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* In [[EstablishingSeriesMoment the very first comic]], ''Good Boy'', we have a little boy awakening as a ghost and realizing that he's dead. He understandably breaks down, lamenting that he [[NeverGotToSayGoodbye didn't get to say goodbye to his parents]]. It gets better when the Reaper's little "Reaper Puppy" shows up to ease him into the transition to the afterlife, though.
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* In one comic, we have a little boy awakening as a ghost and realizing that he's dead. He understandably breaks down, lamenting that he [[NeverGotToSayGoodbye didn't get to say goodbye to his parents]]. It gets better when the Reaper's little "Reaper Puppy" shows up to ease him into the transition to the afterlife, though.
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* ''Say Hello'': After the owners friend calls the Hamster "Lame", he stops playing with it, much to the latter's confusion. The poor thing thinks that it's somehow his fault that his human won't interact with him anymore. Although there is a follow-up exclusive to Patreon and the published book that shows the Hamster still alive, saved by the owner's older brother, that notices the little hamster dying and calls out the boy..
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* ''Say Hello'': After the owners friend calls the Hamster "Lame", he stops playing with it, much to the latter's confusion. The poor thing thinks that it's somehow his fault that his human won't interact with him anymore. Although there is a follow-up exclusive to Patreon and the published book that shows the Hamster still alive, saved by the owner's older brother, that notices the little hamster dying and calls out the boy..boy.
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* ''Hear Me'': The duckling's ghost desperately pleading for its mother to notice it after it gets run over. For that matter, the mother duck also looks sad upon realizing that one of it's chicks are missing
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* ''Hear Me'': The duckling's ghost desperately pleading for its mother to notice it after it gets run over. For that matter, the mother duck also looks sad upon realizing that one of it's her chicks are missing
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* ''Shut Up'': The Budgie tells the Reaper that it's name is Shut Up, because that is what everyone "called" it.
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* ''Shut Up'': The Budgie tells the Reaper that it's its name is Shut Up, because that is what everyone "called" it.
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* ''Unhatched'': A mother swan's were smashed by [[TeensAreMonsters teens]] throwing a brick leaving only one intact, driving away her mate in the attack and leaving just one egg that doesn't hatch. She dies of heartache curled up with the lone egg.
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* ''Unhatched'': A mother swan's were smashed by [[TeensAreMonsters teens]] throwing a brick leaving only one intact, driving away her mate in the attack and leaving just one egg that doesn't hatch. [[DeathByDespair She dies of heartache heartache]] curled up with the lone egg.
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-->'''Mother Owl:''' But… you will never grow up… [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone And it’s all my fault.]]
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-->'''Reaper:''' No. But [[TitleDrop it will change.]] It will feel like an open wound for a long time. There will always be a scar. But someday you’ll treat it as a reminder of your love.
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* In one comic, we have a little boy awakening as a ghost and realizing that he's dead. He understandably breaks down, lamenting that he [[NeverGotToSayGoodbye didn't get to say goodbye to his parents]]. It gets better when the Reaper's little "Reaper Puppy" shows up to ease him into the transition to the afterlife, though.
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* In one comic, we have a little boy awakening as a ghost and realizing that he's dead. He understandably breaks down, lamenting that he [[NeverGotToSayGoodbye didn't get to say goodbye to his parents]]. It gets better when the Reaper's little "Reaper Puppy" shows up to ease him into the transition to the afterlife, though.though.
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* ''Saved!'': The fact that the puppy dies for the sake of EngineeredHeroics is bad enough, but the real gut punch is the end… [[KarmaHoudini with the two guys who killed him being hailed on YouTube as “heroes” for “rescuing” him, no one in the comments knowing what really happened]]. Fortunately, the author then provides guidelines on how to spot a fake rescue and what to do if you suspect it.
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* ''Saved!'': The fact that the puppy dies for the sake of EngineeredHeroics is bad enough, but the real gut punch is the end… [[KarmaHoudini with the two guys who killed him being hailed on YouTube as “heroes” for “rescuing” him, no one in the comments knowing what really happened]]. Fortunately, the author then provides guidelines on how to spot a fake rescue and what to do if you suspect it.it.
* In one comic, we have a little boy awakening as a ghost and realizing that he's dead. He understandably breaks down, lamenting that he [[NeverGotToSayGoodbye didn't get to say goodbye to his parents]]. It gets better when the Reaper's little "Reaper Puppy" shows up to ease him into the transition to the afterlife, though.
* In one comic, we have a little boy awakening as a ghost and realizing that he's dead. He understandably breaks down, lamenting that he [[NeverGotToSayGoodbye didn't get to say goodbye to his parents]]. It gets better when the Reaper's little "Reaper Puppy" shows up to ease him into the transition to the afterlife, though.
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* ''Say Hello'': After the owners friend calls the Hamster "Lame", he stops playing with it, much to the latter's confusion. The poor thing thinks that it's somehow his fault that his human won't interact with him anymore. Although there is a follow-up exclusive to Patreon and the published book that shows the Hamster still alive, [[spoiler:saved by the owner's older brother, that notices the little hamster dying and calls out the boy.]].
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* ''Say Hello'': After the owners friend calls the Hamster "Lame", he stops playing with it, much to the latter's confusion. The poor thing thinks that it's somehow his fault that his human won't interact with him anymore. Although there is a follow-up exclusive to Patreon and the published book that shows the Hamster still alive, [[spoiler:saved saved by the owner's older brother, that notices the little hamster dying and calls out the boy.]].boy..
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* ''Unhatched'': A mother swan's were smashed by [[TeensAreMonsters teens]] throwing a brick leaving only one intact, and her partner leaves her. She dies of heartache curled up with the lone egg.
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* ''Unhatched'': A mother swan's were smashed by [[TeensAreMonsters teens]] throwing a brick leaving only one intact, driving away her mate in the attack and her partner leaves her.leaving just one egg that doesn't hatch. She dies of heartache curled up with the lone egg.
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-->'''Reaper:''' No. But [[TitleDrop it will change.]] It will feel like an open wound for a long time. There will always be a scar. But someday you’ll treat it as a reminder of your love.
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-->'''Reaper:''' No. But [[TitleDrop it will change.]] It will feel like an open wound for a long time. There will always be a scar. But someday you’ll treat it as a reminder of your love.love.
* ''Saved!'': The fact that the puppy dies for the sake of EngineeredHeroics is bad enough, but the real gut punch is the end… [[KarmaHoudini with the two guys who killed him being hailed on YouTube as “heroes” for “rescuing” him, no one in the comments knowing what really happened]]. Fortunately, the author then provides guidelines on how to spot a fake rescue and what to do if you suspect it.
* ''Saved!'': The fact that the puppy dies for the sake of EngineeredHeroics is bad enough, but the real gut punch is the end… [[KarmaHoudini with the two guys who killed him being hailed on YouTube as “heroes” for “rescuing” him, no one in the comments knowing what really happened]]. Fortunately, the author then provides guidelines on how to spot a fake rescue and what to do if you suspect it.
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'''Dog:''' Oh I didn’t bring it for me! (''cut to his owner sobbing as he holds the fish'') [[WhamLine I thought he might need it.]]
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'''Dog:''' Oh I didn’t bring it for me! (''cut to his owner sobbing as he holds the fish'') [[WhamLine I thought he might need it.]]]]
* ''It Will Change'':
** The Reaper is called to a forest wherein he meets a grouping of owls, [[SoleSurvivor all but one of whom are ghosts]]. The one living one, having anticipated his arrival, asks him what happened to her flock, to which he reveals that the mice they had eaten were poisoned. The mother owl is horrified to realize that she fed the mice to her owlets and as they all jump into the Reaper’s arms, one of the ghostly owlets assures its mother that it will learn to fly when it grows up…
-->'''Mother Owl:''' But… you will never grow up… [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone And it’s all my fault.]]
** The mother owl then asks the Reaper if the grief will ever go away. His response…
-->'''Reaper:''' No. But [[TitleDrop it will change.]] It will feel like an open wound for a long time. There will always be a scar. But someday you’ll treat it as a reminder of your love.
* ''It Will Change'':
** The Reaper is called to a forest wherein he meets a grouping of owls, [[SoleSurvivor all but one of whom are ghosts]]. The one living one, having anticipated his arrival, asks him what happened to her flock, to which he reveals that the mice they had eaten were poisoned. The mother owl is horrified to realize that she fed the mice to her owlets and as they all jump into the Reaper’s arms, one of the ghostly owlets assures its mother that it will learn to fly when it grows up…
-->'''Mother Owl:''' But… you will never grow up… [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone And it’s all my fault.]]
** The mother owl then asks the Reaper if the grief will ever go away. His response…
-->'''Reaper:''' No. But [[TitleDrop it will change.]] It will feel like an open wound for a long time. There will always be a scar. But someday you’ll treat it as a reminder of your love.
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* ''Say Hello'': After the owners friend calls the Hamster "Lame", he stops playing with it, much to the latter's confusion. The poor thing thinks that it's somehow his fault that his human won't interact with him anymore. Although there is a follow-up exclusive to Patreon and the published book that shows the Hamster still alive, [[spoiler:saved by the owner's older brother, that notices the little hamster dying and calls out the boy.]].
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* ''Say Hello'': After the owners friend calls the Hamster "Lame", he stops playing with it, much to the latter's confusion. The poor thing thinks that it's somehow his fault that his human won't interact with him anymore. Although there is a follow-up exclusive to Patreon and the published book that shows the Hamster still alive, [[spoiler:saved by the owner's older brother, that notices the little hamster dying and calls out the boy.]].]].
* ''Little Fish'': A young man takes his dog to be euthanized, something he’s clearly dreading. The dog insists on taking his little toy fish, which his owner can’t bring himself to argue with. As the dog dies, his owner stays by his side and when the Reaper comes to collect, we get this exchange:
-->'''Reaper:''' I am sorry you couldn’t take your fish with you.\\
'''Dog:''' Oh I didn’t bring it for me! (''cut to his owner sobbing as he holds the fish'') [[WhamLine I thought he might need it.]]
* ''Little Fish'': A young man takes his dog to be euthanized, something he’s clearly dreading. The dog insists on taking his little toy fish, which his owner can’t bring himself to argue with. As the dog dies, his owner stays by his side and when the Reaper comes to collect, we get this exchange:
-->'''Reaper:''' I am sorry you couldn’t take your fish with you.\\
'''Dog:''' Oh I didn’t bring it for me! (''cut to his owner sobbing as he holds the fish'') [[WhamLine I thought he might need it.]]
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** Made worse when you know that this one was based on actual news.
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* The Reaper's encounter with the lion. Unlike other souls which seemed confused or at least accepted their fate, the lion is terrified and completely broken.
* The captured killer whale's only friend is Henry, a poster with his picture on it. It cries out when the poster is taken down. The last panel makes this even worse, as he reveals he always knew that Henry was only a picture.
* The Dogfighting comic. Over the course of the comic, we see a dog go from a precocious, friendly puppy to an aggressive dog that sees every living thing (and the Reaper itself) as an enemy.
* The Budgie tells the Reaper that it's name is Shut Up, because that is what everyone "called" it.
* Even though the Fox Cub is saved, the last panel reminds us that other small animals aren't as lucky.
* A mother swan's were smashed by [[TeensAreMonsters teens]] throwing a brick leaving only one intact, and her partner leaves her. She dies of heartache curled up with the lone egg.
* Say Hello: After the owners friend calls the Hamster "Lame", he stops playing with it, much to the latter's confusion. The poor thing thinks that it's somehow his fault that his human won't interact with him anymore. Although there is a follow-up exclusive to Patreon and the published book that shows the Hamster still alive, [[spoiler:saved by the owner's older brother, that notices the little hamster dying and calls out the boy.]].
* The captured killer whale's only friend is Henry, a poster with his picture on it. It cries out when the poster is taken down. The last panel makes this even worse, as he reveals he always knew that Henry was only a picture.
* The Dogfighting comic. Over the course of the comic, we see a dog go from a precocious, friendly puppy to an aggressive dog that sees every living thing (and the Reaper itself) as an enemy.
* The Budgie tells the Reaper that it's name is Shut Up, because that is what everyone "called" it.
* Even though the Fox Cub is saved, the last panel reminds us that other small animals aren't as lucky.
* A mother swan's were smashed by [[TeensAreMonsters teens]] throwing a brick leaving only one intact, and her partner leaves her. She dies of heartache curled up with the lone egg.
* Say Hello: After the owners friend calls the Hamster "Lame", he stops playing with it, much to the latter's confusion. The poor thing thinks that it's somehow his fault that his human won't interact with him anymore. Although there is a follow-up exclusive to Patreon and the published book that shows the Hamster still alive, [[spoiler:saved by the owner's older brother, that notices the little hamster dying and calls out the boy.]].
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* ''Hear Me'': The duckling's ghost desperately pleading for its mother to notice it after it gets run over. For that matter, the mother duck also looks sad upon realizing that one of it's chicks are missing
* ''Royal'': The Reaper's encounter with the lion. Unlike other souls which seemed confused or at least accepted their fate, the lion is terrified and completely broken.
* ''Friends?'': Over the course of the comic, we see a dog go from a precocious, friendly puppy to an aggressive dog that sees every living thing (and the Reaper itself) as an enemy.
* ''Opponents'': Even though the Fox Cub is saved, the last panel reminds us that other small animals aren't as lucky.
* ''Shut Up'': The Budgie tells the Reaper that it's name is Shut Up, because that is what everyone "called" it.
* ''Henry'': The captured killer whale's only friend is Henry, a poster with his picture on it. Itcries out is visibly distraught when the poster is taken down. The last panel makes this even worse, as he reveals he always knew that Henry was only a picture.
*The Dogfighting comic. Over the course of the comic, we see a dog go from a precocious, friendly puppy to an aggressive dog that sees every living thing (and the Reaper itself) as an enemy.
* The Budgie tells the Reaper that it's name is Shut Up, because that is what everyone "called" it.
* Even though the Fox Cub is saved, the last panel reminds us that other small animals aren't as lucky.
*''Unhatched'': A mother swan's were smashed by [[TeensAreMonsters teens]] throwing a brick leaving only one intact, and her partner leaves her. She dies of heartache curled up with the lone egg.
*Say Hello: ''Forever'': The Carolina Parakeet's reaction upon learning that its entire species is extinct.
* ''Say Hello'': After the owners friend calls the Hamster "Lame", he stops playing with it, much to the latter's confusion. The poor thing thinks that it's somehow his fault that his human won't interact with him anymore. Although there is a follow-up exclusive to Patreon and the published book that shows the Hamster still alive, [[spoiler:saved by the owner's older brother, that notices the little hamster dying and calls out the boy.]].
* ''Royal'': The Reaper's encounter with the lion. Unlike other souls which seemed confused or at least accepted their fate, the lion is terrified and completely broken.
* ''Friends?'': Over the course of the comic, we see a dog go from a precocious, friendly puppy to an aggressive dog that sees every living thing (and the Reaper itself) as an enemy.
* ''Opponents'': Even though the Fox Cub is saved, the last panel reminds us that other small animals aren't as lucky.
* ''Shut Up'': The Budgie tells the Reaper that it's name is Shut Up, because that is what everyone "called" it.
* ''Henry'': The captured killer whale's only friend is Henry, a poster with his picture on it. It
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* The Budgie tells the Reaper that it's name is Shut Up, because that is what everyone "called" it.
* Even though the Fox Cub is saved, the last panel reminds us that other small animals aren't as lucky.
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* ''Say Hello'': After the owners friend calls the Hamster "Lame", he stops playing with it, much to the latter's confusion. The poor thing thinks that it's somehow his fault that his human won't interact with him anymore. Although there is a follow-up exclusive to Patreon and the published book that shows the Hamster still alive, [[spoiler:saved by the owner's older brother, that notices the little hamster dying and calls out the boy.]].
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* Say Hello: After the owners friend calls the Hamster "Lame", he stops playing with it, much to the latter's confusion. The poor thing thinks that it's somehow his fault that his human won't interact with him anymore. Although there is a follow-up exclusive to Patreon and the published book that shows the Hamster still alive.
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* Say Hello: After the owners friend calls the Hamster "Lame", he stops playing with it, much to the latter's confusion. The poor thing thinks that it's somehow his fault that his human won't interact with him anymore. Although there is a follow-up exclusive to Patreon and the published book that shows the Hamster still alive.alive, [[spoiler:saved by the owner's older brother, that notices the little hamster dying and calls out the boy.]].
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* Say Hello: After the owners friend calls the Hamster "Lame", he stops playing with it, much to the latter's confusion. The poor thing thinks that it's somehow his fault that his human won't interact with him anymore, before eventually dying of heartbreak and (presumably) starvation.
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* Say Hello: After the owners friend calls the Hamster "Lame", he stops playing with it, much to the latter's confusion. The poor thing thinks that it's somehow his fault that his human won't interact with him anymore, before eventually dying of heartbreak anymore. Although there is a follow-up exclusive to Patreon and (presumably) starvation.the published book that shows the Hamster still alive.
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* The Reapers encounter with the lion. Unlike other souls which seemed confused or at least accepted their fate, the lion is terrified and completely broken.
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* The Reapers Reaper's encounter with the lion. Unlike other souls which seemed confused or at least accepted their fate, the lion is terrified and completely broken.
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* Even though the Fox Cub is saved, the last panel reveals that other small animals aren't as lucky.
* A mother swan's were smashed by [[TeensAreMonsters teens]] throwing a brick leaving only one intact, and her partner leaves her. She dies of heartache curled up with the lone egg.
* A mother swan's were smashed by [[TeensAreMonsters teens]] throwing a brick leaving only one intact, and her partner leaves her. She dies of heartache curled up with the lone egg.
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* Even though the Fox Cub is saved, the last panel reveals reminds us that other small animals aren't as lucky.
* A mother swan's were smashed by [[TeensAreMonsters teens]] throwing a brick leaving only one intact, and her partner leaves her. She dies of heartache curled up with the loneegg.egg.
* Say Hello: After the owners friend calls the Hamster "Lame", he stops playing with it, much to the latter's confusion. The poor thing thinks that it's somehow his fault that his human won't interact with him anymore, before eventually dying of heartbreak and (presumably) starvation.
* A mother swan's were smashed by [[TeensAreMonsters teens]] throwing a brick leaving only one intact, and her partner leaves her. She dies of heartache curled up with the lone
* Say Hello: After the owners friend calls the Hamster "Lame", he stops playing with it, much to the latter's confusion. The poor thing thinks that it's somehow his fault that his human won't interact with him anymore, before eventually dying of heartbreak and (presumably) starvation.
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* A mother swan's were smashed by [[TeensAreMonsters teens]] throwing a brick leaving only one intact, and her partner leaves her. She dies of heartache curled up with the lone egg.
* A mother swan's were smashed by [[TeensAreMonsters teens]] throwing a brick leaving only one intact, and her partner leaves her. She dies of heartache curled up with the lone egg.
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* The Reapers encounter with the lion. Unlike other souls which seemed confused or at least accepted their fate, the lion is terrified and completely broken.
* The captured killer whale's only friend is Henry, a poster with his picture on it. It cries out when the poster is taken down. The last panel makes this even worse, as he reveals he always knew that Henry was only a picture.
* The Dogfighting comic. Over the course of the comic, we see a dog go from a precocious, friendly puppy to an aggressive dog that sees every living thing (and the Reaper itself) as an enemy.
* The Budgie tells the Reaper that it's name is Shut Up, because that is what everyone "called" it.
* Even though the Fox Cub is saved, the last panel reveals that other small animals aren't as lucky.
* The captured killer whale's only friend is Henry, a poster with his picture on it. It cries out when the poster is taken down. The last panel makes this even worse, as he reveals he always knew that Henry was only a picture.
* The Dogfighting comic. Over the course of the comic, we see a dog go from a precocious, friendly puppy to an aggressive dog that sees every living thing (and the Reaper itself) as an enemy.
* The Budgie tells the Reaper that it's name is Shut Up, because that is what everyone "called" it.
* Even though the Fox Cub is saved, the last panel reveals that other small animals aren't as lucky.