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* AbsenceMakesTheHeartGoYonder: Averted; Tuvok makes it clear to Marayna that he has a spouse back on Vulcan.
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* ButterFace: Played with -- the real Marayna is still humanoid but more reptilian. It doesn't make any difference to Tuvok, whose attraction was more intellectual than sexual.
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* ButterFace: Played with -- the The real Marayna is still humanoid but more reptilian. It doesn't make any difference to Tuvok, whose attraction was more intellectual an alien who is quite less attractive (by human standards) than sexual.her holodeck incarnation.
* EveryoneCanSeeIt: The ''k'oh-nar'', the feeling of being completely exposed. B'elanna confirms this trope to an embarrassed Harry.
--->'''B'Elanna:''' Forget about her.
--->'''Harry:''' ...what did Tom say to you?
--->'''B'Elanna:''' Not a single word! I saw the way you were looking at Marayna yesterday!
--->'''Harry:''' Hi. My name's Harry Read-Me-Like-A-Book Kim.
--->'''B'Elanna:''' Forget about her.
--->'''Harry:''' ...what did Tom say to you?
--->'''B'Elanna:''' Not a single word! I saw the way you were looking at Marayna yesterday!
--->'''Harry:''' Hi. My name's Harry Read-Me-Like-A-Book Kim.
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* HawaiianShirtedTourist: Tom Paris proudly shows off his [[FanOfThePast 1962 Big Daddy-O Surf Special]] shirt. He replicates another in pineapple for Harry. Even Vorik is wearing one!
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* HawaiianShirtedTourist: Tom Paris proudly shows off his [[FanOfThePast 1962 Big Daddy-O Surf Special]] shirt. He replicates another in pineapple for Harry. Even Vorik is wearing one!wears one, which he has buttoned all the way up, as you might expect a Vulcan to do.
* LoveAtFirstSight: What the Vulcans call ''shon-ha'lock'', the Engulfment.
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* LoveTropes: For Vulcans, identifying these tropes is the first step in reducing their power.
** LoveAtFirstSight: What the Vulcans call ''shon-ha'lock'', the Engulfment.
** EveryoneCanSeeIt: The ''k'oh-nar'', the feeling of being completely exposed. B'elanna confirms this trope to an embarrassed Harry.
--->'''B'Elanna:''' Forget about her.
--->'''Harry:''' ...what did Tom say to you?
--->'''B'Elanna:''' Not a single word! I saw the way you were looking at Marayna yesterday!
--->'''Harry:''' Hi. My name's Harry Read-Me-Like-A-Book Kim.
** LoveAtFirstSight: What the Vulcans call ''shon-ha'lock'', the Engulfment.
** EveryoneCanSeeIt: The ''k'oh-nar'', the feeling of being completely exposed. B'elanna confirms this trope to an embarrassed Harry.
--->'''B'Elanna:''' Forget about her.
--->'''Harry:''' ...what did Tom say to you?
--->'''B'Elanna:''' Not a single word! I saw the way you were looking at Marayna yesterday!
--->'''Harry:''' Hi. My name's Harry Read-Me-Like-A-Book Kim.
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* VariantChess: Harry identifies the ''kal-toh'' puzzle Tuvok is playing as "Vulcan chess". Tuvok replies that "''Kal-toh'' is to chess, as chess is to TabletopGame/TicTacToe."
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* VariantChess: Harry identifies the ''kal-toh'' puzzle Tuvok is playing as "Vulcan chess". Tuvok replies that "''Kal-toh'' is to chess, chess as chess is to TabletopGame/TicTacToe."
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* MoodDissonance: B'Elanna is throttled by a luau held by a laughing holodeck babe.
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* MoodDissonance: B'Elanna is throttled by a luau lei held by a laughing holodeck babe.
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* NippleAndDimed: Apparently it was cold on set during the holodeck scenes, so everyone had to wait while lining was added to the bathing suits.
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* NippleAndDimed: Apparently it was cold on set during the holodeck scenes, so everyone all the women had to wait while extra lining was added to the bathing suits.suit tops.
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--->'''B'elanna:''' Forget about her.
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-->'''Marayna:''' I think you're tying to isolate yourself and make a public protest at the same time.
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-->'''Marayna:''' I think you're tying trying to isolate yourself and make a public protest at the same time.
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* HulaAndLuaus: Neelix's luau program. Marayna actually finds a way to ''weaponize'' it.
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* VariantChess: Harry identifies the ''kal-toh'' puzzle Tuvok is playing as "Vulcan chess". Tuvok replies that "''Kal-toh'' is to chess, as chess is to tic-tac-toe."
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* VariantChess: Harry identifies the ''kal-toh'' puzzle Tuvok is playing as "Vulcan chess". Tuvok replies that "''Kal-toh'' is to chess, as chess is to tic-tac-toe.TabletopGame/TicTacToe."
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* BuxomIsBetter: The moment Marayna appears in a swimsuit, we realise why Harry has fallen for her.
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* BuxomIsBetter: BuxomBeautyStandard: The moment Marayna appears in a swimsuit, we realise realize why Harry has fallen for her.
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* ButterFace: Played with -- the real Marayna is still humanoid but more reptilian. It doesn't make any difference to Tuvok whose attraction was more platonic than sexual.
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* ButterFace: Played with -- the real Marayna is still humanoid but more reptilian. It doesn't make any difference to Tuvok Tuvok, whose attraction was more platonic intellectual than sexual.
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It's not actually a Noodle Incident when the explanation is already established canon.
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* ContinuityNod: Chakotay mentions a NoodleIncident in which a holodeck character took over the Enterprise-D, a reference to the Professor Moriarty program in the ST:TNG episodes [[{{Recap/StarTrekTheNextGenerationS2E3ElementaryDearData}} "Elementary, Dear Data"]] and [[Recap/StarTrekTheNextGenerationS6E11ShipInABottle "Ship in a Bottle"]]. Tom also tells Harry that falling for a holo-character is not that uncommon. [[Recap/StarTrekTheNextGenerationS3E6BoobyTrap We've seen it happen before.]]
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* ContinuityNod: Chakotay mentions a NoodleIncident an incident in which a holodeck character took over the Enterprise-D, a reference to the Professor Moriarty program in the ST:TNG episodes [[{{Recap/StarTrekTheNextGenerationS2E3ElementaryDearData}} "Elementary, Dear Data"]] and [[Recap/StarTrekTheNextGenerationS6E11ShipInABottle "Ship in a Bottle"]]. Tom also tells Harry that falling for a holo-character is not that uncommon. [[Recap/StarTrekTheNextGenerationS3E6BoobyTrap We've seen it happen before.]]
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* BrickJoke: During the first scene with Marayna, she asks if Tuvok and Harry are friends, then if they're both coming to the luau; each question prompts a "Yes" from Harry and a simultaneous "No" from Tuvok. ("You've got to stop doing that!") At the end, when another female holocharacter offers to join the two at their table, they both simultaneously reply "[[WeAreNotGoingThroughThatAgain No.]]"
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The Hikikomori example can be worded better.
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* {{Hikikomori}}: The alien using Marayna as an avatar works alone in a cloaked ship, keeping the inversion nebula stable for tourists. Her exile is self-imposed as she's never gotten along with others.
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* {{Hikikomori}}: The alien using Marayna as an avatar Alien!Marayna works alone in a cloaked ship, keeping the inversion nebula stable for tourists.tourists. Staying there, she created an avatar that looks like a human to use on Voyager's holodeck. Her exile is self-imposed as she's never gotten along with others.
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** Tuvok manages to be one in the short time he's in the luau, wearing his uniform and rejecting a lei, in comparison to Vorik, another Vulcan. Marayna, however, finds Tuvok's personality refreshing.
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** Tuvok manages to be one in the short time he's in the luau, wearing his uniform and rejecting a lei, in comparison to Vorik, another Vulcan.Vulcan, who seems to be enjoying the party. Marayna, however, finds Tuvok's personality refreshing.
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** Tuvok manages to be one in the short time he's in the luau, wearing his uniform and rejecting a lei, in comparison to Vorik, another Vulcan. Marayna finds Tuvok's personality refreshing.
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** Tuvok manages to be one in the short time he's in the luau, wearing his uniform and rejecting a lei, in comparison to Vorik, another Vulcan. Marayna Marayna, however, finds Tuvok's personality refreshing.
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* IndubitablyUninterestingIndividual: Tuvok manages to be one in the short time he's in the luau, wearing his uniform, and rejecting a lei, in comparison to Vorik, another Vulcan. Marayna finds Tuvok's personality refreshing.
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* IndubitablyUninterestingIndividual: Tuvok IndubitablyUninterestingIndividual:
**Kim tries to become this in order to suppress his emotions about Marayna. It doesn't work.
**Tuvok manages to be one in the short time he's in the luau, wearing hisuniform, uniform and rejecting a lei, in comparison to Vorik, another Vulcan. Marayna finds Tuvok's personality refreshing.
**Kim tries to become this in order to suppress his emotions about Marayna. It doesn't work.
**Tuvok manages to be one in the short time he's in the luau, wearing his
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Crosswicking trope!
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* IndubitablyUninterestingIndividual: Tuvok manages to be one in the short time he's in the luau, wearing his uniform, and rejecting a lei, in comparison to Vorik, another Vulcan. Marayna finds Tuvok's personality refreshing.
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Trope is being cut.
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* The47Society: "Shields are down to 47%!"
