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* Muko having flashbacks of all the people who looked down or hurt her, with implications that she has some sort of PTSD from the abuse she endured.
** She resents Saniko for considering her an AnnoyingYoungerSibling who refuses to grow up, unaware that Saniko loves Muko and that she hasn't made it easier to raise her.
** It is implied that she resents the Cafe Carrots maids because a part of her was still conscious when they were badmouthing her for losing to Kalita.
*** The worst part is that Shira is there despite being the only one grateful for Muko's efforts, trying to pay her for her role in defending the cafe, and actually assisting her first match, even crying when Nyarai was beating Muko up. It makes Shira's presence undeserved as Muko is resenting her for nothing.
** Muko loathes Nyarai not only for betraying her and Cookie, but also for the beating she gave her and the sense of powerlessness she instilled on Muko during the Masato match. The fact that Nyarai is the only one grinning shows how Muko remembers the suffering Nyarai enjoyed inflicting on Muko, Cookie, and Adelgund during that match.
** Muko is also angry at Kalita, not only for trying to hurt Cookie, but reminding Muko how her lust is her greatest weakness, rubbing it on her face and looking down on her as a fighter.
** She resents Saniko for considering her an AnnoyingYoungerSibling who refuses to grow up, unaware that Saniko loves Muko and that she hasn't made it easier to raise her.
** It is implied that she resents the Cafe Carrots maids because a part of her was still conscious when they were badmouthing her for losing to Kalita.
*** The worst part is that Shira is there despite being the only one grateful for Muko's efforts, trying to pay her for her role in defending the cafe, and actually assisting her first match, even crying when Nyarai was beating Muko up. It makes Shira's presence undeserved as Muko is resenting her for nothing.
** Muko loathes Nyarai not only for betraying her and Cookie, but also for the beating she gave her and the sense of powerlessness she instilled on Muko during the Masato match. The fact that Nyarai is the only one grinning shows how Muko remembers the suffering Nyarai enjoyed inflicting on Muko, Cookie, and Adelgund during that match.
** Muko is also angry at Kalita, not only for trying to hurt Cookie, but reminding Muko how her lust is her greatest weakness, rubbing it on her face and looking down on her as a fighter.
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[[AC: Chapter 22: The Grit]]
* Muko breaking down in tears as she tells Cookie she underwent a LustfulMelt because she daydreamed of Kalita and the soapland workers having a threesome despite being in the middle of a fight with the biker vixen. This is the first time Muko acknowledges her FatalFlaw and how it will hamper her dream of being a Combagal, with her looking close to giving up again.
** Kalita pointing out her disappointment of Muko, referring to her by name and telling her she expected better. It shows that a part of Kalita still holds VillainRespect for Muko and feels let down for Muko not standing up for what she believes like she did when they first fought.
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*** The fact that Muko didn't even read the bad reviews in the first place. Considering Muko wants to make a career out of furry fighting, starting with an agency with bad reputation will cost her...which ends up becoming true in later chapters.
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[[AC: Chapter 20: Killer Overture]]
* Snuggly returns and has ADayInTheLimelight but her opponent is Sleepy, [[WeUsedToBeFriends who was her former singing partner in the Doable Dolls]].
** Sleepy becoming a Combagal to fight Snuggly for breaking up The Doable Dolls shows how much Sleepy valued their singing duo and how Snuggly leaving it to become a Combagal felt like a betrayal to her.
** Sleepy exploiting Snuggly's love of bones to land the first blow is not just pragmatism, is also a bit treacherous when she knows how Snuggly would react because they were friends.
** Watching Sleepy and Snuggly fight brutally and learning that they fought for 20 minutes can be disheartening as it can remind how friendships can fall apart once people drift in interests,
* Despite their intense match, Snuggly still considers Sleepy their best friend. Even as they go to deliver the final blow, Snuggly looks conflicted at the idea of hurting her.
[[AC: Chapter 21: The Streak]]
* As it turns out Cookie still has one week to pay off her debt. Sadly, Kalita shows Cookie the loan paper with Cookie's forged signature.
* Why is Cookie called Misfortune Cookie? Because she resorted to [[TheGamblingAddict gambling to pay off her debts but she's been on a two-year long losing streak.]] Not only that, everybody who works with her is affected by her bad luck so Cookie is treated as TheJinx by everybody.
* Muko facing Kalita again. Despite taking the fight seriously this time, Muko still ends up losing, being sent flying into a bathtub and then melting at the sight of two beautiful ladies.
* Handsome Zebra Guy recalling Saniko sporting a DeathGlare when asking for Cookie's whereabouts, obviously to ask her to fix Muko in Chapter 19. Makes one feel sorry for her after her fight with Muko when one realizes how much she cares about her little sister.
[[folder: Part 3: Bully]]
[[AC: Chapter 20: Killer Overture]]
* Snuggly returns and has ADayInTheLimelight but her opponent is Sleepy, [[WeUsedToBeFriends who was her former singing partner in the Doable Dolls]].
** Sleepy becoming a Combagal to fight Snuggly for breaking up The Doable Dolls shows how much Sleepy valued their singing duo and how Snuggly leaving it to become a Combagal felt like a betrayal to her.
** Sleepy exploiting Snuggly's love of bones to land the first blow is not just pragmatism, is also a bit treacherous when she knows how Snuggly would react because they were friends.
** Watching Sleepy and Snuggly fight brutally and learning that they fought for 20 minutes can be disheartening as it can remind how friendships can fall apart once people drift in interests,
* Despite their intense match, Snuggly still considers Sleepy their best friend. Even as they go to deliver the final blow, Snuggly looks conflicted at the idea of hurting her.
[[AC: Chapter 21: The Streak]]
* As it turns out Cookie still has one week to pay off her debt. Sadly, Kalita shows Cookie the loan paper with Cookie's forged signature.
* Why is Cookie called Misfortune Cookie? Because she resorted to [[TheGamblingAddict gambling to pay off her debts but she's been on a two-year long losing streak.]] Not only that, everybody who works with her is affected by her bad luck so Cookie is treated as TheJinx by everybody.
* Muko facing Kalita again. Despite taking the fight seriously this time, Muko still ends up losing, being sent flying into a bathtub and then melting at the sight of two beautiful ladies.
* Handsome Zebra Guy recalling Saniko sporting a DeathGlare when asking for Cookie's whereabouts, obviously to ask her to fix Muko in Chapter 19. Makes one feel sorry for her after her fight with Muko when one realizes how much she cares about her little sister.
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* The chapter begins with a brief TimeSkip as Cookie still is stuck in the DespairEventHorizon weeks after Nyarai's betrayal and Muko quitting. She only snaps out of it when Saniko visits.
* Saniko revealing that Muko is suffering a HeroicBSOD and that she hasn't got out of her room for weeks so she wants Cookie to talk to her as she's her last resort.
** Cookie initially refusing to talk to Muko out of guilt and only doing so when Saniko threatens to call the cops on her for having Muko fight Kalita and then Nyarai despite her lack of experience.
* Cookie acknowledging that it was her fault that Cookie got hurt, pointing out that she shouldn't have relied on Nyarai to win the fight against Team Executor before telling her how she first hit the DespairEventHorizon two years before the series began.
** As it turns out, Shun didn't steal the Cyclone Crushers and they didn't left Cookie. She sold them out. Cookie assumed they were going to leave her since they were mad at her for what happened to Freydar so she sold them out.
** Cookie not getting any job despite all the money she had. She resorted to DrowningMySorrows so much that she briefly became TheAlcoholic to the point of ripping out her hair and parts of her eyebrows.
** A drunk Cookie entering Club Nighthawk and making a fool of herself in front of Shun and her former Combagals, who reproach her, now seeing her as a BrokenPedestal for selling them out.
* Saniko revealing that Muko is suffering a HeroicBSOD and that she hasn't got out of her room for weeks so she wants Cookie to talk to her as she's her last resort.
** Cookie initially refusing to talk to Muko out of guilt and only doing so when Saniko threatens to call the cops on her for having Muko fight Kalita and then Nyarai despite her lack of experience.
* Cookie acknowledging that it was her fault that Cookie got hurt, pointing out that she shouldn't have relied on Nyarai to win the fight against Team Executor before telling her how she first hit the DespairEventHorizon two years before the series began.
** As it turns out, Shun didn't steal the Cyclone Crushers and they didn't left Cookie. She sold them out. Cookie assumed they were going to leave her since they were mad at her for what happened to Freydar so she sold them out.
** Cookie not getting any job despite all the money she had. She resorted to DrowningMySorrows so much that she briefly became TheAlcoholic to the point of ripping out her hair and parts of her eyebrows.
** A drunk Cookie entering Club Nighthawk and making a fool of herself in front of Shun and her former Combagals, who reproach her, now seeing her as a BrokenPedestal for selling them out.
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* Cookie watching in awkwardness the family fight between Muko and Saniko, feeling guilty for causing it.
* Muko calling out Saniko for [[MyBelovedSmother loving her too much,]] which hurts her feelings. Saniko agrees to let Muko be a Combagal, but she doesn't want her living in her apartment anymore.
* Kalita returning and revealing she's a LoanShark who's collecting the 20,000 Moni Cookie loaned a few chapters ago. While the volume has a BittersweetEnding for Muko and Cookie, it's clear the two of them have lots of bad luck coming their way in the future.
* Muko calling out Saniko for [[MyBelovedSmother loving her too much,]] which hurts her feelings. Saniko agrees to let Muko be a Combagal, but she doesn't want her living in her apartment anymore.
* Kalita returning and revealing she's a LoanShark who's collecting the 20,000 Moni Cookie loaned a few chapters ago. While the volume has a BittersweetEnding for Muko and Cookie, it's clear the two of them have lots of bad luck coming their way in the future.
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* Cookie and Shun exchange glares. The sad part comes in Cookie's glare. The Masato match was supposed to be Cookie's comeback and yet, in one fell swoop, Shun not only stole, but cheated all of it out of her.
* Nyarai not knowing how to react to people cheering for her since people don't care about Wilds until Shun hails her as a hero.
* The Exe-Cutie-Ves crying over the defeated body of Adelgund, who's in critical condition with white eyes and a broken jaw.
* Cookie calling out Dinedon for betraying Team Executor to Shun Gonfano the second he gave him a better pay than money.
** Just how much of a BadBoss Dinedon is. Despite everything Adelgund and Peki did, Adelgund especially, he did not hesitate to put them in a match where they will lose just so that he could get the money for himself.
* Muko keeping the collar Adelgund gave her when they became partners as a TragicKeepsake and looking at it in guilt.
* Nyarai not knowing how to react to people cheering for her since people don't care about Wilds until Shun hails her as a hero.
* The Exe-Cutie-Ves crying over the defeated body of Adelgund, who's in critical condition with white eyes and a broken jaw.
* Cookie calling out Dinedon for betraying Team Executor to Shun Gonfano the second he gave him a better pay than money.
** Just how much of a BadBoss Dinedon is. Despite everything Adelgund and Peki did, Adelgund especially, he did not hesitate to put them in a match where they will lose just so that he could get the money for himself.
* Muko keeping the collar Adelgund gave her when they became partners as a TragicKeepsake and looking at it in guilt.
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** As Cookie talks about Freydar, some Cyclone Crushers appear on the background, all of them sporting a DeathGlare as if blaming Cookie for what she did to Freydar.
* Muko's disappointment in Cookie for not telling her the truth. However, her disappointment is bigger on herself because she was the lesser contribution on the match whereas the other three Combagals at least played their role. Cue the WhamLine that ends the chapter.
--->'''Muko:''' "I quit."
** Cookie reaching the DespairEventHorizon that is illustrated as her sinking into the ocean.
* The last page of the chapter are a younger Adelgund and Peki on a date, which serves as a sad reminder that their relationship as friends, lovers, and partners are over.
* Muko's disappointment in Cookie for not telling her the truth. However, her disappointment is bigger on herself because she was the lesser contribution on the match whereas the other three Combagals at least played their role. Cue the WhamLine that ends the chapter.
--->'''Muko:''' "I quit."
** Cookie reaching the DespairEventHorizon that is illustrated as her sinking into the ocean.
* The last page of the chapter are a younger Adelgund and Peki on a date, which serves as a sad reminder that their relationship as friends, lovers, and partners are over.
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* The fans still denouncing Adelgund, cheering for Nyarai to beat her despite the latter's brutality in her fight against Muko.
* Nyarai snapping her own spine to the horror of everybody present.
** Adelgund has a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment the second she thinks she crippled or killed Nyarai.
** Jowdie and a few of the Cyclone Crushers cry in horror when they think their friend just got her spine snapped.
*** While it turned out Nyarai was fine due to having an AbnormalLimbRotationRange that made her immune to submission holds, Nyarai keeping this a secret from her fellow Cyclone Crushers is a bit disheartening as she scared them with that feat she pulled.
* Muko attempting to tag Adelgund as soon as she realizes that she won't be able to beat Nyarai's Leg-Jet Burst. Cookie attempts to stop Muko, telling Adelgund is not worth it since she sacrificed her popularity by breaking Peki's limbs, but Muko still believes in Adelgund by pointing out she only pretends to hurt others.
** Adelgund, recognizing how far she fallen after hearing Muko, and not wanting her to pull a SenselessSacrifice decides to take Nyarai's final blown using the last pages prior to the final one to give Muko advice on how to become a Combagal.
* Nyarai snapping her own spine to the horror of everybody present.
** Adelgund has a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment the second she thinks she crippled or killed Nyarai.
** Jowdie and a few of the Cyclone Crushers cry in horror when they think their friend just got her spine snapped.
*** While it turned out Nyarai was fine due to having an AbnormalLimbRotationRange that made her immune to submission holds, Nyarai keeping this a secret from her fellow Cyclone Crushers is a bit disheartening as she scared them with that feat she pulled.
* Muko attempting to tag Adelgund as soon as she realizes that she won't be able to beat Nyarai's Leg-Jet Burst. Cookie attempts to stop Muko, telling Adelgund is not worth it since she sacrificed her popularity by breaking Peki's limbs, but Muko still believes in Adelgund by pointing out she only pretends to hurt others.
** Adelgund, recognizing how far she fallen after hearing Muko, and not wanting her to pull a SenselessSacrifice decides to take Nyarai's final blown using the last pages prior to the final one to give Muko advice on how to become a Combagal.
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* A flashback reveals that Peki was going to undergo a HeelFaceTurn as payment for Team Executor letting Team Deliverance win the belt. Adelgund loved Peki so much that she was willing to sacrifice the belt as long as both of them got to fight as a {{Face}} team again. Unfortunately for Adelgund, it was a bit too late.
** Peki angrily punches Adelgund after the flashback, pointing out she betrayed her first. Adelgund can only touch her cheek and mutter "my little penguin" in heartbreak, clearly not understanding where did all go wrong.
* Peki reveals the last straw. She [[YourCheatingHeart caught Adelgund being pleasured by the stripper, which she then made into the latest member of the Exe-Cutie-Ves.]] She then asks her if that is what it takes to become one of her personal assistants.
** Peki asking that question implies that she believes that Adelgund created the Exe-Cutie-Ves for her own pleasure. Having witnessed the latest member have sex with Adelgund probably raised a question she's been asking herself for years.
** Adelgund attempts to defend herself by pointing out that the stripper came onto her, which infuriates Peki as she angrily recalls Adelgund enjoying herself and then gives her a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown fueled by years of betrayal.
** Peki angrily punches Adelgund after the flashback, pointing out she betrayed her first. Adelgund can only touch her cheek and mutter "my little penguin" in heartbreak, clearly not understanding where did all go wrong.
* Peki reveals the last straw. She [[YourCheatingHeart caught Adelgund being pleasured by the stripper, which she then made into the latest member of the Exe-Cutie-Ves.]] She then asks her if that is what it takes to become one of her personal assistants.
** Peki asking that question implies that she believes that Adelgund created the Exe-Cutie-Ves for her own pleasure. Having witnessed the latest member have sex with Adelgund probably raised a question she's been asking herself for years.
** Adelgund attempts to defend herself by pointing out that the stripper came onto her, which infuriates Peki as she angrily recalls Adelgund enjoying herself and then gives her a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown fueled by years of betrayal.
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** Adelgund's fans destroying her merchandise as they watch Adelgund keep brutalizing Peki.
* When Nyarai wakes up and asks Peki to tag her in, Adelgund steps on Peki's leg, pointing out that she's not a team player with tears in her eyes. It's clear that, while inexcusable, Adelgund [[WomanScorned is acting more out of broken heart and no longer cares about the match.]]
* Peki crawling all the way from the center of the mat to the corner, finally tagging Nyarai in as she endures the assault of her former partner and lover.
* When Nyarai wakes up and asks Peki to tag her in, Adelgund steps on Peki's leg, pointing out that she's not a team player with tears in her eyes. It's clear that, while inexcusable, Adelgund [[WomanScorned is acting more out of broken heart and no longer cares about the match.]]
* Peki crawling all the way from the center of the mat to the corner, finally tagging Nyarai in as she endures the assault of her former partner and lover.
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* The past of Peki and Adelgund since the readers can see how their partnership broke apart.
** Adelgund believing that the reason why nobody wants matches with her is because [[LadyLooksLikeADude of her masculine appearance.]] It becomes a positive tearjerker when Peki reassures her and tells her that she only needs to control her strength resulting in them becoming the Masato champions a few years later.
** Dinedon blaming the lack of matches with Team Executor, one year after they become champions, on Peki as FantasticRacism made people suspicious of Wilds. His idea is to force Peki to undergo a FaceHeelTurn where she tries to take Adelgund's belt and have Adelgund defeat her to relieve those fears. Peki refuses, but Adelgund accepts on her behalf. The next scene has an angry and humiliated Peki jeered by the crowd as she's about to fight a fixed match against her partner.
*** It is implied that, as a result of losing that fight, Peki lost her own belt.
** Another flashback has Peki covered in bruises, which she got from amateur Combagals going all out on her. Adelgund's reaction was to tell her to suck it up, which hurt Peki's feelings as she wanted some sympathy for everything she endured for her partner's sake.
*** It's a bit more tragic when seeing the beginning of the flashbacks and realizing that Adelgund always talked about her problems and Peki listened to them to make her feel better. In this occasion, Adelgund didn't even bother to listen at all to Peki's concerns, especially when she was the one who got her in the problem in the first place.
** Adelgund believing that the reason why nobody wants matches with her is because [[LadyLooksLikeADude of her masculine appearance.]] It becomes a positive tearjerker when Peki reassures her and tells her that she only needs to control her strength resulting in them becoming the Masato champions a few years later.
** Dinedon blaming the lack of matches with Team Executor, one year after they become champions, on Peki as FantasticRacism made people suspicious of Wilds. His idea is to force Peki to undergo a FaceHeelTurn where she tries to take Adelgund's belt and have Adelgund defeat her to relieve those fears. Peki refuses, but Adelgund accepts on her behalf. The next scene has an angry and humiliated Peki jeered by the crowd as she's about to fight a fixed match against her partner.
*** It is implied that, as a result of losing that fight, Peki lost her own belt.
** Another flashback has Peki covered in bruises, which she got from amateur Combagals going all out on her. Adelgund's reaction was to tell her to suck it up, which hurt Peki's feelings as she wanted some sympathy for everything she endured for her partner's sake.
*** It's a bit more tragic when seeing the beginning of the flashbacks and realizing that Adelgund always talked about her problems and Peki listened to them to make her feel better. In this occasion, Adelgund didn't even bother to listen at all to Peki's concerns, especially when she was the one who got her in the problem in the first place.
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* Why is Nyarai so loyal to Shun? He did a favor to her involving a piece of her past and that got her UndyingLoyalty to him. It shows that Nyarai has a DarkAndTroubledPast if she resorted to Shun Gonfano, which Cookie points out is akin to a DealWithTheDevil just to get out of trouble.
* Why did Nyarai join Cookie just to betray her? Well, she did it out of {{Revenge}} for the "life she took". This causes Cookie to think of Freydar with a haunted look on her face.
** The fact that Nyarai loved/admired Freydar so much that she went so far as to hire the manager that "took her life" in order to get revenge for her shows how much her loss hurt Nyarai.
** Nyarai's betrayal is also tragic in the sense that she threatened to do so if Cookie didn't find her a suitable partner. However, it's clear that Nyarai was clearly intending to betray Cookie regardless of whether she fulfilled her promise or not.
* Cookie calling out the referee for not stopping Nyarai from brutalizing Muko, only for him to yell at her. Cookie realizes that Shun bribed him. It's a horrible thought knowing your ArchEnemy is willing to go that far to hurt you, especially when Nyarai could probably end the fight when she wanted.
* Besides Harry and Mellow, Shira went to Muko's debut and she cries at the brutality.
* Cookie having a breakdown as with Muko's defeat and Nyarai's betrayal, she's ruined. She's only conformed when Adelgund tags in and decides to fight Nyarai on her own.
* Why did Nyarai join Cookie just to betray her? Well, she did it out of {{Revenge}} for the "life she took". This causes Cookie to think of Freydar with a haunted look on her face.
** The fact that Nyarai loved/admired Freydar so much that she went so far as to hire the manager that "took her life" in order to get revenge for her shows how much her loss hurt Nyarai.
** Nyarai's betrayal is also tragic in the sense that she threatened to do so if Cookie didn't find her a suitable partner. However, it's clear that Nyarai was clearly intending to betray Cookie regardless of whether she fulfilled her promise or not.
* Cookie calling out the referee for not stopping Nyarai from brutalizing Muko, only for him to yell at her. Cookie realizes that Shun bribed him. It's a horrible thought knowing your ArchEnemy is willing to go that far to hurt you, especially when Nyarai could probably end the fight when she wanted.
* Besides Harry and Mellow, Shira went to Muko's debut and she cries at the brutality.
* Cookie having a breakdown as with Muko's defeat and Nyarai's betrayal, she's ruined. She's only conformed when Adelgund tags in and decides to fight Nyarai on her own.
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* Muko calling Nyarai her friend is this by the end of the chapter. At first, it is because Nyarai does not reciprocate the friendship, but then it gets sadder by the end. See further below on this and then on Chapter 14.
* Shun bringing the Cyclone Crushers as his bodyguards. This shocks Cookie who calls them her girls. While Chapter 9 had Tasha refer to Skully as one of Cookie's Combagals, the realization that ALL of Cookie's Combagals are part of the Cyclone Crushers is disheartening.
** A sad part is that when the recording is played, a couple of them glare at Cookie with disgust and disappointment for resorting to such tactic, not realizing that they're doing the same thing.
** A sad part is that when the recording is played, a couple of them glare at Cookie with disgust and disappointment for resorting to such tactic, not realizing that they're doing the same thing.
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** There's something sad that the comic's equivalent of a {{Yakuza}} shows more sympathy for the Wilds as individuals than most of the cast.
* Peki betraying Adelgund, telling her [[OvershadowedByAwesome she won't live in her shadow anymore]] as she joins Nyarai.
* Peki betraying Adelgund, telling her [[OvershadowedByAwesome she won't live in her shadow anymore]] as she joins Nyarai.
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** Muko snapping from her lust trance and realizing that Nyarai is her enemy. She tries to call Nyarai her friend, only for Nyarai to pounce on the bunny and slam her head on the ground.
** Nyarai being a HopelessBossFight just like Kalita but UpToEleven as she tortures Muko physically and emotionally while Kalita only focused on knocking Muko out. It borders on NightmareFuel as Muko is clearly suffering.
** Muko asks Nyarai why she betrayed them in tears, only for Nyarai to insult her for believing in Cookie, telling her that the squirrel is a "dream killer" and insulting her for believing in Cookie.
** Nyarai slamming Muko's head on the floor hard and so many times until she bleeds, causing Muko to cry and call for her mom.
** Cookie trying to reason with Nyarai, only for Nyarai to point out she was TheMole who spied on her and she even recorded the meeting to incriminate Cookie. The poor squirrel is left in tears by the revelation.
** Nyarai being a HopelessBossFight just like Kalita but UpToEleven as she tortures Muko physically and emotionally while Kalita only focused on knocking Muko out. It borders on NightmareFuel as Muko is clearly suffering.
** Muko asks Nyarai why she betrayed them in tears, only for Nyarai to insult her for believing in Cookie, telling her that the squirrel is a "dream killer" and insulting her for believing in Cookie.
** Nyarai slamming Muko's head on the floor hard and so many times until she bleeds, causing Muko to cry and call for her mom.
** Cookie trying to reason with Nyarai, only for Nyarai to point out she was TheMole who spied on her and she even recorded the meeting to incriminate Cookie. The poor squirrel is left in tears by the revelation.
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* The chapter begins with Rinko, a rabbit Combagal defeating her opponent with a moonsault. As she celebrates her victory, her opponent is crying in the background. A reminder that not everyone who enters into a sport will win regardless of how hard they try.
* Snuggly trying to fight Tanka Talon and being given a swift CurbStompBattle that leaves her crying in tears. Even with her fans supporting her, one still feels sorry for her.
* Cookie giving an introductory speech for Team Deliverance. Unfortunately, nobody cares about it due to her short height not giving it the necessary impact. Some hecklers even call her a child.
** During a brief moment, Muko notices some fans with signs that have hateful messages written about Cookie. She doesn't get to read them because she's busy seeing Mellow and Harry. That being said, it shows how much of a ZeroPercentApprovalRating Cookie has by this point of the story.
* Snuggly trying to fight Tanka Talon and being given a swift CurbStompBattle that leaves her crying in tears. Even with her fans supporting her, one still feels sorry for her.
* Cookie giving an introductory speech for Team Deliverance. Unfortunately, nobody cares about it due to her short height not giving it the necessary impact. Some hecklers even call her a child.
** During a brief moment, Muko notices some fans with signs that have hateful messages written about Cookie. She doesn't get to read them because she's busy seeing Mellow and Harry. That being said, it shows how much of a ZeroPercentApprovalRating Cookie has by this point of the story.
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* Muko asking Nyarai to tag in so that Muko can get away from Adelgund. [[KickTheDog Nyarai turns her back on her and even snores as Adelgund keeps playing with Muko.]] The look on Muko's face is one of pure betrayal.
** Cookie's silent outrage at Nyarai for refusing to tag in and letting Muko face Adelgund alone.
* Muko's slow realization that Adelgund pinned her down and that the referee is counting to ten. It's kind of disheartening when your first match ends that quickly. It later turns into a funny moment when Adelgund gives Muko a TakeThatKiss and Muko breaks the hold with a kick to the face.
** Cookie's silent outrage at Nyarai for refusing to tag in and letting Muko face Adelgund alone.
* Muko's slow realization that Adelgund pinned her down and that the referee is counting to ten. It's kind of disheartening when your first match ends that quickly. It later turns into a funny moment when Adelgund gives Muko a TakeThatKiss and Muko breaks the hold with a kick to the face.
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* A flashback scene shows that two workers at Monyan were about to be raped until Skully saves them. While the rapists didn't do anything due to Skully stopping them on time, the terror in their faces is still evident.
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* The fact that Skully, one of the Cyclone Crushers working for Shun Gonfano, was one of Cookie's clients. It's kind of depressing knowing that Cookie used to be the manager of a professional fighter and now she's forced to do her manager work at a soapland.
** A flashback scene shows that two workers at Monyan were about to be raped until Skully saves them. While the rapists didn't do anything due to Skully stopping them on time, the terror in their faces is still evident.
* A bit of sadness, but when Muko tells Cookie that she's a 2 out of 10 for putting makeup. Cookie points out it stings. It's clear that while her height is her main point of sensitivity, being called unattractive by someone as girl-crazy as Muko hurt her self-esteem a bit.
** A flashback scene shows that two workers at Monyan were about to be raped until Skully saves them. While the rapists didn't do anything due to Skully stopping them on time, the terror in their faces is still evident.
* A bit of sadness, but when Muko tells Cookie that she's a 2 out of 10 for putting makeup. Cookie points out it stings. It's clear that while her height is her main point of sensitivity, being called unattractive by someone as girl-crazy as Muko hurt her self-esteem a bit.
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* Cookie bribing Dinedon is kind of funny due to the repeated use of ImagineSpot until one thinks how bad Cookie's situation truly is. She's in ever-increasing debt. She's forced to take a loan from a LoanShark and forced to commit the morally dubious act of bribing someone to win a match, and her Combagals are an inexperienced amateur who looks up to her and a professional who looks down on her. As much as Cookie calculated the risks and is preparing each step to make the debut match of Team Deliverance a guaranteed win, she's still nervous with every step.
* Dinedon mentions that even if Team Deliverance wins the Masato Championship, it won't erase Cookie's mistakes from two years ago. He then goes on to mention [[NoodleIncident Trilamity Day,]] which puts everyone in a somber mood.
** The fact that even Nyarai, who was acting smugly in the background, frowns a bit, shows how badly that day was in the history of furry fighting.
* Cookie reading the article of Muko on Nyarai's phone. It's filled with libel that insults both Muko and Cookie as it details how poorly Muko performed against Kalita.
* Nyarai calling out Cookie for not fulfilling her promise (finding her a worthy partner and settling for an amateur) and probably being ready to ditch her until Adelgund takes the phone, reads the article, and decides she wants Muko as an opponent.
* Dinedon mentions that even if Team Deliverance wins the Masato Championship, it won't erase Cookie's mistakes from two years ago. He then goes on to mention [[NoodleIncident Trilamity Day,]] which puts everyone in a somber mood.
** The fact that even Nyarai, who was acting smugly in the background, frowns a bit, shows how badly that day was in the history of furry fighting.
* Cookie reading the article of Muko on Nyarai's phone. It's filled with libel that insults both Muko and Cookie as it details how poorly Muko performed against Kalita.
* Nyarai calling out Cookie for not fulfilling her promise (finding her a worthy partner and settling for an amateur) and probably being ready to ditch her until Adelgund takes the phone, reads the article, and decides she wants Muko as an opponent.
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** Saniko believes that furry fighting is just a phase. She recalls a moment where Muko [[BigEater entered competitive eating]] and lost. Muko entered into a mild depression and locked herself into her room, binge eating until she turned into a fat blob. Saniko was forced to take care of Muko until she returned to normal.
*** This makes a comment in chapter 3 HarsherInHindsight involving guerilla neighboring gardening. If what Saniko is saying is true then Muko is DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife rather than following her perverted desires.
** Muko sounds a bit resentful when recalling how Cookie believes she can be a Combagal, looking at Saniko for not believing in her.
** Saniko's outburst as she breaks a base and calls out Muko for going out pursuing random hobbies while she's busy overworking to sustain both of them.
** Muko telling Saniko that she's not their mother with a very uncharacteristic coldness.
*** It's the second time that Muko's mother is mentioned, and the first time she's mentioned by Muko herself, but it shows how beloved she must have been to Muko and Saniko if the former is mad at the latter for trying to emulate her and the latter wants to honor her by trying to raise the former as best as she can.
* Muko looking at a picture of herself and Nyarai saying that she lost because she was alone but this time she has someone who will protect her. It says something that, behind Muko's perverted antics, she does want and value friendship.
** Nyarai pushing Muko away from her in the selfie with Muko unaware of her instant dislike. It's clear that their partnership won't be a happy one.
*** This makes a comment in chapter 3 HarsherInHindsight involving guerilla neighboring gardening. If what Saniko is saying is true then Muko is DesperatelyLookingForAPurposeInLife rather than following her perverted desires.
** Muko sounds a bit resentful when recalling how Cookie believes she can be a Combagal, looking at Saniko for not believing in her.
** Saniko's outburst as she breaks a base and calls out Muko for going out pursuing random hobbies while she's busy overworking to sustain both of them.
** Muko telling Saniko that she's not their mother with a very uncharacteristic coldness.
*** It's the second time that Muko's mother is mentioned, and the first time she's mentioned by Muko herself, but it shows how beloved she must have been to Muko and Saniko if the former is mad at the latter for trying to emulate her and the latter wants to honor her by trying to raise the former as best as she can.
* Muko looking at a picture of herself and Nyarai saying that she lost because she was alone but this time she has someone who will protect her. It says something that, behind Muko's perverted antics, she does want and value friendship.
** Nyarai pushing Muko away from her in the selfie with Muko unaware of her instant dislike. It's clear that their partnership won't be a happy one.
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* Poor Mellow's attempts to hook up with Muko are pitiable. First of all, it's the fact that he has NoSocialSkills that gets him to embarrass himself in front of his crush. Then, Muko rejects him with BrutalHonesty when he makes his feelings clear. Finally, he gets to hang out with her by taking her to the match between Fenny and Roora, only for Muko to take advantage of him and not return his calls after giving him her phone number.
** The fact that even without these mistakes, Mellow's crush on Muko is bound to fail due to IncompatibleOrientation getting in the way of his feelings since Muko is only interested in girls.
* Harry revealing that there is an article in the Internet about Muko, more specifically about her fight with Kalita at Cafe Carrots, but it's only filled with mean comments. Mellow's reaction is one of horror upon finding out what happened to his friend/crush and the ramifications of the event.
* Mellow trying to call Muko about what happened at Cafe Carrots, and even trying to warn her about Cookie's bad reputation, only for Muko to hang up on him because she's training by playing videogames.
** The fact that even without these mistakes, Mellow's crush on Muko is bound to fail due to IncompatibleOrientation getting in the way of his feelings since Muko is only interested in girls.
* Harry revealing that there is an article in the Internet about Muko, more specifically about her fight with Kalita at Cafe Carrots, but it's only filled with mean comments. Mellow's reaction is one of horror upon finding out what happened to his friend/crush and the ramifications of the event.
* Mellow trying to call Muko about what happened at Cafe Carrots, and even trying to warn her about Cookie's bad reputation, only for Muko to hang up on him because she's training by playing videogames.
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** Saniko enters the room and finds her younger sister with her face covered in bandages. It's her first time seeing Muko since her fight with Kalita so her shock and horror is genuine.
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* Muko feeling bad that she couldn't help Cafe Carrots by not winning against Kalita. Cookie can't bring herself to say that Muko's efforts to win TheBet and protect the cafe were AllForNothing , especially when they're in greater debt than before.
* Cookie's relationship with Nyarai is the opposite of Muko, in a very depressing sense. Their relationship is explored in a flashback scene prior to Muko and Cookie's first meeting.
** Cookie is so poor that she has to ask Nyarai, her client, for money. Nyarai refuses on the ground that it's her money and that Cookie has to find her a suitable partner.
** Nyarai's is openly disrespectful of Cookie, insulting her living and working conditions, and even [[IntimidationDemonstration kicking a dent in a locker door near Cookie's head]] [[DisproportionateRetribution just because the squirrel asked her to respect her as a manager.]]
** Cookie, fed up with Nyarai's disrespect, points out that Nyarai needs her as much as Cookie needs her, pointing out that not many agencies accept Wild Combagals regardless of their talents. Unfortunately, Nyarai believes that [[BerserkButton Cookie pulled a "Wild Card" on her,]] stomping the squirrel to the ground and giving her a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and a threat to quit her agency and fight any fighter Cookie represents if her demands are not met.
*** The fact that Cookie still said her {{Catchphrase}} despite Nyarai stomping her to the ground and grinding her head underfoot shows how much HeightAngst Cookie has if she said it even when scared.
*** Nyarai's violent reaction shows that she was a victim of the "Wild Card" at some point n the past.
* Cookie's relationship with Nyarai is the opposite of Muko, in a very depressing sense. Their relationship is explored in a flashback scene prior to Muko and Cookie's first meeting.
** Cookie is so poor that she has to ask Nyarai, her client, for money. Nyarai refuses on the ground that it's her money and that Cookie has to find her a suitable partner.
** Nyarai's is openly disrespectful of Cookie, insulting her living and working conditions, and even [[IntimidationDemonstration kicking a dent in a locker door near Cookie's head]] [[DisproportionateRetribution just because the squirrel asked her to respect her as a manager.]]
** Cookie, fed up with Nyarai's disrespect, points out that Nyarai needs her as much as Cookie needs her, pointing out that not many agencies accept Wild Combagals regardless of their talents. Unfortunately, Nyarai believes that [[BerserkButton Cookie pulled a "Wild Card" on her,]] stomping the squirrel to the ground and giving her a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and a threat to quit her agency and fight any fighter Cookie represents if her demands are not met.
*** The fact that Cookie still said her {{Catchphrase}} despite Nyarai stomping her to the ground and grinding her head underfoot shows how much HeightAngst Cookie has if she said it even when scared.
*** Nyarai's violent reaction shows that she was a victim of the "Wild Card" at some point n the past.
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* Cookie talking about Freydar with Muko. While she didn't kill her, Cookie overworked her, leading to a CareerEndingInjury involving painkillers that will make her blind if she fights again.
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* Muko and Cookie's reunion after Muko returns as a Combagal and agrees to make Cookie her manager again is a happy kind of tearjerker.
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* Nyarai confirming her loyalty to Shun by betraying Team Deliverance. She then convinces Peki to join her by pointing out how Shun is the only one who gives Wilds a chance.
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[[folder: Part 2: Cheater]]
[[AC: Chapter 7: The Good and The Bad]]
* Cookie [[WhatTheHellHero mentally scolds herself for allowing Muko to fight Kalita]] and even [[ItsAllMyFault appears to blame herself for letting the fight happen in the first place.]]
** As Cookie is having her inner monologue, the audience has a flashback of Muko's fight with Kalita, reminding the viewer how much of a CurbStompBattle it was.
* Cookie's scolding towards Muko for not taking care of her body. She gets specially mad when she orders Muko to drop the prescribed painkillers that were given to her, ordering the bunny to toss them in the trash.
* Cookie giving Muko the Donkizari action figure is a bittersweet tearjerker as she uses it to explain her background and dream.
** As a child, Cookie admired Donkizari and wanted to be a Combagal like her. Sadly, even as a little girl, Cookie realized that her height was a DreamCrushingHandicap so she was never going to be a Combagal.
*** The realization is evident when a child Cookie imagines Donkizari or a large Combagal and gets scared, realizing she will never be strong enough to fight them in the ring.
** Cookie deciding to be a manager so that she could train a Combagal and help her achieve her dreams of becoming a champion. It moves Muko to tears.
** Frankly, the fact that Cookie bought the action figure can move one to tears when one remembers that Cookie is in greater debt after the cafe fiasco.
[[AC: Chapter 8: Crossed Wires]]
[[AC: Chapter 9: Are You Even A Woman?]]
[[AC: Chapter 10: Shady Business]]
[[AC: Chapter 11: Ding! Ding! Debut!]]
[[AC: Chapter 12: Selling]]
[[AC: Chapter 13: Judging]]
[[AC: Chapter 14: Unfolding]]
[[AC: Chapter 15: Cracking]]
[[AC: Chapter 16: Breaking]]
[[AC: Chapter 17: Unleashing]]
[[AC: Chapter 18: Falling]]
[[AC: Chapter 19: Despite Everything]]
[[folder: Part 2: Cheater]]
[[AC: Chapter 7: The Good and The Bad]]
* Cookie [[WhatTheHellHero mentally scolds herself for allowing Muko to fight Kalita]] and even [[ItsAllMyFault appears to blame herself for letting the fight happen in the first place.]]
** As Cookie is having her inner monologue, the audience has a flashback of Muko's fight with Kalita, reminding the viewer how much of a CurbStompBattle it was.
* Cookie's scolding towards Muko for not taking care of her body. She gets specially mad when she orders Muko to drop the prescribed painkillers that were given to her, ordering the bunny to toss them in the trash.
* Cookie giving Muko the Donkizari action figure is a bittersweet tearjerker as she uses it to explain her background and dream.
** As a child, Cookie admired Donkizari and wanted to be a Combagal like her. Sadly, even as a little girl, Cookie realized that her height was a DreamCrushingHandicap so she was never going to be a Combagal.
*** The realization is evident when a child Cookie imagines Donkizari or a large Combagal and gets scared, realizing she will never be strong enough to fight them in the ring.
** Cookie deciding to be a manager so that she could train a Combagal and help her achieve her dreams of becoming a champion. It moves Muko to tears.
** Frankly, the fact that Cookie bought the action figure can move one to tears when one remembers that Cookie is in greater debt after the cafe fiasco.
[[AC: Chapter 8: Crossed Wires]]
[[AC: Chapter 9: Are You Even A Woman?]]
[[AC: Chapter 10: Shady Business]]
[[AC: Chapter 11: Ding! Ding! Debut!]]
[[AC: Chapter 12: Selling]]
[[AC: Chapter 13: Judging]]
[[AC: Chapter 14: Unfolding]]
[[AC: Chapter 15: Cracking]]
[[AC: Chapter 16: Breaking]]
[[AC: Chapter 17: Unleashing]]
[[AC: Chapter 18: Falling]]
[[AC: Chapter 19: Despite Everything]]
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* The chapter introduces Harry, who will become Muko's first fan. What's so depressing about him? He was fired from his job after working there from years. His family left him. And he can't find another job with the current economy. The situation has him DrivenToSuicide with him going to Cafe Carrots for one last meal. Fortunately, Muko has figured out customer service and she gives him an act of kindness in his hour of need, which causes him to become her first fan when Cookie gives him a poster.
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* Cookie protecting the cash register when the hyena biker was about to [[BatterUp break it with a bat.]] The fact that Cookie is very small and the hyena biker is a buff young man armed with a metal bat shows how desperate Cookie is to get enough money to restart her career. She's even crying as she hugs the register.
** Cookie's second attempt to defend the register has her give Kalita a DeathGlare to protect it, only to be swiftly thrown aside due to side difference.
** Cookie's second attempt to defend the register has her give Kalita a DeathGlare to protect it, only to be swiftly thrown aside due to side difference.
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* Muko losing potential fans the second the gap of strength between her and Kalita becomes obvious. It's saddening becomes Muko was clearly getting a fan base until Kalita started winning.
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* Fenny's manager [[WhatTheHellHero calling out the referee for not interfering when Roora pulls an illegal move by pulling on Fenny's tail]] and then resorting to just badmouthing Roora in impotence.
** The scene can hit to those who participate in combat sports as fighters, managers, or trainers can watch the indignity of an opponent committing a foul and get away with it because the referee didn't notice.
* Roora's manager trying to warn her to stop showboating and finish Fenny off is a villainous one.
** Also hit close to trainers and mentors who watch their apprentice lose matches because they refused to listen to vital advice out of hubris.
* Fenny's victory can be this after all the pain and humilliation she endured against Roora in the match.
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** It gets sadder because a worker at the soapland tells Muko that the owner let Cookie stay there two years ago as favor, but Cookie stayed longer than expected. It makes one wonder how badly Cookie is doing if she's that desperate to stay there for so long.
* What's the basis of Muko and Cookie's partnership? Muko is too lazy to go to a Combagal school so she looked for an agency that would allow her to have a match as soon as possible. Meanwhile, Cookie is so desperate for a client due to bad reviews that she willingly picks Muko despite the bunny girl being inexperienced and having no idea of how furry fighting works.
* Cookie being anxious the day after she meets Muko, being worried that things will go bad.
** While it's PlayedForLaughs with the way she reacts to it, Cookie's overly exaggerated reaction to a single coin as a sign of good luck makes one think how desperate she is for a money if a coin elicited that reaction out of her.
* What's the basis of Muko and Cookie's partnership? Muko is too lazy to go to a Combagal school so she looked for an agency that would allow her to have a match as soon as possible. Meanwhile, Cookie is so desperate for a client due to bad reviews that she willingly picks Muko despite the bunny girl being inexperienced and having no idea of how furry fighting works.
* Cookie being anxious the day after she meets Muko, being worried that things will go bad.
** While it's PlayedForLaughs with the way she reacts to it, Cookie's overly exaggerated reaction to a single coin as a sign of good luck makes one think how desperate she is for a money if a coin elicited that reaction out of her.
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* Saniko, Muko's older sister, worry about her sister and her ridiculous passions, feeling like she's wasting her life by quitting her jobs to pursue them. Her horror at hearing Muko quit her job is the same as a legal guardian when hearing their charge is sacrificing their future over a stupid decision.
* Muko and her boss are unwilling to compromise regarding Muko working again. However, when Cookie agrees to have Muko work again for a month for free, Muko's boss agree. He, however, takes the time to scold Muko for her poor work etiquette, telling her he only hired her and put up with her as a favor to her mom. The last comment gets her silent immediately.
* Muko and her boss are unwilling to compromise regarding Muko working again. However, when Cookie agrees to have Muko work again for a month for free, Muko's boss agree. He, however, takes the time to scold Muko for her poor work etiquette, telling her he only hired her and put up with her as a favor to her mom. The last comment gets her silent immediately.
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** The fact that Nyarai has a manager despite already being Cookie's client is a sad thing because the first five characters presented Muko and Cookie and how they form their Combagal manager bond. Knowing that Nyarai plans to succeed by using Cookie as stepping stone can leave someone feeling very bad after seeing how much she grew to care about Muko in a single day.
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** The fact that Nyarai has a manager despite already being Cookie's client is a sad thing because the first five characters chapters presented Muko and Cookie and how they form their Combagal manager bond. Knowing that Nyarai plans to succeed by using Cookie as stepping stone can leave someone feeling very bad after seeing how much she grew to care about Muko in a single day.
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* Earlier, the hippo customer asked Nyarai if she was a Wild and then [[FantasticRacism proceeded to make insulting questions and comments about her intelligence.]] Nyarai is forced to control her anger until the hippo goes too far by trying to grope her.
** The fact that racism exists and that it's so bad they make stereotypes out of the victims.
* Shun being revealed as the manager of the Cyclone Crushers, including Nyarai. And that he has a plan to make her a star, but they will need Cookie to do so.
** The fact that Nyarai has a manager despite already being Cookie's client is a sad thing because the first five characters presented Muko and Cookie and how they form their Combagal manager bond. Knowing that Nyarai plans to succeed by using Cookie as stepping stone can leave someone feeling very bad after seeing how much she grew to care about Muko in a single day.
** The fact that racism exists and that it's so bad they make stereotypes out of the victims.
* Shun being revealed as the manager of the Cyclone Crushers, including Nyarai. And that he has a plan to make her a star, but they will need Cookie to do so.
** The fact that Nyarai has a manager despite already being Cookie's client is a sad thing because the first five characters presented Muko and Cookie and how they form their Combagal manager bond. Knowing that Nyarai plans to succeed by using Cookie as stepping stone can leave someone feeling very bad after seeing how much she grew to care about Muko in a single day.
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* Muko's fight with Kalita is a HopelessBossBattle HopelessBossFight as Kalita gives her a CurbStompBattle that borders on NoHoldsBarredBeatdown that leaves her unconscious.
* Shira shows her gratitude to Muko, but her friends however are [[UngratefulBitch judgmental about her, pointing out that Muko lost the fight and didn't land a single blow on Kalita.]]
** The sad case is that [[JerkassHasAPoint they're right]] as Muko not treating the fight seriously and even starting it despite the skill gap got her injured and the store destroyed.
* Shira pays Cookie the money of TheBet as payment for Muko defending the store. Cue to the owner [[RealityEnsues demanding Cookie pay back the damages Muko made fighting Kalita,]] which destroys Cookie's dreams.
* Shira shows her gratitude to Muko, but her friends however are [[UngratefulBitch judgmental about her, pointing out that Muko lost the fight and didn't land a single blow on Kalita.]]
** The sad case is that [[JerkassHasAPoint they're right]] as Muko not treating the fight seriously and even starting it despite the skill gap got her injured and the store destroyed.
* Shira pays Cookie the money of TheBet as payment for Muko defending the store. Cue to the owner [[RealityEnsues demanding Cookie pay back the damages Muko made fighting Kalita,]] which destroys Cookie's dreams.
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* Nyarai is sexually assaulted by a hippo customer. While she puts him on his place with a well-placed kick in the face, a comment by her implies it's not the first time this happened and [[DoesNotLikeMen she's developing a distaste for men.]]
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!!Act 1: A Rough Start
[[folder: Part 1: Outsider]]
[[AC: Fight 1: Fenny VS Roora]]
* Fenny enduring a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown from Roora. The sheer pain on the artic vixen's face is palpable, especially since Roora uses low blows. This makes her victory all the sweeter.
[[AC: Chapter 2: Get Ready]]
* The fact that Cookie lives and works in a janitor closet at a soapland.
[[AC: Chapter 3: Hard Working Dreamer]]
* Muko being incapable of doing customer service because [[DoesNotLikeMen she's socially awkward around men.]] While she doesn't hate them, it's clear that Muko is suffering from social anxiety until Cookie gives her some advice.
[[AC: Chapter 4: The World Is Your Ring]]
[[AC: Chapter 5: Roda Kira's Killer Star Kalita]]
[[AC: Chapter 6: The Smiling Nighthawk]]
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'''WARNING:''' All spoilers for the series are unmarked.
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[[folder: Part 1: Outsider]]
[[AC: Fight 1: Fenny VS Roora]]
* Fenny enduring a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown from Roora. The sheer pain on the artic vixen's face is palpable, especially since Roora uses low blows. This makes her victory all the sweeter.
[[AC: Chapter 2: Get Ready]]
* The fact that Cookie lives and works in a janitor closet at a soapland.
[[AC: Chapter 3: Hard Working Dreamer]]
* Muko being incapable of doing customer service because [[DoesNotLikeMen she's socially awkward around men.]] While she doesn't hate them, it's clear that Muko is suffering from social anxiety until Cookie gives her some advice.
[[AC: Chapter 4: The World Is Your Ring]]
[[AC: Chapter 5: Roda Kira's Killer Star Kalita]]
[[AC: Chapter 6: The Smiling Nighthawk]]
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