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* SmugSnake: Malon Controller Vrelk.
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* StandardFemaleGrabArea: B'Elanna is manhandled around the holodeck by Chakotay with little resistance. She's half-Klingon, so he has to grab her by ''both'' upper arms.
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* RocketlessReentry: The episode opens with B'Elanna doing an orbital skydiving simulation.
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* RocketlessReentry: The episode opens with B'Elanna doing an orbital skydiving simulation.from 300 kilometers up, in a thermal suit covered in tiny tiles like a walking space shuttle (before the ProsceniumReveal showing she's actually in a holodeck simulation).
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* RocketlessReentry: The episode opens with B'Elanna doing an orbital skydiving simulation.
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-->'''Tuvok:''' Mr. Paris, that is perhaps the ''most'' illogical statement you've ever made.
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-->'''Tuvok:''' Mr. Paris, that is perhaps the ''most'' [[TooDumbToLive illogical statement you've ever made.made]].
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: The Malon shuttle gets stuck in the gas giant. Instead of offering to help, Janeway just orders ''Voyager'' to leave.
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* RefuseToRescueTheDisliked: The Malon shuttle gets stuck in the gas giant. Instead of offering to help, Janeway just orders ''Voyager'' to leave.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Tuvok gets in a few good ones when discussing the ''Delta Flyer'' with Tom;
-->'''Paris:''' We'll just have to fly in and grab it.
-->'''Tuvok:''' Perhaps you weren't paying attention when the Malon freighter ''imploded''?
-->'''Paris:''' We'll just have to fly in and grab it.
-->'''Tuvok:''' Perhaps you weren't paying attention when the Malon freighter ''imploded''?
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* ThereAreNoTherapists: B'elanna is suffering from severe depression, almost to the point of attempted suicide. Though the rest of the crew knows something's wrong with her, it takes a near-death on the holodeck for them to start discussing it.
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-->'''PARIS:''' Let's face it; Class-two shuttles just don't cut it in the Delta Quadrant. We've needed something bigger and better since we got here.
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* IKnowYouKnowIKnow: Both ''Voyager'' and the Malon know about each other's efforts to build a new shuttle.
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* NeverMyFault: Controller Vrelk blames ''Voyager'' for the loss of the first Malon freighter, ignoring the fact that those Malon were trying to steal a probe from ''Voyager'' and ignored warnings to not fly into the gas giant.
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-->'''Paris:''' Look, we could spend weeks trying to solve this, but we've got a ticking clock. Engines are working, weapons systems are online... I say we launch now and hope for the best.
-->'''Tuvok:''' Mr. Paris, that is perhaps the ''most'' illogical statement you've ever made.
-->'''Tuvok:''' Mr. Paris, that is perhaps the ''most'' illogical statement you've ever made.
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* SelfHarm: B'Elanna turns the Safety Protocols during the various simulations, which leads to serious injuries. When asked about it by Chakotay, she states that she wants to feel something other than numbness.
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* SelfHarm: B'Elanna turns off the Safety Protocols during the various simulations, which leads to serious injuries. When asked about it by Chakotay, she states that she wants to feel something other than numbness.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusinessOOCIsSeriousBusiness: B'Elanna distances herself from her friends and boyfriend and is startlingly quieter than normal.
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* SelfHarm: B'Elanna turns the Safety Protocols during the various simulations, which leads to serious injuries. When asked about it by Chakotay, she states that she wants to feel something other than numbness.
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* MajorInjuryUnderreaction: B'Elanna keeps trying to brush off potentially life-threatening injuries as "a few scrapes," a major sign that all is not well with her.
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'''JANEWAY:''' The Doctor says many of the wounds were treated by someone with the medical expertise of a first-year nursing student.
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'''JANEWAY:''' The Doctor says many of the wounds were treated by someone with the medical expertise of a first-year nursing student.
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* CruelToBeKind: Chakotay forces B'Elanna into one of her holo-programs to make her reveal why she's been out of sorts.
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* SeriesContinuityError: The computer issues a verbal warning every time B'Elanna turns off the holodeck safety protocols, which we didn't hear in "Night" when Seven of Nine did the same thing.
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* SeriesContinuityError: The computer issues a verbal warning every time B'Elanna turns off the holodeck safety protocols, which we didn't hear in "Night" when Seven of Nine did the same thing. It also contradicts ''Series/StarTrekTheNextGeneration'', which says that two senior officers are required to disengage the safeties.
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* FakeActionPrologue: B'Elanna's attempt at orbital skydiving is interrupted by the magic words: [[ProsceniumReveal "Computer, end program."]]
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* RushedIntoService: The ''Delta Flyer'' is still suffering from a microfracture problem when the Malon launch their ship, and Janeway sends them in pursuit.
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* TitleDrop: Every time B'Elanna turns off the holodeck safeties, the computer warns her that doing so "presents '''extreme risk''' of injury."
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* BerserkButton: Averted; everyone is surprised when B'Elanna doesn't react to events she'd normally blow her stack over, like Seven criticizing her design or Janeway pulling her off the ''Delta Flyer'' project.
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* BerserkButton: Averted; {{Averted}}; everyone is surprised when B'Elanna doesn't react to events she'd normally blow her stack over, like Seven criticizing her design or Janeway pulling her off the ''Delta Flyer'' project.
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* RuleOfCool: Lampshaded by Tom Paris, who wants to add 'dynametric tail fins' to the ''Flyer''.
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* RuleOfCool: Lampshaded {{Lampshaded}} by Tom Paris, who wants to add 'dynametric tail fins' to the ''Flyer''.
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* UnfinishedUntestedUsedAnyway: The ''Delta Flyer'' in launched before they've solved the micro-fracture problem. If B'Elanna hadn't insisted on coming along, the crew would be dead.
* WhenSheSmiles at the end of the episode it's a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.
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* UnfinishedUntestedUsedAnyway: The ''Delta Flyer'' in is launched before they've solved the micro-fracture problem. If B'Elanna hadn't insisted on coming along, the crew would be dead.
* WhenSheSmiles at the end of theepisode episode, it's a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.
* WhenSheSmiles at the end of the
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* LensmanArmsRace: Seven scans the Malon vessel with the Astrometrics sensors, and finds they're building their own shuttle, which will be ready before the Delta Flyer.
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* LensmanArmsRace: Seven scans the Malon vessel with the Astrometrics sensors, sensors and finds they're building their own shuttle, which will be ready before the Delta Flyer.''Delta Flyer''.
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* SurvivorsGuiltSurvivorsGuilt: Chakotay mentions this, and it may be B'Elanna is feeling it too.
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* SeriesContinuityError: The computer issues a verbal warning every time B'Elanna turns off the holodeck safety protocols, which we didn't hear in "Night" when Seven of Nine did the same thing.
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* GadgeteerGenius: When the microfractures threaten to rupture the hull on the ''Delta Flyer'', B'Elanna sets about MacGyvering up a forcefield out of various shuttle components.
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* GadgeteerGenius: When the microfractures threaten a bulkhead threatens to rupture the hull on the ''Delta Flyer'', B'Elanna sets about MacGyvering up a forcefield out of various shuttle components.
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* InfiniteSupplies: Enough to build a shuttle of entirely new design. At least this one is a more permanent fixture, being too cool to abandon after every shuttle crash.
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* InfiniteSupplies: Enough to build a shuttle of entirely new design. At least this one is a more permanent fixture, fixture on ''Voyager'', being too cool to abandon after every shuttle crash.
* NoOSHACompliance: B'Elanna keeps shutting off the safety protocols on the holodeck. This nearly kills her when she simulates a flight of the ''Delta Flyer'' and gets knocked unconscious with the program still running. Fortunately Chakotay enters in time to switch the program off.
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* ScrewYourUltimatum: The captain of a Malon freighter holds Voyager responsible for the destruction of another of their ships and announces that they're taking Voyager's new probe as compensation and demands that they immediately leave orbit of the gas giant in which it's currently trapped (presumably under threat of violence). Janeway, never one to take anyone's crap, reminds him that the other ship tried to steal their probe and was destroyed going into the gas giant after it, against Voyager's warnings. When he continues to press the matter, insisting that their people are salvage experts and Voyager has little chance of getting to the probe first in any event, Janeway just smirks and busts out this little gem:
-->"We have a little expertise of our own; we're a very determined crew, so ''my'' suggestion is that ''you'' leave orbit, and in the future, if you come across anything that bears the insignia of the USS ''Voyager'', head in the other direction."
-->"We have a little expertise of our own; we're a very determined crew, so ''my'' suggestion is that ''you'' leave orbit, and in the future, if you come across anything that bears the insignia of the USS ''Voyager'', head in the other direction."
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* ScrewYourUltimatum: The captain of a Malon freighter holds Voyager responsible for the destruction of another of their ships and announces that they're taking Voyager's new probe as compensation and demands that they immediately leave orbit of the gas giant in which it's currently trapped (presumably under threat of violence). Janeway, never one to take anyone's crap, reminds him that the other ship tried to steal their probe and was destroyed going into the gas giant after it, against Voyager's warnings. When he continues to press the matter, insisting that their people are salvage experts and Voyager has little chance of getting to the probe first in any event, Janeway just smirks and busts out this little gem:
-->"We have a little expertise of our own; we're a very determined crew, so ''my'' suggestion is that ''you'' leave orbit, and inthe future, if you come across anything that bears the insignia of the USS ''Voyager'', head in the other direction."above-mentioned BadassBoast.
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-->"We have a little expertise of our own; we're a very determined crew, so ''my'' suggestion is that ''you'' leave orbit, and in
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* LensmanArmsRace: Seven scans the Malon vessel with the Astrometrics sensors, and finds they're building their own vessel, which will be ready before the Delta Flyer.
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* LensmanArmsRace: Seven scans the Malon vessel with the Astrometrics sensors, and finds they're building their own vessel, shuttle, which will be ready before the Delta Flyer.
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-->'''PARIS:''' Behold the Delta Flyer. Ultra-aerodynamic contours, retractable nacelles, parametallic hull plating, unimatrix shielding based on Tuvok's brilliant design for the multispatial probe, and a Borg-inspired weapons system.
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-->'''PARIS:''' Behold the Delta Flyer.''Delta Flyer''. Ultra-aerodynamic contours, retractable nacelles, parametallic hull plating, unimatrix shielding based on Tuvok's brilliant design for the multispatial probe, and a Borg-inspired weapons system.
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* UnfinishedUntestedUsedAnyway: The Delta Flyer in launched before they've solved the micro-fracture problem. If B'Elanna hadn't insisted on coming along, the crew would be dead.
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* UnfinishedUntestedUsedAnyway: The Delta Flyer ''Delta Flyer'' in launched before they've solved the micro-fracture problem. If B'Elanna hadn't insisted on coming along, the crew would be dead.
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* The47Society: B'Elanna ran the Maquis massacre program for 47 seconds, then never played it again.
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* The47Society: B'Elanna ran the Maquis massacre program for 47 seconds, then [[EverybodysDeadDave never played it again.again]].
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* LeaveMeAlone: Despite the presence of ParentalSubstitute Janeway, FireForgedFriend Chakotay, her beau Tom Paris, Neelix (who offered himself as TheConfidant in "Day of Honor"), and the Doctor, B'Elanna never goes to any of them for help.
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* LeaveMeAlone: Despite the presence of ParentalSubstitute Janeway, FireForgedFriend Chakotay, her beau Tom Paris, Neelix (who offered himself as TheConfidant in "Day of Honor"), and the Doctor, B'Elanna never goes to any of them for help. Eventually Chakotay has to force the issue.
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* CoolShip / ShinyLookingSpaceships: The ''Delta Flyer'' is undoubtedly cool.
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* CoolShip / ShinyLookingSpaceships: The ''Delta Flyer'' is undoubtedly designed by Tom to be the embodiment of cool.
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* SchizoTech: Tom Paris includes a manual control panel in the style of his ''Captain Proton'' holoprogram so he'll have some hands-on piloting.
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* CoolShip / ShinyLookingSpaceshipsShinyLookingSpaceships: The ''Delta Flyer'' is undoubtedly cool.
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* StepfordSmiler: B'Elanna shows a lot more animation when lying to [[TeamMom Captain Janeway]] or Chakotay that there's nothing wrong with her.
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* StepfordSmiler: Despite walking around with DullEyesOfUnhappiness, B'Elanna shows a lot more animation when lying to [[TeamMom Captain Janeway]] or Chakotay that there's nothing wrong with her.
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-->'''TORRES:''' When I was six, my father walked out on me. When I was nineteen, I got kicked out of Starfleet. A few years later, I got separated from the Maquis. And just when I start to feel safe, [[EverybodysDeadDave you tell me that all of our old friends have been slaughtered]]. The way I figure it, I've lost every family I've ever had.
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-->'''TORRES:''' When I was six, [[DisappearedDad my father walked out on me. me]]. When I was nineteen, [[FormerTeenRebel I got kicked out of Starfleet.Starfleet]]. A few years later, I got separated from the Maquis. And just when I start to feel safe, [[EverybodysDeadDave you tell me that all of our old friends have been slaughtered]]. The way I figure it, I've lost every family I've ever had.