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* WrenchWench Maus, who being UsefulNotes/{{Romani}} nominally qualifies as HotGypsyWoman (sort of).
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- Keller of the ''Zero One''
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''Retribution'' is the third setting in the {{Cosmopol}} [[TabletopRPG RPG]] universe, taking place roughly fifteen years after the introduction of the first setting.
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''Retribution'' is the third setting in the {{Cosmopol}} TabletopGame/{{Cosmopol}} [[TabletopRPG RPG]] universe, taking place roughly fifteen years after the introduction of the first setting.
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* {{Roma}}: A minority ethnic group living in Neustadt's ''Unterstadt''. They are known for making their living as "modders" and mechanics, and are one of the few groups aware of the [[HumanoidAbomination several kinds of Nasty]] living in the lower levels of the city.
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* {{Roma}}: UsefulNotes/{{Romani}}: A minority ethnic group living in Neustadt's ''Unterstadt''. They are known for making their living as "modders" and mechanics, and are one of the few groups aware of the [[HumanoidAbomination several kinds of Nasty]] living in the lower levels of the city.
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* WrenchWench Maus, who being {{Roma}} nominally qualifies as HotGypsyWoman (sort of).
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After a genetically-engineered [[Ubermensch Neohuman]] [[PuttingOnTheReich government]] based in [[CruelBritannia England]] has seized much of Europe, Neustadt finds itself split between these forces and the equally cruel, [[FantasticRacism anti-"Gene Job"]] Mechanist government and finds itself the key prize whose taking will mean a decisive turn in the war.
Attempting to free the city, sometimes against crushing odds, is the [[LaResistance Zero One]]... who have now found that the Assembly and the Mechanists are not their only problems.
Attempting to free the city, sometimes against crushing odds, is the [[LaResistance Zero One]]... who have now found that the Assembly and the Mechanists are not their only problems.
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After a genetically-engineered [[Ubermensch [[{{Ubermensch}} Neohuman]] [[PuttingOnTheReich government]] based in [[CruelBritannia England]] has seized much of Europe, Neustadt finds itself split between these forces and the equally cruel, [[FantasticRacism anti-"Gene Job"]] Mechanist government and finds itself the key prize whose taking will mean a decisive turn in the war.
Attempting to free the city, sometimes against crushing odds, is the [[LaResistance Zero One]]... who have now found that the Assembly and the Mechanists are not their onlyproblems.
problems.
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* {{Rebel Leader}}, {{Gadgeteer Genius}} and [[TheCracker computer hacker]] Keller is a {{So Called Coward}} and {{Badass Pacifist}} who appears in ''Retribution''. After seeming to have been {{Put On A Bus}} during ''Reckoning'', he returns in ''Retribution'' having undergone considerable {{Character Development}}, including {{Taking a Level in Badass}} and undergoing an {{Expository Hairstyle Change}}. A German national with influent English skills, he is known for [[BuffySpeak his characteristic style of speech]]. He's [[BattleCouple involved]] with the {{Ambiguously Jewish}} {{Tsundere}} {{Action Girl}} Barrett.
* {{Wrench Wench}} Maus, who being {{Roma}} nominally qualifies as {{Hot Gypsy Woman}} (sort of).
* {{Wrench Wench}} Maus, who being {{Roma}} nominally qualifies as {{Hot Gypsy Woman}} (sort of).
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* {{Rebel Leader}}, {{Gadgeteer Genius}} RebelLeader, GadgeteerGenius and [[TheCracker computer hacker]] Keller is a {{So Called Coward}} SoCalledCoward and {{Badass Pacifist}} BadassPacifist who appears in ''Retribution''. After seeming to have been {{Put On A Bus}} PutOnABus during ''Reckoning'', he returns in ''Retribution'' having undergone considerable {{Character Development}}, CharacterDevelopment, including {{Taking a Level in Badass}} and undergoing an {{Expository Hairstyle Change}}.ExpositoryHairstyleChange. A German national with influent English skills, he is known for [[BuffySpeak his characteristic style of speech]]. He's [[BattleCouple involved]] with the {{Ambiguously Jewish}} AmbiguouslyJewish {{Tsundere}} {{Action Girl}} Barrett.
ActionGirl Barrett.
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* {{Rebel Leader}}, {{Gadgeteer Genius}} and [[TheCracker computer hacker]] Keller is a {{So Called Coward}} and {{Badass Pacifist}} who appears in ''Retribution''. After seeming to have been {{Put On A Bus}} during ''Reckoning'', he returns in ''Retribution'' after having undergone considerable {{Character Development}}, including {{Taking a Level in Badass}} and undergoing an {{Expository Hairstyle Change}}. A German national with influent English skills, he is known for [[BuffySpeak his characteristic style of speech]]. He's [[BattleCouple involved]] with the rather [[Tsundere fiery]], {{Ambiguously Jewish}} {{Tsundere}} {{Action Girl}} Barrett.
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'''In-Game Character Tropes:'''
* {{Ambiguously Jewish}}: Barrett.
* {{Battle Couple}}: This is arguably Keller and Barrett in ''Retribution''.
* {{Buffy Speak}}: Keller when he speaks English.
* {{Hot Gypsy Woman}}: Averted with Maus. Though she is indeed {{Roma}}, she's a {{Wrench Wench}}, wears tank tops and cargo pants and prefers the fairer sex.
** She's still hot.
* {{Tsundere}}: Barrett.
* {{Wrench Wench}}: Maus
* {{Ambiguously Jewish}}: Barrett.
* {{Battle Couple}}: This is arguably Keller and Barrett in ''Retribution''.
* {{Buffy Speak}}: Keller when he speaks English.
* {{Hot Gypsy Woman}}: Averted with Maus. Though she is indeed {{Roma}}, she's a {{Wrench Wench}}, wears tank tops and cargo pants and prefers the fairer sex.
** She's still hot.
* {{Tsundere}}: Barrett.
* {{Wrench Wench}}: Maus
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* {{Rebel Leader}}, {{Gadgeteer Genius}} and [[TheCracker computer hacker]] Keller is a {{So Called Coward}} and {{Badass Pacifist}} who appears in ''Retribution'' after {{Taking a Level in Badass}} and undergoing an {{Expository Hairstyle Change}}. A German national with influent English skills, he is known for [[BuffySpeak his characteristic style of speech]]. He's [[BattleCouple involved]] with the rather [[Tsundere fiery]], {{Ambiguously
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** She's still hot.
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* {{Wrench Wench}}: Maus
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* {{Badass Pacifist}}: Keller to some degree. He attempts to stick to the moral high ground. Justified in that sabotage of the invaders' infrastructure and technology may be the only way to win the war, as the Zero One is badly outnumbered.
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The ladder of success is best climbed by stepping on the rungs of opportunity.
- {{Ayn Rand}}
Cosmopol is a utopia to some, a dystopian to others - anything you want can be yours... but if you fail, it means you're a bad person.
- Dreia Melinkoff
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Because as much as I despise this smoke-filled poisonous choking pile of
- Keller of the
- {{Ayn Rand}}
Cosmopol is a utopia to some, a dystopian to others - anything you want can be yours... but if you fail, it means you're a bad person.
- Dreia Melinkoff
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''Cosmopol'' is a {{Tabletop RPG}} setting by Dreia Melinkoff.
It is set in an alternate timeline where the {{Great Depression}} (and thus the rise of {{Those Wacky Nazis}}) never happened, and for the hundred years after, history, politics and technology evolved in a different direction.
Most of the action takes place in the North American city of [[CityOfAdventure Cosmopol]] or its [[GermanExpressionism gloomy European counterpart]], [[CityNoir Neustadt]].
It is set in an alternate timeline where the {{Great Depression}} (and thus the rise of {{Those Wacky Nazis}}) never happened, and for the hundred years after, history, politics and technology evolved in a different direction.
Most of the action takes place in the North American city of [[CityOfAdventure Cosmopol]] or its [[GermanExpressionism gloomy European counterpart]], [[CityNoir Neustadt]].
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It is set
Most
Contrary to the branding (the title "Cosmopol"), the action
In contrast to the other two settings' dominantly capitalistic, mercenary and adventure-based themes, ''Retribution'' casts the player characters as [[RagtagBunchOfMisfits members]] of [[LaResistance the Zero One]] organization, which has become an armed resistance movement after previously being a loose-knit brotherhood of [[PlayfulHacker playful hackers]].
After a genetically-engineered [[Ubermensch Neohuman]] [[PuttingOnTheReich government]] based in [[CruelBritannia England]] has seized much of Europe, Neustadt finds itself split between these forces and the equally cruel, [[FantasticRacism anti-"Gene Job"]] Mechanist government and finds itself the key prize whose taking will mean a decisive turn in the war.
Attempting to free the city, sometimes against crushing odds, is the [[LaResistance Zero One]]... who have now found that the Assembly and the Mechanists are not their only problems.
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'''Settings include:'''
* {{Century of Progress}}: a bright world, a golden age... anything you want can be yours, for a price.
* {{Cosmopol Reckoning}}: no golden age can last forever. Ecological catastrophe, social upheaval, collapse of the world economy and collapse of the infrastructure add new challenges for the characters.
* {{Cosmopol Retribution}}: new powers rise and cities come under siege as ideas fight ideas and buried secrets come to light.
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* {{Century of Progress}}: a bright world, a golden age... anything you want can be yours, for a price.
* {{Cosmopol Reckoning}}: no golden age can last forever. Ecological catastrophe, social upheaval, collapse of the world economy and collapse of the infrastructure add new challenges for the characters.
* {{Cosmopol Retribution}}: new powers rise and cities come under siege as ideas fight ideas and buried secrets come to light.
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* {{Bio Punk}}: Genetic engineering takes place in the background of the first two settings, then center stage in ''Retribution''.
* {{City of Adventure}}: Either of the two cities presently described in the three settings
* {{City Noir}}: Cosmopol's street level and Undercity... and ''all'' of Neustadt.
* {{Cool Airship}}: All of the ships made by Stahl Luftschifftechnik qualify as this.
* {{Code Name}}: Most characters will have a nickname or callsign they use in their "Night Job".
* {{The Cracker}}: Arguably the most powerful character type.
* {{Diesel Punk}}: ''And how.'' Crams as much 1920s-30s {{Zeerust}} {{schizo tech}} into one setting as the author seems to be able to fit.
* {{Everybody Smokes}}: More, you gain temporary boosts to a number of attributes by smoking. The only penalty is against your income and self-discipline if you become addicted.
* {{Fantastic Racism}}: In ''Reckoning'', there is widespread discrimination against [[GattacaBabies "gene jobs"]], which in ''Retribution'' erupts into [[FinalSolution attempted genocide]] (and brings about the titular retribution).
* {{City of Adventure}}: Either of the two cities presently described in the three settings
* {{City Noir}}: Cosmopol's street level and Undercity... and ''all'' of Neustadt.
* {{Cool Airship}}: All of the ships made by Stahl Luftschifftechnik qualify as this.
* {{Code Name}}: Most characters will have a nickname or callsign they use in their "Night Job".
* {{The Cracker}}: Arguably the most powerful character type.
* {{Diesel Punk}}: ''And how.'' Crams as much 1920s-30s {{Zeerust}} {{schizo tech}} into one setting as the author seems to be able to fit.
* {{Everybody Smokes}}: More, you gain temporary boosts to a number of attributes by smoking. The only penalty is against your income and self-discipline if you become addicted.
* {{Fantastic Racism}}: In ''Reckoning'', there is widespread discrimination against [[GattacaBabies "gene jobs"]], which in ''Retribution'' erupts into [[FinalSolution attempted genocide]] (and brings about the titular retribution).
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* {{Bio Punk}}: Genetic engineering takes place in the background Taken to some of the first two settings, then center stage in ''Retribution''.
its ugliest ends.
* {{City of Adventure}}:Either of the two cities presently described in the three settings
The setting is more or less self-contained, focusing on Neustadt.
* {{City Noir}}:Cosmopol's street level and Undercity... and ''all'' of Neustadt.
* {{Cool Airship}}:All of the ships made by Stahl Luftschifftechnik qualify Likely to be used as this.
a bomb...
* {{Code Name}}:Most characters will have a nickname or callsign they use Everyone in their "Night Job".
the ''Zero One'' uses a callsign.
* {{The Cracker}}:Arguably Even {{La Resistance}} needs its crackers. How else are you going to sabotage robot armies?
** ''Zero One'' cell leader Keller is this.
* {{Diesel Punk}}: Takes a distinctly Diesel Weird War turn, with themost powerful character type.emphasis on ideological war, the ''Zero One'' resemblance to the Polish partisans and the sheer number of bunker scenes.
* {{Diesel Punk}}: ''And how.'' Crams as much 1920s-30s {{Zeerust}} {{schizo tech}} into one setting as the author seems to be able to fit.
* {{Everybody Smokes}}: More, you gain temporary boosts Somewhat averted in that cigarettes are now hard to a number of attributes by smoking. The only penalty is against your income get, and self-discipline if you become addicted.
considered a luxury item.
* {{Fantastic Racism}}:In ''Reckoning'', there is widespread discrimination against [[GattacaBabies "gene jobs"]], which in ''Retribution'' erupts into [[FinalSolution attempted genocide]] (and brings about the titular retribution).This game runs on it.
* {{City of Adventure}}:
* {{City Noir}}:
* {{Cool Airship}}:
* {{Code Name}}:
* {{The Cracker}}:
** ''Zero One'' cell leader Keller is this.
* {{Diesel Punk}}: Takes a distinctly Diesel Weird War turn, with the
* {{Fantastic Racism}}:
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* {{Homemade Inventions}}: A major point of the game. And in ''Reckoning'' and thereafter, the very economy is based on it.
* {{Kafka Komedy}}: Everyday life in Neustadt
* {{La Resistance}}: The {{Playful Hacker}} organization ''Zero One'' militarizes into this in ''Retribution''
* {{Kafka Komedy}}: Everyday life in Neustadt
* {{La Resistance}}: The {{Playful Hacker}} organization ''Zero One'' militarizes into this in ''Retribution''
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* {{Homemade Inventions}}: A major point of the game. And in ''Reckoning'' and thereafter, the very economy is based on it.
game.
* {{Kafka Komedy}}: Everyday life inNeustadt
Neustadt, prior to the Siege
* {{La Resistance}}: The{{Playful Hacker}} organization ''Zero One'' militarizes into this in ''Retribution''One''. And how.
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* {{La Resistance}}: The
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* {{Motherly Scientist}}: This would be Dr. Taryn Stone.
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* {{Playful Hacker}}: The ''Zero One'' are a whole brotherhood of them.
* {{Privately Owned Society}}: Both Cosmopol and Neustadt, up until ''Retribution''.
* {{Objectivism}}: The dominant philosophy of the universe.
* {{Privately Owned Society}}: Both Cosmopol and Neustadt, up until ''Retribution''.
* {{Objectivism}}: The dominant philosophy of the universe.
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* {{The Roaring Twenties}}: The world has been stuck here for a hundred years, while progress marches on.
* {{Robot Master}}: Dr. Taryn Stone again.
* {{Robot Master}}: Dr. Taryn Stone again.
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* {{Technology Porn}}: Somewhat averted. The world is as advanced as our normal one, but the tech ''looks'' like 1930s technology.
* {{Took A Level In Badass}}: Several characters do this as of ''Retribution''... the alternative would be to die.
* {{Took A Level In Badass}}: Several characters do this as of ''Retribution''... the alternative would be to die.
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* {{What Measure is a Non Super}}: Grappled with in ''Retribution''. And how.
* {{Zeerust}}: The Future will be Art Deco.
* {{Zeppelins from Another World}}: Arguably averted in that the giant robots and mile high skyscrapers would establish this as an alternate future.
* {{Zeerust}}: The Future will be Art Deco.
* {{Zeppelins from Another World}}: Arguably averted in that the giant robots and mile high skyscrapers would establish this as an alternate future.
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* {{What Measure is a Non Super}}: Grappled with in ''Retribution''. And how.
* {{Zeerust}}: The Future will be Art Deco.
* {{Zeppelins from Another World}}: Arguably averted in that the giant robots and mile high skyscrapers would establish this as an alternate future.how.
* {{Zeerust}}: The Future will be Art Deco.
* {{Zeppelins from Another World}}: Arguably averted in that the giant robots and mile high skyscrapers would establish this as an alternate future.
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* {{Buffy Speak}}: Keller. Partly justified in that he is not a native English speaker.
** Hand me the twisty thing. The thing which twists.
*** Averted in ''Retribution'', as much of this arc takes place in his native Germany.
* {{Code Name}}: The rule for "night jobbers"
** Dieter Kohl - Keller
** Tsuritsa Zima - Maus
** Tatyana Silova - Titan
** Alexander Blake - Shine
** Dava Gruenwald - Barrett
* {{Germanic Depressives}}: Keller.
* {{Genre Savvy}}: Characters commonly reference (in an oblique fashion) the popular culture of our universe.
** This will go over as well as a cowboy serial set in outer space. I give it twelve or thirteen.
** Hand me the twisty thing. The thing which twists.
*** Averted in ''Retribution'', as much of this arc takes place in his native Germany.
* {{Code Name}}: The rule for "night jobbers"
** Dieter Kohl - Keller
** Tsuritsa Zima - Maus
** Tatyana Silova - Titan
** Alexander Blake - Shine
** Dava Gruenwald - Barrett
* {{Germanic Depressives}}: Keller.
* {{Genre Savvy}}: Characters commonly reference (in an oblique fashion) the popular culture of our universe.
** This will go over as well as a cowboy serial set in outer space. I give it twelve or thirteen.
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* {{Buffy Speak}}: Keller. Partly justified in that Keller when he is not a native English speaker.
** Hand me the twisty thing. The thing which twists.
*** Averted in ''Retribution'', as much of this arc takes place in his native Germany.
* {{Code Name}}: The rule for "night jobbers"
** Dieter Kohl - Keller
** Tsuritsa Zima - Maus
** Tatyana Silova - Titan
** Alexander Blake - Shine
** Dava Gruenwald - Barrett
* {{Germanic Depressives}}: Keller.
* {{Genre Savvy}}: Characters commonly reference (in an oblique fashion) the popular culture of our universe.
** This will go over as well as a cowboy serial set in outer space. I give it twelve or thirteen.speaks English.
** Hand me the twisty thing. The thing which twists.
*** Averted in ''Retribution'', as much of this arc takes place in his native Germany.
* {{Code Name}}: The rule for "night jobbers"
** Dieter Kohl - Keller
** Tsuritsa Zima - Maus
** Tatyana Silova - Titan
** Alexander Blake - Shine
** Dava Gruenwald - Barrett
* {{Germanic Depressives}}: Keller.
* {{Genre Savvy}}: Characters commonly reference (in an oblique fashion) the popular culture of our universe.
** This will go over as well as a cowboy serial set in outer space. I give it twelve or thirteen.
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* {{Snark Knight}}: Keller.
* {{Took A Level in Badass}}: Keller. After being the snarky, combat-incompetent hacker and often {{The Load}} during the first two settings, he returns in ''Retribution'' as ''a cell leader in {{La Resistance}}''... complete with an {{Expository Hairstyle Change}}.
* {{TropeMobile}}: Keller's motorcycle, named "Kafka". Also qualifies as {{The Alleged Car}}.
** "Why did I name my motor cycle Kafka, you ask? What kind of question is that? I had to file my renewal in QUADRUPLICATE... I need this too?"
* {{Took A Level in Badass}}: Keller. After being the snarky, combat-incompetent hacker and often {{The Load}} during the first two settings, he returns in ''Retribution'' as ''a cell leader in {{La Resistance}}''... complete with an {{Expository Hairstyle Change}}.
* {{TropeMobile}}: Keller's motorcycle, named "Kafka". Also qualifies as {{The Alleged Car}}.
** "Why did I name my motor cycle Kafka, you ask? What kind of question is that? I had to file my renewal in QUADRUPLICATE... I need this too?"