Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1,2 (click to see context) from:
Rise (A Warhammer Fantasy Game ), is a long running forum quest on the Spacebattles, that follows the life and trials of a fresh new Bretonnian Knight Errant, Hadrian Rutheen, from Games Workshop's Warhammer Fantasy universe. As he embarks on a life of Chivalry and adventure as he tries to raise his family to new heights and standing, all the while trying to live up to the ideals and creed of his family and father as a just risen noble house in a land of old noble blood.
to:
Rise (A Warhammer Fantasy Game ), is a long running forum quest ForumQuest on the Spacebattles, Website/{{Spacebattles}}, that follows the life and trials of a fresh new Bretonnian Knight Errant, Hadrian Rutheen, from Games Workshop's Warhammer Fantasy universe. As he embarks on a life of Chivalry and adventure as he tries to raise his family to new heights and standing, all the while trying to live up to the ideals and creed of his family and father as a just risen noble house in a land of old noble blood.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Renamed/cleanup, cutting misuse/ZCEs/zero-context potholes/unclear examples.
Deleted line(s) 19 (click to see context) :
* BloodBrothers: House Rutheen and Clan Hurgr, after their current heads took blood oaths of brotherhood.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Hundred Percent Adoration Rating was renamed Universally Beloved Leader. If an example is removed it probably doesn't fit as written
Deleted line(s) 23 (click to see context) :
* HundredPercentAdorationRating: Hadrian is loved and respected by all his subjects. [[spoiler: Even to the point of happily following him and his family into exile.]]
Changed line(s) 29,30 (click to see context) from:
----
to:
----
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 29 (click to see context) :
* UnluckilyLucky: Ever Rutheen male has had this so bad, that it is now just called the "Rutheen Luck" by those who know them. Hailing to all, their ability to always run into dark cults, foul plots, and general unpleasantness anywhere.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 12,17 (click to see context) from:
* BadassNickname: During Hadrian's travels and adventures, he has done both great deeds and song worthy quest. An Through such, his acquired many names of fame, and though his tale is not over yet, here are but the names he has gained since his beginnings.
** Hound of the Lady: This name was gained for Hadrian's deeds in his homeland, for his skill and ability to find evil and Chaos no matter how they tried to hide and always able to put it to the blade once found.
** Blade Dancer: This title was earn from his skill with twin blades and how when he fights with such, all before are cut to ribbons by his passing as his blades become but blurs.
** Truthfinder: Earned for his ability to sense falsehood in both the spoken and unspoken lies of the word and ability to always get to the truth of things when present.
** Verena´s Chosen:Given to him by the faithful of Verena, for the favor his goddess graces him with her blessings and how he exalts her teachings with ease.
** Dragon-Friend: So called because of his deep and close bond with the dragon Ignis and how often one cannot see one without the other near by.
** Hound of the Lady: This name was gained for Hadrian's deeds in his homeland, for his skill and ability to find evil and Chaos no matter how they tried to hide and always able to put it to the blade once found.
** Blade Dancer: This title was earn from his skill with twin blades and how when he fights with such, all before are cut to ribbons by his passing as his blades become but blurs.
** Truthfinder: Earned for his ability to sense falsehood in both the spoken and unspoken lies of the word and ability to always get to the truth of things when present.
** Verena´s Chosen:Given to him by the faithful of Verena, for the favor his goddess graces him with her blessings and how he exalts her teachings with ease.
** Dragon-Friend: So called because of his deep and close bond with the dragon Ignis and how often one cannot see one without the other near by.
to:
* BadassNickname: During Hadrian's travels and adventures, he has done both great deeds and song completed quests worthy quest. An of song. Through such, his such action, he has acquired many names of fame, titles and though his tale is not over yet, here are but some of the names he has gained since his beginnings.
** Hound of the Lady: This name was gained for Hadrian's deeds in his homeland, for his skill and ability to find evil and Chaosno matter how wherever they tried to hide hid and always able to put it to the blade sword once found.
** Blade Dancer: This title was earn from his skill with twinblades and how when he fights with such, all blades. All enemies before are him cut to ribbons by his passing as his blades become but blurs.
** Truthfinder: Earned for his ability to sense falsehood in both the spoken and unspoken lies of the word and the ability to always get to the truth of things when present.
** [[spoiler: Verena´s Chosen:Given to him by the faithful ofVerena, Verena for the favor favour his goddess graces him with her blessings and how he exalts her teachings with ease.
ease.]]
** Dragon-Friend: So called because of his deep and close bond with the dragonIgnis and how often one cannot see one without the other near by. Ignis.
** Hound of the Lady: This name was gained for Hadrian's deeds in his homeland, for his skill and ability to find evil and Chaos
** Blade Dancer: This title was earn from his skill with twin
** Truthfinder: Earned for his ability to sense falsehood in both the spoken and unspoken lies of the word and the ability to always get to the truth of things when present.
** [[spoiler: Verena´s Chosen:Given to him by the faithful of
** Dragon-Friend: So called because of his deep and close bond with the dragon
Changed line(s) 21 (click to see context) from:
* CodeOfHonour: Rutheen family Creed. Family, Duty, Honour.
to:
* CodeOfHonour: The Rutheen family Creed. creed: Family, Duty, Honour.
Changed line(s) 23,25 (click to see context) from:
* HundredPercentAdorationRating: Hadrian is loved and respect by all his subjects. [[spoiler: Even to the point of happily following him and his family into exile with but a word.]]
* RandomEncounters: Since it seems Hadrian can never go a dozen steps out his home without always running to something trying to kill him, trying to kill someone he needs to help or he needs to kill.
* SuicideMission: [[spoiler: The quest to Hurgr's old skaven infested clan hold, to recover the genesis stone.]]
* RandomEncounters: Since it seems Hadrian can never go a dozen steps out his home without always running to something trying to kill him, trying to kill someone he needs to help or he needs to kill.
* SuicideMission: [[spoiler: The quest to Hurgr's old skaven infested clan hold, to recover the genesis stone.]]
to:
* HundredPercentAdorationRating: Hadrian is loved and respect respected by all his subjects. [[spoiler: Even to the point of happily following him and his family into exile with but a word.exile.]]
* RandomEncounters:Since it It seems Hadrian can never go a dozen steps out his home without always running to something trying to kill him, trying to kill someone he needs to help or he needs to kill.
* SuicideMission: [[spoiler: The quest to Hurgr's old skaven infested clanhold, to recover the genesis stone.]] hold was considered one.]]
* RandomEncounters:
* SuicideMission: [[spoiler: The quest to Hurgr's old skaven infested clan
Changed line(s) 27 (click to see context) from:
* SwampsAreEvil: As so far every one has either been filled with goblins, trolls or undead of all kinds just looking to kill everyone.
to:
* SwampsAreEvil: As so So far every single one has either been filled with goblins, trolls trolls, or undead of all kinds just looking to kill everyone.
Changed line(s) 29 (click to see context) from:
* UnluckilyLucky: Ever Rutheen male has had this so bad, that it is now just called the "Rutheen Luck" by those who know them. Hailing to all, their ability to always run into dark cults, foul plots and just general unpleasantness anywhere, yet always having the ability to walk away from such with the former almost always slain after bumping into it for the better of all.
to:
* UnluckilyLucky: Ever Rutheen male has had this so bad, that it is now just called the "Rutheen Luck" by those who know them. Hailing to all, their ability to always run into dark cults, foul plots plots, and just general unpleasantness anywhere, yet always having the ability to walk away from such with the former almost always slain after bumping into it for the better of all. anywhere.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 11 (click to see context) from:
* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: In Bretonnia, the nobles of the land retain their right to rule not by gold and men. But by their personal strength of arms and the steel in their spines. With each rank after the last, requiring more feats of valor and martial might to be attained, until one is not but a medieval demi-god of war.
to:
* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: In Bretonnia, the nobles of the land retain their right to rule not by gold and men. But men, but by their personal strength of arms and the steel in their spines. With each Each consecutively higher rank after the last, requiring requires more feats of valor valour and martial might to be attained, attained until one is not nought but a medieval demi-god demigod of war. war.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 10 (click to see context) from:
* ArchEnemy: Reginald Callen, Sir Callen knight of the realm, Father of Rik Callen,[[spoiler: Chaos Knight of tzeentch, Shadow Mage and Ex-Earl.]]
to:
* ArchEnemy: Reginald Callen, Sir Callen knight Callen, Knight of the realm, Father Realm, father of Rik Callen,[[spoiler: Chaos Callen, [[spoiler:Chaos Knight of tzeentch, Shadow Mage and Ex-Earl.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* UnluckilyLucky: Ever Rutheen male has had this so bad, that it is now just called the "Rutheen Luck" by those who know them. Hailing to all, their ability to always run into dark cults, foul plots and just general unpleasantness anywhere, yet always having the ability to walk away from such with the former almost always slain after bumping into it for the better of all.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 20 (click to see context) from:
* BondCreatures: Ignis
to:
* BondCreatures: IgnisIgnis the dragon.
Changed line(s) 24 (click to see context) from:
* RandomEncounters: Hadrian's belief and willingness to always do right by his people regardless of the odds and his luck to always stumble upon cults, monsters, dark mages and other foul stuff. Have gotten so bad that it's now both a running gag by his finds that he is "lucky" and that when nothing goes wrong for any real length of time, he has no idea how to relax.
to:
* RandomEncounters: Hadrian's belief and willingness to Since it seems Hadrian can never go a dozen steps out his home without always do right by his people regardless of the odds and his luck to always stumble upon cults, monsters, dark mages and other foul stuff. Have gotten so bad that it's now both a running gag by his finds that to something trying to kill him, trying to kill someone he is "lucky" and that when nothing goes wrong for any real length of time, needs to help or he has no idea how needs to relax.kill.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 22 (click to see context) from:
* CoolHorse: Brandon [[spoiler: Fire breathing horse of DOOM and slayer of treemen.]]
to:
* CoolHorse: Brandon [[spoiler: Fire breathing horse of DOOM and slayer of treemen.]]]]
Changed line(s) 24 (click to see context) from:
* ThickerThanWater: There is a reason Family is the first part of the Rutheen creed.
to:
* ThickerThanWater: There is a reason Family is the first part RandomEncounters: Hadrian's belief and willingness to always do right by his people regardless of the Rutheen creed. odds and his luck to always stumble upon cults, monsters, dark mages and other foul stuff. Have gotten so bad that it's now both a running gag by his finds that he is "lucky" and that when nothing goes wrong for any real length of time, he has no idea how to relax.
Added DiffLines:
* ThickerThanWater: There is a reason Family is the first part of the Rutheen creed.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 13,14 (click to see context) from:
** Hound of the Lady: He gained this name for his deeds in his homeland, for his skill and ability to find evil and chaos no matter how they tried to hide and always able to put it to the blade once found.
** Blade Dancer: This title was earn from his skill with twin blades and how when he fights with such all before are cut to ribbons by his passing as his blades become but blurs.
** Blade Dancer: This title was earn from his skill with twin blades and how when he fights with such all before are cut to ribbons by his passing as his blades become but blurs.
to:
** Hound of the Lady: He This name was gained this name for his Hadrian's deeds in his homeland, for his skill and ability to find evil and chaos Chaos no matter how they tried to hide and always able to put it to the blade once found.
** Blade Dancer: This title was earn from his skill with twin blades and how when he fights withsuch such, all before are cut to ribbons by his passing as his blades become but blurs.
** Blade Dancer: This title was earn from his skill with twin blades and how when he fights with
Changed line(s) 26 (click to see context) from:
* SuperBreedingProgram: The Goddess of Bretonnia, The Lady plan and reason behind so directly blessing her knights and lords.
to:
* SuperBreedingProgram: The Goddess of Bretonnia, The Lady Lady's plan and reason behind so directly blessing her knights and lords.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* SuperBreedingProgram: The Goddess of Bretonnia, The Lady plan and reason behind so directly blessing her knights and lords.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* SuicideMission: [[spoiler: The quest to Hurgr's old skaven infested clan hold, to recover the genesis stone.]]
* SwampsAreEvil: As so far every one has either been filled with goblins, trolls or undead of all kinds just looking to kill everyone.
* SwampsAreEvil: As so far every one has either been filled with goblins, trolls or undead of all kinds just looking to kill everyone.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* BloodBrothers: House Rutheen and Clan Hurgr, after their current heads took blood oaths of brotherhood.
Added DiffLines:
* CodeOfHonour: Rutheen family Creed. Family, Duty, Honour.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* BondCreatures: Ignis
* CoolHorse: Brandon [[spoiler: Fire breathing horse of DOOM and slayer of treemen.]]
* CoolHorse: Brandon [[spoiler: Fire breathing horse of DOOM and slayer of treemen.]]
Changed line(s) 20 (click to see context) from:
to:
* ThickerThanWater: There is a reason Family is the first part of the Rutheen creed.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 13,19 (click to see context) from:
* Hound of the Lady: He gained this name for his deeds in his homeland, for his skill and ability to find evil and chaos no matter how they tried to hide and always able to put it to the blade once found.
* Blade Dancer: This title was earn from his skill with twin blades and how when he fights with such all before are cut to ribbons by his passing as his blades become but blurs.
* Truthfinder: Earned for his ability to sense falsehood in both the spoken and unspoken lies of the word and ability to always get to the truth of things when present.
* Verena´s Chosen:Given to him by the faithful of Verena, for the favor his goddess graces him with her blessings and how he exalts her teachings with ease.
* Dragon-Friend: So called because of his deep and close bond with the dragon Ignis and how often one cannot see one without the other near by.
* Dwarf-Friend: Earned after he saved his friend Hurgr and his clan from extinction by Skaven and then later when he went back with them to their lost hold to help recovery a lost clan artifact.
* Blade Dancer: This title was earn from his skill with twin blades and how when he fights with such all before are cut to ribbons by his passing as his blades become but blurs.
* Truthfinder: Earned for his ability to sense falsehood in both the spoken and unspoken lies of the word and ability to always get to the truth of things when present.
* Verena´s Chosen:Given to him by the faithful of Verena, for the favor his goddess graces him with her blessings and how he exalts her teachings with ease.
* Dragon-Friend: So called because of his deep and close bond with the dragon Ignis and how often one cannot see one without the other near by.
* Dwarf-Friend: Earned after he saved his friend Hurgr and his clan from extinction by Skaven and then later when he went back with them to their lost hold to help recovery a lost clan artifact.
to:
* HundredPercentAdorationRating: Hadrian is loved and respect by all his subjects. [[spoiler: Even to the point of happily following him and his family into exile with but a word.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: In Bretonnia, the nobles of the land retain their right to rule not by gold and men. But by their personal strength of arms and the steel in their spines. With each rank after the last, requiring more feats of valor and martial might to be attained, until one is not but a medieval demi-god of war.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ArchEnemy: Reginald Callen, Sir Callen knight of the realm, Father of Rik Callen,[[spoiler: Chaos Knight of tzeentch, Shadow Mage and Ex-Earl.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 20 (click to see context) :
* http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/ForumRolePlays
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 10 (click to see context) :
Added DiffLines:
* http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/ForumRolePlays
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 11 (click to see context) from:
BadassNickname: During Hadrian's travels and adventures, he has done both great deeds and song worthy quest. An Through such, his acquired many names of fame, and though his tale is not over yet, here are but the names he has gained since his beginnings.
to:
* BadassNickname: During Hadrian's travels and adventures, he has done both great deeds and song worthy quest. An Through such, his acquired many names of fame, and though his tale is not over yet, here are but the names he has gained since his beginnings.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 5,6 (click to see context) from:
http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/rise-a-warhammer-fantasy-game-9.302692/ <-- Current
to:
http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/rise-a-warhammer-fantasy-game-9.302692/ com/threads/rise-a-warhammer-fantasy-game-10-the-black-prince.339597/ <-- Current
Added DiffLines:
----
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 5,6 (click to see context) :
Here is a link to the current thread and the story archive on Spacebattles.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 7 (click to see context) from:
http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/rise-a-warhammer-fantasy-game-9.302692/ <-- Current Ongoing Thread
to:
http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/rise-a-warhammer-fantasy-game-9.302692/ <-- Current Ongoing ThreadCurrent
Changed line(s) 16 (click to see context) from:
* Verena´s Chosen:Given to him by the faithful of Verena, for the favor his goddess graces him with her blessings and how he exalts her teaches with ease.
to:
* Verena´s Chosen:Given to him by the faithful of Verena, for the favor his goddess graces him with her blessings and how he exalts her teaches teachings with ease.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 17,18 (click to see context) from:
* Dragon-Friend: So called because of his deep and close bond with the dragon Ignis and how often one can not see one without the other near by.
* Dwarf-Friend: Earned after he saved his friend Hurgr and his clan from extinction by Skaven and then later when he went back with then to their lost hold to help recovery a lost clan artifact.
* Dwarf-Friend: Earned after he saved his friend Hurgr and his clan from extinction by Skaven and then later when he went back with then to their lost hold to help recovery a lost clan artifact.
to:
* Dragon-Friend: So called because of his deep and close bond with the dragon Ignis and how often one can not cannot see one without the other near by.
* Dwarf-Friend: Earned after he saved his friend Hurgr and his clan from extinction by Skaven and then later when he went back withthen them to their lost hold to help recovery a lost clan artifact.
* Dwarf-Friend: Earned after he saved his friend Hurgr and his clan from extinction by Skaven and then later when he went back with
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 10 (click to see context) from:
!!Tropes in this roleplay include:
to:
!!Tropes in this roleplay include:include:
BadassNickname: During Hadrian's travels and adventures, he has done both great deeds and song worthy quest. An Through such, his acquired many names of fame, and though his tale is not over yet, here are but the names he has gained since his beginnings.
* Hound of the Lady: He gained this name for his deeds in his homeland, for his skill and ability to find evil and chaos no matter how they tried to hide and always able to put it to the blade once found.
* Blade Dancer: This title was earn from his skill with twin blades and how when he fights with such all before are cut to ribbons by his passing as his blades become but blurs.
* Truthfinder: Earned for his ability to sense falsehood in both the spoken and unspoken lies of the word and ability to always get to the truth of things when present.
* Verena´s Chosen:Given to him by the faithful of Verena, for the favor his goddess graces him with her blessings and how he exalts her teaches with ease.
* Dragon-Friend: So called because of his deep and close bond with the dragon Ignis and how often one can not see one without the other near by.
* Dwarf-Friend: Earned after he saved his friend Hurgr and his clan from extinction by Skaven and then later when he went back with then to their lost hold to help recovery a lost clan artifact.
BadassNickname: During Hadrian's travels and adventures, he has done both great deeds and song worthy quest. An Through such, his acquired many names of fame, and though his tale is not over yet, here are but the names he has gained since his beginnings.
* Hound of the Lady: He gained this name for his deeds in his homeland, for his skill and ability to find evil and chaos no matter how they tried to hide and always able to put it to the blade once found.
* Blade Dancer: This title was earn from his skill with twin blades and how when he fights with such all before are cut to ribbons by his passing as his blades become but blurs.
* Truthfinder: Earned for his ability to sense falsehood in both the spoken and unspoken lies of the word and ability to always get to the truth of things when present.
* Verena´s Chosen:Given to him by the faithful of Verena, for the favor his goddess graces him with her blessings and how he exalts her teaches with ease.
* Dragon-Friend: So called because of his deep and close bond with the dragon Ignis and how often one can not see one without the other near by.
* Dwarf-Friend: Earned after he saved his friend Hurgr and his clan from extinction by Skaven and then later when he went back with then to their lost hold to help recovery a lost clan artifact.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
Rise (A Warhammer Fantasy Game ), is a long running forum quest on the Spacebattles, that follows the life and trials of a fresh new Bretonnian Knight Errant, Hadrian Rutheen, from Games Workshop's Warhammer Fantasy universe. As he embarks on a life of Chivalry and adventure as he tries to raise his family to new heights and standing, all the while trying to live up to the ideals and creed of his family and father as a just risen noble house in a land of old noble blood.
Family, Duty, Honour.
Here is a link to the current thread and the story archive on Spacebattles.
http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/rise-a-warhammer-fantasy-game-9.302692/ <-- Current Ongoing Thread
http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/rise-quest-story-archive.273329/ <-- Just the Story
!!Tropes in this roleplay include:
Family, Duty, Honour.
Here is a link to the current thread and the story archive on Spacebattles.
http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/rise-a-warhammer-fantasy-game-9.302692/ <-- Current Ongoing Thread
http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/rise-quest-story-archive.273329/ <-- Just the Story
!!Tropes in this roleplay include: