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* The Bad Boys Love route. ''All of it.''
** Well, maybe not the parts that were purely horror or (in a completely out-of-place way) ''funny,'' but yeah, too much of it will get the tear ducts working.
** "Go on, Sakuya... leave your liar brother, and go..."
*** "[[PleaseWakeUp Yuuya!]] '''''YUUYA!!'''''"
** The final reveal of who killed Hiyoko and how she died serves quite effectively as the DespairEventHorizon for at least one in-game character.
** Well, maybe not the parts that were purely horror or (in a completely out-of-place way) ''funny,'' but yeah, too much of it will get the tear ducts working.
** "Go on, Sakuya... leave your liar brother, and go..."
*** "[[PleaseWakeUp Yuuya!]] '''''YUUYA!!'''''"
** The final reveal of who killed Hiyoko and how she died serves quite effectively as the DespairEventHorizon for at least one in-game character.
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* The Bad Boys Love route. ''All of it.''
** Well, maybe not the parts that were purely horror or (in a completely out-of-place way) ''funny,'' but yeah, too much of it will get the tear ducts working.
**This exchange from BBL:
--> "Go on, Sakuya... leave your liar brother, and go..."
*** --> "[[PleaseWakeUp Yuuya!]] '''''YUUYA!!'''''"
** * The final reveal of who killed Hiyoko and how she died serves quite effectively as the DespairEventHorizon for at least one in-game character. character.
* Hitori's change from being a friendly caretaker to an insane mess is absolutely ''heartwrenching'', having everybody he loved and cared for violently ripped away until all he was left with was the [[SurvivorGuilt hallucinated manifestation of his own survivor's guilt]]. The last flashback to him and Nageki in BBL is a massive tearjerker, in particular:
--> "You were very young when you came here, so maybe you don't remember, but... [[OrphansOrdeal losing family is hard.]] I want to stay like this, [[BigBrotherInstinct watching over the people I love,]] forever."
...but within three years, he would have lost everyone, and had to listen to all of that death from behind a barrier, unable to to do anything to help them.
** Well, maybe not the parts that were purely horror or (in a completely out-of-place way) ''funny,'' but yeah, too much of it will get the tear ducts working.
**
--> "Go on, Sakuya... leave your liar brother, and go..."
* Hitori's change from being a friendly caretaker to an insane mess is absolutely ''heartwrenching'', having everybody he loved and cared for violently ripped away until all he was left with was the [[SurvivorGuilt hallucinated manifestation of his own survivor's guilt]]. The last flashback to him and Nageki in BBL is a massive tearjerker, in particular:
--> "You were very young when you came here, so maybe you don't remember, but... [[OrphansOrdeal losing family is hard.]] I want to stay like this, [[BigBrotherInstinct watching over the people I love,]] forever."
...but within three years, he would have lost everyone, and had to listen to all of that death from behind a barrier, unable to to do anything to help them.
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* Hitori's change from being a friendly caretaker to an insane mess is absolutely ''heartwrenching'', having everybody he loved and cared for violently ripped away until all he was left with was the hallucinated manifestation of his own survivor's guilt. The last flashback to him and Nageki in BBL is a massive tearjerker, in particular: "You were very young when you came here, so maybe you don't remember, but... losing family is hard. I want to stay like this, watching over the people I love, forever." But within three years, he would have lost everyone, and had to listen to all of that death, unable to to do anything to help them.
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* Love him or hate him, Hitori's change from being a friendly caretaker to an insane mess is absolutely ''heartwrenching''.
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* Love him or hate him, Hitori's change from being a friendly caretaker to an insane mess is absolutely ''heartwrenching''.''heartwrenching'', having everybody he loved and cared for violently ripped away until all he was left with was the hallucinated manifestation of his own survivor's guilt. The last flashback to him and Nageki in BBL is a massive tearjerker, in particular: "You were very young when you came here, so maybe you don't remember, but... losing family is hard. I want to stay like this, watching over the people I love, forever." But within three years, he would have lost everyone, and had to listen to all of that death, unable to to do anything to help them.
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* Ryouta's ending
* Nageki's ending is both heartwarming and completely heartwrenching, as is [[spoiler:his brother]] Kazuaki's/[[spoiler:Hitori's]].
* Nageki's ending is both heartwarming and completely heartwrenching, as is [[spoiler:his brother]] Kazuaki's/[[spoiler:Hitori's]].
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* Nageki's ending is both heartwarming and completely heartwrenching, as is
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** "Go on, Sakuya... [[spoiler: leave your liar brother, and go]]..."
*** [[spoiler: "[[PleaseWakeUp Yuuya!]] '''''YUUYA!!'''''"]]
** The final reveal of [[spoiler:who killed Hiyoko and how she died]] serves quite effectively as the DespairEventHorizon for at least one in-game character.
* The fourth chapter of Holiday Star has a lot of these too with one of the major ones coming from the reveal of who [[spoiler: The King]] used to be and how he became what he is today. [[spoiler: The page image is a snippet of The King's tragic backstory.]]
--> [[spoiler: [[MadnessMantra "I want to die. I want to die. I want to die.]] But I don't have enough courage to do it myself. I don't want to feel pain. I don't want to feel suffering. Please somebody help me..."]]
--> [[spoiler: "No! Wait! I don't want to die! I never wanted to die in the first place! SocietyIsToBlame for making me feel this way! You said you would die together with me... Why did you betray me...?"]]
* In the First chapter of Holiday Star, it's revealed that [[CheerfulChild Miru and Kaku]] were [[spoiler: not supposed to exist at all, and were going to be killed if Ryuuji Kawara did not save them. After that, when he died, they were left abandoned again.]]
* The creator drew [[http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/hatoful/images/2/25/MoaScrapRyuujiAndIsaKiddiePool.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20150809182549 this]] bit of art, showing Ryuuji playing with his son in an inflatable pool while Isa looks on. Fridge Sorrow kicks in when you recall that years later, Ryouta doesn't know how to swim - his father was never around to teach him, and then he died. [[spoiler: In Holiday Star while he does seem to recognize Ryouta, the Migrant isn't interested and still favors "Isa".]]
* The entirety of the 12th chapter of the manga. [[spoiler: Aside from Hitori, who could arguably get a FateWorseThanDeath, ''everyone in it'' is DoomedByCanon.]]
* The [[https://gumroad.com/moa810 manga]] "Focus on the Hawks" is a largely silly manga about Hawk Party researchers Ryuuji, Tohri, and young Shuu ("Isa") getting by and having interpersonal conflicts. As anyone who's played through BBL knows, [[spoiler: Ryuuji dies]] - and we get to see that Isa literally does not know how to deal with that, so he tries to keep working.
* Love him or hate him, [[spoiler: Hitori's change from being a friendly caretaker to an insane mess]] is absolutely ''heartwrenching''.
* [[spoiler: It's implied that, if you're not on Sakuya, Yuuya, or Anghel's route, both Yuuya and Anghel die.]] It's even stated on [[spoiler: Yuuya's ending card that he [[ShoutOut only]] [[Film/JamesBond lives twice.]]]]
*** [[spoiler: "[[PleaseWakeUp Yuuya!]] '''''YUUYA!!'''''"]]
** The final reveal of [[spoiler:who killed Hiyoko and how she died]] serves quite effectively as the DespairEventHorizon for at least one in-game character.
* The fourth chapter of Holiday Star has a lot of these too with one of the major ones coming from the reveal of who [[spoiler: The King]] used to be and how he became what he is today. [[spoiler: The page image is a snippet of The King's tragic backstory.]]
--> [[spoiler: [[MadnessMantra "I want to die. I want to die. I want to die.]] But I don't have enough courage to do it myself. I don't want to feel pain. I don't want to feel suffering. Please somebody help me..."]]
--> [[spoiler: "No! Wait! I don't want to die! I never wanted to die in the first place! SocietyIsToBlame for making me feel this way! You said you would die together with me... Why did you betray me...?"]]
* In the First chapter of Holiday Star, it's revealed that [[CheerfulChild Miru and Kaku]] were [[spoiler: not supposed to exist at all, and were going to be killed if Ryuuji Kawara did not save them. After that, when he died, they were left abandoned again.]]
* The creator drew [[http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/hatoful/images/2/25/MoaScrapRyuujiAndIsaKiddiePool.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20150809182549 this]] bit of art, showing Ryuuji playing with his son in an inflatable pool while Isa looks on. Fridge Sorrow kicks in when you recall that years later, Ryouta doesn't know how to swim - his father was never around to teach him, and then he died. [[spoiler: In Holiday Star while he does seem to recognize Ryouta, the Migrant isn't interested and still favors "Isa".]]
* The entirety of the 12th chapter of the manga. [[spoiler: Aside from Hitori, who could arguably get a FateWorseThanDeath, ''everyone in it'' is DoomedByCanon.]]
* The [[https://gumroad.com/moa810 manga]] "Focus on the Hawks" is a largely silly manga about Hawk Party researchers Ryuuji, Tohri, and young Shuu ("Isa") getting by and having interpersonal conflicts. As anyone who's played through BBL knows, [[spoiler: Ryuuji dies]] - and we get to see that Isa literally does not know how to deal with that, so he tries to keep working.
* Love him or hate him, [[spoiler: Hitori's change from being a friendly caretaker to an insane mess]] is absolutely ''heartwrenching''.
* [[spoiler: It's implied that, if you're not on Sakuya, Yuuya, or Anghel's route, both Yuuya and Anghel die.]] It's even stated on [[spoiler: Yuuya's ending card that he [[ShoutOut only]] [[Film/JamesBond lives twice.]]]]
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** "Go on, Sakuya... [[spoiler: leave your liar brother, and go]]...go..."
***[[spoiler: "[[PleaseWakeUp Yuuya!]] '''''YUUYA!!'''''"]]
'''''YUUYA!!'''''"
** The final reveal of[[spoiler:who who killed Hiyoko and how she died]] died serves quite effectively as the DespairEventHorizon for at least one in-game character.
* The fourth chapter of Holiday Star has a lot of these too with one of the major ones coming from the reveal of who[[spoiler: The King]] King used to be and how he became what he is today. [[spoiler: The page image is a snippet of The King's tragic backstory.]]
backstory.
-->[[spoiler: [[MadnessMantra "I want to die. I want to die. I want to die.]] But I don't have enough courage to do it myself. I don't want to feel pain. I don't want to feel suffering. Please somebody help me..."]]
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-->[[spoiler: "No! Wait! I don't want to die! I never wanted to die in the first place! SocietyIsToBlame for making me feel this way! You said you would die together with me... Why did you betray me...?"]]
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* In the First chapter of Holiday Star, it's revealed that [[CheerfulChild Miru and Kaku]] were[[spoiler: not supposed to exist at all, and were going to be killed if Ryuuji Kawara did not save them. After that, when he died, they were left abandoned again.]]
again.
* The creator drew [[http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/hatoful/images/2/25/MoaScrapRyuujiAndIsaKiddiePool.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20150809182549 this]] bit of art, showing Ryuuji playing with his son in an inflatable pool while Isa looks on. Fridge Sorrow kicks in when you recall that years later, Ryouta doesn't know how to swim - his father was never around to teach him, and then he died.[[spoiler: In Holiday Star while he does seem to recognize Ryouta, the Migrant isn't interested and still favors "Isa".]]
"Isa".
* The entirety of the 12th chapter of the manga.[[spoiler: Aside from Hitori, who could arguably get a FateWorseThanDeath, ''everyone in it'' is DoomedByCanon.]]
DoomedByCanon.
* The [[https://gumroad.com/moa810 manga]] "Focus on the Hawks" is a largely silly manga about Hawk Party researchers Ryuuji, Tohri, and young Shuu ("Isa") getting by and having interpersonal conflicts. As anyone who's played through BBL knows,[[spoiler: Ryuuji dies]] dies - and we get to see that Isa literally does not know how to deal with that, so he tries to keep working.
* Love him or hate him,[[spoiler: Hitori's change from being a friendly caretaker to an insane mess]] mess is absolutely ''heartwrenching''.
*[[spoiler: It's implied that, if you're not on Sakuya, Yuuya, or Anghel's route, both Yuuya and Anghel die.]] die. It's even stated on [[spoiler: Yuuya's ending card that he [[ShoutOut only]] [[Film/JamesBond lives twice.]]]]]]
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** The final reveal of
* The fourth chapter of Holiday Star has a lot of these too with one of the major ones coming from the reveal of who
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* In the First chapter of Holiday Star, it's revealed that [[CheerfulChild Miru and Kaku]] were
* The creator drew [[http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/hatoful/images/2/25/MoaScrapRyuujiAndIsaKiddiePool.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20150809182549 this]] bit of art, showing Ryuuji playing with his son in an inflatable pool while Isa looks on. Fridge Sorrow kicks in when you recall that years later, Ryouta doesn't know how to swim - his father was never around to teach him, and then he died.
* The entirety of the 12th chapter of the manga.
* The [[https://gumroad.com/moa810 manga]] "Focus on the Hawks" is a largely silly manga about Hawk Party researchers Ryuuji, Tohri, and young Shuu ("Isa") getting by and having interpersonal conflicts. As anyone who's played through BBL knows,
* Love him or hate him,
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* Nageki's ending is both heartwarming and completely heartwrenching, as is [[spoiler:his brother]] Kazuaki's/[[spoiler: Uzune's]].
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* Nageki's ending is both heartwarming and completely heartwrenching, as is [[spoiler:his brother]] Kazuaki's/[[spoiler: Uzune's]].Kazuaki's/[[spoiler:Hitori's]].
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* The creator drew [[https://38.media.tumblr.com/d2b0a755c1285615b359efb35533ca6a/tumblr_mrd6b72DQ21s7zlm0o2_500.jpg this]] bit of art, showing Ryuuji playing with his son in an inflatable pool while Isa looks on. Fridge Sorrow kicks in when you recall that years later, Ryouta doesn't know how to swim - his father was never around to teach him, and then he died. [[spoiler: In Holiday Star while he does seem to recognize Ryouta, the Migrant isn't interested and still favors "Isa".]]
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* The creator drew [[https://38.media.tumblr.com/d2b0a755c1285615b359efb35533ca6a/tumblr_mrd6b72DQ21s7zlm0o2_500.jpg [[http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/hatoful/images/2/25/MoaScrapRyuujiAndIsaKiddiePool.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20150809182549 this]] bit of art, showing Ryuuji playing with his son in an inflatable pool while Isa looks on. Fridge Sorrow kicks in when you recall that years later, Ryouta doesn't know how to swim - his father was never around to teach him, and then he died. [[spoiler: In Holiday Star while he does seem to recognize Ryouta, the Migrant isn't interested and still favors "Isa".]]
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* [[spoiler: It's implied that, if you're not on Sakuya, Yuuya, or Anghel's route, both Yuuya and Anghel die.]] It's even stated on [[spoiler: Yuuya's ending card that he [[ShoutOut only]] [[Film/JamesBond lives twice.]]
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* [[spoiler: It's implied that, if you're not on Sakuya, Yuuya, or Anghel's route, both Yuuya and Anghel die.]] It's even stated on [[spoiler: Yuuya's ending card that he [[ShoutOut only]] [[Film/JamesBond lives twice.]]]]]]
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* Love him or hate him, [[spoiler: Hitori's change from being a friendly caretaker to an insane mess]] is absolutely ''heartwrenching''.
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* Love him or hate him, [[spoiler: Hitori's change from being a friendly caretaker to an insane mess]] is absolutely ''heartwrenching''.''heartwrenching''.
* [[spoiler: It's implied that, if you're not on Sakuya, Yuuya, or Anghel's route, both Yuuya and Anghel die.]] It's even stated on [[spoiler: Yuuya's ending card that he [[ShoutOut only]] [[Film/JamesBond lives twice.]]
* [[spoiler: It's implied that, if you're not on Sakuya, Yuuya, or Anghel's route, both Yuuya and Anghel die.]] It's even stated on [[spoiler: Yuuya's ending card that he [[ShoutOut only]] [[Film/JamesBond lives twice.]]
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* The [[https://gumroad.com/moa810 manga]] "Focus on the Hawks" is a largely silly manga about Hawk Party researchers Ryuuji, Tohri, and young Shuu ("Isa") getting by and having interpersonal conflicts. As anyone who's played through BBL knows, [[spoiler: Ryuuji dies]] - and we get to see that Isa literally does not know how to deal with that, so he tries to keep working.
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* The [[https://gumroad.com/moa810 manga]] "Focus on the Hawks" is a largely silly manga about Hawk Party researchers Ryuuji, Tohri, and young Shuu ("Isa") getting by and having interpersonal conflicts. As anyone who's played through BBL knows, [[spoiler: Ryuuji dies]] - and we get to see that Isa literally does not know how to deal with that, so he tries to keep working.working.
* Love him or hate him, [[spoiler: Hitori's change from being a friendly caretaker to an insane mess]] is absolutely ''heartwrenching''.
* Love him or hate him, [[spoiler: Hitori's change from being a friendly caretaker to an insane mess]] is absolutely ''heartwrenching''.
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* Nageki's ending is both heartwarming and completely heartwrenching, as is [[spoiler:his brother]] Kazuaki's.Kazuaki's/[[spoiler: Uzune's]].
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* The creator drew [[http://d3j5vwomefv46c.cloudfront.net/photos/large/798938558.jpg?1376211569 this]] bit of art, showing Ryuuji playing with his son in an inflatable pool while Isa looks on. Fridge Sorrow kicks in when you recall that years later, Ryouta doesn't know how to swim - his father was never around to teach him, and then he died. [[spoiler: In Holiday Star while he does seem to recognize Ryouta, the Migrant isn't interested and still favors "Isa".]]
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* The creator drew [[http://d3j5vwomefv46c.cloudfront.net/photos/large/798938558.jpg?1376211569 [[https://38.media.tumblr.com/d2b0a755c1285615b359efb35533ca6a/tumblr_mrd6b72DQ21s7zlm0o2_500.jpg this]] bit of art, showing Ryuuji playing with his son in an inflatable pool while Isa looks on. Fridge Sorrow kicks in when you recall that years later, Ryouta doesn't know how to swim - his father was never around to teach him, and then he died. [[spoiler: In Holiday Star while he does seem to recognize Ryouta, the Migrant isn't interested and still favors "Isa".]]
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* The entirety of the 12th chapter of the manga. [[spoiler: Aside from Hitori, who could arguably get a FateWorseThanDeath, ''everyone in it'' is DoomedByCanon.]]
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* The entirety of the 12th chapter of the manga. [[spoiler: Aside from Hitori, who could arguably get a FateWorseThanDeath, ''everyone in it'' is DoomedByCanon.]]]]
* The [[https://gumroad.com/moa810 manga]] "Focus on the Hawks" is a largely silly manga about Hawk Party researchers Ryuuji, Tohri, and young Shuu ("Isa") getting by and having interpersonal conflicts. As anyone who's played through BBL knows, [[spoiler: Ryuuji dies]] - and we get to see that Isa literally does not know how to deal with that, so he tries to keep working.
* The [[https://gumroad.com/moa810 manga]] "Focus on the Hawks" is a largely silly manga about Hawk Party researchers Ryuuji, Tohri, and young Shuu ("Isa") getting by and having interpersonal conflicts. As anyone who's played through BBL knows, [[spoiler: Ryuuji dies]] - and we get to see that Isa literally does not know how to deal with that, so he tries to keep working.
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** On the Quarter to Three fora, user Angie Gallant plays and posts screencaps from various dating sims, including this one. [[http://www.quartertothree.com/game-talk/showthread.php?t=67529&page=15 Ryouta's path]] surprised her.
--> I have so many snarky things I could say about him returning to the sky and being a bird and all, but really. Definitely the most affecting ending I've gotten in a dating game, and it blows many regular games right out of the water. It made me care about a pigeon's emotional and mental state.
--> I have so many snarky things I could say about him returning to the sky and being a bird and all, but really. Definitely the most affecting ending I've gotten in a dating game, and it blows many regular games right out of the water. It made me care about a pigeon's emotional and mental state.
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** The final reveal of [[spoiler:who killed Hiyoko and how she died]] serves quite effectively as the DespairEventHorizon for at least one in-game character, and very nearly for Angie Gallant in the LetsPlay thread.
-->'''Angie Gallant:'''
-->[[spoiler:NO GET AWAY FROM HIM]]
-->[[spoiler:I AM SHOUTING AT A FLASHBACK]]
-->[[spoiler:...]]
-->[[spoiler:'''AND THEN HAPPINESS WAS OVER FOREVER''']]
-->[[spoiler:[[PlayerPunch I fucking hate that partridge.]]]]
-->'''Angie Gallant:'''
-->[[spoiler:NO GET AWAY FROM HIM]]
-->[[spoiler:I AM SHOUTING AT A FLASHBACK]]
-->[[spoiler:...]]
-->[[spoiler:'''AND THEN HAPPINESS WAS OVER FOREVER''']]
-->[[spoiler:[[PlayerPunch I fucking hate that partridge.]]]]
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** The final reveal of [[spoiler:who killed Hiyoko and how she died]] serves quite effectively as the DespairEventHorizon for at least one in-game character, and very nearly for Angie Gallant in the LetsPlay thread.
-->'''Angie Gallant:'''
-->[[spoiler:NO GET AWAY FROM HIM]]
-->[[spoiler:I AM SHOUTING AT A FLASHBACK]]
-->[[spoiler:...]]
-->[[spoiler:'''AND THEN HAPPINESS WAS OVER FOREVER''']]
-->[[spoiler:[[PlayerPunch I fucking hate that partridge.]]]]character.
-->'''Angie Gallant:'''
-->[[spoiler:NO GET AWAY FROM HIM]]
-->[[spoiler:I AM SHOUTING AT A FLASHBACK]]
-->[[spoiler:...]]
-->[[spoiler:'''AND THEN HAPPINESS WAS OVER FOREVER''']]
-->[[spoiler:[[PlayerPunch I fucking hate that partridge.]]]]
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--> [[spoiler: "No! Wait! I don't want to die! I never wanted to die in the first place! SocietyIsToBlame for making me feel this way! You said you would die together with me... Why did you betray me...?"]]
--> [[spoiler: "No! Wait! I don't want to die! I never wanted to die in the first place! SocietyIsToBlame for making me feel this way! You said you would die together with me... Why did you betray me...?"]]
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* The creator drew [[http://d3j5vwomefv46c.cloudfront.net/photos/large/798938558.jpg?1376211569 this]] bit of art, showing Ryuuji playing with his son in an inflatable pool while Isa looks on. Fridge Sorrow kicks in when you recall that years later, Ryouta doesn't know how to swim - his father was never around to teach him, and then he died. [[spoiler: In Holiday Star while he does seem to recognize Ryouta, the Migrant isn't interested and still favors "Isa".]]
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* The creator drew [[http://d3j5vwomefv46c.cloudfront.net/photos/large/798938558.jpg?1376211569 this]] bit of art, showing Ryuuji playing with his son in an inflatable pool while Isa looks on. Fridge Sorrow kicks in when you recall that years later, Ryouta doesn't know how to swim - his father was never around to teach him, and then he died. [[spoiler: In Holiday Star while he does seem to recognize Ryouta, the Migrant isn't interested and still favors "Isa".]]
* The entirety of the 12th chapter of the manga. [[spoiler: Aside from Hitori, who could arguably get a FateWorseThanDeath, ''everyone in it'' is DoomedByCanon.]]
* The entirety of the 12th chapter of the manga. [[spoiler: Aside from Hitori, who could arguably get a FateWorseThanDeath, ''everyone in it'' is DoomedByCanon.]]
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* In the First chapter of Holiday Star, it's revealed that [[CheerfulChild Miru and Kaku]] were [[spoiler: not supposed to exist at all, and were going to be killed if Ryuuji Kawara did not save them. After that, when he died, they were left abandoned again.]]
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* In the First chapter of Holiday Star, it's revealed that [[CheerfulChild Miru and Kaku]] were [[spoiler: not supposed to exist at all, and were going to be killed if Ryuuji Kawara did not save them. After that, when he died, they were left abandoned again.]]
* The creator drew [[http://d3j5vwomefv46c.cloudfront.net/photos/large/798938558.jpg?1376211569 this]] bit of art, showing Ryuuji playing with his son in an inflatable pool while Isa looks on. Fridge Sorrow kicks in when you recall that years later, Ryouta doesn't know how to swim - his father was never around to teach him, and then he died. [[spoiler: In Holiday Star while he does seem to recognize Ryouta, the Migrant isn't interested and still favors "Isa".]]
* The creator drew [[http://d3j5vwomefv46c.cloudfront.net/photos/large/798938558.jpg?1376211569 this]] bit of art, showing Ryuuji playing with his son in an inflatable pool while Isa looks on. Fridge Sorrow kicks in when you recall that years later, Ryouta doesn't know how to swim - his father was never around to teach him, and then he died. [[spoiler: In Holiday Star while he does seem to recognize Ryouta, the Migrant isn't interested and still favors "Isa".]]
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* The fourth chapter of Holiday Star has a lot of these too with one of the major ones coming from the reveal of who [[spoiler: The King]] used to be and how he became what he is today. [[spoiler: The page image is a snippet of The King's tragic backstory.]]
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* The fourth chapter of Holiday Star has a lot of these too with one of the major ones coming from the reveal of who [[spoiler: The King]] used to be and how he became what he is today. [[spoiler: The page image is a snippet of The King's tragic backstory.]]
* In the First chapter of Holiday Star, it's revealed that [[CheerfulChild Miru and Kaku]] were [[spoiler: not supposed to exist at all, and were going to be killed if Ryuuji Kawara did not save them. After that, when he died, they were left abandoned again.]]
* In the First chapter of Holiday Star, it's revealed that [[CheerfulChild Miru and Kaku]] were [[spoiler: not supposed to exist at all, and were going to be killed if Ryuuji Kawara did not save them. After that, when he died, they were left abandoned again.]]
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[[caption-width-right:347:This is far from being the only case of pathos in the pigeon dating games.]]
[[caption-width-right:347:This is far from being the only case of pathos in the pigeon dating games.]]
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* The fourth chapter of Holiday Star has a lot of these too with one of the major ones coming from the reveal of who [[spoiler: The King]] used to be and how he became what he is today.
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* The fourth chapter of Holiday Star has a lot of these too with one of the major ones coming from the reveal of who [[spoiler: The King]] used to be and how he became what he is today. [[spoiler: The page image is a snippet of The King's tragic backstory.]]
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: The King]] used to be and how he became what he is today.
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* The fourth chapter of Holiday Star has a lot of these too with one of the major ones coming from the reveal of who [[spoiler
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-->[[spoiler:[[PlayerPunch I fucking hate that partridge.]]]]
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-->[[spoiler:[[PlayerPunch I fucking hate that partridge.]]]]]]]]
* The fourth chapter of Holiday Star has a lot of these too with one of the major ones coming from the reveal of who [[spoiler
: The King]] used to be and how he became what he is today.
* The fourth chapter of Holiday Star has a lot of these too with one of the major ones coming from the reveal of who [[spoiler
: The King]] used to be and how he became what he is today.
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*** [[spoiler: "[[PleaseWakeUp Yuuya!]] '''''YUUYA!!'''''"]]
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*** [[spoiler: "[[PleaseWakeUp Yuuya!]] '''''YUUYA!!'''''"]]'''''YUUYA!!'''''"]]
** The final reveal of [[spoiler:who killed Hiyoko and how she died]] serves quite effectively as the DespairEventHorizon for at least one in-game character, and very nearly for Angie Gallant in the LetsPlay thread.
-->'''Angie Gallant:'''
-->[[spoiler:NO GET AWAY FROM HIM]]
-->[[spoiler:I AM SHOUTING AT A FLASHBACK]]
-->[[spoiler:...]]
-->[[spoiler:'''AND THEN HAPPINESS WAS OVER FOREVER''']]
-->[[spoiler:[[PlayerPunch I fucking hate that partridge.]]]]
** The final reveal of [[spoiler:who killed Hiyoko and how she died]] serves quite effectively as the DespairEventHorizon for at least one in-game character, and very nearly for Angie Gallant in the LetsPlay thread.
-->'''Angie Gallant:'''
-->[[spoiler:NO GET AWAY FROM HIM]]
-->[[spoiler:I AM SHOUTING AT A FLASHBACK]]
-->[[spoiler:...]]
-->[[spoiler:'''AND THEN HAPPINESS WAS OVER FOREVER''']]
-->[[spoiler:[[PlayerPunch I fucking hate that partridge.]]]]
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*** [[spoiler: "Yuuya! ''YUUYA!!"]]
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*** [[spoiler: "Yuuya! ''YUUYA!!"]]"[[PleaseWakeUp Yuuya!]] '''''YUUYA!!'''''"]]
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** Well, maybe not the parts that were purely HighOctaneNightmareFuel or (in a completely out-of-place way) ''funny,'' but yeah, too much of it will get the tear ducts working.
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** Well, maybe not the parts that were purely HighOctaneNightmareFuel horror or (in a completely out-of-place way) ''funny,'' but yeah, too much of it will get the tear ducts working.
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** "Go on, Sakuya... [[spoiler: leave your liar brother, and go]]..."
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** Well, maybe not the parts that were purely HighOctaneNightmareFuel or (in a completely out-of-place way) ''funny,'' but yeah, too much of it will get the tear ducts working.
** "Go on, Sakuya... [[spoiler: leave your liar brother, and go]]...""
*** [[spoiler: "Yuuya! ''YUUYA!!"]]
** "Go on, Sakuya... [[spoiler: leave your liar brother, and go]]...
*** [[spoiler: "Yuuya! ''YUUYA!!"]]
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* The Bad Boys Love route. ''All of it.''
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* The Bad Boys Love route. ''All of it.''''
** "Go on, Sakuya... [[spoiler: leave your liar brother, and go]]..."
** "Go on, Sakuya... [[spoiler: leave your liar brother, and go]]..."
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* Nageki's ending is both heartwarming and completely heartwrenching.
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* Nageki's ending is both heartwarming and completely heartwrenching.heartwrenching.
* The Bad Boys Love route. ''All of it.''
* The Bad Boys Love route. ''All of it.''
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--> I have so many snarky things I could say about him returning to the sky and being a bird and all, but really. Definitely the most affecting ending I've gotten in a dating game, and it blows many regular games right out of the water. It made me care about a pigeon's emotional and mental state.
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--> I have so many snarky things I could say about him returning to the sky and being a bird and all, but really. Definitely the most affecting ending I've gotten in a dating game, and it blows many regular games right out of the water. It made me care about a pigeon's emotional and mental state.state.
* Nageki's ending is both heartwarming and completely heartwrenching.
* Nageki's ending is both heartwarming and completely heartwrenching.
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* Ryouta's ending
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* Ryouta's endingending
** On the Quarter to Three fora, user Angie Gallant plays and posts screencaps from various dating sims, including this one. [[http://www.quartertothree.com/game-talk/showthread.php?t=67529&page=15 Ryouta's path]] surprised her.
--> I have so many snarky things I could say about him returning to the sky and being a bird and all, but really. Definitely the most affecting ending I've gotten in a dating game, and it blows many regular games right out of the water. It made me care about a pigeon's emotional and mental state.
** On the Quarter to Three fora, user Angie Gallant plays and posts screencaps from various dating sims, including this one. [[http://www.quartertothree.com/game-talk/showthread.php?t=67529&page=15 Ryouta's path]] surprised her.
--> I have so many snarky things I could say about him returning to the sky and being a bird and all, but really. Definitely the most affecting ending I've gotten in a dating game, and it blows many regular games right out of the water. It made me care about a pigeon's emotional and mental state.
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* The Ryouta ending
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* The Ryouta Ryouta's ending