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** And then they decided to make a fake one as an example. It's as disheartening as you might think.
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** And then they decided to make a [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CZgSDCmFw6Q fake one one]] as an example. It's as disheartening as you might think.think.
*** Along with this found in the comments of said video:
-->"Dear Princess Celestia,
-->Today I learned that all the friendship we could provide couldn't help saving an innocent pony. That the justice supposed to be fair just sent my innocent friend to a certain death. That's when I realized that friendship doesn't exist. It is just an imaginary concept made to bring some hope in the heart but which happen to be useless. I'm affraid I can no longer be your apprentice.
-->You former faithful student, Twilight Sparkle"
*** Along with this found in the comments of said video:
-->"Dear Princess Celestia,
-->Today I learned that all the friendship we could provide couldn't help saving an innocent pony. That the justice supposed to be fair just sent my innocent friend to a certain death. That's when I realized that friendship doesn't exist. It is just an imaginary concept made to bring some hope in the heart but which happen to be useless. I'm affraid I can no longer be your apprentice.
-->You former faithful student, Twilight Sparkle"
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** Even worse, the creators are now hosting a "Write a BadEnding Contest", which is ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: assume the case ended ''there'' and write the ending. The very ''thought'' is tear-jerking.
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** Even worse, the creators are now hosting a "Write a BadEnding Contest", which is ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: assume the case ended ''there'' and write the ending. The very ''thought'' is tear-jerking.tear-jerking.
** And then they decided to make a fake one as an example. It's as disheartening as you might think.
** And then they decided to make a fake one as an example. It's as disheartening as you might think.
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* [[spoiler: When all seemed lost in ''Part 4'']]. It was incredibly sad and [[DespairEventHorizon despairing]] [[spoiler:before Fluttershy [[BigDamnHero intervened]]]].
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* [[spoiler: When all seemed lost in ''Part 4'']]. It was incredibly sad and [[DespairEventHorizon despairing]] [[spoiler:before Fluttershy [[BigDamnHero intervened]]]].intervened]]]].
** Even worse, the creators are now hosting a "Write a BadEnding Contest", which is ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: assume the case ended ''there'' and write the ending. The very ''thought'' is tear-jerking.
** Even worse, the creators are now hosting a "Write a BadEnding Contest", which is ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: assume the case ended ''there'' and write the ending. The very ''thought'' is tear-jerking.
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* [[spoiler: When all seemed lost in ''Part 4'']]. It was incredibly sad and despairing [[spoiler:before Fluttershy stepped in]].
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* [[spoiler: When all seemed lost in ''Part 4'']]. It was incredibly sad and despairing [[DespairEventHorizon despairing]] [[spoiler:before Fluttershy stepped in]].[[BigDamnHero intervened]]]].
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* [[spoiler: Gilda's "confession" in ''Part 4'']]. In-Universe, even the Judge teared up after that!
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* [[spoiler: Gilda's "confession" in ''Part 4'']]. In-Universe, even the Judge teared up after that!that!
* [[spoiler: When all seemed lost in ''Part 4'']]. It was incredibly sad and despairing [[spoiler:before Fluttershy stepped in]].
* [[spoiler: When all seemed lost in ''Part 4'']]. It was incredibly sad and despairing [[spoiler:before Fluttershy stepped in]].
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* [[spoiler: Gilda's "confession" in Part 4.]] In-Universe, even the Judge teared up after that!
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* [[spoiler:The way Rainbow chews out Fluttershy for almost getting her declared guilty with her testimony, and how Fluttershy leaves in tears, is nothing short of heart-breaking]].
-->'''[[spoiler:Rainbow]]:''' [[spoiler:I-... I HATE YOU!]]
* [[spoiler: Gilda's "confession" inPart 4.]] ''Part 4'']]. In-Universe, even the Judge teared up after that!
-->'''[[spoiler:Rainbow]]:''' [[spoiler:I-... I HATE YOU!]]
* [[spoiler: Gilda's "confession" in
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* [[spoiler:The story behind Cruise Control's athletic failures, and what happened to his sister.]]
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* [[spoiler:The story behind Cruise Control's athletic failures, and what happened to his sister.]]]]
* [[spoiler: Gilda's "confession" in Part 4.]] In-Universe, even the Judge teared up after that!
* [[spoiler: Gilda's "confession" in Part 4.]] In-Universe, even the Judge teared up after that!
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Please stop erasing the spaces after the \"…\"s. It makes the sentences look overloaded and ugly. I\'ve already had undone those kind of edits several times, and it\'s getting quite annoying.
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-->'''[[spoiler: Fluttershy]]:''' W-wait, where are you taking me? I wouldn't do that to anypony…Twilight, Mr. Phoenix! ''HELP!''
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-->'''[[spoiler: Fluttershy]]:''' W-wait, where are you taking me? I wouldn't do that to anypony…Twilight, anypony… Twilight, Mr. Phoenix! ''HELP!''
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--> '''Phoenix:''' ''[[MyGodWhatHaveIDone (What have I done...?)]]''
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--> '''Twilight:''' Phoenix... How could you...
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--> '''Phoenix:''' ''[[MyGodWhatHaveIDone (What have Idone...?)]]''done…?)]]''
--> '''Phoenix:''' ''[[MyGodWhatHaveIDone (What have I
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-->'''[[spoiler: Fluttershy]]:''' W-wait, where are you taking me? I wouldn't do that to anypony... Twilight, Mr. Phoenix! ''HELP!''
** Which becomes even [[HarsherInHindsight more heart-wrenching]] if you've played the games [[spoiler:when you remember that he's also had to accuse an extremely [[TheWoobie woobie-tastic]] witness during his darkest hour just so he could get more time. You can see that he's completely regreting having to do that again, and Twilight's reaction towards him just twisted the knife further.]]
** Which becomes even [[HarsherInHindsight more heart-wrenching]] if you've played the games [[spoiler:when you remember that he's also had to accuse an extremely [[TheWoobie woobie-tastic]] witness during his darkest hour just so he could get more time. You can see that he's completely regreting having to do that again, and Twilight's reaction towards him just twisted the knife further.]]
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-->'''[[spoiler: Fluttershy]]:''' W-wait, where are you taking me? I wouldn't do that to anypony... Twilight, anypony…Twilight, Mr. Phoenix! ''HELP!''
** Which becomes even [[HarsherInHindsight more heart-wrenching]] if you've played the games [[spoiler:when you remember that he's also had to accuse an extremely [[TheWoobie woobie-tastic]] witness during his darkest hour just so he could get more time. You can see that he's completelyregreting regretting having to do that again, and Twilight's reaction towards him just twisted the knife further.]]
** Which becomes even [[HarsherInHindsight more heart-wrenching]] if you've played the games [[spoiler:when you remember that he's also had to accuse an extremely [[TheWoobie woobie-tastic]] witness during his darkest hour just so he could get more time. You can see that he's completely
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* The way a few of the friendships among the Mane Six [[spoiler: and also Phoenix Wright are utterly shattered in part 3. Twilight has already been covered, and now Rainbow despises Fluttershy for (albeit unknowingly) destroying any hope of her being found innocent with her testimony.]]
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* The way a few of the friendships among the Mane Six [[spoiler: and also Phoenix Wright are utterly shattered in part 3.''Part 3''. Twilight has already been covered, and now Rainbow despises Fluttershy for (albeit unknowingly) destroying any hope of her being found innocent with her testimony.]]
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* [[spoiler:Trixie has black psyche locks. ''Ace Attorney'' fans can quickly make a connection with CompleteMonster Kristoph Gavin, the only person that has had them in canon, but there's a twist in it. Unlike Gavin's locks, which were cold and dark, Trixie's are filled with [[JerkassWoobie sadness and despair]], and their presence alone make Twilight tear up]].
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* [[spoiler:Trixie has black psyche locks. ''Ace Attorney'' fans can quickly make a connection with CompleteMonster Kristoph Gavin, the only person that has had them in canon, but there's a twist in it. Unlike Gavin's locks, which were cold and dark, Trixie's are filled with [[JerkassWoobie sadness and despair]], and their presence alone make Twilight tear up]].up. The [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1HrPxumuUY4 background music]] that plays during their reveal reinforces this]].
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Since all the other pages have indicated that Ace Swift does NOT qualify as a Complete Monster, I figured I ought to remove that here too.
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* [[spoiler:The story behind Cruise Control's athletic failures, and what happened to his sister. ''Fuck'' you, [[CompleteMonster Ace Swift]].]]
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* [[spoiler:The story behind Cruise Control's athletic failures, and what happened to his sister. ''Fuck'' you, [[CompleteMonster Ace Swift]].]]
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* The planned sequel has been scrapped because of pissant whiners.
* ''Part 3-Twilight''. A good part of it has Twilight agonizing over [[spoiler:Phoenix's actions in ''Part 2'' and lashing out at anypony who still supports him]]. The sheer level of pain and betrayal in her voice is heartbreaking.
* ''Part 3-Twilight''. A good part of it has Twilight agonizing over [[spoiler:Phoenix's actions in ''Part 2'' and lashing out at anypony who still supports him]]. The sheer level of pain and betrayal in her voice is heartbreaking.
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* [[spoiler:Trixie has black psyche locks. ''Ace Attorney'' fans can quickly make a connection with CompleteMonster Kristoph Gavin, the only person that has had them in canon, but there's a twist in it. Unlike Gavin's locks, which were cold and dark, Trixie's are filled with [[JerkassWoobie sadness and despair]], and their presence alone make Twilight tear up]].
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* ''Part 3-Twilight''. A good part of it has Twilight agonizing over [[spoiler:Phoenix's actions in ''Part 2'' and lashing out at anypony who still supports him]]. The sheer level of pain and betrayel in her voice is heartbreaking.
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* ''Part 3-Twilight''. A good part of it has Twilight agonizing over [[spoiler:Phoenix's actions in ''Part 2'' and lashing out at anypony who still supports him]]. The sheer level of pain and betrayel betrayal in her voice is heartbreaking.heartbreaking.
* [[spoiler:The story behind Cruise Control's athletic failures, and what happened to his sister. ''Fuck'' you, [[CompleteMonster Ace Swift]].]]
* [[spoiler:The story behind Cruise Control's athletic failures, and what happened to his sister. ''Fuck'' you, [[CompleteMonster Ace Swift]].]]
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* Part 3-Twilight. Its basically an hour and a half of Twilight agonizing over [[spoiler:Phoenix's actions in part 2 and lashing out at anypony who still supports him]]. The sheer level of pain and betrayel in her voice is heartbreaking.
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* Part 3-Twilight. Its basically an hour and a half ''Part 3-Twilight''. A good part of it has Twilight agonizing over [[spoiler:Phoenix's actions in part 2 ''Part 2'' and lashing out at anypony who still supports him]]. The sheer level of pain and betrayel in her voice is heartbreaking.
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* The planned sequel has been scrapped because of pissant whiners.
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* The planned sequel has been scrapped because of pissant whiners.whiners.
* Part 3-Twilight. Its basically an hour and a half of Twilight agonizing over [[spoiler:Phoenix's actions in part 2 and lashing out at anypony who still supports him]]. The sheer level of pain and betrayel in her voice is heartbreaking.
* Part 3-Twilight. Its basically an hour and a half of Twilight agonizing over [[spoiler:Phoenix's actions in part 2 and lashing out at anypony who still supports him]]. The sheer level of pain and betrayel in her voice is heartbreaking.
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The caption underneath the youtube video giving us this explicitly states the series has not been cancelled.
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* The ''entire series'' has been completely scrapped in favor of a text-based fangame, all because of pissant whiners...
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* The ''entire series'' planned sequel has been completely scrapped in favor of a text-based fangame, all because of pissant whiners...whiners.
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* The ''entire series'' has been completely scrapped in favor of a text-based fangame...
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* The ''entire series'' has been completely scrapped in favor of a text-based fangame...fangame, all because of pissant whiners...
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* The way a few of the friendships among the Mane Six [[spoiler: and also Phoenix Wright are utterly shattered in part 3. Twilight has already been covered, and now Rainbow despises Fluttershy for (albeit unknowingly) destroying any hope of her being found innocent with her testimony.]]
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* The way a few of the friendships among the Mane Six [[spoiler: and also Phoenix Wright are utterly shattered in part 3. Twilight has already been covered, and now Rainbow despises Fluttershy for (albeit unknowingly) destroying any hope of her being found innocent with her testimony.]]]]
* The ''entire series'' has been completely scrapped in favor of a text-based fangame...
* The ''entire series'' has been completely scrapped in favor of a text-based fangame...
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I guess thinking about it, it\'s mainly Twilight\'s friendship with Phoenix that is shattered, not really the mane six. Still counts, so added to the sentence.
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* The way a few of the friendships between among the Mane Six [[spoiler:are [[spoiler: and also Phoenix Wright are utterly shattered in part 3. Twilight has already been covered, and now Rainbow despises Fluttershy for (albeit unknowingly) destroying any hope of her being found innocent with her testimony.]]
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* [[spoiler:The The way a few of the friendships between the Mane Six are [[spoiler:are utterly shattered in part 3. Twilight has already been covered, and now Rainbow despises Fluttershy for (albeit unknowingly) destroying any hope of her being found innocent with her testimony.]]
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To say that all of the mane six had their friendships shattered is overstretching it; the main incidents were with Twilight and Rainbow, so I think it\'s more accurate to state those in particular, rather than implying something vague including the others, which aren\'t obvious to me.
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* [[spoiler:The way a few of the friendship of friendships between the Mane Six is are utterly shattered in part 3. Twilight has already been covered, and now Rainbow despises Fluttershy for (albiet (albeit unknowingly) destroying any hope of her being found innocent with her testimony, the list goes on.testimony.]]
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** Which becomes even [[HarsherInHindsight more heart-wrenching]] if you've played the games [[spoiler:when you remember that he's also had to accuse an extremely [[TheWoobie woobie-tastic]] witness during his darkest hour just so he could get more time. You can see that he's completely regreting having to do that again, and Twilight's reaction towards him just twisted the knife further.]]
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** Which becomes even [[HarsherInHindsight more heart-wrenching]] if you've played the games [[spoiler:when you remember that he's also had to accuse an extremely [[TheWoobie woobie-tastic]] witness during his darkest hour just so he could get more time. You can see that he's completely regreting having to do that again, and Twilight's reaction towards him just twisted the knife further.]]
* [[spoiler:The way the friendship of the Mane Six is utterly shattered in part 3. Twilight has already been covered, Rainbow despises Fluttershy for (albiet unknowingly) destroying any hope of her being found innocent with her testimony, the list goes on.]]
* [[spoiler:The way the friendship of the Mane Six is utterly shattered in part 3. Twilight has already been covered, Rainbow despises Fluttershy for (albiet unknowingly) destroying any hope of her being found innocent with her testimony, the list goes on.]]
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** No mention of [[spoiler: Fluttershy's]] reaction? The last thing she says before being forcibly escorted out is:
-->[[spoiler: '''Fluttershy''']]: No! I would never do such a thing! Where are you taking me!? ''HELP ME MR. PHOENIX!!!''
-->[[spoiler: '''Fluttershy''']]: No! I would never do such a thing! Where are you taking me!? ''HELP ME MR. PHOENIX!!!''
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** No Not to mention of [[spoiler: Fluttershy's]] reaction? reaction. The last thing she says before being forcibly escorted out is:
-->[[spoiler: '''Fluttershy''']]:No! I would never do such a thing! W-wait! Where are you taking me!? ''HELP ME MR. PHOENIX!!!''I wouldn't do that to anypony! Twilight! Mr. Phoenix! ''HEEEEEELP!''
-->[[spoiler: '''Fluttershy''']]:
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** No mention of [[spoiler: Fluttershy's]] reaction? The last thing she says before being forcibly escorted out is:
-->[[spoiler: '''Fluttershy''']]: No! I would never do such a thing! Where are you taking me!? ''HELP ME MR. PHOENIX!!!''
-->[[spoiler: '''Fluttershy''']]: No! I would never do such a thing! Where are you taking me!? ''HELP ME MR. PHOENIX!!!''
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** Which becomes even more heart-wrenching if you've played the games [[spoiler:when you remember that he's also had to accuse an extremely [[TheWoobie woobie-tastic]] witness during his darkest hour just so he could get more time. You can see that he's completely regreting having to do that again, and Twilight's reaction towards him just twisted the knife further.]]
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** Which becomes even [[HarsherInHindsight more heart-wrenching heart-wrenching]] if you've played the games [[spoiler:when you remember that he's also had to accuse an extremely [[TheWoobie woobie-tastic]] witness during his darkest hour just so he could get more time. You can see that he's completely regreting having to do that again, and Twilight's reaction towards him just twisted the knife further.]]
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--> ''Later''[''Later'']
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* Nick [[spoiler:accusing Fluttershy of the murder to buy more time]], especially Twilight's reaction.
--> '''Twilight''': I-I can't believe this! I trusted you!
--> '''Twilight''': I-I can't believe this! I trusted you!
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* Nick [[spoiler:accusing Fluttershy of the murder to buy more time]], especially Twilight's reaction.
reaction and Phoenix's own.
--> '''Twilight''': I-I can't believe you're saying this! I trustedyou!you!
--> ''Later''
--> '''Twilight:''' Phoenix... How could you...
--> '''Phoenix:''' ''(What have I done...?)''
--> '''Twilight''': I-I can't believe you're saying this! I trusted
--> ''Later''
--> '''Twilight:''' Phoenix... How could you...
--> '''Phoenix:''' ''(What have I done...?)''
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--> '''Twilight''': I-I can't believe this! I trusted you...you!
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** Which becomes even more heart-wrenching if you've played the games, when you remeber that [[spoiler:he's also had to acuse an extremely [[TheWoobie woobie-tastic]] witness during his darkest hour just so he could get more time. You can see that he's completely regreting having to do that again, and Twilight's reaction towards him just twisted the knife further.]]
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** Which becomes even more heart-wrenching if you've played the games, when games [[spoiler:when you remeber remember that [[spoiler:he's he's also had to acuse accuse an extremely [[TheWoobie woobie-tastic]] witness during his darkest hour just so he could get more time. You can see that he's completely regreting having to do that again, and Twilight's reaction towards him just twisted the knife further.]]
