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* The fates of everyone in the original timeline -- and not just those who was unceremoniously executed or assassinated, like Mia, Abel, or Rafina.
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* The fates of everyone in the original timeline -- and not just those who was were unceremoniously executed or assassinated, like Mia, Abel, or Rafina.
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* Mia's first meal in her new life was a lunch of Yellow-Tomato-Stew and Milk-Rolls, which she respetively disliked and found boring in her old life. Upon the first mouthful of lovingly prepared cuisine after 3 years of foraging on stale leftovers and moldly hard-tack, she ''finally'' learns the preciousness of proper food and how fortunate she was to have indulged above and beyond even that, making her shed tears of gratitude and joy on the spot. Doubles as funny when the head shef and maids panicked thinking their cooking has offended her, and then heartwarming after she sincerely thanks them after learning just how ''much'' effort (three ''days'' of simmering) it takes to make the "average" breakfast that she has taken for granted in her past life.
* The fates of everyone in the original timeline--and not just those who were unceremoniously executed or assassinated, like Mia, Abel, or Rafina.
** For all of his genius, Ludwig was never able to move on from Mia's execution, vanishing from history instead of serving anyone else.
** Tiona lived her life in regret for multiple reasons: one, for refusing Mia's dying request to speak with her, as Tiona might've realized then that Mia wasn't responsible for her father's death. Although it's doubtful it would've saved Mia, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone all Tiona could do after the fact was wonder]] WhatIf. Two, [[DidNotGetTheGirl for letting Sion go rather than pursue him]], aware of her lower station and afraid that she would be selfishly burdening him after he already traumatized himself from fighting a war for her. As it turned out, all her inaction did was contribute to him leading a lonely life.
** After several volumes of witnessing the bond between Sion and Keithwood, Volume 8 has one of the single most grim flashbacks in the series, in which the original Keithwood's fate is revealed: he tried and failed to help break Echard out of prison[[note]]Echard himself arrested for leading a coup[[/note]]. When Keithwood explains that it was so Sion wouldn't have to execute his own brother and truly become a king with a heart made of stone, Sion interrupts Keithwood to tell him that he has already become king, [[TheFettered and with it comes a duty to always be impartial and just]]. He then thanks Keithwood for everything, before sentencing him to death--thus ironically becoming the very thing Keithwood was trying to prevent and living the rest of his life alone, more of an ideal than human.
* The fates of everyone in the original timeline--and not just those who were unceremoniously executed or assassinated, like Mia, Abel, or Rafina.
** For all of his genius, Ludwig was never able to move on from Mia's execution, vanishing from history instead of serving anyone else.
** Tiona lived her life in regret for multiple reasons: one, for refusing Mia's dying request to speak with her, as Tiona might've realized then that Mia wasn't responsible for her father's death. Although it's doubtful it would've saved Mia, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone all Tiona could do after the fact was wonder]] WhatIf. Two, [[DidNotGetTheGirl for letting Sion go rather than pursue him]], aware of her lower station and afraid that she would be selfishly burdening him after he already traumatized himself from fighting a war for her. As it turned out, all her inaction did was contribute to him leading a lonely life.
** After several volumes of witnessing the bond between Sion and Keithwood, Volume 8 has one of the single most grim flashbacks in the series, in which the original Keithwood's fate is revealed: he tried and failed to help break Echard out of prison[[note]]Echard himself arrested for leading a coup[[/note]]. When Keithwood explains that it was so Sion wouldn't have to execute his own brother and truly become a king with a heart made of stone, Sion interrupts Keithwood to tell him that he has already become king, [[TheFettered and with it comes a duty to always be impartial and just]]. He then thanks Keithwood for everything, before sentencing him to death--thus ironically becoming the very thing Keithwood was trying to prevent and living the rest of his life alone, more of an ideal than human.
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* Mia's first meal in her new life was a lunch of Yellow-Tomato-Stew yellow tomato stew and Milk-Rolls, milk rolls, which she respetively respectively disliked and found boring in her old life. Upon the first mouthful of lovingly prepared cuisine after 3 three years of foraging on stale leftovers and moldly hard-tack, she ''finally'' learns the preciousness of proper food and how fortunate she was to have indulged above and beyond even that, making her shed tears of gratitude and joy on the spot. Doubles as funny when the head shef chef and maids panicked panic, thinking their cooking has offended her, and then heartwarming after she sincerely thanks them after learning just how ''much'' effort (three ''days'' of simmering) it takes to make the "average" breakfast that she has taken for granted in her past life.
* The fates of everyone in the originaltimeline--and timeline -- and not just those who were was unceremoniously executed or assassinated, like Mia, Abel, or Rafina.
** For all of his genius, Ludwig was never able to move on from Mia's execution, vanishing from historyinstead of rather than serving anyone else.
** Tiona lived her life in regret for multiple reasons: one, for refusing Mia's dying request to speak with her, as Tiona might've realized then that Mia wasn't responsible for her father's death. Although it's doubtful it would've saved Mia, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone all Tiona could do after the fact was wonder]] WhatIf. Two, [[DidNotGetTheGirl for letting Sion go rather than pursue him]], aware of her lower station and afraid that she would be selfishly burdening him after he already traumatized himself from fighting a war for her. As it turned out, all her inaction did was contribute to himleading living a lonely life.
** After several volumes of witnessing the bond between Sion and Keithwood, Volume 8 has one of the single most grim flashbacks in the series, in which the original Keithwood's fate is revealed: he tried and failed to help break Echard out of prison[[note]]Echardhimself was arrested for leading a coup[[/note]]. When Keithwood explains that it was so Sion wouldn't have to execute his own brother and truly become a king with a heart made of stone, Sion interrupts Keithwood to tell him that he has already become king, [[TheFettered and with it comes a duty to always be impartial and just]]. He then thanks Keithwood for everything, before sentencing him to death--thus death -- thus ironically becoming the very thing Keithwood was trying to prevent and living the rest of his life alone, more of an ideal than human.
* The fates of everyone in the original
** For all of his genius, Ludwig was never able to move on from Mia's execution, vanishing from history
** Tiona lived her life in regret for multiple reasons: one, for refusing Mia's dying request to speak with her, as Tiona might've realized then that Mia wasn't responsible for her father's death. Although it's doubtful it would've saved Mia, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone all Tiona could do after the fact was wonder]] WhatIf. Two, [[DidNotGetTheGirl for letting Sion go rather than pursue him]], aware of her lower station and afraid that she would be selfishly burdening him after he already traumatized himself from fighting a war for her. As it turned out, all her inaction did was contribute to him
** After several volumes of witnessing the bond between Sion and Keithwood, Volume 8 has one of the single most grim flashbacks in the series, in which the original Keithwood's fate is revealed: he tried and failed to help break Echard out of prison[[note]]Echard
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* Mia's first meal in her new life was a lunch of Yellow-Tomato-Stew and Milk-Rolls, which she respetively disliked and found boring in her old life. Upon the first mouthful of lovingly prepared cuisine after 3 years of foraging on stale leftovers and moldly hard-tack, she ''finally'' learns the preciousness of proper food and how fortunate she was to have indulged above and beyond even that, making her shed tears of gratitude and joy on the spot. Doubles as funny when the head shef and maids panicked thinking their cooking has offended her, and then heartwarming gently thanks them after learning just how ''much'' effort (three ''days'' of simmering) it takes to make the "average" breakfast that she has taken for granted in her past life.
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* Mia's first meal in her new life was a lunch of Yellow-Tomato-Stew and Milk-Rolls, which she respetively disliked and found boring in her old life. Upon the first mouthful of lovingly prepared cuisine after 3 years of foraging on stale leftovers and moldly hard-tack, she ''finally'' learns the preciousness of proper food and how fortunate she was to have indulged above and beyond even that, making her shed tears of gratitude and joy on the spot. Doubles as funny when the head shef and maids panicked thinking their cooking has offended her, and then heartwarming gently after she sincerely thanks them after learning just how ''much'' effort (three ''days'' of simmering) it takes to make the "average" breakfast that she has taken for granted in her past life.
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* Mia's first meal in her new life was a lunch of Yellow-Tomato-Stew and Milk-Rolls, which she respetively disliked and found boring in her old life. Upon the first mouthful of lovingly prepared cuisine after 3 years of foraging on stale leftovers and moldly hard-tack, she ''finally'' learns the preciousness of proper food and how fortunate she was to have indulged above and beyond even that, making her shed tears of gratitude and joy on the spot. Doubles as funny when the head shef and maids panicked thinking their cooking has offended her, and then heartwarming gently thanks them after learning just how ''much'' effort (three ''days'' of simmering) it takes to make the "average" breakfast that she has taken for granted in her past life.
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* Mia's first meal in her new life was a lunch of Yellow-Tomato-Stew and Milk-Rolls, which she respetively disliked and found boring in her old life. Upon the first mouthful of lovingly prepared cuisine after 3 years of foraging on stale leftovers and moldly hard-tack, she ''finally'' learns the preciousness of proper food and how fortunate she was to have indulged above and beyond even that, making her shed tears of gratitude and joy on the spot. Doubles as funny when the head shef and maids panicked thinking their cooking has offended her, and then heartwarming gently thanks them after learning just how ''much'' effort (three ''days'' of simmering) it takes to make the "average" breakfast that she has taken for granted in her past life.life.
* The fates of everyone in the original timeline--and not just those who were unceremoniously executed or assassinated, like Mia, Abel, or Rafina.
** For all of his genius, Ludwig was never able to move on from Mia's execution, vanishing from history instead of serving anyone else.
** Tiona lived her life in regret for multiple reasons: one, for refusing Mia's dying request to speak with her, as Tiona might've realized then that Mia wasn't responsible for her father's death. Although it's doubtful it would've saved Mia, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone all Tiona could do after the fact was wonder]] WhatIf. Two, [[DidNotGetTheGirl for letting Sion go rather than pursue him]], aware of her lower station and afraid that she would be selfishly burdening him after he already traumatized himself from fighting a war for her. As it turned out, all her inaction did was contribute to him leading a lonely life.
** After several volumes of witnessing the bond between Sion and Keithwood, Volume 8 has one of the single most grim flashbacks in the series, in which the original Keithwood's fate is revealed: he tried and failed to help break Echard out of prison[[note]]Echard himself arrested for leading a coup[[/note]]. When Keithwood explains that it was so Sion wouldn't have to execute his own brother and truly become a king with a heart made of stone, Sion interrupts Keithwood to tell him that he has already become king, [[TheFettered and with it comes a duty to always be impartial and just]]. He then thanks Keithwood for everything, before sentencing him to death--thus ironically becoming the very thing Keithwood was trying to prevent and living the rest of his life alone, more of an ideal than human.
* The fates of everyone in the original timeline--and not just those who were unceremoniously executed or assassinated, like Mia, Abel, or Rafina.
** For all of his genius, Ludwig was never able to move on from Mia's execution, vanishing from history instead of serving anyone else.
** Tiona lived her life in regret for multiple reasons: one, for refusing Mia's dying request to speak with her, as Tiona might've realized then that Mia wasn't responsible for her father's death. Although it's doubtful it would've saved Mia, [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone all Tiona could do after the fact was wonder]] WhatIf. Two, [[DidNotGetTheGirl for letting Sion go rather than pursue him]], aware of her lower station and afraid that she would be selfishly burdening him after he already traumatized himself from fighting a war for her. As it turned out, all her inaction did was contribute to him leading a lonely life.
** After several volumes of witnessing the bond between Sion and Keithwood, Volume 8 has one of the single most grim flashbacks in the series, in which the original Keithwood's fate is revealed: he tried and failed to help break Echard out of prison[[note]]Echard himself arrested for leading a coup[[/note]]. When Keithwood explains that it was so Sion wouldn't have to execute his own brother and truly become a king with a heart made of stone, Sion interrupts Keithwood to tell him that he has already become king, [[TheFettered and with it comes a duty to always be impartial and just]]. He then thanks Keithwood for everything, before sentencing him to death--thus ironically becoming the very thing Keithwood was trying to prevent and living the rest of his life alone, more of an ideal than human.
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* Mia's first meal in her new life was a lunch of Yellow-Tomato-Stew and Milk-Rolls, which she respetively disliked and found boring in her old life. Upon the first mouthful of lovingly prepared cuisine after 3 years of foraging on stale leftovers and moldly hard-tack, she ''finally'' learns the preciousness of proper food and how fortunate she was to have indulged above and beyond even that, making her shed tears of gratitude and joy on the spot. Doubles as funny when the head shef and maids panicked thinking their cooking has offended her, and then heartwarming gently thanks them after learning just how ''much'' effort (three ''days'' of simmering) it takes to make the "average" breakfast that she has taken for granted in her past life.
