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* The District 12 girl being followed to the stage by her cat, the only one who will miss her, and then ''[[EatTheDog her cat being killed and eaten]] by her fellow orphans while trying to find her after she's taken away''.
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* The District 12 girl being followed to the stage by her cat, the only one who will miss her, and then ''[[EatTheDog her ''her cat being killed and eaten]] eaten by her fellow orphans while trying to find her after she's taken away''.
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* Abram having to mourn Ben.
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* Abram having to mourn Ben. Especially since there's a strong possibility [[MamasBabyPapasMaybe Ben was his biological father]], and that Ben never told him about this.
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* The entire VikingFuneral of District 4: Mags' sister Dora mourning being the last survivor of their seven sisters. The deaths of two hundred former or current Career trainees. Deputy Peacekeeper Lockwood and most of the men who followed him into the FaceHeelTurn and most of the Victors.
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* The entire VikingFuneral of District 4: Mags' sister Dora mourning being the last survivor of their seven sisters. The deaths of two hundred former or current Career trainees. Deputy Peacekeeper Lockwood and most of the men who followed him into the FaceHeelTurn HeelFaceTurn and most of the Victors.
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-->''"The once wisecracking clown was now a yellowed skeleton, his lips pulled back from his teeth, his eyes wide and tormented."''
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* Lyme finding most of her home village killed by the Capitol, including her friend Mesa. Just to ''really'' twist the knife, every last body [[DeadGuyOnDisplay strung up in the ruins]] - [[KillEmAll old men, young women, and]] [[WouldHurtAChild children]] alike - has a silver arrow driven through their heart, all to taunt Lyme and remind everyone of the Capitol's strong arm.
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* Lyme finding most of her home village killed by the Capitol, including her friend Mesa. Just to ''really'' twist the knife, every last body [[DeadGuyOnDisplay strung up in the ruins]] - [[KillEmAll old men, young women, and]] and [[WouldHurtAChild children]] alike - has a silver arrow driven through their heart, all to taunt Lyme and remind everyone of the Capitol's strong arm.
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* Eli, the (implicitly widowed) father of District 10's male 1st Quarter Quell tribute, is seen "on the ground in a pool of his own sick, [[AdultFear shaking and screaming something]]".
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* Eli, the (implicitly widowed) father of District 10's male 1st Quarter Quell tribute, is seen "on the ground in a pool of his own sick, [[AdultFear shaking and screaming something]]".something".
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* Gloss and Cashmere's Parents AdultFear about losing them to the DAEYD (after already losing their older sons to the peacekeepers) and their argument driving the twins to go to the Academy together.
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* Gloss and Cashmere's Parents AdultFear Parents' worry about losing them to the DAEYD (after already losing their older sons to the peacekeepers) and their argument driving the twins to go to the Academy together.
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* The description of how Mayor Lourdes' wife was taken away and how he has to [[AdultFear watch his youngest daughter taken away as well]].
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* The description of how Mayor Lourdes' wife was taken away and how he has to [[AdultFear watch his youngest daughter taken away as well]].well.
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* The District 7 boy's mother's AdultFear coming true.
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* The District 7 boy's mother's AdultFear fear coming true.
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* The AdultFear in District 5 as they watch their children rebelling and dying (despite their efforts to stop them) while being too afraid to intervene themselves until the end.
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* The AdultFear horror in District 5 as they watch their children rebelling and dying (despite their efforts to stop them) while being too afraid to intervene themselves until the end.
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* Ermine's [[HeroicBSOD reaction]] to finding the hanged body of [[RomanticTwoGirlFriendship Esther]], and [[IWillPunishYourFriendForYourFailure the way]] Luster later forces her to Volunteer for the Games.
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* Ermine's [[HeroicBSOD reaction]] to finding the hanged body of [[RomanticTwoGirlFriendship [[PseudoRomanticFriendship Esther]], and [[IWillPunishYourFriendForYourFailure the way]] Luster later forces her to Volunteer for the Games.
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** The description of how no matter how [[DrowningMySorrows drunk]] Haymitch gets, no how close he comes to alcohol poisoning year after year, he can [[TheDeadHaveNames never forget a single one of those 47 names]].
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** The description of how no matter how [[DrowningMySorrows drunk]] Haymitch gets, no matter how close he comes to alcohol poisoning year after year, he can [[TheDeadHaveNames never forget a single one of those 47 names]].
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** Dazzle Brooks, one of the District One girls who volunteers by accident. She dies during the bloodbath, likely due to SuicideByCop as mentioned during ''Arrow''.
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** Dazzle Brooks, one of the District One girls who volunteers by accident. She dies during the bloodbath, likely implicitly due to SuicideByCop as mentioned during ''Arrow''.
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** The description of how no matter how [[DrowningMySorrows drunk]] Haymitch gets, how close he comes to alcohol poisoning year after year, he can [[TheDeadHaveNames never forget a single one of those 47 names]].
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** The description of how no matter how [[DrowningMySorrows drunk]] Haymitch gets, no how close he comes to alcohol poisoning year after year, he can [[TheDeadHaveNames never forget a single one of those 47 names]].
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-->''"The once wisecracking clown was now a yellowed skeleton, his lisp pulled back from his teeth, his eyes wide and tormented."''
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-->''"The once wisecracking clown was now a yellowed skeleton, his lisp lips pulled back from his teeth, his eyes wide and tormented."''
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* Rob's death after being tortured to death.
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* Rob's death after being tortured to death.tortured.
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* Haymitch's inability remember the color of his girlfriend's eyes.
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* Haymitch's inability remember the color colour of his girlfriend's eyes.
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* The reveal that Gleam and Song weren't supposed to die in the District 1 rebellion, but it got out of control due to a GambitPileup, causing a TorchesAndPitchforks mob to get to them before the main District rebels.
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* The reveal that Gleam [[RetiredMonster Gleam]] and Song [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer Song]] weren't supposed to die in the District 1 rebellion, but it got out of control due to a GambitPileup, causing a TorchesAndPitchforks mob to get to them before the main District rebels.
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* Lyme finding most of her home village killed by the Capitol, including her friend Mesa.
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* Lyme finding most of her home village killed by the Capitol, including her friend Mesa. Just to ''really'' twist the knife, every last body [[DeadGuyOnDisplay strung up in the ruins]] - [[KillEmAll old men, young women, and]] [[WouldHurtAChild children]] alike - has a silver arrow driven through their heart, all to taunt Lyme and remind everyone of the Capitol's strong arm.
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* Blight's reaction to seeing that his mother is a SexSlave in the Capitol. He takes note of "[T]he hands that combed my hair, that wiped away my tears, that held me tight when I woke up in the night crying."
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* Cecelia finding out about the victor SexSlave ring hits her pretty hard, especially since she's a former sex worker who [[YankTheDogsChain thought that winning the Hunger Games meant she'd never have to degrade herself like that again.]] As she realizes what Cora and Paylor are talking about, her voice gets "small and high-pitched," and then she lets out a BigNo.
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* Cecelia finding out about the victor SexSlave ring hits her pretty hard, especially since she's a former sex worker who [[YankTheDogsChain thought that winning the Hunger Games meant she'd never have to degrade herself like that again.]] again]]. As she realizes what Cora and Paylor are talking about, her voice gets "small and high-pitched," high-pitched", and then she lets out a BigNo.
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* Enobaria killing the boy from 11 on his birthday.
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* Enobaria killing the boy from 11 [[ABirthdayNotABreak on his birthday.birthday]].
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* Cecelia finding out about the victor SexSlave ring hits her pretty hard, especially since she's a former sex worker who [[YankTheDogsChain thought that winning the Hunger Games meant she'd never have to degrade herself like that again.]] As she realizes what Cora and Paylor are talking about, her voice gets "small and high-pitched," and then she lets out a BigNo.
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** Gates going into a seizure as he watches the District 7 tributes reluctantly kill his boy simply due to recognizing it might be the only way to buy time from the GameMakers.
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** Gates going into a seizure as he watches the District 7 tributes reluctantly kill his boy simply due to recognizing it might be the only way to buy time from the GameMakers.Gamemakers.
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** Jenna Dunne, a District 6 girl. Her mother stayed sober for sixteen years just for her sake, so Jenna has a better life than she does. However once she's reaped, her mother goes OffTheWagon four hours later.
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** Jenna Dunne, a District 6 girl. Her mother stayed sober for sixteen years just for her sake, so Jenna has a better life than she does. However However, once she's reaped, her mother goes OffTheWagon four hours later.
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** Aramanth Copeland, a dart-playing [[TheLadette lad-ette]] from District 9 having the District raising sponsor funds for her, only for Aramanth to die before the money can be sent.
** Veala and Charlie, Elena and Danny's children who were blatantly rigged into the Hunger Games. Charlie also promises to MercyKill Veala if he gets a chance.
** Veala and Charlie, Elena and Danny's children who were blatantly rigged into the Hunger Games. Charlie also promises to MercyKill Veala if he gets a chance.
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** Aramanth Copeland, a dart-playing [[TheLadette lad-ette]] from District 9 having the District raising sponsor funds for her, only for [[AllForNothing Aramanth to die before the money can be sent.sent]].
** Veala and Charlie, Elena and Danny's children who were [[VoteEarlyVoteOften blatantlyrigged rigged]] into the Hunger Games. Charlie also promises to MercyKill Veala if he gets a chance.
** Veala and Charlie, Elena and Danny's children who were [[VoteEarlyVoteOften blatantly
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* Nolan watching his promising tributes die Wiress's year.
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* Nolan watching his promising tributes die during Wiress's year.
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* Roan murdering his District partner after she offered him help.
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* Roan murdering his District partner [[UngratefulBastard after she offered him help.help]], due to being blinded by his racism.
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* Gloss and Cashmere avoiding there family to keep their parents from seeing the sign that they've been made {{Sex Slave}}s.
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* Gloss and Cashmere avoiding there their family to keep their parents from seeing the sign that they've been made {{Sex Slave}}s.
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* Gloss and Cashmere's fight about "Victor Duties".
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* Gloss and Cashmere's fight about "Victor "Victor's Duties".
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* Johanna's premature death saving a boy from a crane did not win [=Oisin55=] any new fans.
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* Johanna's premature death [[HeroicSacrifice saving a boy from a crane crane]] did not win [=Oisin55=] any new fans.
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* Kerry being reaped, and everything that follows with her.
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* Kerry being reaped, and [[HeroicSuicide everything that follows with her.her]].
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* The District 5 girl being voted into the games over an accident that wasn't even her fault, and that happened at a job she took just to buy clothes for her sisters.
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* The District 5 girl being voted into the games Games over an accident that wasn't even her fault, and that happened at a job she took just to buy clothes for her sisters.
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* The District 12 girl being followed to the stage by her cat, the only one who will miss her, and then ''her cat being killed and eaten by her fellow orphans while trying to find her after she's taken away''.
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* The District 12 girl being followed to the stage by her cat, the only one who will miss her, and then ''her ''[[EatTheDog her cat being killed and eaten eaten]] by her fellow orphans while trying to find her after she's taken away''.
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adding some more context to camden and the 2nd qq tributes, moving miriam to nightmare fuel
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* Camden's sister blaming herself for his getting reaped (due to being named after a rebel, which helped attract attention to the family).
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* The events before Camden's suicide. Camden lost most of his family due to the Rebellion, with two of his relatives being reaped for past Hunger Games. Five years after his victory, Camden's sister blaming Ryla was reaped and dies in the arena. Ryla also blames herself for his getting reaped (due to being Camden's reaping, as she was named after a rebel, major rebel which helped helped attract attention to the family).
* Camden's suicide after his sister dies in a Games after his.family.
* Camden's suicide after his sister dies in a Games after his.
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* Quite a bit of this in in Haymitch's chapter, which really captures the sadness and lost potential of those 47 dead kids.
** Gossamer Monroe, the girl Haymitch killed, being the niece of District 1's [[IJustWantToBeSpecial 1st Quarter Quell female tribute]] and having been named after her.
** Dazzle Brooks, the other girl volunteering in 1 by accident. She dies during the bloodbath, likely due to SuicideByCop as mentioned during ''Arrow''.
** Miracle Vermeer, a District 1 boy wanting to bring pride to his relatives in 5 despite.
** Pixelle Li of District 3 being a hula hoop champion.
** The other 3 girl, Sue Jones, a brilliant inventor remembered more for her gory death in the arena than anything she did in life.
** Gossamer Monroe, the girl Haymitch killed, being the niece of District 1's [[IJustWantToBeSpecial 1st Quarter Quell female tribute]] and having been named after her.
** Dazzle Brooks, the other girl volunteering in 1 by accident. She dies during the bloodbath, likely due to SuicideByCop as mentioned during ''Arrow''.
** Miracle Vermeer, a District 1 boy wanting to bring pride to his relatives in 5 despite.
** Pixelle Li of District 3 being a hula hoop champion.
** The other 3 girl, Sue Jones, a brilliant inventor remembered more for her gory death in the arena than anything she did in life.
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* Quite a bit of this in The other forty-seven tributes mentioned in Haymitch's chapter, chapter. It emphasizes that all tributes entering the arena have a life outside, which really captures the sadness and lost potential of those 47 dead kids.
**Gossamer Monroe, the girl Haymitch killed, being the niece of District 1's [[IJustWantToBeSpecial 1st Quarter Quell female tribute]] and having been named after her.
**Dazzle Brooks, one of the other girl volunteering in 1 District One girls who volunteers by accident. She dies during the bloodbath, likely due to SuicideByCop as mentioned during ''Arrow''.
** Miracle Vermeer, a District 1 boy wanting to bring pride to his relatives in 5despite.
** Pixelle Li of District 3despite being a hula hoop champion.
teased for his hair colour.
**The other 3 girl, Sue Jones, a brilliant inventor remembered more for her gory death in the arena than anything she did in life.
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** Miracle Vermeer, a District 1 boy wanting to bring pride to his relatives in 5
** Pixelle Li of District 3
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** A District 4 girl, Coralle O'Keefe, who was a SupremeChef about to get an internship to work in the Capitol when she was reaped.
** Ulysses Blackwater, a District 4 boy who volunteered [[ParentalNeglect just so his parents would notice him]].
** Jenna Dunne, a District 6 girl whose mother went OffTheWagon a few hours after the reaping after sixteen years of staying sober for her sake.
** A [[ImperiledInPregnancy pregnant]] District 7 girl, Miriam Murray, being reaped and her baby dying with her.
** Ulysses Blackwater, a District 4 boy who volunteered [[ParentalNeglect just so his parents would notice him]].
** Jenna Dunne, a District 6 girl whose mother went OffTheWagon a few hours after the reaping after sixteen years of staying sober for her sake.
** A [[ImperiledInPregnancy pregnant]] District 7 girl, Miriam Murray, being reaped and her baby dying with her.
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** A District 4 girl, Coralle O'Keefe, who was a District Four girl known for her shrimp gumbo to a point where a Capitolian SupremeChef about to get an internship to work in was petitioning the Capitol when she was reaped.
** Ulysses Blackwater,government to let him hire her as a District 4 boy who volunteered [[ParentalNeglect just so his parents would notice him]].commis. Then the Hunger Games happened, leading to her dreams being crushed.
**Jenna Dunne, a Both District 6 girl whose mother went OffTheWagon a few hours Four male tributes, Brock Burns and Ulysses Blackwater. Brock deeply cares about two relatives, who were both killed by the respective Victors after the reaping after sixteen years of staying sober for her sake.volunteering. Meanwhile, Ulysses Blackwater volunteered [[ParentalNeglect just so his parents would notice him]].
**A [[ImperiledInPregnancy pregnant]] Jenna Dunne, a District 7 girl, Miriam Murray, being reaped and 6 girl. Her mother stayed sober for sixteen years just for her baby dying with her.sake, so Jenna has a better life than she does. However once she's reaped, her mother goes OffTheWagon four hours later.
** Ulysses Blackwater,
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** Elena's son promising to MercyKill his sister if he gets a chance.
** The simple description of how Layla Forrester from District 12 had never tasted ''anything'' besides tesserae grain, dandelion leaves and tepid water before she was reaped.
** The simple description of how Layla Forrester from District 12 had never tasted ''anything'' besides tesserae grain, dandelion leaves and tepid water before she was reaped.
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** Elena's son promising Veala and Charlie, Elena and Danny's children who were blatantly rigged into the Hunger Games. Charlie also promises to MercyKill his sister Veala if he gets a chance.
** The simple description of how Layla Forrester from District 12 had never tasted ''anything'' besides tesserae grain, dandelion leaves and tepid water before she was reaped. Justified because District Twelve is one of the poorest districts in Panem.
** The simple description of how Layla Forrester from District 12 had never tasted ''anything'' besides tesserae grain, dandelion leaves and tepid water before she was reaped. Justified because District Twelve is one of the poorest districts in Panem.
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* The [[KangarooCourt mock trials and executions]] of Granyte, Ermien, Brilliance and Ares, all of them at least slightly sympathetic Victors.
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* The [[KangarooCourt mock trials and executions]] of Granyte, Ermien, Ermine, Brilliance and Ares, for voluntarily "upholding" a system that kills children (read: being Career Victors). It doesn't help that all of them at least slightly sympathetic Victors.Victors.
** Ermine's death in particular. Ermine didn't choose to attend the DAEYD, nor did she want to be named tribute and wasn't in a position where she could commit SuicideByCop, due to Luster's threat of killing Esther's family. So it would be jarring for her to be told that she was voluntarily doing so, when she was only doing so for her survival (and that of Esther's family).
** Ermine's death in particular. Ermine didn't choose to attend the DAEYD, nor did she want to be named tribute and wasn't in a position where she could commit SuicideByCop, due to Luster's threat of killing Esther's family. So it would be jarring for her to be told that she was voluntarily doing so, when she was only doing so for her survival (and that of Esther's family).
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** Dazzle Brooks, the other girl volunteering in 1 by accident.
** Miracle Vermeer, a District 1 boy wanting to bring pride to his relatives in 5.
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** Dazzle Brooks, the other girl volunteering in 1 by accident. \n She dies during the bloodbath, likely due to SuicideByCop as mentioned during ''Arrow''.
** Miracle Vermeer, a District 1 boy wanting to bring pride to his relatives in5.5 despite.
** Miracle Vermeer, a District 1 boy wanting to bring pride to his relatives in
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** Watts Jawofsky, a District 5 boy who [[HeroicSacrifice volunteered for his thirteen year old brother]].
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* Mitt's BreakTheCutie experiences in the arena.
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* Mitt's BreakTheCutie experiences in the arena.arena, where he loses his confidence and past personality after leaving.
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* The fate of the District 10 girl, Nellie Mills -- she was Reaped because [[SinsOfOurFathers her father]] [[HuntingTheMostDangerousGame hunted Anasazi residents]] of the district, and she died a gory death as Capitolians cheered it on as they watched the carnage in person.
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* The fate of the District 10 girl, Nellie Mills -- she was Reaped because [[SinsOfOurFathers her father]] [[HuntingTheMostDangerousGame hunted Anasazi residents]] of the district, and she died a gory death as death, while Capitolians cheered it on as they watched the carnage in person.
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* The District 2 volunteer wandering about how the girl she volunteered for will live with the District.
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* The District 2 volunteer wandering wondering about how the girl she volunteered for will live with the District.
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* The district 4 girl being sent in for try gin to feed her mother.
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* The district District 4 girl being sent in for try trying gin to feed her mother.
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* The SinsOfTheFather fate of the District 10 girl.
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* The SinsOfTheFather fate of the District 10 girl.girl, Nellie Mills -- she was Reaped because [[SinsOfOurFathers her father]] [[HuntingTheMostDangerousGame hunted Anasazi residents]] of the district, and she died a gory death as Capitolians cheered it on as they watched the carnage in person.
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* The District 12 boy's utter confusion about ''why'' he was voted in (just as a sacrificial lamb due to having few relatives anyone would miss) and trying to remember things like his sister's eyes on his way to the parade. Worse yet, he isn't even remembered by the Capitol as a human, just as a statistic.
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* The District 12 boy's utter confusion about ''why'' he was voted in (just as a sacrificial lamb due to having few relatives anyone would miss) and trying to remember things like his sister's eyes on his way to the parade. Worse yet, [[AMillionIsAStatistic he isn't even remembered by the Capitol as a human, just as a statistic.statistic]].
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* Mitt sleeping next to the heater on his floor out of a depression to stay warm after surviving the arctic arena.
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* Mitt sleeping next to the heater on his floor out of a depression to stay warm after surviving the arctic Antarctic arena.
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* The reveal that Gleam and Song weren't supposed to die in the District 1 rebellion but it got out of control due to a GambitPileup causing a TorchesAndPitchforks mob to get to them before the main District rebels.
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* The reveal that Gleam and Song weren't supposed to die in the District 1 rebellion rebellion, but it got out of control due to a GambitPileup GambitPileup, causing a TorchesAndPitchforks mob to get to them before the main District rebels.
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* The description of how Mayor Lourdes wife was taken away and how he has to watch his youngest daughter taken away as well.
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* The description of how Mayor Lourdes Lourdes' wife was taken away and how he has to [[AdultFear watch his youngest daughter taken away as well.well]].
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* Devon, arguably the nicest tribute of the whole 2nd Hunger Games, being tortured to death over seven hours while his family (on the [=TVs=]) and Blight [[ForcedToWatch have to watch every second of it]].
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* Devon, arguably the nicest tribute of the whole 2nd 52nd Hunger Games, being tortured to death over seven hours while his family (on the [=TVs=]) and Blight [[ForcedToWatch have to watch every second of it]].
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* Ermine's [[HeroicBSOD reaction]] to finding the hanged body of [[RomanticTwoGirlFriendship Esther]], and the way Luster later forces her too volunteer.
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* Ermine's [[HeroicBSOD reaction]] to finding the hanged body of [[RomanticTwoGirlFriendship Esther]], and [[IWillPunishYourFriendForYourFailure the way way]] Luster later forces her too volunteer.to Volunteer for the Games.
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** Gates going into a seizure as he watches the District 7 tributes reluctantly kill his boy simply due to recognizing it might be the only way to buy time from the game makers.
** The last stand of those same District 7 tributes, and how Vera angrily tries to smash her computer as they fall.
** The last stand of those same District 7 tributes, and how Vera angrily tries to smash her computer as they fall.
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** Gates going into a seizure as he watches the District 7 tributes reluctantly kill his boy simply due to recognizing it might be the only way to buy time from the game makers.GameMakers.
** Thelast stand {{last stand}} of those same District 7 tributes, and how Vera angrily tries to smash her computer as they fall.
** The
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* The reveal that Wonder (by suicide) and Gates have both died, and how Wonder's parents were killed as well in retaliation.
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* The reveal that Wonder (by suicide) ([[DrivenToSuicide by suicide]]) and Gates have both died, and how Wonder's parents were killed as well in retaliation.
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** Dattery Nakamura from District 3, being a DeathSeeker whose lost his whole family to the Games and industrial accidents.
** A district 4 girl, Coralle O'Keefe, who was a SupremeChef about to get an internship to work in the Capitol when she was reaped.
** A district 4 girl, Coralle O'Keefe, who was a SupremeChef about to get an internship to work in the Capitol when she was reaped.
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** Dattery Nakamura from District 3, 3 being a DeathSeeker whose who lost his whole family to the Games and industrial accidents.
** Adistrict District 4 girl, Coralle O'Keefe, who was a SupremeChef about to get an internship to work in the Capitol when she was reaped.
** A
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** Weaver Browne, a GentleGiant from 8, going crazy.
** Armanth Copeland, a [[TheLadette lad-ette]] from District 9 having the District raising sponsor funds for her, only for Armanath to die before the money can be sent.
** Armanth Copeland, a [[TheLadette lad-ette]] from District 9 having the District raising sponsor funds for her, only for Armanath to die before the money can be sent.
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** Weaver Browne, a GentleGiant from 8, [[MurderMakesYouCrazy going crazy.crazy]].
**Armanth Aramanth Copeland, a dart-playing [[TheLadette lad-ette]] from District 9 having the District raising sponsor funds for her, only for Armanath Aramanth to die before the money can be sent.
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* Cecelia's stoic feelings about being made to sell her body at 14 to feed her family.
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* Cecelia's stoic feelings about being made to [[{{Streetwalker}} sell her body body]] at 14 to feed her family.
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* The depths Cecelia and her ally Rowenna both sink to and how Rowenna tries to stab Cecelia in the back at their last meeting.
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* The depths Cecelia and her ally Rowenna both sink to to, and how Rowenna tries to stab Cecelia in the back at their last meeting.
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* Jules MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment after accidentally crippling a man in a fight.
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* Jules Jules' MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment after accidentally crippling a man in a fight.
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* Tiberius's unanswered letters to Minerva begging forgiveness.
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* Tiberius's unanswered letters to Minerva begging for forgiveness.
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* Vera getting plastic surgery to avoid seeing the face of a murder in the mirror.
* Virtus selling his District token for less money than it takes to get drunk.
* Virtus selling his District token for less money than it takes to get drunk.
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* Vera getting plastic surgery to avoid seeing the face of a murder murderer in the mirror.
* Virtus selling his District token for less money than it takes for him to get drunk.
* Virtus selling his District token for less money than it takes for him to get drunk.
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* The sheer sense off loss and sadness making so many people revolt, from the workers to the Great Houses, and the description of decades of watching their children be DeathSeeker's in the arena.
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* The sheer sense off loss and sadness making so many people revolt, from the workers to the Great Houses, and the description of decades of watching their children be DeathSeeker's {{Death Seeker}}s in the arena.
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* Victoria lying to Cecelia about Spindellas plans for a HeroicSuicide.
* Cecelia and Hectors goodbye as she thinks about how he's probably the last person she'll see who isn't trying to kill her.
* Cecelia and Hectors goodbye as she thinks about how he's probably the last person she'll see who isn't trying to kill her.
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* Victoria lying to Cecelia about Spindellas Spindella's plans for a HeroicSuicide.
* Cecelia andHectors Hector's goodbye as she thinks about how he's probably the last person she'll see who isn't trying to kill her.
* Cecelia and