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* All of Chapter 22 and 23, wherein [[{{Flashback Flashbacks}}]] reveal which Straw Hats survived the failed attempt to save Luffy.

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* All of Chapter 22 and 23, wherein [[{{Flashback Flashbacks}}]] Flashbacks reveal which Straw Hats survived the failed attempt to save Luffy.
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* All of Chapter 22 and 23, wherein [[Flashback Flashbacks]] reveal which Straw Hats survived the failed attempt to save Luffy.

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* All of Chapter 22 and 23, wherein {{[[Flashback Flashbacks]]}} reveal which Straw Hats survived the failed attempt to save Luffy.

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* All of Chapter 22 and 23, wherein {{[[Flashback Flashbacks]]}} [[Flashback Flashbacks]] reveal which Straw Hats survived the failed attempt to save Luffy.
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* All of Chapter 22 and 23, wherein {{Flashbacks}} reveal which Straw Hats survived the failed attempt to save Luffy.
** Particularly bad was the ending of Chapter 23, where Trafalgar Law finally accepts that Chopper died on the operating table on his watch, reflects on the irony of his RedBaron "The Surgeon of Death", [[BlackHumor then loses it]] and breaks down laughing.
* The in Chapter 25: The Death of The Thousand Sunny. The worst part about it is that the ship is apologizing to Mar as it goes down because it failed to keep its end of their bargain. *sniff* Sunny!

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* All of Chapter 22 and 23, wherein {{Flashbacks}} {{[[Flashback Flashbacks]]}} reveal which Straw Hats survived the failed attempt to save Luffy.
** Particularly bad was the ending of Chapter 23, where Trafalgar Law finally accepts that Chopper died on the operating table on his watch, reflects on the irony of his RedBaron "The Surgeon of Death", [[BlackHumor [[BlackComedy then loses it]] and breaks down laughing.
* The in Chapter 25: The Death of The Thousand Sunny. The worst part about it is that the ship is apologizing to Mar as it goes down because it failed to keep its end of their bargain. *sniff* Sunny!



* Chapter 32: The price of returning the ''Manga/OnePiece'' world to norma is Mar's very existence, and the Suesse family is ''painfully'' aware of this.

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* Chapter 32: The price of returning the ''Manga/OnePiece'' world to norma normal is Mar's very existence, and the Suesse family is ''painfully'' aware of this.
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* Chapter 8: Mar finds the [[WeaponTombstone graves]] of [[spoiler:some of the Straw-Hats]], and discovers that they have been defaced and looted.
* All of Chapter 22 and 23, wherein {{Flashbacks}} reveal [[spoiler:which Straw Hats survived the failed attempt to save Luffy]].
** Particularly bad was the ending of Chapter 23, where [[spoiler: Trafalgar Law finally accepts that Chopper died on the operating table on his watch, reflects on the irony of his RedBaron "The Surgeon of Death", [[BlackHumor then loses it]] and breaks down laughing]].
* The in Chapter 25: [[spoiler: The Death of The Thousand Sunny. The worst part about it is that the ship is apologizing to Mar as it goes down because it failed to keep its end of their bargain. *sniff* Sunny!]]
* Chapter 29: [[spoiler: Red, who is actually a X. Drake, has been turned into a PeoplePuppet and ordered to kill Mar.]] He tells others present [[spoiler: to shoot him in the head]], because he doesn't want to go through with it but [[CanOnlyMoveTheEyes he can't do anything]] to [[ICannotSelfTerminate stop himself.]]
* Chapter 30: Another flashback shows us the fate of the Heart Pirates. [[spoiler:While underwater, the Heart Pirate submarine is critically damaged after Monster Chopper went berserk. Law tries to use his powers save his crew, but unintentionally manages to save only himself, leaving him with the knowledge he left his crew to drown in the submarine.]]

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* Chapter 8: Mar finds the [[WeaponTombstone graves]] of [[spoiler:some some of the Straw-Hats]], Straw-Hats, and discovers that they have been defaced and looted.
* All of Chapter 22 and 23, wherein {{Flashbacks}} reveal [[spoiler:which which Straw Hats survived the failed attempt to save Luffy]].
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** Particularly bad was the ending of Chapter 23, where [[spoiler: Trafalgar Law finally accepts that Chopper died on the operating table on his watch, reflects on the irony of his RedBaron "The Surgeon of Death", [[BlackHumor then loses it]] and breaks down laughing]].laughing.
* The in Chapter 25: [[spoiler: The Death of The Thousand Sunny. The worst part about it is that the ship is apologizing to Mar as it goes down because it failed to keep its end of their bargain. *sniff* Sunny!]]
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* Chapter 29: [[spoiler: Red, who is actually a X. Drake, has been turned into a PeoplePuppet and ordered to kill Mar.]] He tells others present [[spoiler: to shoot him in the head]], head, because he doesn't want to go through with it but [[CanOnlyMoveTheEyes he can't do anything]] to [[ICannotSelfTerminate stop himself.]]
* Chapter 30: Another flashback shows us the fate of the Heart Pirates. [[spoiler:While While underwater, the Heart Pirate submarine is critically damaged after Monster Chopper went berserk. Law tries to use his powers save his crew, but unintentionally manages to save only himself, leaving him with the knowledge he left his crew to drown in the submarine.]]



** Also, the death of [[spoiler: Walker, and Gurnarde's apparent suicide by Monster Drake.]]
* Chapter 32: The price of [[spoiler:returning the ''Manga/OnePiece'' world to normal]] is [[spoiler:Mar's very existence]], and [[spoiler:the Suesse family]] is ''painfully'' aware of this.
** The moment when Mar realizes that [[spoiler: she was is an anomaly that [[RetGone shouldn't have existed in the first place]].]]
--->"[[spoiler:...when everything is done, you and Mom will never have met and I'll never have been born and... and no one will even care! You and Mom won't miss me. You won't even remember me, because I never existed in the first place! ...I was just a freak of chance... a by-product of a mistake... a mistake that's going to be finally corrected...]]"

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** Also, the death of [[spoiler: Walker, and Gurnarde's apparent suicide by Monster Drake.]]
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* Chapter 32: The price of [[spoiler:returning returning the ''Manga/OnePiece'' world to normal]] norma is [[spoiler:Mar's Mar's very existence]], existence, and [[spoiler:the the Suesse family]] family is ''painfully'' aware of this.
** The moment when Mar realizes that [[spoiler: she was is an anomaly that [[RetGone shouldn't have existed in the first place]].]]
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* Chapter 32: The price of [[spoiler:returning the OnePiece world to normal]] is [[spoiler:Mar's very existence]], and [[spoiler:the Suesse family]] is ''painfully'' aware of this.

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* Chapter 32: The price of [[spoiler:returning the OnePiece ''Manga/OnePiece'' world to normal]] is [[spoiler:Mar's very existence]], and [[spoiler:the Suesse family]] is ''painfully'' aware of this.



-->"[[spoiler:...when everything is done, you and Mom will never have met and I'll never have been born and... and no one will even care! You and Mom won't miss me. You won't even remember me, because I never existed in the first place! ...I was just a freak of chance... a by-product of a mistake... a mistake that's going to be finally corrected...]]"

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** Especially awful when you remember Law's backstory, which hadn't been revealed at the time of writing this fic.
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** Particularly bad was the ending of Chapter 23, where [[spoiler: Trafalgar Law finally accepts that Chopper died on the operating table on his watch, reflects on the irony of his BadassNickname "The Surgeon of Death", [[BlackHumor then loses it]] and breaks down laughing]].

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** Particularly bad was the ending of Chapter 23, where [[spoiler: Trafalgar Law finally accepts that Chopper died on the operating table on his watch, reflects on the irony of his BadassNickname RedBaron "The Surgeon of Death", [[BlackHumor then loses it]] and breaks down laughing]].

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Readers be warned: this fanfic is written by an extremely sadistic author and will crush your soul. Examples for Tearjerkers found in this story:



* Chapter 8: Mar finds the [[WeaponTombstone graves]] of [[spoiler:some of the Straw-Hats]], and discovers that they have been defaced and looted.



** The moment when Mar realizes that [[spoiler: she was born out of an anomaly and [[RetGone shouldn't have existed in the first place]].]]
-->"[[spoiler:...when everything is done, you and Mom will never have met and I'll never have been born and... and no one will even care! You and Mom won't miss me. You won't even remember me, because I never existed in the first place!]]"
-->" [[spoiler:...I was just a freak of chance... a by-product of a mistake... a mistake that's going to be finally corrected...]]"

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** The moment when Mar realizes that [[spoiler: she was born out of is an anomaly and that [[RetGone shouldn't have existed in the first place]].]]
-->"[[spoiler:...when everything is done, you and Mom will never have met and I'll never have been born and... and no one will even care! You and Mom won't miss me. You won't even remember me, because I never existed in the first place!]]"
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place! ...I was just a freak of chance... a by-product of a mistake... a mistake that's going to be finally corrected...]]"
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-->"[[spoiler:...when everything is done, you and Mom will never have met and I'll never have been born and... and no one will even care! You and Mom won't miss me. You won't even remember me, because I never existed in the first place!]]"

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-->"[[spoiler:...when everything is done, you and Mom will never have met and I'll never have been born and... and no one will even care! You and Mom won't miss me. You won't even remember me, because I never existed in the first place!]]"place!]]"
-->" [[spoiler:...I was just a freak of chance... a by-product of a mistake... a mistake that's going to be finally corrected...]]"

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* All of Chapter 22 and 23, wherein {{Flashbacks}} reveal [[spoiler:which Straw Hats survived the failed attempt to save Luffy]].** Particularly bad was the ending of Chapter 23, where [[spoiler: Trafalgar Law finally accepts that Chopper died on the operating table on his watch, reflects on the irony of his BadassNickname "The Surgeon of Death", [[BlackHumor then loses it]] and breaks down laughing]].

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* Chapter 7: Robin's [[ApocalypticLog journal]].
* All of Chapter 22 and 23, wherein {{Flashbacks}} reveal [[spoiler:which Straw Hats survived the failed attempt to save Luffy]].Luffy]].
** Particularly bad was the ending of Chapter 23, where [[spoiler: Trafalgar Law finally accepts that Chopper died on the operating table on his watch, reflects on the irony of his BadassNickname "The Surgeon of Death", [[BlackHumor then loses it]] and breaks down laughing]].

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* Chapter 32: The price of [[spoiler:returning the OnePiece world to normal]] is [[spoiler:Mar's very existence]], and [[spoiler:the Suesse family]] is ''painfully'' aware of this.

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* Chapter 30: Another flashback shows us the fate of the Heart Pirates. [[spoiler:While underwater, the Heart Pirate submarine is critically damaged after Monster Chopper went berserk. Law tries to use his powers save his crew, but unintentionally manages to save only himself, leaving him with the knowledge he left his crew to drown in the submarine.]]
** Also, the death of [[spoiler: Walker, and Gurnarde's apparent suicide by Monster Drake.]]
* Chapter 32: The price of [[spoiler:returning the OnePiece world to normal]] is [[spoiler:Mar's very existence]], and [[spoiler:the Suesse family]] is ''painfully'' aware of this.this.
** The moment when Mar realizes that [[spoiler: she was born out of an anomaly and [[RetGone shouldn't have existed in the first place]].]]
-->"[[spoiler:...when everything is done, you and Mom will never have met and I'll never have been born and... and no one will even care! You and Mom won't miss me. You won't even remember me, because I never existed in the first place!]]"

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* All of Chapter 22 and 23, wherein {{Flashbacks}} reveal [[spoiler:which Straw Hats survived the failed attempt to save Luffy]].** Particularly bad was the ending of Chapter 23, where [[spoiler: Trafalgar Law finally accepts that Chopper died on the operating table on his watch, reflects on the irony of his BadassNickname "The Surgeon of Death", [[BlackHumor then loses it]] and breaks down laughing]].
* The in Chapter 25: [[spoiler: The Death of The Thousand Sunny. The worst part about it is that the ship is apologizing to Mar as it goes down because it failed to keep its end of their bargain. *sniff* Sunny!]]
* Chapter 29: [[spoiler: Red, who is actually a X. Drake, has been turned into a PeoplePuppet and ordered to kill Mar.]] He tells others present [[spoiler: to shoot him in the head]], because he doesn't want to go through with it but [[CanOnlyMoveTheEyes he can't do anything]] to [[ICannotSelfTerminate stop himself.]]
* Chapter 32: The price of [[spoiler:returning the OnePiece world to normal]] is [[spoiler:Mar's very existence]], and [[spoiler:the Suesse family]] is ''painfully'' aware of this.

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