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* MagicalSecurityCamera: Justified with Ancient tech: the Tower's sensors can provide pristine audio and visual tracking of any location within miles of the city, no camera required.
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* MagicalSecurityCamera: MagicalSecurityCam: Justified with Ancient tech: the Tower's sensors can provide pristine audio and visual tracking of any location within miles of the city, no camera required.
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-->'''Otho''': Mara is perfectly safe now. Tavius has been arrested for the murder of the Lord Protector. And you...''really should have left when you had the chance.''
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-->'''Otho''': Mara is perfectly safe now. Tavius has been arrested for the murder of the Lord Protector. And you...''really should have left when you had the chance.''''
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!!Tropes
* BoldlyComing: Sheppard. [[RunningGag Again.]] He first assumes Mara is visiting him because he was worried "How's your father"... then realises she's there for ''hows your father''
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!!Tropes:
* BoldlyComing: Sheppard. [[RunningGag Again.]] He first assumes Mara is visiting him because he was worried "How's your father"... then realises she's there for
* CutTheJuice: With the ZPM running on fumes and Otho about to commit a massacre, Sheppard has [=McKay=] fire up the stardrive to drop it to zero and render the Tower lifeless, thereby taking away Otho's claim to the throne.
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* DressHitsFloor
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* DressHitsFloorDeusExMachina: The episode more or less serves as an excuse to replenish the drone and Jumper stocks of Atlantis following the battle with the Wraith.
* DressHitsFloor: Mara when she propositions Sheppard.
* DressHitsFloor: Mara when she propositions Sheppard.
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* FeudalFuture
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* FeudalFutureFeudalFuture: The nobles have access to the same tech as Atlantis, but with little understanding of how it functions, so they use it as a big stick to lord over the peasants.
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* MacrossMissileMassacre
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* MacrossMissileMassacreMacrossMissileMassacre: Courtesy of the Ancient drone chair, though Otho's attempt is cut short.
* MagicalSecurityCamera: Justified with Ancient tech: the Tower's sensors can provide pristine audio and visual tracking of any location within miles of the city, no camera required.
* MagicalSecurityCamera: Justified with Ancient tech: the Tower's sensors can provide pristine audio and visual tracking of any location within miles of the city, no camera required.
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-->'''Baldric:''' I’m not so sure this is wise.
-->'''[=McKay=]:''' Okay, I’m not interested in your primitive taboos, okay? It is a dark and scary place but it’s not cursed or haunted or anything like that. It’s perfectly safe.
-->'''Baldric:''' Actually the catacombs are prone to earthquakes.
-->'''[=McKay=]:''' ''(worriedly)'' They are?
* PoisonedWeapons
* ReadyForLovemaking: Mara is quite open about being willing to have sex when she and Sheppard are alone together, complete with DressHitsFloor
* RecycledSet: Justified; the tower and its catacombs are an exact replica of Atlantis.
-->'''[=McKay=]:''' Okay, I’m not interested in your primitive taboos, okay? It is a dark and scary place but it’s not cursed or haunted or anything like that. It’s perfectly safe.
-->'''Baldric:''' Actually the catacombs are prone to earthquakes.
-->'''[=McKay=]:''' ''(worriedly)'' They are?
* PoisonedWeapons
* ReadyForLovemaking: Mara is quite open about being willing to have sex when she and Sheppard are alone together, complete with DressHitsFloor
* RecycledSet: Justified; the tower and its catacombs are an exact replica of Atlantis.
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-->'''Baldric:''' I’m not so sure this is wise.
-->'''[=McKay=]:'''wise.\\
'''[=McKay=]:''' Okay, I’m not interested in your primitive taboos, okay? It is a dark and scary place but it’s not cursed or haunted or anything like that. It’s perfectlysafe.
-->'''Baldric:'''safe.\\
'''Baldric:''' Actually the catacombs are prone toearthquakes.
-->'''[=McKay=]:'''earthquakes.\\
'''[=McKay=]:''' ''(worriedly)'' They are?
*PoisonedWeapons
PoisonedWeapons: Otho is very good with poisons. Shame he's not so good at stabbing.
* ReadyForLovemaking: Mara is quite open about being willing to have sex when she and Sheppard are alone together, complete withDressHitsFloor
DressHitsFloor.
* RecycledSet: Justified; thetower Tower and its catacombs are an exact replica of Ancient city-ship like Atlantis.
-->'''[=McKay=]:'''
'''[=McKay=]:''' Okay, I’m not interested in your primitive taboos, okay? It is a dark and scary place but it’s not cursed or haunted or anything like that. It’s perfectly
-->'''Baldric:'''
'''Baldric:''' Actually the catacombs are prone to
-->'''[=McKay=]:'''
'''[=McKay=]:''' ''(worriedly)'' They are?
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* RecycledSet: Justified; the
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* EvilRedhead: Tavius, the Lord Protector's son, envies his father's throne. Turns out to be a RedHerring, as it was Otho who was actually poisoning the Lord Protector.
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* EvilRedhead: TheEvilPrince: Tavius, the Lord Protector's son, envies his father's throne. Turns out to be a RedHerring, as it was Otho who was actually poisoning the Lord Protector.
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* ReadyForLovemaking: Mala, complete with DressHitsFloor
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* ReadyForLovemaking: Mala, Mara is quite open about being willing to have sex when she and Sheppard are alone together, complete with DressHitsFloor
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* StockEpisodeTitles: 9 uses
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* DecadentCourt
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* DecadentCourtDecadentCourt: The nobles who lord over the people of the planet; hoarding the majority of the food and indulging in JabbaTableManners while the farmers are basically starving.
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* BoldlyComing: Sheppard.
** He first assumes Mara is visiting him because he was worried "How's your father"... then realises she's there for ''hows your father''
** He first assumes Mara is visiting him because he was worried "How's your father"... then realises she's there for ''hows your father''
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* BoldlyComing: Sheppard.
**Sheppard. [[RunningGag Again.]] He first assumes Mara is visiting him because he was worried "How's your father"... then realises she's there for ''hows your father''
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* EvilChancellor: Otho
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* EvilChancellor: OthoOtho the chamberlain initially seems like TheGoodChancellor, but Sheppard's friends question if he can be trusted, and he's plotting to poison his liege and steal the throne for himself.
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* GrewASpine: Mara spends most of the episode afraid to do anything to risk her own survival, but in the climax, she tells Sheppard that Otho is planning to destroy the village where his friends are and gives him a radio to warn them. Later, she yells out a warning when Otho tries to stab Sheppard InTheBack.
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* DeadlyDecadentCourt
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* DeadlyDecadentCourtDecadentCourt
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* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: specifically, operate the Ancient drone weapon. Nobility is synonymous with possessing the ATA gene.
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* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: specifically, Specifically, operate the Ancient drone weapon. Nobility is synonymous with possessing the ATA gene.
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* RecycledSet: justified; the tower and its catacombs are an exact replica of Atlantis.
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* RecycledSet: justified; Justified; the tower and its catacombs are an exact replica of Atlantis.
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard
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* HoistByHisOwnPetardHoistByHisOwnPetard: Otho dies at the hands of his own poison dagger.
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* ThisIsNoTimeToPanic
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* ThisIsNoTimeToPanicThisIsNoTimeToPanic
* WhamLine: When Otho reveals himself to be the mastermind behind the plot:
-->'''Otho''': Mara is perfectly safe now. Tavius has been arrested for the murder of the Lord Protector. And you...''really should have left when you had the chance.''
* WhamLine: When Otho reveals himself to be the mastermind behind the plot:
-->'''Otho''': Mara is perfectly safe now. Tavius has been arrested for the murder of the Lord Protector. And you...''really should have left when you had the chance.''
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* EvilRedhead: Tavius, the Lord Protector's son, desires his father's throne so much that he poisons him slowly in his food.
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* EvilRedhead: Tavius, the Lord Protector's son, desires envies his father's throne so much that he poisons him slowly in his food.throne. Turns out to be a RedHerring, as it was Otho who was actually poisoning the Lord Protector.
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* AmbiguouslyGay: The Lord Protector's son... To clarify, he's very flamboyant in his mannerisms and frilly dressed even for a mediaeval society, not to mention he seems ''very'' concerned his sister has any progeny of her own that could usurp him.
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* TheDandy: The Lord Protector's son... To clarify, he's very flamboyant in his mannerisms and frilly dressed even for a mediaeval society, not to mention he seems ''very'' concerned his sister has any progeny of her own that could usurp him.
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* EvilRedhead: Tavius, the Lord Protector's son, desires his father's throne so much that he poisons him slowly in his food.
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** He first assumes Mara is visiting him because he was worried "How's your father"... then realises she's there for [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean ''hows your father'']]
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** He first assumes Mara is visiting him because he was worried "How's your father"... then realises she's there for [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean ''hows your father'']]father''
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* ReadyForLovemaking: Mala, complete with a touch of NakedInMink
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* ReadyForLovemaking: Mala, complete with a touch of NakedInMinkDressHitsFloor
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* AmbiguouslyGay: The Lord Protector son... To clarify, he's very flamboyant in his mannerisms and frilly dressed even for a mediaeval society, not to mention he seems ''very'' concerned his sister has any progeny of her own that could usurp him.
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* AmbiguouslyGay: The Lord Protector Protector's son... To clarify, he's very flamboyant in his mannerisms and frilly dressed even for a mediaeval society, not to mention he seems ''very'' concerned his sister has any progeny of her own that could usurp him.
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** He first assumes Mara is visiting him because he was worried "Hows "How's your father"... then realises she's there for [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean ''hows your father'']]
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* OfferedTheCrown
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* OfferedTheCrownOfferedTheCrown:
-->'''Dr. Weir:''' They didn't offer you king?\\
'''Lt. Col. Sheppard:''' I turned that down too!
-->'''Dr. Weir:''' They didn't offer you king?\\
'''Lt. Col. Sheppard:''' I turned that down too!
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* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: specifically, operate the Ancient drone weapon. Nobility is synonymous with posessing the ATA gene.
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* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: specifically, operate the Ancient drone weapon. Nobility is synonymous with posessing possessing the ATA gene.
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* AmbiguouslyGay: The Lord Protector son... To clarify, he's very flamboyant in his mannerisms and frilly dressed even for a mediaeval society, not to mention he seems ''very'' concerned his sister has any progeny of her own that could usurp him.
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** He first assumes Mara is visiting him because he was worried "Hows your father"... then realises he's there for [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean ''hows your father'']]
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** He first assumes Mara is visiting him because he was worried "Hows your father"... then realises he's she's there for [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean ''hows your father'']]
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* BoldlyComingBoldlyComing: Sheppard.
** He first assumes Mara is visiting him because he was worried "Hows your father"... then realises he's there for [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean ''hows your father'']]
** He first assumes Mara is visiting him because he was worried "Hows your father"... then realises he's there for [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean ''hows your father'']]
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* JabbaTableManners: The nobles eat like this - made all the more disgusting by its juxtaposition with the all-but-starving farmers who provide the food.
