wage discrimination, and her relationship with Boen devolved into incidents of sexual abuse, rape, and psychological manipulation.
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* TroubledProduction: In October 2021, roughly one month before the game's finalized release date, former developer "Wren" -- who had previously blown the whistle on Creator/DangenEntertainment for its behind-the-scenes abuse and handling of ''VideoGame/DevilEngine'' -- wrote a secondary piece detailing issues with the creation of ''Fight Knight'', which they she had also worked on as a writer. writer (though it was later clarified that she was only really part of the team for about a month before her own mental health issues caused her to pull back from her work.) In her writeups, not only did she claim that the lead developers struggled to reach deadlines (she reportedly only joined in development at the behest of lead developer "Boen" -- who she was in a romantic relationship with at the time -- who felt there were multiple problems with the script), she also alleged being the subject of chronic sexual harassment, wage discrimination, and her relationship with Boen devolved into incidents of sexual abuse, rape, and psychological manipulation.manipulation via ''hypnosis''.
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It should be noted that Wren later recanted her allegations after Boen provided a detailed rebuttal debunking many of her accusations, claiming that Wren had deliberately misconstrued their relationship and that things were more complicated than they appeared.
** Youtuber "Technicals" would in April 2024 release an hour long [[www.youtube.com/watch?v=a8FLM_Jwtq4 documentary]] on Fight Knight's development that investigated the game's troubled development, Wren's allegations and her possible motivations for making them.
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It should be noted that Wren later recanted her allegations after Boen provided a detailed rebuttal debunking many of her accusations, claiming that Wren had deliberately misconstrued their relationship and that things were more complicated than they appeared.
** Youtuber "Technicals" would in April 2024 release an hour long [[www.youtube.com/watch?v=a8FLM_Jwtq4 documentary]] on Fight Knight's development that investigated the game's troubled development, Wren's allegations and her possible motivations for making them.
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1) these were published in 2021. 2) Weblinks are not examples. 3) there's no need to spoiler tag real-life occurrences (especially trigger warnings; that's very unintuitive for their intended purposes).
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* TroubledProduction: In October 2021, roughly one month before the game's finalized release date, the author of the "Dangen Warning" that covered issues with Creator/DangenEntertainment and its handling of ''VideoGame/DevilEngine'' wrote a secondary piece detailing issues with the creation of ''Fight Knight'', which they had also worked on as a writer. The lead developer then refuted their statements, as well as made claims against the writer, after receiving legal counsel. [[https://rivalerose.wordpress.com/why-i-left-the-fight-knight-project/ Other issues of]] [[https://rivalerose.wordpress.com/what-i-witnessed-of-boens-friend-circle/ extremely sensitive]] [[https://rivalerose.wordpress.com/what-i-witnessed-of-boens-treatment-of-wren/ matters can]] [[http://www.nathalielawhead.com/candybox/in-support-of-wren-the-abuse-she-endured-while-working-on-fight-knight be found]] [[http://www.nathalielawhead.com/candybox/part-2-in-support-of-wren-the-abuse-she-continues-to-endure-fight-knight-and-publicly-ridiculing-her-trauma in these links]]. '''WARNING: Content warning for discussion of [[spoiler:industry abuses, sexual abuse, rape, gaslighting, mental illness, among other things]]'''.
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* TroubledProduction: In October 2021, roughly one month before the game's finalized release date, former developer "Wren" -- who had previously blown the author of the "Dangen Warning" that covered issues with whistle on Creator/DangenEntertainment for its behind-the-scenes abuse and its handling of ''VideoGame/DevilEngine'' -- wrote a secondary piece detailing issues with the creation of ''Fight Knight'', which they had also worked on as a writer. The In her writeups, not only did she claim that the lead developers struggled to reach deadlines (she reportedly only joined in development at the behest of lead developer then refuted their statements, as well as made claims against "Boen" -- who she was in a romantic relationship with at the writer, after receiving legal counsel. [[https://rivalerose.wordpress.com/why-i-left-the-fight-knight-project/ Other issues of]] [[https://rivalerose.wordpress.com/what-i-witnessed-of-boens-friend-circle/ extremely sensitive]] [[https://rivalerose.wordpress.com/what-i-witnessed-of-boens-treatment-of-wren/ matters can]] [[http://www.nathalielawhead.com/candybox/in-support-of-wren-the-abuse-she-endured-while-working-on-fight-knight be found]] [[http://www.nathalielawhead.com/candybox/part-2-in-support-of-wren-the-abuse-she-continues-to-endure-fight-knight-and-publicly-ridiculing-her-trauma in these links]]. '''WARNING: Content warning for discussion time -- who felt there were multiple problems with the script), she also alleged being the subject of [[spoiler:industry abuses, chronic sexual harassment, wage discrimination, and her relationship with Boen devolved into incidents of sexual abuse, rape, gaslighting, mental illness, among other things]]'''.
and psychological manipulation.
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* TroubledProduction: In October 2021, roughly one month before the game's finalized release date, the author of the "Dangen Warning" that covered issues with Creator/DangenEntertainment and its handling of ''VideoGame/DevilEngine'' wrote a secondary piece detailing issues with the creation of ''Fight Knight'', which they had also worked on as a writer. The lead developer then refuted their statements, as well as made claims against the writer, after receiving legal counsel.
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* TroubledProduction: In October 2021, roughly one month before the game's finalized release date, the author of the "Dangen Warning" that covered issues with Creator/DangenEntertainment and its handling of ''VideoGame/DevilEngine'' wrote a secondary piece detailing issues with the creation of ''Fight Knight'', which they had also worked on as a writer. The lead developer then refuted their statements, as well as made claims against the writer, after receiving legal counsel. [[https://rivalerose.wordpress.com/why-i-left-the-fight-knight-project/ Other issues of]] [[https://rivalerose.wordpress.com/what-i-witnessed-of-boens-friend-circle/ extremely sensitive]] [[https://rivalerose.wordpress.com/what-i-witnessed-of-boens-treatment-of-wren/ matters can]] [[http://www.nathalielawhead.com/candybox/in-support-of-wren-the-abuse-she-endured-while-working-on-fight-knight be found]] [[http://www.nathalielawhead.com/candybox/part-2-in-support-of-wren-the-abuse-she-continues-to-endure-fight-knight-and-publicly-ridiculing-her-trauma in these links]]. '''WARNING: Content warning for discussion of [[spoiler:industry abuses, sexual abuse, rape, gaslighting, mental illness, among other things]]'''.
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