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* Viviena's time as a beggar when she basically lost everything.
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* Viviena's Vivenna's time as a beggar when she basically lost everything.
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* The entirety of [[spoiler:Susebron's]] life up until Siri meets him. [[spoiler:He was taken from his birth mother, had his tongue cut out, was raised locked in a palace, and isn't supposed to be touched or spoken to.]]
* [[spoiler:Blushweaver's]] murder.
* And in response, [[spoiler:Lightsong's]] HeroicSacrifice.
* Llarimar finally revealing Lightsong's past: [[spoiler: he was Llarimar's younger brother who sacrificed himself to save Llarimar's daughter from drowning. Lightsong's HeroicSacrifice means Llarimar has now lost his brother ''twice''.]]
* Viviena's time as a [[spoiler:beggar when she basically lost everything.]]
* After Vasher was [[spoiler: being tortured by Denth,]] he realizes that [[spoiler:Denth]] isn't happy about it. That some good still exists in him, but badly beaten down and even more tortured than Vasher is right now.
* [[spoiler:Blushweaver's]] murder.
* And in response, [[spoiler:Lightsong's]] HeroicSacrifice.
* Llarimar finally revealing Lightsong's past: [[spoiler: he was Llarimar's younger brother who sacrificed himself to save Llarimar's daughter from drowning. Lightsong's HeroicSacrifice means Llarimar has now lost his brother ''twice''.]]
* Viviena's time as a [[spoiler:beggar when she basically lost everything.]]
* After Vasher was [[spoiler: being tortured by Denth,]] he realizes that [[spoiler:Denth]] isn't happy about it. That some good still exists in him, but badly beaten down and even more tortured than Vasher is right now.
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* The entirety of [[spoiler:Susebron's]] Susebron's life up until Siri meets him. [[spoiler:He He was taken from his birth mother, had his tongue cut out, was raised locked in a palace, and isn't supposed to be touched or spoken to.]]
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*[[spoiler:Blushweaver's]] Blushweaver's murder.
* And in response,[[spoiler:Lightsong's]] Lightsong's HeroicSacrifice.
* Llarimar finally revealing Lightsong's past:[[spoiler: he was Llarimar's younger brother who sacrificed himself to save Llarimar's daughter from drowning. Lightsong's HeroicSacrifice means Llarimar has now lost his brother ''twice''.]]
''twice''.
* Viviena's time as a[[spoiler:beggar beggar when she basically lost everything.]]
everything.
* After Vasher was[[spoiler: being tortured by Denth,]] Denth, he realizes that [[spoiler:Denth]] Denth isn't happy about it. That some good still exists in him, but badly beaten down and even more tortured than Vasher is right now.
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* Llarimar finally revealing Lightsong's past:
* Viviena's time as a
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-->'''Vasher''' [quietly]: Torturing me won't bring her back.
-->'''Denth''' [turning, blade catching the moonlight]: ''No.'' It won't.
-->'''Denth''' [turning, blade catching the moonlight]: ''No.'' It won't.
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-->'''Denth'''
'''Denth''' [turning, blade catching the moonlight]: ''No.'' It won't.
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* Lightsong's shoos Llarimar off to "go be with your family" during the festival. It is later revealed that [[spoiler:they are brothers, and Llarimar became Lightsong's high priest to be with him.]]
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* Lightsong's shoos Llarimar off to "go be with your family" during the festival. It is later revealed that [[spoiler:they they are brothers, and Llarimar became Lightsong's high priest to be with him.]]
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* Llarimar finally revealing Lightsong's past.
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* Llarimar finally revealing Lightsong's past.past: [[spoiler: he was Llarimar's younger brother who sacrificed himself to save Llarimar's daughter from drowning. Lightsong's HeroicSacrifice means Llarimar has now lost his brother ''twice''.]]
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* Nightblood's inability to acknowledge Shashara's death
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* Nightblood's inability to acknowledge Shashara's deathdeath.
* Lightsong's shoos Llarimar off to "go be with your family" during the festival. It is later revealed that [[spoiler:they are brothers, and Llarimar became Lightsong's high priest to be with him.]]
* Lightsong's shoos Llarimar off to "go be with your family" during the festival. It is later revealed that [[spoiler:they are brothers, and Llarimar became Lightsong's high priest to be with him.]]
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* Treledees and his unarmed priests attacking armed soldiers in the hope of buying time for their god to escape. That's when you know that despite all their abominable practices, they really are good at heart.
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* Treledees and his unarmed priests attacking armed soldiers in the hope of buying time for their god to escape. That's when you know that despite all their abominable practices, they really are good at heart.heart.
*Nightblood's inability to acknowledge Shashara's death
*Nightblood's inability to acknowledge Shashara's death
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*** Becomes potent FridgeHorror when you remember that Denth is torturing his ''brother-in-law'', and the only family he has left.
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-->'''Denth''' [turning, blade catching the moonlight]: ''No.'' It won't.
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-->'''Denth''' [turning, blade catching the moonlight]: ''No.'' It won't.won't.
* Treledees and his unarmed priests attacking armed soldiers in the hope of buying time for their god to escape. That's when you know that despite all their abominable practices, they really are good at heart.
* Treledees and his unarmed priests attacking armed soldiers in the hope of buying time for their god to escape. That's when you know that despite all their abominable practices, they really are good at heart.
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** Also, the bit leading up to the torture. Doubles as major NightmareFuel.
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** Also, the bit leading up to the torture. Doubles as major NightmareFuel.
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** Also, the bit leading up to the torture. Doubles as majjor NightmareFuel.
-->'''Vasher''' [quietly]: Torturing me won't bring [[DeadLittleSister her]] back.
-->'''Vasher''' [quietly]: Torturing me won't bring [[DeadLittleSister her]] back.
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** Also, the bit leading up to the torture. Doubles as majjor major NightmareFuel.
-->'''Vasher''' [quietly]: Torturing me won't bring[[DeadLittleSister her]] her back.
-->'''Vasher''' [quietly]: Torturing me won't bring
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-->'''Denth''' [turning, blade catching the moonlight]: ''I know.''
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-->'''Denth''' [turning, blade catching the moonlight]: ''I know.''''No.'' It won't.
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-->'''Denth:''' (''stands with his sword lowered, thinking for a long while but then shook his head'') No. I don't deserve that. Neither of us do.
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-->''Vasher'' [quietly]: Torturing me won't bring [[DeadLittleSister her]] back.
-->''Denth'' [turning, blade catching the moonlight]: ''I know.''
-->'''Denth:''' (''stands with his sword lowered, thinking for a long while but then shook his head'') No. I don't deserve that. Neither of us do.
-->''Denth'' [turning, blade catching the moonlight]: ''I know.''
-->'''Denth:''' (''stands with his sword lowered, thinking for a long while but then shook his head'') No. I don't deserve that. Neither of us do.
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-->'''Denth:''' (''stands with his sword lowered, thinking for a long while but then shook his head'') No. I don't deserve that. Neither of us do.
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** Also, the bit leading up to the torture. Doubles as majjor NightmareFuel.
-->''Vasher'' [quietly]: Torturing me won't bring [[DeadLittleSister her]] back.
-->''Denth'' [turning, blade catching the moonlight]: ''I know.''
-->''Vasher'' [quietly]: Torturing me won't bring [[DeadLittleSister her]] back.
-->''Denth'' [turning, blade catching the moonlight]: ''I know.''
