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* In ''The Foam of Dawn'', as an 8 years old child, Yoko asks her grandfather, Onoué, to try to create the diamond pearl once more, after decades of many failures. Onoué agrees on the insistence of the child and [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome spends the next 6 years thinking about possible outcomes, past failures and reminisce of old feuds he had with his family.]] [[spoiler:After 6 years, the oyster finally created the diamond pearl, only for Onoué to pass away a few months later. Yoko was devastated, as she came to realize her childish dream of having his grandfather succeed led him to waste his remaining years worrying. Even worse, the family decided to keep the diamond pearl's existence a secret in order to avoid unwanted publicity and prevent the pearl from been sold away to prospective buyers. No one will ever know of Onoué's success.]]
* Yoko Tsuno has ''Daughter of the Winds'', with [[spoiler: OldRetainer Aoki's HeroicSacrifice, Seiji Tsuno being unable to tell his daughter that the old man who took care of her as a little girl pretty much killed himself for her sake and asking Vic to do it instead, and Yoko being this close to an HeroicBSOD...]] The worse part went more of less like this:
* Yoko Tsuno has ''Daughter of the Winds'', with [[spoiler: OldRetainer Aoki's HeroicSacrifice, Seiji Tsuno being unable to tell his daughter that the old man who took care of her as a little girl pretty much killed himself for her sake and asking Vic to do it instead, and Yoko being this close to an HeroicBSOD...]] The worse part went more of less like this:
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* In ''The Foam of Dawn'', as an 8 years old 8-year-old child, Yoko asks her grandfather, Onoué, to try to create the diamond pearl once more, after decades of many failures. Onoué agrees on at the insistence of the child and [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome spends the next 6 years thinking about possible outcomes, past failures and reminisce reminisces of old feuds he had with his family.]] [[spoiler:After 6 years, the oyster finally created the diamond pearl, only for Onoué to pass away a few months later. Yoko was devastated, as she came to realize her childish dream of having his her grandfather succeed led him to waste his remaining years worrying. Even worse, the family decided to keep the diamond pearl's existence a secret in order to avoid unwanted publicity and prevent the pearl from been sold away to prospective buyers. No one will ever know of Onoué's success.]]
* Yoko Tsuno has ''Daughter of the Winds'', with [[spoiler: OldRetainer Aoki's HeroicSacrifice,Seiji Seiki Tsuno being unable to tell his daughter that the old man who took care of her as a little girl pretty much killed himself for her sake and asking Vic to do it instead, and Yoko being this close to an HeroicBSOD...]] The worse worst part went more of less like this:
* Yoko Tsuno has ''Daughter of the Winds'', with [[spoiler: OldRetainer Aoki's HeroicSacrifice,
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* Also, [[spoiler: Cecilia's backstory]] and [[spoiler: Margaret's confession to Yoko]] in ''The Pray and the Shadow''
* Monya's father death. After being exposed to unknown radiations for some time, he felt ill and gave Monya [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong her mission to save the world]]. Monya brushed it aside and was determined to save her father by programming the medical robots to heal him. Next morning, Monya went to check on him and found out that the treatments failed and her father died. She wept on his body for hours. [[LastOfHisKind Monya was now the last remaining human alive on Earth]]. It's truly heartbreaking since Monya's father was practically the only person she ever known.
* Monya's father death. After being exposed to unknown radiations for some time, he felt ill and gave Monya [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong her mission to save the world]]. Monya brushed it aside and was determined to save her father by programming the medical robots to heal him. Next morning, Monya went to check on him and found out that the treatments failed and her father died. She wept on his body for hours. [[LastOfHisKind Monya was now the last remaining human alive on Earth]]. It's truly heartbreaking since Monya's father was practically the only person she ever known.
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* Also, [[spoiler: Cecilia's backstory]] and [[spoiler: Margaret's confession to Yoko]] in ''The Pray Prey and the Shadow''
* Monya's father death. After being exposed to unknown radiations for some time, he felt ill and gave Monya [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong her mission to save the world]]. Monya brushed it aside and was determined to save her father by programming the medical robots to heal him. Next morning, Monya went to check on him and found out that the treatments had failed and her father had died. She wept on his body for hours. [[LastOfHisKind Monya was now the last remaining human alive on Earth]]. It's truly heartbreaking since Monya's father was practically the only person she ever known.
* Monya's father death. After being exposed to unknown radiations for some time, he felt ill and gave Monya [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong her mission to save the world]]. Monya brushed it aside and was determined to save her father by programming the medical robots to heal him. Next morning, Monya went to check on him and found out that the treatments had failed and her father had died. She wept on his body for hours. [[LastOfHisKind Monya was now the last remaining human alive on Earth]]. It's truly heartbreaking since Monya's father was practically the only person she ever known.
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* In ''The Foam of Dawn'', as an 8 years old child, Yoko asks her grandfather, Onoué, to try to create the diamond pearl once more, after decades of many failures. Onoué agrees on the insistence of the child and [[RealityEnsues spends the next 6 years thinking about possible outcomes, past failures and reminisce of old feuds he had with his family.]] [[spoiler:After 6 years, the oyster finally created the diamond pearl, only for Onoué to pass away a few months later. Yoko was devastated, as she came to realize her childish dream of having his grandfather succeed led him to waste his remaining years worrying. Even worse, the family decided to keep the diamond pearl's existence a secret in order to avoid unwanted publicity and prevent the pearl from been sold away to prospective buyers. No one will ever know of Onoué's success.]]
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* In ''The Foam of Dawn'', as an 8 years old child, Yoko asks her grandfather, Onoué, to try to create the diamond pearl once more, after decades of many failures. Onoué agrees on the insistence of the child and [[RealityEnsues [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome spends the next 6 years thinking about possible outcomes, past failures and reminisce of old feuds he had with his family.]] [[spoiler:After 6 years, the oyster finally created the diamond pearl, only for Onoué to pass away a few months later. Yoko was devastated, as she came to realize her childish dream of having his grandfather succeed led him to waste his remaining years worrying. Even worse, the family decided to keep the diamond pearl's existence a secret in order to avoid unwanted publicity and prevent the pearl from been sold away to prospective buyers. No one will ever know of Onoué's success.]]
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* In ''The Foam of Dawn'', as an 8 years old child, Yoko asks his grandfather, Onoué, to try to create the diamond pearl once more, after decades of many failures. Onoué agrees on the insistence of the child and [[RealityEnsues spends the next 6 years thinking about possible outcomes, past failures and reminisce of old feuds he had with his family.]] [[spoiler:After 6 years, the oyster finally created the diamond pearl, only for Onoué to pass away a few months later. Yoko was devastated, as she came to realize her childish dream of having his grandfather succeed led him to waste his remaining years worrying. Even worse, the family decided to keep the diamond pearl's existence a secret in order to avoid unwanted publicity and prevent the pearl from been sold away to prospective buyers. No one will ever know of Onoué's success.]]
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* In ''The Foam of Dawn'', as an 8 years old child, Yoko asks his her grandfather, Onoué, to try to create the diamond pearl once more, after decades of many failures. Onoué agrees on the insistence of the child and [[RealityEnsues spends the next 6 years thinking about possible outcomes, past failures and reminisce of old feuds he had with his family.]] [[spoiler:After 6 years, the oyster finally created the diamond pearl, only for Onoué to pass away a few months later. Yoko was devastated, as she came to realize her childish dream of having his grandfather succeed led him to waste his remaining years worrying. Even worse, the family decided to keep the diamond pearl's existence a secret in order to avoid unwanted publicity and prevent the pearl from been sold away to prospective buyers. No one will ever know of Onoué's success.]]
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* In ''The Foam of Dawn'', as an 8 years old child, Yoko asks his grandfather, Onoué, to try to create the diamond pearl once more, after decades of many failures. Onoué agrees on the insistence of the child and [[RealityEnsues spends the next 6 years thinking about possible outcomes, past failures and reminisce of old feuds he had with his family.]] [[spoiler:After 6 years, the oyster finally created the diamond pearl, only for Onoué to pass away a few months later. Yoko was devastated, as she came to realize her childish dream of having his grandfather succeed led him to waste his remaining years worrying. Even worse, the family decided to keep the diamond pearl's existence a secret in order to avoid unwanted publicity and the pearl been sold away to prospective buyers. No one will ever know of Onoué's success.]]
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* In ''The Foam of Dawn'', as an 8 years old child, Yoko asks his grandfather, Onoué, to try to create the diamond pearl once more, after decades of many failures. Onoué agrees on the insistence of the child and [[RealityEnsues spends the next 6 years thinking about possible outcomes, past failures and reminisce of old feuds he had with his family.]] [[spoiler:After 6 years, the oyster finally created the diamond pearl, only for Onoué to pass away a few months later. Yoko was devastated, as she came to realize her childish dream of having his grandfather succeed led him to waste his remaining years worrying. Even worse, the family decided to keep the diamond pearl's existence a secret in order to avoid unwanted publicity and prevent the pearl from been sold away to prospective buyers. No one will ever know of Onoué's success.]]
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* In ''The Foam of Dawn'', as an 8 years old child, Yoko asks his grandfather, Onoué, to try to create the diamond pearl once more, after decades of many failures. Onoué agrees on insistence of the child and [[RealityEnsues spends the next 6 years thinking about possible outcomes, past failures and reminisce of old feuds he had with his family.]] [[spoiler:After 6 years, the oyster finally created the diamond pearl, only for Onoué to pass away a few months later. Yoko was devastated, as she came to realize her childish dream of having his grandfather succeed led him to waste his remaining years worrying. Even worse, the family decided to keep the diamond pearl's existence a secret in order to avoid unwanted publicity and the pearl been sold away to prospective buyers. No one will ever know of Onoué's success.]]
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* In ''The Foam of Dawn'', as an 8 years old child, Yoko asks his grandfather, Onoué, to try to create the diamond pearl once more, after decades of many failures. Onoué agrees on the insistence of the child and [[RealityEnsues spends the next 6 years thinking about possible outcomes, past failures and reminisce of old feuds he had with his family.]] [[spoiler:After 6 years, the oyster finally created the diamond pearl, only for Onoué to pass away a few months later. Yoko was devastated, as she came to realize her childish dream of having his grandfather succeed led him to waste his remaining years worrying. Even worse, the family decided to keep the diamond pearl's existence a secret in order to avoid unwanted publicity and the pearl been sold away to prospective buyers. No one will ever know of Onoué's success.]]
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* In ''The Foam of Dawn'', as an 8 years old child, Yoko asks his grandfather, Onoué, to try to create the diamond pearl once more, after decades of many failures. Onoué agrees on insistence of the child and [[RealityEnsues spend the next 6 years thinking about possible outcomes, past failures and reminisce of old feuds he had with his family.]] [[spoiler:After 6 years, the oyster finally created the diamond pearl, only for Onoué to pass away a few months later. Yoko was devastated, as she came to realize her childish dream of having his grandfather succeed led him to waste his remaining years worrying. Even worse, the family decided to keep the diamond pearl's existence a secret in order to avoid unwanted publicity and the pearl been sold away to prospective buyers. No one will ever know of Onoué's success.]]
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* In ''The Foam of Dawn'', as an 8 years old child, Yoko asks his grandfather, Onoué, to try to create the diamond pearl once more, after decades of many failures. Onoué agrees on insistence of the child and [[RealityEnsues spend spends the next 6 years thinking about possible outcomes, past failures and reminisce of old feuds he had with his family.]] [[spoiler:After 6 years, the oyster finally created the diamond pearl, only for Onoué to pass away a few months later. Yoko was devastated, as she came to realize her childish dream of having his grandfather succeed led him to waste his remaining years worrying. Even worse, the family decided to keep the diamond pearl's existence a secret in order to avoid unwanted publicity and the pearl been sold away to prospective buyers. No one will ever know of Onoué's success.]]
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* In ''The Foam of Dawn'', as an 8 years old child, Yoko asks his grandfather, Onoué, to try to create the diamond pearl once more, after decades of many failures. Onoué agrees on insistence of the child and [[RealityEnsues spend the next 6 years thinking about possible outcomes, past failures and reminisce of old feuds he had with his family.]] [[spoiler:After 6 years, the oyster finally created the diamond pearl, only for Onoué to pass away a few months later. Yoko was devastated, as she came to realize her childish dream of having his grandfather succeed led him to waste his remaining years worrying. Even worse, the family decided to keep the diamond pearl's existence a secret in order to avoid unwanted publicity and the pearl been sold away. No one will ever know of Onoué's success.]]
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* In ''The Foam of Dawn'', as an 8 years old child, Yoko asks his grandfather, Onoué, to try to create the diamond pearl once more, after decades of many failures. Onoué agrees on insistence of the child and [[RealityEnsues spend the next 6 years thinking about possible outcomes, past failures and reminisce of old feuds he had with his family.]] [[spoiler:After 6 years, the oyster finally created the diamond pearl, only for Onoué to pass away a few months later. Yoko was devastated, as she came to realize her childish dream of having his grandfather succeed led him to waste his remaining years worrying. Even worse, the family decided to keep the diamond pearl's existence a secret in order to avoid unwanted publicity and the pearl been sold away.away to prospective buyers. No one will ever know of Onoué's success.]]
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* In ''The Foam of Dawn'', as an 8 years old child, Yoko asks his grandfather, Onoué, to try to create the diamond pearl once more, after decades of many failures. Onoué agrees on insistence of the child and spend the next 6 years worrying about possible outcomes, past failures and reminisce old feuds he had with his family. [[spoiler:After 6 years, the oyster finally created the diamond pearl he sought, only to past away a few months later. Yoko was devastated.]]
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* In ''The Foam of Dawn'', as an 8 years old child, Yoko asks his grandfather, Onoué, to try to create the diamond pearl once more, after decades of many failures. Onoué agrees on insistence of the child and [[RealityEnsues spend the next 6 years worrying thinking about possible outcomes, past failures and reminisce of old feuds he had with his family. family.]] [[spoiler:After 6 years, the oyster finally created the diamond pearl he sought, pearl, only for Onoué to past pass away a few months later. Yoko was devastated.devastated, as she came to realize her childish dream of having his grandfather succeed led him to waste his remaining years worrying. Even worse, the family decided to keep the diamond pearl's existence a secret in order to avoid unwanted publicity and the pearl been sold away. No one will ever know of Onoué's success.]]
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* In ''The Foam of Dawn'', as an 8 years old child, Yoko asks his grandfather, Onoué, to try to create the diamond pearl once more, after decades of many failures. Onoué agrees on insistence of the child and spend the next 6 years worrying about possible outcomes, past failures and reminisce old feuds he had with his family. [[spoiler:After 6 years, the oyster finally created the diamond pearl he sought, only to past away a few months later. Yoko was devastated.]]
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* Monya's father death. After being exposed to unknown radiations for some time, he felt ill and gave Monya [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong her mission to save the world]]. Monya brushed it aside and was determined to save her father by programming the medical robots to heal him. Next morning, Monya went to check on him and found out that the treatments failed and her father died. She wept on his body for hours. [[LastOfHisKind Monya was now the last remaining human alive on Earth]]. It's truly heartbreaking since Monya's father was practically the only person she ever known.
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* Monya's father death. After being exposed to unknown radiations for some time, he felt ill and gave Monya [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong her mission to save the world]]. Monya brushed it aside and was determined to save her father by programming the medical robots to heal him. Next morning, Monya went to check on him and found out that the treatments failed and her father died. She wept on his body for hours. [[LastOfHisKind Monya was now the last remaining human alive on Earth]]. It's truly heartbreaking since Monya's father was practically the only person she ever known.
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* Monya's father death. After being exposed to unknown radiations for some time, he felt ill and gave Monya [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong her mission to save the world]]. Monya brushed it aside and was determined to save her father by programming the medical robots to heal him. Next morning, Monya went to check on him and found out that the treatments failed and her father died. She wept on his body for hours. [[LastOfHisKind Monya was now the last remaining human alive on Earth]]. It's truly heartbreaking since Monya's father was practically the only person she ever known.
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* Monya's father death. After being exposed to unknown radiations for some time, he felt ill and gave Monya [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong her mission to save the world]]. Monya brushed it aside and was determined to save her father by programming the medical robots to heal him. Next morning, Monya went to check on him and found out that the treatments failed and her father died. She wept on his body for hours. [[LastOfHisKind Monya was now the last remaining human alive on Earth]]. It's truly heartbreaking since Monya's father was practically the only person she ever known.known.
* [[spoiler:After ''The Temple of Immortals'', Khany, Poky, Myna and all the Earth-bound Vineans will never return back to Vinea. Ever again.]]
* [[spoiler:After ''The Temple of Immortals'', Khany, Poky, Myna and all the Earth-bound Vineans will never return back to Vinea. Ever again.]]
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* Monya's father death. After being exposed to unknown radiations for some time, he felt ill and gave Monya [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong her mission to save the world]]. Monya brushed it aside and was determined to save her father by programming the medical robots to heal him. Next morning, Monya went to check on him and found out that the treatments failed and his father died. She wept on his body for hours. [[LastOfHisKind Monya was now the last remaining human alive on Earth]]. It's truly heartbreaking since Monya's father was practically the only person she ever known.
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* Monya's father death. After being exposed to unknown radiations for some time, he felt ill and gave Monya [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong her mission to save the world]]. Monya brushed it aside and was determined to save her father by programming the medical robots to heal him. Next morning, Monya went to check on him and found out that the treatments failed and his her father died. She wept on his body for hours. [[LastOfHisKind Monya was now the last remaining human alive on Earth]]. It's truly heartbreaking since Monya's father was practically the only person she ever known.
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* Monya' Monya's father death. After being exposed to unknown radiations for some time, he felt ill and gave Monya [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong her mission to save the world]]. Monya brushed it aside and was determined to save her father by programming the medical robots to heal him. Next morning, Monya went to check on him and found out that the treatments failed and his father has died. She wept on his body for hours. [[LastOfHisKind Monya was now the last remaining human alive on Earth]]. It's truly heartbreaking since Monya's father was practically the only person she ever knew all her life.known.
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* The end of ''The Dragon of Hong Kong''. [[spoiler: Morning Dew's giant lizard pet has been killed and his body is swept away by the tide. Yoko explains to Morning Dew that he's leaving her for some marvelous place while fighting back tears.]]
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* The end of ''The Dragon of Hong Kong''. [[spoiler: Morning Dew's giant lizard pet has been killed and his body is swept away by the tide. Yoko explains to Morning Dew that he's leaving her for some marvelous place while fighting back tears.]]]]
* Monya' father death. After being exposed to unknown radiations for some time, he felt ill and gave Monya [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong her mission to save the world]]. Monya brushed it aside and was determined to save her father by programming the medical robots to heal him. Next morning, Monya went to check on him and found out that the treatments failed and his father has died. She wept on his body for hours. [[LastOfHisKind Monya was now the last remaining human alive on Earth]]. It's truly heartbreaking since Monya's father was practically the only person she ever knew all her life.
* Monya' father death. After being exposed to unknown radiations for some time, he felt ill and gave Monya [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong her mission to save the world]]. Monya brushed it aside and was determined to save her father by programming the medical robots to heal him. Next morning, Monya went to check on him and found out that the treatments failed and his father has died. She wept on his body for hours. [[LastOfHisKind Monya was now the last remaining human alive on Earth]]. It's truly heartbreaking since Monya's father was practically the only person she ever knew all her life.
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* YokoTsuno has ''Daughter of the Winds'', with [[spoiler: OldRetainer Aoki's HeroicSacrifice, Seiji Tsuno being unable to tell his daughter that the old man who took care of her as a little girl pretty much killed himself for her sake and asking Vic to do it instead, and Yoko being this close to an HeroicBSOD...]] The worse part went more of less like this:
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* YokoTsuno Yoko Tsuno has ''Daughter of the Winds'', with [[spoiler: OldRetainer Aoki's HeroicSacrifice, Seiji Tsuno being unable to tell his daughter that the old man who took care of her as a little girl pretty much killed himself for her sake and asking Vic to do it instead, and Yoko being this close to an HeroicBSOD...]] The worse part went more of less like this:
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* The end of ''The Dragon of Hong Kong''. [[spoiler: Morning Dew's giant lizard pet has been killed and his body is swept away by the tide. Yoko explains to Morning Dew that he's leaving her for some marvelous place while fighting back tears.]]
