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[[AC: Chapter 31: Challenges]]
* The reappearance of Freydar is this in many levels, turning what was a lighthearted chapter into a saddening one.
** While the crowd is [[OneHundredPercentAdorationRating happy to see Freydar again,]] she doesn't acknowledge and instead focuses on challenging Cookie. This is a heartbreaking contrast to the person she was three years ago in the flashback of the previous chapter.
** Freydar [[NeckLift strangling Golgadoo and throwing him]] for pointing out she's not supposed to fight because of her CareerEndingInjury is this due to how unnecessarily violent it was.
*** In the background, Stonk being scared upon seeing Golgadoo being hurt. Despite his maturity, Stonk is still a kid so he's not used to this kind of violence, especially if it's someone he knew.
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** Ida's statement rings true when one remembers Cookie was one of the best managers in furry fighting. In a single night, she lost her fans, her fighters, her self-respect, and then started a downward spiral that kept going worse for two years.
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** Ida's statement rings true when one remembers Cookie was one of the best managers in furry fighting. In a single night, she lost her fans, her fighters, her self-respect, and then started a downward spiral that kept going worse for two years. Even with Muko and Kalita as her Combagals, it's clear that Cookie wants a semblance of her former life.
*** Cookie's desire for a {{Face}} team becomes more tragic when one realizes that, thanks to the Spotter articles, [[HeroWithBadPublicity nobody will treat Muko and Kalita as admirable Combagals now that their reputation is tarnished.]]
*** Cookie's desire for a {{Face}} team becomes more tragic when one realizes that, thanks to the Spotter articles, [[HeroWithBadPublicity nobody will treat Muko and Kalita as admirable Combagals now that their reputation is tarnished.]]
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* Cookie and Ida's conversation regarding Cookie's desire for a {{Face}} team. As Cookie starts a philosophical speech, Ida summarizes Cookie's problems. [[IJustWantToBeLoved She's tired of being hated and wants to be loved again.]]
** Ida's statement rings true when one remembers Cookie was one of the best managers in furry fighting. In a single night, she lost her fans, her fighters, her self-respect, and then started a downward spiral that kept going worse for two years.
** Ida's statement rings true when one remembers Cookie was one of the best managers in furry fighting. In a single night, she lost her fans, her fighters, her self-respect, and then started a downward spiral that kept going worse for two years.
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* After the flashback ends, Cookie introduces Ida as her friend. [[BrutalHonesty The hedgehog makes it clear that she doesn't consider Cookie as a friend, only a client.]] Cookie's expression as she walks is one of disappointment as she openly called Ida a friend back in Chapter 3.
* Muko choosing a CoolMask as part of her Combagal uniform. However, Cookie rejects it because it will make Muko look like a {{Heel}} if she wears it. She tells her that doing so will turn Adelgund's HeroicSacrifice useless because she let herself be defeated by Nyarai to ensure Muko became a {{Face}} Combagal. Muko then tearfully puts the mask away.
** This is also a KickTheDog moment from Cookie as she brought a traumatic event from Muko's life (Adelgund's sacrifice) to guilt trip her into being a {{Face}} Combagal.
* Muko choosing a CoolMask as part of her Combagal uniform. However, Cookie rejects it because it will make Muko look like a {{Heel}} if she wears it. She tells her that doing so will turn Adelgund's HeroicSacrifice useless because she let herself be defeated by Nyarai to ensure Muko became a {{Face}} Combagal. Muko then tearfully puts the mask away.
** This is also a KickTheDog moment from Cookie as she brought a traumatic event from Muko's life (Adelgund's sacrifice) to guilt trip her into being a {{Face}} Combagal.
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[[AC: Chapter 30: Facades]]
* The flashback sequence introducing Ida becomes this as it reaches the end.
** Ida meets Freydar, who looks different than the previous chapter. She's happier and helpful to the hedgehog. It's tragic to know that, one year later, a mistake from Cookie will destroy her career at its summit, turning her into an angry shell of her former self.
** Ida getting rejected by Cookie, who calls her useless because her quills will hurt her rivals and drive them away from her. For an extra kick, Ida looks like she had nowhere to go and Cookie only cares about herself.
** Cookie selfishly rejecting Ida is this. She became a manager to help Combagals fulfill her dreams. However, she she meets Ida, who had the same dream she had as a child, Cookie shows no sympathy as she destroys her dream.
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* The reactions of Saniko and Mellow after finding out that Muko returned to furry fighting are one of pure concern. They already saw Muko get hurt before, especially because of her association with Cookie, and now they're going to watch her go at it again.
** Despite being happy for her return, the life of Harry doesn't look like a happy one. He's overweight from eating pizza and he's recently divorced as seen by the divorce papers.
* TheReveal that it was Freydar who wanted Cookie's career destroyed and that Shun only did his actions against Cookie to keep her as a trainer for the Cyclone Crushers. When that failed, Freydar, despite her injury, quits her retirement to destroy Cookie.
** Despite being happy for her return, the life of Harry doesn't look like a happy one. He's overweight from eating pizza and he's recently divorced as seen by the divorce papers.
* TheReveal that it was Freydar who wanted Cookie's career destroyed and that Shun only did his actions against Cookie to keep her as a trainer for the Cyclone Crushers. When that failed, Freydar, despite her injury, quits her retirement to destroy Cookie.
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* Peki reveals the last straw. She [[YourCheatingHeart caught Adelgund being pleasured by the stripper, which she then made into the latest member of the Exe-Cutie-Ves.]] She then asks her if that is what it takes to become one of her personal assistants.
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* Cookie's obvious stress, despite being portrayed in a comical fashion, when Kalita reveals she's betting ''her'' money on roulette.
** Cookie's thoughts admitting that she no longer has her foresight, which she reclaimed a few chapters ago. She's so scared of losing that she can barely peek the result.
** Cookie losing 19,995 Moni that Kalita lost because she ''won'' her bet. The first time she needed to lose, she won and lost most of her money.
*** While it's sweet, there's something sad about Muko congratulating Cookie for her first victory in two years. Cookie has been in such a losing streak, that she hasn't won at anything for ''years.''
** Muko betting the last 10 Moni that Cookie has on Red despite Cookie's protests. She believes that Cookie's curse can be broken if she believes in victory. She ends up losing.
* Cookie crying over her newly doubled debt, even wishing for a drink despite that costing her the love and respect of her former Combagals two years ago. Thankfully, Muko is a good comfort system.
* Muko trying to fight Kalita and fainting. This causes Cookie to think that Cookie probably is still injured from the head pounding Nyarai gave her. Luckily, Muko is just hungry.
** As Cookie remembers the fight, there is a panel of Nyarai laughing while Muko is crying and bleeding from the beating she is receiving.
** Cookie's thoughts admitting that she no longer has her foresight, which she reclaimed a few chapters ago. She's so scared of losing that she can barely peek the result.
** Cookie losing 19,995 Moni that Kalita lost because she ''won'' her bet. The first time she needed to lose, she won and lost most of her money.
*** While it's sweet, there's something sad about Muko congratulating Cookie for her first victory in two years. Cookie has been in such a losing streak, that she hasn't won at anything for ''years.''
** Muko betting the last 10 Moni that Cookie has on Red despite Cookie's protests. She believes that Cookie's curse can be broken if she believes in victory. She ends up losing.
* Cookie crying over her newly doubled debt, even wishing for a drink despite that costing her the love and respect of her former Combagals two years ago. Thankfully, Muko is a good comfort system.
* Muko trying to fight Kalita and fainting. This causes Cookie to think that Cookie probably is still injured from the head pounding Nyarai gave her. Luckily, Muko is just hungry.
** As Cookie remembers the fight, there is a panel of Nyarai laughing while Muko is crying and bleeding from the beating she is receiving.
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** Cookie rejecting a glass of alcohol offered to her, even turning her head away to avoid temptation. It's clear that she's remembering how trying to drink her problems away destroyed the last bits of love and respect her Combagals used to have for her.]]
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** Cookie rejecting a glass of alcohol offered to her, even turning her head away to avoid temptation. It's clear that she's remembering how trying to drink her problems away destroyed the last bits of love and respect her Combagals used to have for her.]]
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[[AC: Chapter 29: Nightshine]]
* Cookie's worry after Kalita shows up before the two-week deadline and Muko is ready to fight her. She's scared as Muko has not finished her training yet. And that's not counting how Muko got beat up by Kalita twice by Cookie's mistakes (having her fight bikers to promote her and making a large loan). Fortunately, Kalita is not there to fight.
* Cookie feeling tense around the casino. It's a sore reminder that [[TheGamblingAddict Cookie was forced to rely on gambling after the Freydar fiasco and that's the main reason she's on debts after two years rather than lack of work.]]
** Cookie rejecting a glass of alcohol offered to her, even turning her head away to avoid temptation. It's clear that she's remembering how trying to drink her problems away destroyed the last bits of love and respect her Combagals used to have for her.]]
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** Knowing that at the same time Kalita was being destroyed by Gantus, Cookie and Muko were being traumatized by Shun's schemes and Nyarai's brutality.
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** After taking out Geffan and Banske, Kalita turns around and swears to beat up all of the members of the Roda Kira Gang, saying they no longer deserve the name. It shows how much the gang let down Kalita as she expected them to have some moral compass rather than following Gantus if it meant throwing out their ideals.
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** Kalita watching as Gantus gropes Leyline in front of her, reacting with anger and disgust. It's clear that one part of her [[BrokenPedestal is disgusted with Leyline for falling so low,]] but another part of her is angry at Gantus for doing that to her fellow founder.
* Gantus expelling Kalita from the Roda Kira Gang. Even though Kalita doesn't respect Gantus as a leader, she's shocked and hurt that Gantus expelled her when she was one of its founders and contributors long before he joined them.
** A brief part, but Leyline turning around to look at Kalita despite still being drugged. It shows that a part of him still cares about her, but he can't show it because the drugs prevent him from consciously showing that side of him.
* After defeating Kalita, Gantus gives her a HannibalLecture calling her out as a bully who fights people weaker than her and is scared of people stronger than her.
** Leyline leading the rest of the Roda Kira Gang to laugh at Kalita's defeat despite their history together.
* Kalita running away from Gantus after their fight is over. In a single night, Kalita was disappointed by her fellow founders, her subordinates, her gang, and turned into a laughingstock by Gantus.
* Gantus expelling Kalita from the Roda Kira Gang. Even though Kalita doesn't respect Gantus as a leader, she's shocked and hurt that Gantus expelled her when she was one of its founders and contributors long before he joined them.
** A brief part, but Leyline turning around to look at Kalita despite still being drugged. It shows that a part of him still cares about her, but he can't show it because the drugs prevent him from consciously showing that side of him.
* After defeating Kalita, Gantus gives her a HannibalLecture calling her out as a bully who fights people weaker than her and is scared of people stronger than her.
** Leyline leading the rest of the Roda Kira Gang to laugh at Kalita's defeat despite their history together.
* Kalita running away from Gantus after their fight is over. In a single night, Kalita was disappointed by her fellow founders, her subordinates, her gang, and turned into a laughingstock by Gantus.
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* Remember the injuries that Geffan and Banske had in Chapter 26? It turns out it was Kalita who gave those injuries to them.
** Kalita starts the beating by hitting Geffan in the arm with his own bat in a TranquilFury while sporting a [[DisappointedInYou disappointed frown as he's agonizing.]] She then becomes more vocal with Banske for trying to justify their actions by saying that they were following orders.
*** Kalita's anger and disappointment is more palpable when one remembers that Geffan and Banske are not only her subordinates but also her schoolmates. Kalita probably expected them to have standards like her, only to be let down when those two also loved having Gantus as a leader because it meant following their lowest instincts.
* Kalita ordering a raccoon to leave, who pauses when he remembers her as a runaway he met many years ago. One has to wonder what kind of horrible life Kalita had if she ran away from home rather than being an orphan.
** Kalita's face in the flashback. She has a cut on her cheek and she's giving a DeathGlare despite being a child while living in a cardboard box on winter. It's a sad living condition for a child.
* Leyline has his official debut and it shows that, just like Debbie, he's different from the tough biker Kalita remembers. He's constantly drugged, Gantus gropes him publicly, and he doesn't mind the destruction the gang is creating despite going against the principles he had when he made it with Debbie and Kalita.
** Kalita starts the beating by hitting Geffan in the arm with his own bat in a TranquilFury while sporting a [[DisappointedInYou disappointed frown as he's agonizing.]] She then becomes more vocal with Banske for trying to justify their actions by saying that they were following orders.
*** Kalita's anger and disappointment is more palpable when one remembers that Geffan and Banske are not only her subordinates but also her schoolmates. Kalita probably expected them to have standards like her, only to be let down when those two also loved having Gantus as a leader because it meant following their lowest instincts.
* Kalita ordering a raccoon to leave, who pauses when he remembers her as a runaway he met many years ago. One has to wonder what kind of horrible life Kalita had if she ran away from home rather than being an orphan.
** Kalita's face in the flashback. She has a cut on her cheek and she's giving a DeathGlare despite being a child while living in a cardboard box on winter. It's a sad living condition for a child.
* Leyline has his official debut and it shows that, just like Debbie, he's different from the tough biker Kalita remembers. He's constantly drugged, Gantus gropes him publicly, and he doesn't mind the destruction the gang is creating despite going against the principles he had when he made it with Debbie and Kalita.
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[[AC: Chapter 28: The World's Biggest Asshole]]
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* Debbie breaking down in tears at the end of her argument with Kalita. [[CoolBigSis She loves her like a sister and it hurts Debbie to see Kalita so obsessed with a gang that lost its way a long time ago.]] Sadly, her preaching about family coupled with her earlier drinking despite her pregnancy only drove Kalita away.
** Kalita's reaction when Debbie mentions family. It causes Debbie to flinch and apologize, having forgotten that Kalita is an orphan.
* Kalita visiting a park that she and the Roda Kira Gang visited during the night and fondly remembering her time with Debbie and Leyline. She sadly realizes that she will never go back to those days.
* The ending of the chapter has Kalita see the Roda Kira Gang that she tried to save commit their most ''deplorable'' act yet: they attack homeless people and burn their shelter. The look of shock and horror in Kalita's face is palpable.
** Among the members attacking the innocents are Geffan and Banske, the subordinates of Kalita and her classmates. Seeing her peers who are supposed to share the same values as her captain throw them away to surrender themselves to their lower instincts makes one understand why Kalita was mad at them in the previous chapter.
** Kalita's situation: She's got a severe case of BrokenPedestal from Debbie and then the Roda Kira Gang. The only thing she can do now to vent her frustration is fight Gantus, the man who ruined her life by corrupting her gang and crippling her leader, despite her belief that she couldn't beat him by herself at the beginning of the chapter.
** Kalita's reaction when Debbie mentions family. It causes Debbie to flinch and apologize, having forgotten that Kalita is an orphan.
* Kalita visiting a park that she and the Roda Kira Gang visited during the night and fondly remembering her time with Debbie and Leyline. She sadly realizes that she will never go back to those days.
* The ending of the chapter has Kalita see the Roda Kira Gang that she tried to save commit their most ''deplorable'' act yet: they attack homeless people and burn their shelter. The look of shock and horror in Kalita's face is palpable.
** Among the members attacking the innocents are Geffan and Banske, the subordinates of Kalita and her classmates. Seeing her peers who are supposed to share the same values as her captain throw them away to surrender themselves to their lower instincts makes one understand why Kalita was mad at them in the previous chapter.
** Kalita's situation: She's got a severe case of BrokenPedestal from Debbie and then the Roda Kira Gang. The only thing she can do now to vent her frustration is fight Gantus, the man who ruined her life by corrupting her gang and crippling her leader, despite her belief that she couldn't beat him by herself at the beginning of the chapter.
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* The flashback briefly shows Muko, Cookie, and Nyarai before their debut match. Watching Muko hyping herself up is distressing when her partner will betray her, beat her up, and hospitalize her second partner in front of her...in a single night.
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* Kalita bitterly recalling that Leyline, her fellow founder is not supporting her because Gantus took advantage of his glue addiction to give him worse stuff.
** Kalita's tone suggests that she's not mad at Leyline for betraying her but mad at Gantus for taking advantage of him by exploiting his addictions.
* Kalita's outburst after [[RetiredBadass finding out that Debbie left the biker lifestyle to marry her doctor and have a family.]] It is followed by a brief moment of [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone guilt upon finding out Debbie's pregnant and she nearly hurt the baby.]]
* Kalita bitterly recalling that Leyline, her fellow founder is not supporting her because Gantus took advantage of his glue addiction to give him worse stuff.
** Kalita's tone suggests that she's not mad at Leyline for betraying her but mad at Gantus for taking advantage of him by exploiting his addictions.
* Kalita's outburst after [[RetiredBadass finding out that Debbie left the biker lifestyle to marry her doctor and have a family.]] It is followed by a brief moment of [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone guilt upon finding out Debbie's pregnant and she nearly hurt the baby.]]
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* Kalita's clear distress as she talks about how the Roda Kira Gang changed since Debbie left and Gantus became leader. It's clear she's been holding out these feelings for over a year and it hurt her to go along with Gantus and his plans.
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** Saniko’s home situation makes her earlier interactions with Muko HarsherInHindshight since she’s forced to sacrifice her youth by covering up for her father’s role as head of the household, raise her sister, and still be a good worker. This makes her emotional outburst with Muko harder to watch.
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** Saniko’s home situation makes her earlier interactions with Muko HarsherInHindshight since she’s forced to sacrifice her youth by covering up for her father’s role as head of the household, raise her sister, and still be a good worker. This makes her emotional outburst with Muko harder to watch.
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* Kalita’s segment in the chapter. Unlike Cookie and Muko, where either of them try to stay positive despite the adversities they face over the day, Kalita looks depressed as she moves throughout the day.
** Kalita giving her former subordinates, who are injured a DeathGlare on sight. It is implied that she hurt them and that their last meeting was far from pleasant.
** Finding out that Kalita is an orphan and a high school student makes the chapter a bit hard after reading it from beginning to end. As a high school senior, Kalita was never adopted. She’s never had a true family. The closest thing she had was the Roda Kira Gang. And she left it. She didn’t leave her biker gang. She left her family as well.
** Kalita giving her former subordinates, who are injured a DeathGlare on sight. It is implied that she hurt them and that their last meeting was far from pleasant.
** Finding out that Kalita is an orphan and a high school student makes the chapter a bit hard after reading it from beginning to end. As a high school senior, Kalita was never adopted. She’s never had a true family. The closest thing she had was the Roda Kira Gang. And she left it. She didn’t leave her biker gang. She left her family as well.
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* Muko talking with Cookie about her relationship with Matroshka, sounding forlorn about it. Despite having being betrayed, Muko still acknowledges Matroshka as her FirstLove and can’t bring herself to hate her.
** Cookie asking Muko if she wants to talk about her relationship with Matroshka. This causes Muko to become shy and defensive. Cookie even infers that Muko must have some sort of dark secret regarding the relationship but chooses not to pry out of respect for her Combagal.
* The last pages showing Saniko at home as they give a clearer definition of her character.
** She checks on the Spotter article of Muko and is horrified that they went so far to humiliate her younger sister like that.
** Her talk with her father, Bill, is tragic as he talks about returning to work, only for Saniko to lecture him about his smoking habits. And then he starts giving her warnings about conspiracy theories. The chapter ends with Saniko giving her father a worried look.
* Bill Bunburger, the father of Muko and Saniko, can hit a bit close to those who have older relatives who were active and then let themselves go due to depression.
** A few years before the story started, he was the employee of the month. Now he’s unemployed, his oldest daughter has to work in his place, and he’s apparently unaware that his younger daughter left home.
[[AC: Chapter 26: Daylight]]
* The chapter opens with a dream/flashback of Kalita during her time in the Roda Kira Gang. As she rides her bike on the night, she’s joined by two bikers who are implied to be the other Captains and founders of the gang. Kalita laughs and speeds up into the road...before waking up in her room, clearly disappointed with her life.
** The dream/flashback becomes more poignant when Kalita acted as if quitting the gang was no big deal. As the first pages showed, it was a ‘’big’’ deal.
** Cookie asking Muko if she wants to talk about her relationship with Matroshka. This causes Muko to become shy and defensive. Cookie even infers that Muko must have some sort of dark secret regarding the relationship but chooses not to pry out of respect for her Combagal.
* The last pages showing Saniko at home as they give a clearer definition of her character.
** She checks on the Spotter article of Muko and is horrified that they went so far to humiliate her younger sister like that.
** Her talk with her father, Bill, is tragic as he talks about returning to work, only for Saniko to lecture him about his smoking habits. And then he starts giving her warnings about conspiracy theories. The chapter ends with Saniko giving her father a worried look.
* Bill Bunburger, the father of Muko and Saniko, can hit a bit close to those who have older relatives who were active and then let themselves go due to depression.
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[[AC: Chapter 26: Daylight]]
* The chapter opens with a dream/flashback of Kalita during her time in the Roda Kira Gang. As she rides her bike on the night, she’s joined by two bikers who are implied to be the other Captains and founders of the gang. Kalita laughs and speeds up into the road...before waking up in her room, clearly disappointed with her life.
** The dream/flashback becomes more poignant when Kalita acted as if quitting the gang was no big deal. As the first pages showed, it was a ‘’big’’ deal.
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[[AC: Chapter 25: The Taste Of Pancakes]]
* The chapter begins as soon as Cookie finishes reading the Spotter article. As soon as she turns around to comfort Muko, she finds out Muko's already gone, showing how much the article hurt her feelings.
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** The article starts by having Miho, the stripper who seduced Adelgund doubt Muko's status as a Combagal, even going as far as to show a picture of Nyarai dominating her back from Chapter 14 as if to rub salt on the wound.
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** The end of the chapter reveals that Muko dropped out of high school when she was 17, eighteen months prior to the events of this chapter, after she had a TeacherStudentRomance with her school teacher who also was her FirstLove.
*** Muko's teacher revealing that her affair with Muko cost her a lot: her job, her marriage, and her sons. She's so desperate for a second chance that she resorts to using Muko as TheScapegoat by claiming that she tricked her into thinking she was a lesbian, effectively damaging Muko's reputation further.
*** Muko's teacher revealing that her affair with Muko cost her a lot: her job, her marriage, and her sons. She's so desperate for a second chance that she resorts to using Muko as TheScapegoat by claiming that she tricked her into thinking she was a lesbian, effectively damaging Muko's reputation further.
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* Cookie and Muko trying to join gyms and getting rejected multiple times without explanation. At first, Cookie puts a cheery facade, but by the third time, she reaches the RageBreakingPoint and Muko has to comfort her.
** During her tirade she mentions two years of scolding, implying how much she resents people [[OnceDoneNeverForgotten treating her as a pariah for Trilamity Day despite her genuine regret and desire to start anew.]]
* The new Spotter article is specifically designed to hurt Muko by throwing all of her past mistakes into her face, on public, right after her CharacterDevelopment in the most humiliating LaserGuidedKarma possible.
** Roora, one of the two Combagals, who inspired Muko to join furry fighting, only remembers her as a perverted fan who barged into the shower rooms to see her naked.
** Mel and Tunky don't hesitate to bash Muko despite her taking a beating from Kalita to protect them by telling Miho about Muko trying to steal their underwear.
*** Shira looking guilty and sad as her friends badmouth Muko. She knows this is wrong, but she can't bring herself to defend Muko unless she destroys her own personal life in the process.
** During her tirade she mentions two years of scolding, implying how much she resents people [[OnceDoneNeverForgotten treating her as a pariah for Trilamity Day despite her genuine regret and desire to start anew.]]
* The new Spotter article is specifically designed to hurt Muko by throwing all of her past mistakes into her face, on public, right after her CharacterDevelopment in the most humiliating LaserGuidedKarma possible.
** Roora, one of the two Combagals, who inspired Muko to join furry fighting, only remembers her as a perverted fan who barged into the shower rooms to see her naked.
** Mel and Tunky don't hesitate to bash Muko despite her taking a beating from Kalita to protect them by telling Miho about Muko trying to steal their underwear.
*** Shira looking guilty and sad as her friends badmouth Muko. She knows this is wrong, but she can't bring herself to defend Muko unless she destroys her own personal life in the process.
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* Muko's face when Kalita calls her a "pathetic loser" for why she doesn't trust her as a partner. She immediately challenges her to a rematch a week from now to prove her worthiness to her. It shows how insecure Muko has become regarding her strength after the events of Part 2.
* Muko's bravado disappearing as she realizes that she won't be able to defeat Kalita in one week and the damage from their fight starts to kick in. She only gets better when Cookie comforts her.
* Cookie's lack of foresight is exemplified by her walking alone on a mist and only finding a clear path by regaining it thanks to Muko's fighting spirit. While it's heartwarming, it's also sad considering how Cookie's poor choices were made because she lacked or lost the bond she had with her Combagals compared to the one she had with Muko.
* Muko's bravado disappearing as she realizes that she won't be able to defeat Kalita in one week and the damage from their fight starts to kick in. She only gets better when Cookie comforts her.
* Cookie's lack of foresight is exemplified by her walking alone on a mist and only finding a clear path by regaining it thanks to Muko's fighting spirit. While it's heartwarming, it's also sad considering how Cookie's poor choices were made because she lacked or lost the bond she had with her Combagals compared to the one she had with Muko.
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** There is a bunny woman smiling that looks just like Muko. She is implied to be Muko's mother and it is implied that her abscence in her life left an impact that hasn't healed yet.
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** There is a bunny naked woman smiling that looks just like and extending her hand at Muko. She is implied to be Muko's mother first love. However, considering that the next panel is blurry and that Muko spends the comic openly lusting after other girls, it is implied that her abscence in her life left an impact that hasn't healed yet.their relationship did not end well.
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* Kalita defeating Muko with a OneHitKill is kinda depressing after the previous chapter. It's a sad reminder that ThePowerOfLove or ThePowerOfFriendship won't be enough to make a difference when it really matters.
* Kalita tells Cookie that she quit the Roda Kira Gang is a bit sad considering how proud she was to be a member, Cookie even lampshades that she was a founding member.
* Cookie and Muko's desperation when Kalita refuses to join their team, clinging to her leg and begging her.
* Cookie revealing that the Tendonchi Champions are Skully and Bolouma, two members of the Cyclone Crushers who worked for her.
* Kalita tells Cookie that she quit the Roda Kira Gang is a bit sad considering how proud she was to be a member, Cookie even lampshades that she was a founding member.
* Cookie and Muko's desperation when Kalita refuses to join their team, clinging to her leg and begging her.
* Cookie revealing that the Tendonchi Champions are Skully and Bolouma, two members of the Cyclone Crushers who worked for her.
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** There is a bunny woman smiling that looks just like Muko. She is implied to be Muko's mother and it is implied that her abscence in her life left an impact that hasn't healed yet.
* Cookie acknowledging Muko [[MentorsNewHope as her last lifeline]] can be a tearjerker upon remembering her background and the two previous parts. Her reputation is lower than ever, her former Combagals see her as a BrokenPedestal and work with her ArchEnemy to destroy her, and she only has one Combagal who supports her despite zero fighting skills. That Combagal is someone she failed and discovered she failed more than once and yet still forgave her, which is why Cookie is desperate to not have Muko give up. If she loses Muko, she loses everything. Fortunately, Muko gets a HeroicSecondWind and the chapter ends with her about to continue the fight.
* Cookie acknowledging Muko [[MentorsNewHope as her last lifeline]] can be a tearjerker upon remembering her background and the two previous parts. Her reputation is lower than ever, her former Combagals see her as a BrokenPedestal and work with her ArchEnemy to destroy her, and she only has one Combagal who supports her despite zero fighting skills. That Combagal is someone she failed and discovered she failed more than once and yet still forgave her, which is why Cookie is desperate to not have Muko give up. If she loses Muko, she loses everything. Fortunately, Muko gets a HeroicSecondWind and the chapter ends with her about to continue the fight.
