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** Better yet, the remorse and terror on Ransik's face when he realized that he had just shot at Nadira. He realized what his hatred almost costed him, thus turned himself in.
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** Better yet, the remorse and terror on Ransik's face when he realized that he had just shot at Nadira. He realized what his hatred almost costed him, and thus turned himself in.
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** Better yet, when [Ransik inadvertently causes Nadira to get hurt as she was protecting a baby. The look and reaction and guilt on Ransik's face is what prompts him to surrender.
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** Better yet, when [Ransik inadvertently causes Nadira to get hurt as she was protecting a baby. The look the remorse and reaction and guilt terror on Ransik's face is when he realized that he had just shot at Nadira. He realized what prompts him to surrender.his hatred almost costed him, thus turned himself in.
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* [[spoiler: Wes saying good bye to the other Rangers. Especially Jen, after they each confess that they love each other. The only thing ruining that scene is that they don't kiss.]]
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* [[spoiler: Wes saying good bye to the other Rangers. Especially Jen, after they each confess that they love each other. The only thing ruining that scene is that they don't kiss.]]
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* [[spoiler:In the final episode, Jen breaks off her engagement with Alex, since he's no longer the person she loved.]]
* Ransik [[spoiler: basically ignoring Nadira when she starts her HeelFaceTurn]]. Tears were shed.
** Better yet, when [[spoiler: Ransik inadvertently causes Nadira to get hurt as she was protecting a baby]]. The look and reaction and guilt on [[spoiler: Ransik's face]], which is what prompts [[spoiler: him to surrender]].
* Just Notacon. [[spoiler: Just him getting arrested after being forced to steal food because the alternative was he'd starve, owing to the genetically perfect humans refusing to help simply because he was a mutant]].
* Ransik [[spoiler: basically ignoring Nadira when she starts her HeelFaceTurn]]. Tears were shed.
** Better yet, when [[spoiler: Ransik inadvertently causes Nadira to get hurt as she was protecting a baby]]. The look and reaction and guilt on [[spoiler: Ransik's face]], which is what prompts [[spoiler: him to surrender]].
* Just Notacon. [[spoiler: Just him getting arrested after being forced to steal food because the alternative was he'd starve, owing to the genetically perfect humans refusing to help simply because he was a mutant]].
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* [[spoiler:In In the final episode, Jen breaks off her engagement with Alex, since he's no longer the person she loved.]]
loved, and she's no longer the woman who loved him.
* Ransik[[spoiler: basically ignoring Nadira when she starts her HeelFaceTurn]].HeelFaceTurn. Tears were shed.
** Better yet, when[[spoiler: Ransik [Ransik inadvertently causes Nadira to get hurt as she was protecting a baby]]. baby. The look and reaction and guilt on [[spoiler: Ransik's face]], which face is what prompts [[spoiler: him to surrender]].
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* Just Notacon.[[spoiler: Just him getting arrested after being forced to steal food because the alternative was he'd starve, owing to the genetically perfect humans refusing to help simply because he was a mutant]].mutant.
* Ransik
** Better yet, when
* Just Notacon.
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-->'''Frax:''' You're an evil mutant with a heart as black as coal, ''just like your father''. Now get out of my sight, '''you sicken me!'''
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-->'''Nadira:''' I'm sorry... for what my father ''did'' to you, Dr. Fericks.
--> '''Frax:''' ''(shoves the Cyclobots aside, as he turns around, and exclaims in intense shock)'' [[BigWhat WHAT?!]]
--> ''(Nadira smiles with pity and turns to leave, an image of Dr. Fericks, the man who Frax used to be appears on his chest gem)''
--> '''Dr. Fericks''': There's hope for her... ''(the image vanishes)''
--> '''Frax:''' ''(struggles with renewed strength, smacking aside a Cyclobot, and declares with all that's left of his spirit)'' Nadira! Wait! Wait, I was wrong! You ''don't'' have to hate! You can... you--you can break the cycle of hatred! ''Never'' give up! Never--never give ''up''...!
--> ''(Nadira had been walking away, but slowly turns around, and watches in visible trepidation as the Cyclobots assault Frax with their tasers. He whimpers in agony, but manages to finish his speech, while being harshly drug away by his former creations. Nadira appears appalled, but as unable to protest outside of a few small moans of sadness. Frax's final words echo distantly)''
--> '''Frax:''' ''Don't give up''!
--> '''Frax:''' ''(shoves the Cyclobots aside, as he turns around, and exclaims in intense shock)'' [[BigWhat WHAT?!]]
--> ''(Nadira smiles with pity and turns to leave, an image of Dr. Fericks, the man who Frax used to be appears on his chest gem)''
--> '''Dr. Fericks''': There's hope for her... ''(the image vanishes)''
--> '''Frax:''' ''(struggles with renewed strength, smacking aside a Cyclobot, and declares with all that's left of his spirit)'' Nadira! Wait! Wait, I was wrong! You ''don't'' have to hate! You can... you--you can break the cycle of hatred! ''Never'' give up! Never--never give ''up''...!
--> ''(Nadira had been walking away, but slowly turns around, and watches in visible trepidation as the Cyclobots assault Frax with their tasers. He whimpers in agony, but manages to finish his speech, while being harshly drug away by his former creations. Nadira appears appalled, but as unable to protest outside of a few small moans of sadness. Frax's final words echo distantly)''
--> '''Frax:''' ''Don't give up''!
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** Frax's death. Gah. And the fact that Nadira's the only one who cares.
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** Frax's death. Gah. And death, and the fact that Nadira's the only one who cares.
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* Ransik [[spoiler: basically ''disowning'' Nadira when she starts her HeelFaceTurn]]. Tears were shed.
** Better yet, when [[spoiler: Ransik inadvertently causes Nadira to get hurt as she was carrying the baby]]. The look and reaction and guilt on [[spoiler: Ransik's face]], which is what prompts [[spoiler: him to surrender]].
** Better yet, when [[spoiler: Ransik inadvertently causes Nadira to get hurt as she was carrying the baby]]. The look and reaction and guilt on [[spoiler: Ransik's face]], which is what prompts [[spoiler: him to surrender]].
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* Ransik [[spoiler: basically ''disowning'' ignoring Nadira when she starts her HeelFaceTurn]]. Tears were shed.
** Better yet, when [[spoiler: Ransik inadvertently causes Nadira to get hurt as she wascarrying the protecting a baby]]. The look and reaction and guilt on [[spoiler: Ransik's face]], which is what prompts [[spoiler: him to surrender]].
** Better yet, when [[spoiler: Ransik inadvertently causes Nadira to get hurt as she was
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* Jen meeting Wes for the first time. Her teary reaction and being stunned to silence at seeing an IdenticalStranger that looks just like her recently deceased boyfriend was heartbreaking. Kudos to Erin Cahill for her performance.
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* Jen meeting Wes for the first time. Her teary reaction and being stunned to silence at seeing an IdenticalStranger that looks just like her recently deceased boyfriend was heartbreaking. Kudos to Erin Cahill Creator/ErinCahill for her performance.
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* Just Notacon. [[spoiler: Just him getting arrested after being forced to steal food because the alternative was he'd starve, owing to the genetically perfect humans refusing to help simply because he was a mutant]].
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* Just Notacon. [[spoiler: Just him getting arrested after being forced to steal food because the alternative was he'd starve, owing to the genetically perfect humans refusing to help simply because he was a mutant]].mutant]].
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-->'''Nadira:''' I'm sorry... for what my father ''did'' to you, Dr. Fericks
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-->'''Nadira:''' I'm sorry... for what my father ''did'' to you, Dr. FericksFericks.
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--> '''Frax:''' ''(struggles with renewed strength, smacking aside a Cyclobot, and declares with all that's left of his spirit)'' Nadira! WAIT! Wait, I was WRONG! You DON'T have to hate! You can... You-you can break the cycle of hatred! NEVER give up! NEVER... ack! Never give UP...!
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--> '''Frax:''' ''(struggles with renewed strength, smacking aside a Cyclobot, and declares with all that's left of his spirit)'' Nadira! WAIT! Wait! Wait, I was WRONG! wrong! You DON'T ''don't'' have to hate! You can... You-you you--you can break the cycle of hatred! NEVER ''Never'' give up! NEVER... ack! Never Never--never give UP...''up''...!
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-->'''Nadira:''' "I'm SORRY... for what my father DID to you, Dr. Fericks
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-->'''Nadira:''' "I'm SORRY... I'm sorry... for what my father DID ''did'' to you, Dr. Fericks
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--> '''Dr. Fericks''': There's hope for her ''(the image vanishes)''
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--> '''Dr. Fericks''': There's hope for her her... ''(the image vanishes)''
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--> '''Frax:''' DON'T GIVE UP!
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--> '''Frax:''' DON'T GIVE UP!''Don't give up''!
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* Eric getting wounded by a Cyclobot while protecting Wes and his father and him relinquishing the Quantum Morpher to Wes.
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** Better yet, when [[spoiler: Ransik inadvertently causes Nadira to get hurt as she was carrying the baby]]. The look and reaction and guilt on [[spoiler: Ransik's face]], which is what prompts [[spoiler: him to surrender]].
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** Better yet, when [[spoiler: Ransik inadvertently causes Nadira to get hurt as she was carrying the baby]]. The look and reaction and guilt on [[spoiler: Ransik's face]], which is what prompts [[spoiler: him to surrender]].surrender]].
* Just Notacon. [[spoiler: Just him getting arrested after being forced to steal food because the alternative was he'd starve, owing to the genetically perfect humans refusing to help simply because he was a mutant]].
* Just Notacon. [[spoiler: Just him getting arrested after being forced to steal food because the alternative was he'd starve, owing to the genetically perfect humans refusing to help simply because he was a mutant]].
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* Everything that happens to Frax in the finale. But especially when he's dragged away, and realises Nadira means what she says, and that things can change. And then Ransik has him lobotomised.
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* Everything that happens to Frax in the finale. But especially when he's dragged away, and realises realizes Nadira means what she says, and that things can change. And then Ransik has him lobotomised.lobotomized.
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-->'''Nadira:''' "I'm SORRY... for what my father DID to you, Dr. Fericks
--> '''Frax:''' ''(shoves the Cyclobots aside, as he turns around, and exclaims in intense shock)'' [[BigWhat WHAT?!]]
--> ''(Nadira smiles with pity and turns to leave, an image of Dr. Fericks, the man who Frax used to be appears on his chest gem)''
--> '''Dr. Fericks''': There's hope for her ''(the image vanishes)''
--> '''Frax:''' ''(struggles with renewed strength, smacking aside a Cyclobot, and declares with all that's left of his spirit)'' Nadira! WAIT! Wait, I was WRONG! You DON'T have to hate! You can... You-you can break the cycle of hatred! NEVER give up! NEVER... ack! Never give UP...!
--> ''(Nadira had been walking away, but slowly turns around, and watches in visible trepidation as the Cyclobots assault Frax with their tasers. He whimpers in agony, but manages to finish his speech, while being harshly drug away by his former creations. Nadira appears appalled, but as unable to protest outside of a few small moans of sadness. Frax's final words echo distantly)''
--> '''Frax:''' DON'T GIVE UP!
** Dialogue here for your enjoyment
-->'''Nadira:''' "I'm SORRY... for what my father DID to you, Dr. Fericks
--> '''Frax:''' ''(shoves the Cyclobots aside, as he turns around, and exclaims in intense shock)'' [[BigWhat WHAT?!]]
--> ''(Nadira smiles with pity and turns to leave, an image of Dr. Fericks, the man who Frax used to be appears on his chest gem)''
--> '''Dr. Fericks''': There's hope for her ''(the image vanishes)''
--> '''Frax:''' ''(struggles with renewed strength, smacking aside a Cyclobot, and declares with all that's left of his spirit)'' Nadira! WAIT! Wait, I was WRONG! You DON'T have to hate! You can... You-you can break the cycle of hatred! NEVER give up! NEVER... ack! Never give UP...!
--> ''(Nadira had been walking away, but slowly turns around, and watches in visible trepidation as the Cyclobots assault Frax with their tasers. He whimpers in agony, but manages to finish his speech, while being harshly drug away by his former creations. Nadira appears appalled, but as unable to protest outside of a few small moans of sadness. Frax's final words echo distantly)''
--> '''Frax:''' DON'T GIVE UP!
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* [[spoiler:In the final episode, Jen breaks off her engagement with Alex, since he's no longer the person she loved.]]
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* [[spoiler:In the final episode, Jen breaks off her engagement with Alex, since he's no longer the person she loved.]]]]
* Ransik [[spoiler: basically ''disowning'' Nadira when she starts her HeelFaceTurn]]. Tears were shed.
** Better yet, when [[spoiler: Ransik inadvertently causes Nadira to get hurt as she was carrying the baby]]. The look and reaction and guilt on [[spoiler: Ransik's face]], which is what prompts [[spoiler: him to surrender]].
* Ransik [[spoiler: basically ''disowning'' Nadira when she starts her HeelFaceTurn]]. Tears were shed.
** Better yet, when [[spoiler: Ransik inadvertently causes Nadira to get hurt as she was carrying the baby]]. The look and reaction and guilt on [[spoiler: Ransik's face]], which is what prompts [[spoiler: him to surrender]].
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** Leading to [[HarsherInHindsight the fact that the actor of Mr. Collins who died in real life in 2006]].
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* Nadira and Frax. Particularly the part where Frax is desperately pleading with Nadira to end the cycle of hatred as he gets dragged off to be reprogrammed. Big kudos to Frax's voice actor.
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* Nadira and Frax. Particularly the part where Frax is desperately pleading with Nadira to end the cycle of hatred as he gets dragged off to be reprogrammed. Big kudos to Frax's voice actor.Eddie Frierson.
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* Jen meeting Wes for the first time. Her teary reaction and being stunned to silence at seeing an IdenticalStranger that looks just like her recently deceased boyfriend was heartbreaking.
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* Jen meeting Wes for the first time. Her teary reaction and being stunned to silence at seeing an IdenticalStranger that looks just like her recently deceased boyfriend was heartbreaking. Kudos to Erin Cahill for her performance.
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* Everything that happens to Frax in the finale. But especially when he's dragged away, and realises Nadira means what she says, and he realises things can change. And then Ransik has him lobotomised.
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** Frax's reaction when Nadira tries to ask him about being human, and he just spits at her.
-->'''Frax:''' You're an evil mutant with a heart as black as coal, ''just like your father''. Now get out of my sight, '''you sicken me!'''
* Everything that happens to Frax in the finale. But especially when he's dragged away, and realises Nadira means what she says, andhe realises that things can change. And then Ransik has him lobotomised.
-->'''Frax:''' You're an evil mutant with a heart as black as coal, ''just like your father''. Now get out of my sight, '''you sicken me!'''
* Everything that happens to Frax in the finale. But especially when he's dragged away, and realises Nadira means what she says, and
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* Alex's apparent death in episode 1.
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* Alex's apparent death in episode 1.1.
* [[spoiler:In the final episode, Jen breaks off her engagement with Alex, since he's no longer the person she loved.]]
* [[spoiler:In the final episode, Jen breaks off her engagement with Alex, since he's no longer the person she loved.]]
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** Frax's death. Gah. And the fact that Nadira's the only one who cares.
* The scene where Wes faces that army of Cyclobots, alone. The music really sells it.
** Frax's death. Gah. And the fact that Nadira's the only one who cares.
* The scene where Wes faces that army of Cyclobots, alone. The music really sells it.
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* Nadira and Frax.
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* Nadira and Frax. Particularly the part where Frax is desperately pleading with Nadira to end the cycle of hatred as he gets dragged off to be reprogrammed. Big kudos to Frax's voice actor.
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* Wes believing his father died in the hospital.
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* Wes believing his father died in the hospital.hospital.
* Alex's apparent death in episode 1.
* Alex's apparent death in episode 1.
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* [[spoiler: Wes saying good bye to the other Rangers.]]
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* [[spoiler: Wes saying good bye to the other Rangers. Especially Jen, after they each confess that they love each other. The only thing ruining that scene is that they don't kiss.]]
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** [[spoiler: And Wes saying good bye to the other Rangers.]]
** Jen meeting Wes for the first time. Her teary reaction and being stunned to silence at seeing an IdenticalStranger that looks just like her recently deceased boyfriend was heartbreaking.
** Wes believing his father died in the hospital.
** Jen meeting Wes for the first time. Her teary reaction and being stunned to silence at seeing an IdenticalStranger that looks just like her recently deceased boyfriend was heartbreaking.
** Wes believing his father died in the hospital.
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** Jen meeting Wes for the first time. Her teary reaction and being stunned to silence at seeing an IdenticalStranger that looks just like her recently deceased boyfriend was heartbreaking.
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** Jen meeting Wes for the first time. Her teary reaction and being stunned to silence at seeing an IdenticalStranger that looks just like her recently deceased boyfriend was heartbreaking.heartbreaking.
** Wes believing his father died in the hospital.
** Wes believing his father died in the hospital.
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** [[spoiler: And Wes saying good bye to the other Rangers.]]
** Jen meeting Wes for the first time. Her teary reaction and being stunned to silence at seeing an IdenticalStranger that looks just like her recently deceased boyfriend was heartbreaking.
** [[spoiler: And Wes saying good bye to the other Rangers.]]
** Jen meeting Wes for the first time. Her teary reaction and being stunned to silence at seeing an IdenticalStranger that looks just like her recently deceased boyfriend was heartbreaking.