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[[caption-width-right:350:''[[Film/LaLaLand Here's to the fools who dream.]]'']]
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* RebootSnark: Steven and Peridot watch the first episode of a ''Camp Pining Hearts'' reboot, which they find extremely disappointing. When Steven discovers that he can broadcast his thoughts and dreams on his TV, they get the idea to "reboot the reboot" by having Steven dream up his own version of the show.
-->'''Peridot:''' What is with this Rodrigo guy? He has no charisma!\\
'''Steven:''' And can we talk about this cinematography?\\
'''Peridot:''' ''(growls)'' They changed all the characters, and I don't care about any of them!
-->'''Peridot:''' What is with this Rodrigo guy? He has no charisma!\\
'''Steven:''' And can we talk about this cinematography?\\
'''Peridot:''' ''(growls)'' They changed all the characters, and I don't care about any of them!
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* BlackComedyBurst: While laughing, Peridot mentions one of the characters of ''Camp Pining Hearts'' committing a crime.
-->'''Peridot:''' Jasmine, you just buried a body in the woods, and now you're mad that Rodrigo ''cheated at cards?!''
-->'''Peridot:''' Jasmine, you just buried a body in the woods, and now you're mad that Rodrigo ''cheated at cards?!''
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* BlackComedyBurst: While laughing, Peridot mentions one of the characters of ''Camp Pining Hearts'' committing a crime.
-->'''Peridot:''' Jasmine, you just buried a body in the woods, and now you're mad that Rodrigo ''cheated at cards?!''
-->'''Peridot:''' Jasmine, you just buried a body in the woods, and now you're mad that Rodrigo ''cheated at cards?!''
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* TakeThat: The ''Camp Pining Hearts'' reboot is a thinly-veiled one at the recent trend of reboots that fundamentally change what made the original so popular in the first place. Or, alternately, at unpleasable fans who complain bitterly about every new version for not being identical to the original rather than being able to enjoy them for what they are.
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* TakeThat: The ''Camp Pining Hearts'' reboot is a thinly-veiled one at the recent trend of reboots that fundamentally change what made the original so popular in the first place. Or, alternately, at unpleasable fans who complain bitterly about every new version for not being identical to the original rather than being able to enjoy them for what they are. [[TakeAThirdOption Perhaps even]] [[BreadEggsBreadedEggs both]].
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* TakeThat: The ''Camp Pining Hearts'' reboot is a thinly-veiled one at the recent trend of reboots that fundamentally change what made the original so popular in the first place.
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* TakeThat: The ''Camp Pining Hearts'' reboot is a thinly-veiled one at the recent trend of reboots that fundamentally change what made the original so popular in the first place. Or, alternately, at unpleasable fans who complain bitterly about every new version for not being identical to the original rather than being able to enjoy them for what they are.
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Your Cheating Heart is an index, not a trope.
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* YourCheatingHeart: Peridot's idea of adding conflict to the story is to have Rodrigo find Jasmine kissing Stefan.
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* TakeThat: The ''Camp Pining Hearts'' reboot is a thinly-veiled one at the recent trend of reboots that fundamentally change what made the original so popular in the first place, whether it be to appeal to a completely different audience, update it for the modern day, change certain things to appease certain groups such as MoralGuardians and feminists, or simply exploiting nostalgia for profit.
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* TakeThat: The ''Camp Pining Hearts'' reboot is a thinly-veiled one at the recent trend of reboots that fundamentally change what made the original so popular in the first place, whether it be to appeal to a completely different audience, update it for the modern day, change certain things to appease certain groups such as MoralGuardians and feminists, or simply exploiting nostalgia for profit.place.
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* SuddenlyAlwaysKnewThat: Turns out Peridot picked up storyboarding at some point.
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* SuddenlyAlwaysKnewThat: Turns out Peridot picked up storyboarding {{storyboard}}ing at some point.
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* ColorMotif: When Steven talks to Peridot in his dream in front of a giant test screen, he 's standing in front of a green band while she's in front of a red one (the colour of Steven's shirt before the TimeSkip). A pink band is between them, symbolic both of past events and Steven's own powers to connect people.
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* ColorMotif: When Steven talks to Peridot in his dream in front of a giant test screen, he 's he's standing in front of a green band while she's in front of a red one (the colour of Steven's shirt before the TimeSkip). A pink band is between them, symbolic both of past events and Steven's own powers to connect people.
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'''Peridot:''' Well, duh! I'm good at everything.
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* AuthorAvatar: Steven's ''Camp Pining Hearts'' OC, Stefan, is obviously based on himself. He looks like Steven's adult form, with small resemblances to Steg. Stefan is popular and [[WishFulfillment everyone is happy to accept his help.]]
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* AuthorAvatar: Steven's ''Camp Pining Hearts'' OC, OriginalCharacter, Stefan, is obviously based on himself. He looks like Steven's adult form, with small resemblances to Steg. Stefan is popular and [[WishFulfillment everyone is happy to accept his help.]]
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* TakeThat: The ''Camp Pining Hearts'' reboot is a thinly-veiled one at the recent trend of reboots that fundamentally change what made the original so popular in the first place, whether it be to appeal to a completely different audience, update it for the modern day, change certain things to appease certain groups such as MoralGuardians and feminists, or simply exploiting nostalgia for profit.
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* CopeByPretending: Overlapping with CopeByCreating, Steven makes an indulgent self-insert who's great at helping other people during a period Steven himself feels unneeded. When Peridot suggests rewriting said character to be a homewrecker, Steven is naturally uncomfortable.
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* BileFascination: In Universe. Peridot and Steven hate the ''Camp Pining Hearts'' reboot so much, they end up having a blast laughing at it together.
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* BileFascination: In Universe.InUniverse. Peridot and Steven hate the ''Camp Pining Hearts'' reboot so much, they end up having a blast laughing at it together.
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There's clearly an In Universe case of They Changed It Now It Sucks present as best shown by Peridot's statement.
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* TheyChangedItNowItSucks: InUniverse, Steven and Peridot hate quite a number of changes the ''Camp Pining Hearts'' reboot has done, feeling that the changes have ruined the show. This is exemplified best with Peridot not liking how the reboot has exchanged the entire cast of characters for a new one.
-->'''Peridot:''' Arggh! They changed all the characters and I don't care about any of them!
-->'''Peridot:''' Arggh! They changed all the characters and I don't care about any of them!
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* BileFascination: [[invoked]] Peridot and Steven hate the ''Camp Pining Hearts'' reboot so much, they end up having a blast laughing at it together.
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* BileFascination: [[invoked]] In Universe. Peridot and Steven hate the ''Camp Pining Hearts'' reboot so much, they end up having a blast laughing at it together.
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* BlackComedyBurst: While laughing, Peridot mentions one of the characters of ''Camp Pining Hearts'' committing a crime:
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* BlackComedyBurst: While laughing, Peridot mentions one of the characters of ''Camp Pining Hearts'' committing a crime:crime.
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* ConversationalTroping: Peridot and Steven talk about some elements of story structure when discussing ways to improve the Camp Pining Hearts reboot, including the important of {{conflict}} and the term "{{Foil}}".
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* ConversationalTroping: Peridot and Steven talk about some elements of story structure when discussing ways to improve the Camp Pining Hearts reboot, including the important importantance of {{conflict}} and the term "{{Foil}}".
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* AuthorAvatar: Steven's ''Camp Pining Hearts'' OC, Stefan, is obviously based on himself. He looks like Steven's adult form, with small resemblances to Steg. Stefan is popular and [[ChronicHeroSyndrome everyone is happy to accept his help.]]
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* AuthorAvatar: Steven's ''Camp Pining Hearts'' OC, Stefan, is obviously based on himself. He looks like Steven's adult form, with small resemblances to Steg. Stefan is popular and [[ChronicHeroSyndrome [[WishFulfillment everyone is happy to accept his help.]]
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* ConversationalTroping: Peridot and Steven talk about some elements of story structure when discussing ways to improve the Camp Pining Hearts reboot, including the term "{{Foil}}".
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* ConversationalTroping: Peridot and Steven talk about some elements of story structure when discussing ways to improve the Camp Pining Hearts reboot, including the important of {{conflict}} and the term "{{Foil}}".
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* AuthorAvatar: Steven's ''Camp Pining Hearts'' OC, Stefan, is this. He looks like Steven's adult form, with small resemblances to Steg. Stefan is popular and [[HarsherInHindsight everyone is happy to accept his help.]]
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* AuthorAvatar: Steven's ''Camp Pining Hearts'' OC, Stefan, is this.obviously based on himself. He looks like Steven's adult form, with small resemblances to Steg. Stefan is popular and [[HarsherInHindsight [[ChronicHeroSyndrome everyone is happy to accept his help.]]
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* AuthorAvatar: Steven's ''Camp Pining Hearts'' OC, Stefan, is this. He looks like Steven's adult form, with small resemblances to Steg. Stefan is popular and [[HarsherInHindsight everyone is happy to accept his help.]]
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* HerCodeNameWasMarySue: Steven's first idea of fixing the reboot is to add a new character, Stefan. Stefan is a "hunky lifeguard friend with nice muscles who everyone wants to hang out with".
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* SelfInsertFic: Steven tries to fix the Camp Pining Hearts reboot by dropping in a blatant self-insert. Because self-inserts are usually [[HerCodeNameWasMarySue poorly-written wish fulfillment fantasies]], this only makes the story worse.
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* YourCheatingHeart: Peridot's idea of adding conflict to the story is to have Rodrigo find Jasmine kissing Stefan.
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%%* JumpScare: Dream!Peridot's FaceRevealingTurn, complete with static noise.
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%%* TheyChangedItNowItSucks: InUniverse, this is Steven and (especially) Peridot's reaction to the ''Camp Pining Hearts'' reboot.
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%%* AnAesop: Friends don't need an excuse to hang out.
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-->'''Peridot:''' ''Jasmine, you just buried a body in the woods, and now you're mad that Rodrigo cheated at cards?!''
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-->'''Peridot:''' ''Jasmine, Jasmine, you just buried a body in the woods, and now you're mad that Rodrigo cheated ''cheated at cards?!''
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%%* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Peridot is horrified by her viewing of Steven's last attempt to do their "dream show" right, and reassures him she's happy to hang out with him even without having to do their "remake" of the remake (and calling herself a clod).
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