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* As is Pearl's canon angst in "Friend Ship" wasn't bad enough, we also have the stuff about the erased memories and Ford's own feelings.
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* As is if Pearl's canon angst in "Friend Ship" wasn't bad enough, we also have the stuff about the erased memories and Ford's own feelings.
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** Later, as they ended up floating in space, Steven was ready to accept their fates like in the series, while Dipper desperately tries to figure a way out of their situation.
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** Later, as they ended up floating in space, space slowly freezing, Steven was ready to accept their fates like he did in the series, canon episode, while Dipper desperately tries to figure a way out of their situation.
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* Steven is horrified when Dipper accuses him of being NotSoDifferent from Bill. Even worse, Dipper makes ''very'' good points about this.
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* Steven is horrified when Dipper accuses him of being NotSoDifferent not so different from Bill. Even worse, Dipper makes ''very'' good points about this.
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** Later, as they ended up floating in space, Steven was ready to accept their fates like in the series, while Dipper desperately tries to figure a way out of their predicament.
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** Later, as they ended up floating in space, Steven was ready to accept their fates like in the series, while Dipper desperately tries to figure a way out of their predicament.situation.
