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* NamedByTheAdaption: The nameless blonde girl who appeared in the canon first episode of the Owl House is called Stacy here.
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In the present day, Luz Noceda starts her first day of high school, and quickly makes three new friends.
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--> '''Luz''': Ugh, tell me about it! So many important plot points and world building, all thrown out the window! They even made [[Characters/GameOfThronesDaenerysTargaryen the dragon queen]] the bad guy! [[AssPull That came out of nowhere]]! They should have had at least one season to build on that!
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--> '''Luz''': Ugh, tell me about it! So many important plot points and world building, all thrown out the window! They even made [[Characters/GameOfThronesDaenerysTargaryen the dragon queen]] the bad guy! [[AssPull That came out of nowhere]]! They should have had at least one season to build on that!that!
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* CrashingDreams: The beginning of the chapter sees Luz dreaming she's Good Witch Azura, with it coming to an end when her mother wakes her to let her know they were almost to school.
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* AdaptationExpansion: The girls are shown taking their "[=BFFs=]" photo to celebrate the start of high school.
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* ArtisticLicenseArt: Marcy makes a haiku about Azura, but the middle line of the poem has eight syllables; traditional haiku has the middle line contain seven.
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* AdaptationLocationChange: In ''Amphibia'' canon, Anne, Sasha, and Marcy lived in Los Angeles. In this story they live in Hartford, Connecticut, of which Gravesfield is established as a suburb of, allowing them to attend the same school as Luz.
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* AdaptationLocationChange: AdaptationalLocationChange: In ''Amphibia'' canon, Anne, Sasha, and Marcy lived in Los Angeles. In this story they live in Hartford, Connecticut, of which Gravesfield is established as a suburb of, allowing them to attend the same school as Luz.
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*AdaptationalAngstDowngrade: In ''The Owl House'' canon, Luz had a FriendlessBackground and no social circle. Here, she quickly bonds with the ''Amphibia'' trio.
*AdaptationLocationChange: In ''Amphibia'' canon, Anne, Sasha, and Marcy lived in Los Angeles. In this story they live in Hartford, Connecticut, of which Gravesfield is established as a suburb of, allowing them to attend the same school as Luz.
*ArtisticLicenseArt: Marcy makes a haiku about Azura, but the middle line of the poem has eight syllables; traditional haiku has the middle line contain seven.
*CommonalityConnection: Luz quickly bonds with Marcy over a love of Azura, and fantasy in general.
*EveryoneHasStandards: Despite being her pre-CharacterDevelopment self, and thus a somewhat abrasive ControlFreak, Sasha still shows a degree of sympathy for Luz upon learning of her FriendlessBackground.
*ShoutOut: Luz's first meeting with Anne involves the latter almost running her over with her bike, much like in another crossover story, ''Fanfic/TheOwlAndTheFrog''.
*TakeThat: Luz makes some rather snide comments about the ending of the ShowWithinAShow "War of Thrones", which are clearly a jab at ''Series/GameOfThrones''.
--> '''Marcy''': I'm not sure that one really counts. [[OvertookTheManga The series caught up with the books pretty quickly]] so they had to kinda go in a different direction. [[AudienceAlienatingEnding Not to mention the final season]]..."
--> '''Luz''': Ugh, tell me about it! So many important plot points and world building, all thrown out the window! They even made [[Characters/GameOfThronesDaenerysTargaryen the dragon queen]] the bad guy! [[AssPull That came out of nowhere]]! They should have had at least one season to build on that!
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*AdaptationalAngstDowngrade: In ''The Owl House'' canon, Luz had a FriendlessBackground and no social circle. Here, she quickly bonds with the ''Amphibia'' trio.
*AdaptationLocationChange: In ''Amphibia'' canon, Anne, Sasha, and Marcy lived in Los Angeles. In this story they live in Hartford, Connecticut, of which Gravesfield is established as a suburb of, allowing them to attend the same school as Luz.
*ArtisticLicenseArt: Marcy makes a haiku about Azura, but the middle line of the poem has eight syllables; traditional haiku has the middle line contain seven.
*CommonalityConnection: Luz quickly bonds with Marcy over a love of Azura, and fantasy in general.
*EveryoneHasStandards: Despite being her pre-CharacterDevelopment self, and thus a somewhat abrasive ControlFreak, Sasha still shows a degree of sympathy for Luz upon learning of her FriendlessBackground.
*ShoutOut: Luz's first meeting with Anne involves the latter almost running her over with her bike, much like in another crossover story, ''Fanfic/TheOwlAndTheFrog''.
*TakeThat: Luz makes some rather snide comments about the ending of the ShowWithinAShow "War of Thrones", which are clearly a jab at ''Series/GameOfThrones''.
--> '''Marcy''': I'm not sure that one really counts. [[OvertookTheManga The series caught up with the books pretty quickly]] so they had to kinda go in a different direction. [[AudienceAlienatingEnding Not to mention the final season]]..."
--> '''Luz''': Ugh, tell me about it! So many important plot points and world building, all thrown out the window! They even made [[Characters/GameOfThronesDaenerysTargaryen the dragon queen]] the bad guy! [[AssPull That came out of nowhere]]! They should have had at least one season to build on that!
