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* Ken's ex-crush only likes him as Blitzwolfer, but Ken tolerates it for a long while before she asks him to put on a collar, implying that he is so desperate for a friend that he's willing to endure such humiliation.
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* Ken's ex-crush only likes him as Blitzwolfer, but Ken tolerates it for a long while before while, until she asks him to put on a collar, implying that he is so desperate for a friend that he's willing to endure such humiliation.
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** As for Yonda, she have been exposured with people's negative thoughts for so long that she fears that if she loses her Quirk now, she'll become a paranoid mess, [[NothingIsScarie unable to stop wondering about other people's true thoughts]].
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** As for Yonda, she have been exposured with people's negative thoughts for so long that she fears that if she loses her Quirk now, she'll become a paranoid mess, [[NothingIsScarie [[NothingIsScarier unable to stop wondering about other people's true thoughts]].
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** As for Yonda, she have been exposured with people's negative thoughts for so long that she fears that if she loses her Quirk now, she'll become a paranoid mess, unable to stop wondering about other people's true thoughts.
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** As for Yonda, she have been exposured with people's negative thoughts for so long that she fears that if she loses her Quirk now, she'll become a paranoid mess, [[NothingIsScarie unable to stop wondering about other people's true thoughts.thoughts]].
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* Izuku and the other kids agree not to mention to Kiba that she had assaulted and injured some of the kids when she was in Desperation Mode. After Kiba left Nara & Ken after [[ObliviousGuiltSlinging thanking them for holding her back from harming others as she's in Desperation Mode (when the fact is that they almost died from her rampage)]], Nara asks Ken if lying to Kiba is the right thing to do. Ken vehemently defends the decision -- shocking Nara with his tone -- since he knows how Kiba feels since he has Ghostfreak form.
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* Izuku and the other kids agree not to mention to Kiba that she had assaulted and injured some of the kids when she was in Desperation Mode. After Kiba left Nara & Ken after [[ObliviousGuiltSlinging thanking them for holding her back from harming others as she's in Desperation Mode (when the fact is that they the two almost died from her rampage)]], Nara asks Ken if lying to Kiba is the right thing to do. Ken vehemently defends the decision -- shocking Nara with his tone -- since he knows how Kiba feels since he has Ghostfreak form.
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** While Yonda claims that her ears' regeneration is a known fact and documented by D.O.C, it is implied that she's lying about how known that fact is.
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** While Yonda claims that her ears' regeneration is a known fact and documented by D.O.C, it is implied that she's lying about how known that fact actually is.
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** While Yonda claims that her ears' regeneration is a known fact and documented by D.O.C, it is implied that she's lying about how known that fact is.
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* Both Fu and Yonda asks each other as to why neither of them asks Izuku to remove their Quirk if they hate them so much.
** For Fu, his Quirk is the only thing that keeps him alive.
** For Fu, his Quirk is the only thing that keeps him alive.
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* Both Fu and Yonda asks each other as to why neither of them asks Izuku to remove their Quirk if they hate them it so much.
** For Fu, his Quirk is the only thing that keeps himalive.alive, as his body is technically already dead.
** For Fu, his Quirk is the only thing that keeps him
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* Izuku and the other kids agree not to mention to Kiba that she had assaulted and injured some of the kids when she was in Desperation Mode. After Kiba left Nara & Ken after [[ObliviousGuiltSlinging thanking them for holding her back from harming others as she's in Desperation Mode (when the fact is that they almost died from her rampage)]], Nara asks Ken if lying to Kiba is the right thing to do. Ken vehemently agrees -- shocking Nara with his tone -- since he knows how Kiba feels since he has Ghostfreak form.
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* Izuku and the other kids agree not to mention to Kiba that she had assaulted and injured some of the kids when she was in Desperation Mode. After Kiba left Nara & Ken after [[ObliviousGuiltSlinging thanking them for holding her back from harming others as she's in Desperation Mode (when the fact is that they almost died from her rampage)]], Nara asks Ken if lying to Kiba is the right thing to do. Ken vehemently agrees defends the decision -- shocking Nara with his tone -- since he knows how Kiba feels since he has Ghostfreak form.
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* Izuku and the other kids agree not to mention to Kiba that she had assaulted and injured some of the kids when she was in Desperation Mode. After Kiba left Nara & Ken after [[ObliviousGuiltSlinging thanking them for holding her back from harming others as she's in Desperation Mode, when the fact is that they almost ''died'' from her rampage]], Nara asks Ken if lying to Kiba is the right thing to do. Ken vehemently agrees -- shocking Nara with his tone -- since he knows how Kiba feels since he has Ghostfreak form.
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* Izuku and the other kids agree not to mention to Kiba that she had assaulted and injured some of the kids when she was in Desperation Mode. After Kiba left Nara & Ken after [[ObliviousGuiltSlinging thanking them for holding her back from harming others as she's in Desperation Mode, when Mode (when the fact is that they almost ''died'' died from her rampage]], rampage)]], Nara asks Ken if lying to Kiba is the right thing to do. Ken vehemently agrees -- shocking Nara with his tone -- since he knows how Kiba feels since he has Ghostfreak form.
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* Izuku and the other kids agree not to mention to Kiba that she had assaulted and injured some of the kids when she was in Desperation Mode. After Kiba left Nara & Ken after thanking them for holding her back from harming others as she's in Desperation Mode, when the fact is that they almost ''died'' from her rampage, Nara asks Ken if lying to Kiba is the right thing to do, he vehemently agrees, shocking Nara with his tone, knowing how it feels in Kiba's shoes since he has Ghostfreak form.
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* Izuku and the other kids agree not to mention to Kiba that she had assaulted and injured some of the kids when she was in Desperation Mode. After Kiba left Nara & Ken after [[ObliviousGuiltSlinging thanking them for holding her back from harming others as she's in Desperation Mode, when the fact is that they almost ''died'' from her rampage, rampage]], Nara asks Ken if lying to Kiba is the right thing to do, he do. Ken vehemently agrees, agrees -- shocking Nara with his tone, knowing tone -- since he knows how it Kiba feels in Kiba's shoes since he has Ghostfreak form.
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''Ken:''' She can never know what she did to us back there. Ever. Because I know that if I were her, and I found that out, I'd never be able to forgive myself.
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* Izuku and the other kids agree not to mention to Kiba that she had assaulted and injured some of the kids when she was in Desperation Mode. When Nara asks Ken if this is the right thing to do, he vehemently agrees, shocking Nara with his tone, knowing how it feels in Kiba's shoes since he has Ghostfreak form.
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* Izuku and the other kids agree not to mention to Kiba that she had assaulted and injured some of the kids when she was in Desperation Mode. When After Kiba left Nara & Ken after thanking them for holding her back from harming others as she's in Desperation Mode, when the fact is that they almost ''died'' from her rampage, Nara asks Ken if this lying to Kiba is the right thing to do, he vehemently agrees, shocking Nara with his tone, knowing how it feels in Kiba's shoes since he has Ghostfreak form.
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* Both Fu and Yonda asks each other as to why neither of them asks Izuku to remove their Quirk if they hate them so much.
** For Fu, his Quirk is the only thing that keeps him alive.
** As for Yonda, she have been exposured with people's negative thoughts for so long that she fears that if she loses her Quirk now, she'll become a paranoid mess, unable to stop wondering about other people's true thoughts.
* There was a time where Yonda had enough of her Quirk to the point that she tried to cut her ears off to make it stop working, only for her ears to grow back.
* Izuku and the other kids agree not to mention to Kiba that she had assaulted and injured some of the kids when she was in Desperation Mode. When Nara asks Ken if this is the right thing to do, he vehemently agrees, shocking Nara with his tone, knowing how it feels in Kiba's shoes since he has Ghostfreak form.
-->'''Ken:''' Sorry, it's just…I know what it's like to become a monster. To just…lose control of who you are to something else, and be completely helpless as you do awful things. It's a blessing she doesn't remember what happened.\\
'''Nara:''' Ken-\\
''Ken:''' She can never know what she did to us back there. Ever. Because I know that if I were her, and I found that out, I'd never be able to forgive myself.
** For Fu, his Quirk is the only thing that keeps him alive.
** As for Yonda, she have been exposured with people's negative thoughts for so long that she fears that if she loses her Quirk now, she'll become a paranoid mess, unable to stop wondering about other people's true thoughts.
* There was a time where Yonda had enough of her Quirk to the point that she tried to cut her ears off to make it stop working, only for her ears to grow back.
* Izuku and the other kids agree not to mention to Kiba that she had assaulted and injured some of the kids when she was in Desperation Mode. When Nara asks Ken if this is the right thing to do, he vehemently agrees, shocking Nara with his tone, knowing how it feels in Kiba's shoes since he has Ghostfreak form.
-->'''Ken:''' Sorry, it's just…I know what it's like to become a monster. To just…lose control of who you are to something else, and be completely helpless as you do awful things. It's a blessing she doesn't remember what happened.\\
'''Nara:''' Ken-\\
''Ken:''' She can never know what she did to us back there. Ever. Because I know that if I were her, and I found that out, I'd never be able to forgive myself.
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[[folder: Start Up]]
* Mairu Jikan, D.O.C.'s intern, has her research on Gin's Chaos Energy dismissed due to her being, well, just an intern.
** She is also often being bullied during her childhood because, due to a birth defect, she possesses two fox tails instead of one.
* As he drives away from Mairu's house, Izuku becomes introspective about what he'll be doing going forward to anticipate future threats. He didn't like that he'd have to be more ruthless, but he knows that it is necessary.
--> He NEEDED to step it up. No more hesitation, no more considering if something was overkill. If the Meta Liberation Army wanted to declare war on him, he needed to make sure he was ready. He needed more money, more power, more everything. And this was just the first step.\\
Izuku wasn't happy about the path he'd have to walk, but if the end result of this path was his children being safe, then he had no choice but to walk it.
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** In this story, Izuku [[ForWantOfANail was not present at the second Sludge Villain incident]] after All-Might told him that he cannot be a hero without Quirk, causing him to fall into depression and [[MessOfWoe stop taking care of himself]], [[LossOfIdentity questioning what should he do now]] while his TV keeps showing him [[VerbalSaltInTheWound news about heroes]].
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** In this story, Izuku [[ForWantOfANail [[WhatIf was not present at the second Sludge Villain incident]] after All-Might told him that he cannot be a hero without Quirk, causing him to fall into depression and [[MessOfWoe stop taking care of himself]], [[LossOfIdentity questioning what should he do now]] while his TV keeps showing him [[VerbalSaltInTheWound news about heroes]].
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* After Izuku dismissed Ochako & Yonda, Izuku apologizes to Todoroki not only because of Yonda getting involved in his personal life but also because he himself ''cannot'', despite having the money, connections, and resources, because he currently has too much on his plate to afford to antagonize the No.2 Pro-Hero.
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* After Izuku dismissed dismisseed Ochako & Yonda, Izuku he apologizes to Todoroki not only because of Yonda getting involved in his personal life but also because he himself ''cannot'', despite having the money, connections, and resources, because he currently has too much on his plate to afford to antagonize the No.2 Pro-Hero.
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* Kei tries to understand Todoroki's unhappiness with Endeavor, causing him to realize that by being spiteful, he actually let his father control and influence him and that he really hasn't tried to find happiness for himself.
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* Kei tries to understand Todoroki's unhappiness with Endeavor, causing him to realize that by being spiteful, he actually let his father control and influence him and that he really hasn't tried to find happiness for himself.
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** Just the fact that All for One is still alive brings deep regret to All Might, for not only that he had failed to finish him off, but his survival led to the villain using the Yuugas.
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** Just the fact that All for One is still alive brings deep regret to All Might, for not only that he had failed to finish him off, but his survival led to the villain using the Yuugas.
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[[folder: Aftermath]]
* Even though she contributes a lot to their victory, the majority of the kids don't warmly welcome Shina due to her being part of MLA who invaded their home, faltering her already shaky smile.
** Not to mention how Shina feels useless due to not being able to give much information about MLA despite using her Quirk to disable her ability to forget things, regretting that she didn't dig a bit deeper and learn more while she was still with them.
* Sai questions why discrimination is a thing. Izuku, through his experience, explains that there are three reasons -- superiority, justification & handed-down teachings, citing the last as to why Bakugo is who he is now.
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* We see how jaded Kioku is, from assuming the guy who helped her might have a bad intention to feel vindicated of her nihilist point-of-view from seeing a kid being bullied for his arcade tickets, to assuming that Ashido is secretly a StepfordSmiler who had bad parents at home. Yami and Yonda are both incapable of comprehending her level of cynicism.
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* We see how jaded Kioku is, from assuming the guy who helped her might have a bad intention intention, to feel feeling vindicated of her nihilist point-of-view from seeing a kid being bullied for his arcade tickets, to assuming that Ashido is secretly a StepfordSmiler who had bad parents at home. Yami and Yonda are both incapable of comprehending her level of cynicism.
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'''Yami:''' ''Maybe she does. Maybe she wants to believe that world is bad. And get's angry when belief is shown to be no good.''\\
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'''Yami:''' ''Maybe she does. Maybe she wants to believe that the world is bad. And get's gets angry when belief is shown to be no good.''\\
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* Inko mentions to Izuku that she'll return to her work overseas around the same time as the 1A students, shocking him since they rarely interact with each other despite she's been staying since his return from the hospital.
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* Inko mentions to Izuku that she'll return to her work overseas around the same time as the 1A students, shocking him since they rarely interact with each other despite she's been staying in the mansion since his return from the hospital.
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* Aoyama regrets complaining to his parents so much about his quirklessness, which led to them becoming under All for One's mercy while he became his mole in U.A., and for telling All for One about how long his class was staying at the Midoriya Mansion, which leads to LOV & MLA invading the mansion, putting his classmates and the Midoriyas in danger. So when Aoyama is the last person standing against Cgronostasis, he is ready to [[FaceDeathWithDignity take his attack head on]], believing it is a deserving fate for a villain's spy like him.
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* Aoyama regrets complaining to his parents so much about his quirklessness, which led to them becoming under All for One's mercy while he became his mole in U.A., and for telling All for One about how long his class was staying at the Midoriya Mansion, which leads to LOV [=LoV=] & MLA invading the mansion, putting his classmates and the Midoriyas in danger. So when Aoyama is the last person standing against Cgronostasis, Chronostasis, he is ready to [[FaceDeathWithDignity take his attack head on]], believing it is a deserving fate for a villain's spy like him.
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* Aoyama regrets complaining to his parents so much about his quirklessness, which led to them becoming under All for One's mercy while he became his mole in U.A., and for telling All for One about how long his class was staying at the Midoriya Mansion, which leads to LoV & MLA invading the mansion, putting his classmates and the Midoriyas in danger. So when Aoyama is the last person standing against Cgronostasis, he is ready to [[FaceDeathWithDignity take his attack head on]], believing it is a deserving fate for a villain's spy like him.
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* Aoyama regrets complaining to his parents so much about his quirklessness, which led to them becoming under All for One's mercy while he became his mole in U.A., and for telling All for One about how long his class was staying at the Midoriya Mansion, which leads to LoV LOV & MLA invading the mansion, putting his classmates and the Midoriyas in danger. So when Aoyama is the last person standing against Cgronostasis, he is ready to [[FaceDeathWithDignity take his attack head on]], believing it is a deserving fate for a villain's spy like him.
