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* When Regina's father, Malle Darkblood shows up at her uncle's place to take her back with him, [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Vol_2039.php Aliph]] demands that he be made Regina's guardian; Malle is suspicious, but quickly accepts Aliph's offer and leaves. [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Vol_2042.php Regina]] explains to her uncle about how miserable her life is, because she's a failure and an embarrassment to her family, who have largely been passing her around trying to keep her out of trouble. Aliph just gave Regina's father exactly what he wanted, someone to dump Regina on so he never has to deal with her again; [[IHaveNoSon she was so worthless to him]], that he didn't even bother saying goodbye.
* When Regina's father, Malle Darkblood shows up at her uncle's place to take her back with him, [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Vol_2039.php Aliph]] demands that he be made Regina's guardian; Malle is suspicious, but quickly accepts Aliph's offer and leaves. [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Vol_2042.php Regina]] explains to her uncle about how miserable her life is, because she's a failure and an embarrassment to her family, who have largely been passing her around trying to keep her out of trouble. Aliph just gave Regina's father exactly what he wanted, someone to dump Regina on so he never has to deal with her again; [[IHaveNoSon she was so worthless to him]], that he didn't even bother saying goodbye.
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* The [[http://missmab.com/Comics/Vol_1969.php full]] [[http://missmab.com/Comics/Vol_1970.php story]] of the fate of Hishaan.
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'''Mythos''': Not for me. But who knows, maybe for my sisters. It is beyond me though. But if anyone is able to come up with something I would expect it to be Lord Hizell's son. Either way you have a month to try to figure it out...and for what it's worth? ([[PerpetualFrowner gives a sad half smile]]) I wish you luck on that! However! This is no longer the time for words! THE MESSAGE HAS BEEN DELIVERED AND THUS IT IS THE TIME OF ACTION! [[SuicideByCop IN LORD HIZELL'S NAME I SHALL STRIKE YOU DOWN!]]\\
'''Pyro''': Wait! Just give me a few minutes and I can ([[CessationOfExistence VZZZVT!]])...work...
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'''Mythos''': Not for me. But who knows, maybe for my sisters. It is beyond me though. But if anyone is able to come up with something I would expect it to be Lord Hizell's son. Either way you have a month to try to figure it out...and for what it's worth? ([[PerpetualFrowner gives a sad half smile]]) I wish you luck on that! However! This is no longer the time for words! THE MESSAGE HAS BEEN DELIVERED AND THUS IT IS THE TIME OF ACTION! [[SuicideByCop IN LORD HIZELL'S NAME I SHALL STRIKE YOU DOWN!]]\\
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'''Mythos''': Not for me. But who knows, maybe for my sisters. It is beyond me though. But if anyone is able to come up with something I would expect it to be Lord Hizell's son. Either way you have a month to try to figure it out...and for what it's worth? ([[PerpetualFrowner gives a sad half smile]]) I wish you luck on that! However! This is no longer the time for words! THE MESSAGE HAS BEEN DELIVERED AND THUS IT IS THE TIME OF ACTION! [[SuicideByCop IN LORD HIZELL'S NAME I SHALL STRIKE YOU DOWN!]]\\
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* [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Vol_1776.php The fate of Hizell's mythos minion]]: Sent ostensibly to force a kill or be killed situation she's actually there to force Pyroduck to [[SadisticChoice either kill or watch Mab kill someone once a month, every month in his defence.]] Despite this, she reveals she has faith that Pyro will find a third option...just not in time to save her, before knowingly invoking Mab's wrath whilst Pyro begs her to give him more time.
* [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Vol_1776.php The fate of Hizell's mythos minion]]: Sent ostensibly to force a kill or be killed situation she's actually there to force Pyroduck to [[SadisticChoice either kill or watch Mab kill someone once a month, every month in his defence.]] Despite this, she reveals she has faith that Pyro will find a third option...just not in time to save her, before knowingly invoking Mab's wrath whilst Pyro begs her to give him more time.
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-->'''Abel''': You can either [[HeroicBSOD keep whining]] and [[MyGreatestFailure hope it goes away]], [[AndIMustScream which it won't]]. Or you can do the thing you were just wishing [[TakeThatUs your friend]] would do, and trust him [[WellDoneSonGuy not to]] [[NiceJobBreakingItHero be mad]].
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-->'''Abel''': You can either [[HeroicBSOD keep whining]] and [[MyGreatestFailure hope it goes away]], [[AndIMustScream which it won't]]. Or you can do the thing you were just wishing [[TakeThatUs your friend]] would do, and trust him [[WellDoneSonGuy not to]] [[NiceJobBreakingItHero be mad]].
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The entire story arc is this but here are some key moments:
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** The tragic story of Aniz and Destania after the death of Siar, Aniz's clan leader, and the rest of the clan.
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*Hannah's recent death.
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[[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Ab_082.php These]] [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Ab_083.php two]] updates to Abel's Story.
** Seriously, how many tropers cried upon reading these?
** Abel's Story, PERIOD.
** [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Vol_824.php Mab's final goodbye to her mother.]]
** [[http://missmab.com/Comics/Vol_1363.php Pyroduck has to choose between Alexsi or his sense of security.]] [[spoiler:He chooses Alexsi.]]
** [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Ma_038.php "B... Brother?"]]
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** [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Vol_824.php Mab's final goodbye to her mother.]]
** [[http://missmab.com/Comics/Vol_1363.php Pyroduck has to choose between Alexsi or his sense of security.]] [[spoiler:He chooses Alexsi.]]
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** Abel's Story, PERIOD.
** [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Vol_824.php Mab's final goodbye to her mother.]]
** [[http://missmab.com/Comics/Vol_1363.php Pyroduck has to choose between Alexsi or his sense of security.]] [[spoiler:He chooses Alexsi.]]
** [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Ma_038.php "B... Brother?"]]
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** [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Vol_824.php Mab's final goodbye to her mother.]]
** [[http://missmab.com/Comics/Vol_1363.php Pyroduck has to choose between Alexsi or his sense of security.]] [[spoiler:He chooses Alexsi.]]
** [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Ma_038.php "B... Brother?"]]
