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"Pinestar's Secret": During the events of ''[[Recap/WarriorCatsBluestarsProphecy Bluestar's Prophecy]]'', Lionpaw catches Pinestar going to a Twoleg nest, Pinestar tells him that there's a troublesome kittypet there that he was warning away. One day, [=RiverClan=] invades [=ThunderClan=] territory, but Pinestar is nowhere to be found. Lionpaw checks the Twoleg nest, and sure enough, that's where Pinestar is; Pinestar confesses that he wants to become a kittypet, and Lionpaw insists that Pinestar needs to tell the Clan. So he returns to camp and makes the announcement, and predicts that the Clans will probably want to make a new law in the warrior code. Just before leaving, he tells Lionpaw that when he recieves his warrior name, to tell the new leader Sunfall that he would have named him Lionheart.
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"Pinestar's Secret": During the events of ''[[Recap/WarriorCatsBluestarsProphecy Bluestar's Prophecy]]'', Lionpaw catches Pinestar going to a Twoleg nest, Pinestar tells him that there's a troublesome kittypet there that he was warning away. One day, [=RiverClan=] invades [=ThunderClan=] territory, but Pinestar is nowhere to be found. Lionpaw checks the Twoleg nest, and sure enough, that's where Pinestar is; Pinestar confesses that he wants to become a kittypet, and Lionpaw insists that Pinestar needs to tell the Clan. So he returns to camp and makes the announcement, and predicts that the Clans will probably want to make a new law in the warrior code. Just before leaving, he tells Lionpaw that when he recieves receives his warrior name, to tell the new leader Sunfall that he would have named him Lionheart.
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** The deputy-becomes-leader rule started after there was a case where a leader selected his son as his successor. The son led his Clan into a needless fight, where half the cats disagreed with his choice and those that did listen nearly drowned. He realized that the deputy, due to her rank, had more experience in being in charge of the Clan.
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** The deputy-becomes-leader rule started after there was a case where a leader selected his son as his successor. The son led his Clan into a needless fight, where half the cats disagreed with his choice and those that did listen nearly drowned. He Another warrior realized that the deputy, due to her rank, had more experience in being in charge of the Clan.
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* AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: Two [=ShadowClan=] cats decide to fight to see who's better and more deserving of the leadership position.
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* AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: Two [=ShadowClan=] cats decide to fight to see who's better and more deserving of the leadership position. Subverted, as in this particular case, they both die of wounds the other inflicts.
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* ExcitedShowTitle: "Hunting Fish!"
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Asskicking Equals Authority has been renamed.
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: Two [=ShadowClan=] cats decide to fight to see who's better and more deserving of the leadership position.
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: Two [=ShadowClan=] cats decide to fight to see who's better and more deserving of the leadership position.
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* DeathbedPromotion: As he lies wounded and dying, Badgerpaw asks his mentor Flintfang if [=StarClan=] will make him a warrior, to which the older cat sadly responds in the affirmative. With his last words, Badgerpaw chooses the name "Badgerfang" to honor his mentor.
