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* When [=FitzRoyce=] is killed and you see his assistant Jack weeping, begging him to resurface. Jack hasn't seen what's happened to FitzRoyce, but it isn't too hard to guess. For Jack to react like that, they must have been very good friends.
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* When [=FitzRoyce=] is killed and you see his assistant Jack weeping, begging him to resurface. Jack hasn't seen what's happened to FitzRoyce, [=FitzRoyce=], but it isn't too hard to guess. For Jack to react like that, they must have been very good friends.
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* When [=FitzRoyce=] is killed and you see his friend weeping, begging him to resurface. He hasn't seen what's happened, but it isn't too hard to guess. For him to react like that, they must have been very good friends.
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* When [=FitzRoyce=] is killed and you see his friend assistant Jack weeping, begging him to resurface. He Jack hasn't seen what's happened, happened to FitzRoyce, but it isn't too hard to guess. For him Jack to react like that, they must have been very good friends.
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Capitalization was fixed from Tearjerker.Jaws 3 D to TearJerker.Jaws 3 D. Null edit to update page. Page may need a mojibake cleanup after the fact
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* When the British scientist is killed and you see his friend weeping, begging him to resurface. He hasn't seen what's happened, but it isn't too hard to guess. For him to react like that, they must have been very good friends.
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* When the British scientist [=FitzRoyce=] is killed and you see his friend weeping, begging him to resurface. He hasn't seen what's happened, but it isn't too hard to guess. For him to react like that, they must have been very good friends.
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* The bit where the baby shark dies. It was entirely avoidable if the park higher ups didn't rush getting it onto display against the veterinarian's orders.
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* The bit where the baby shark dies. It was entirely avoidable if the park higher ups didn't rush getting it onto display against the veterinarian's orders.orders.
** Extra punch is the baby shark had calmed down in the staff's care and they had gotten quite attached to it, affectionately naming him 'Danny'. Dr. Morgan, who just checked on her newest charge earlier, is clearly distraught and screaming the shark's name as she jumps into its tank to try and help when he goes belly-up from stress induced sickness.
** Extra punch is the baby shark had calmed down in the staff's care and they had gotten quite attached to it, affectionately naming him 'Danny'. Dr. Morgan, who just checked on her newest charge earlier, is clearly distraught and screaming the shark's name as she jumps into its tank to try and help when he goes belly-up from stress induced sickness.
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* The bit where the baby shark dies.
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* The bit where the baby shark dies. It was entirely avoidable if the park higher ups didn't rush getting it onto display against the veterinarian's orders.
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* When the British scientist is killed and you see his friend weeping, begging him to resurface. He hasn't seen what's happened, but it isn't too hard to guess. For him to react like that, they must have been very good friends.
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* When the British scientist is killed and you see his friend weeping, begging him to resurface. He hasn't seen what's happened, but it isn't too hard to guess. For him to react like that, they must have been very good friends.friends.
* The bit where the baby shark dies.
* The bit where the baby shark dies.
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* When the British scientist is killed and you see his friend weeping, begging him to resurface. He hasn't seen what's happened, but it isn't too hard to guess. For him to react like that, they must have been very good friends.
