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* ShoutOut: Gwyn's description of the depot as a haven for those who wish to disappear is similar to [[Film/ThePhantomMenace Qui-Gon Jinn's description of Mos Espa]].
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** Tyress warns Janeway about the negotiations and treaty with the Romulans. The Instagram Captain's Log entry based on this episode confirms that he's talking about [[Film/StarTrek2009 the evacuations from Romulus]].
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* DramaticIrony: Jankom doesn't get what's so bad about crossing the Romulan Neutral Zone, thinking of it as a place where conflict can't happen ("neutral" is in the name, as he lampshades). Janeway has to clarify that it's a buffer between the Federation and Romulan territories, and a Statfleet ship crossing it would be an act of war.
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* DramaticIrony: Jankom doesn't get what's so bad about crossing the Romulan Neutral Zone, thinking of it as a place where conflict can't happen ("neutral" is in the name, as he lampshades). Janeway has to clarify that it's a buffer between the Federation and Romulan territories, and a Statfleet Starfleet ship crossing it would be an act of war.
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* DramaticIrony: Jankom doesn't get what's so bad about the Romulan Neutral Zone, thinking of it as a place where conflict can't happen (a "neutral zone"). Anyone with a cursory knowledge of the franchise knows that ''this'' place is bad news.
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* DramaticIrony: Jankom doesn't get what's so bad about crossing the Romulan Neutral Zone, thinking of it as a place where conflict can't happen (a "neutral zone"). Anyone with a cursory knowledge of ("neutral" is in the franchise knows name, as he lampshades). Janeway has to clarify that ''this'' place is bad news.it's a buffer between the Federation and Romulan territories, and a Statfleet ship crossing it would be an act of war.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Dal, Gwyn, and Pog run into Janeway (the real one) and her officers, respectively, giving them several opportunities to explain who they are and what's so dangerous about the ''Protostar''. Instead, they either get sidetracked (Jankom when he learns what "Pog" actually means), suspicious (Gwyn when she learns they have the Diviner), or get interrupted (Dal when Frex shows up), eventually forcing them to run away instead, which makes them look suspicious and ultimately hostile. Rok, the only one who didn't talk to an officer, even points out how badly they screwed up.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Dal, Gwyn, and Pog run into Janeway (the real one) and her officers, respectively, giving them several opportunities to explain who they are and what's so dangerous about the ''Protostar''. Instead, they either get sidetracked (Jankom when he learns what "Pog" actually means), suspicious (Gwyn when she learns they have the Diviner), or get interrupted (Dal when Frex shows up), eventually forcing them to run away instead, which makes them look suspicious and ultimately hostile. Rok, the only one who didn't talk to an officer, even points out how badly they screwed up.
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* DramaticIrony: Jankom doesn't get what's so bad about the Romulan Neutral Zone, thinking of it as a place where conflict can't happen (a "neutral zone"). Anyone with a cursory knowledge of the franchise knows that ''this'' place is bad news.
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The crew hides the ''Protostar'' on a smuggler outpost so they can hitch a ride to the Federation, but things go sound when Vice-Admiral Janeway arrives there at the same time, searching for the survivor of the destroyed comm relay.
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The crew hides the ''Protostar'' on a smuggler outpost so they can hitch a ride to the Federation, but things go sound badly when Vice-Admiral Janeway arrives there at the same time, searching for the survivor of the destroyed comm relay.
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** Okona was last shown in the ''WesternAnimation/StarTrekLowerDecks'' episdoe "[[Recap/StarTrekLowerDecksS2E05AnEmbarrassmentOfDooplers An Embarrassment of Dooplers]]" wearing an eyepatch over his left eye. He's since gained a scar and upgraded to a metal patch.
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** Okona was last shown in the ''WesternAnimation/StarTrekLowerDecks'' episdoe episode "[[Recap/StarTrekLowerDecksS2E05AnEmbarrassmentOfDooplers An Embarrassment of Dooplers]]" wearing an eyepatch over his left eye. He's since gained a scar and upgraded to a metal patch.
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** Okona was last shown in the ''WesternAnimation/StarTrekLowerDecks'' episdoe "[[Recap/StarTrekLowerDecksS2E05 An Embarrassment of Dooplers]]" wearing an eyepatch over his left eye. He's since gained a scar and upgraded to a metal patch.
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** Okona was last shown in the ''WesternAnimation/StarTrekLowerDecks'' episdoe "[[Recap/StarTrekLowerDecksS2E05 "[[Recap/StarTrekLowerDecksS2E05AnEmbarrassmentOfDooplers An Embarrassment of Dooplers]]" wearing an eyepatch over his left eye. He's since gained a scar and upgraded to a metal patch.
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** Okona was last shown in the ''WesternAnimation/StarTrekLowerDecks'' episdoe "[[Recap/StarTrekLowerDecksS2E05 An Embarrassment of Dooplers]]" wearing an eyepatch over his left eye. He's since gained a scar and upgraded to a metal patch.
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* SnarkToSnarkCombat: When Jankom and Noum meet, they quickly start insulting each other, because [[PlanetOfHats that's what Tellarites do]].
-->'''Jankom:''' Jankom Pog is so excited to be meeting a fellow Tellarite! Consider me underwhelmed.\\
'''Noum:''' I consider you under...something. Undersized pauper.\\
'''Jankom:''' Hey, you’re Starfleet? Pog needs to tell you...WHA? "Pauper"? We Tellarites are practically ''royalty''!\\
'''Noum:''' Royalty? ''(laughs)'' "Pog"'s a name we reserve for runts, short in size and vocabulary.
-->'''Jankom:''' Jankom Pog is so excited to be meeting a fellow Tellarite! Consider me underwhelmed.\\
'''Noum:''' I consider you under...something. Undersized pauper.\\
'''Jankom:''' Hey, you’re Starfleet? Pog needs to tell you...WHA? "Pauper"? We Tellarites are practically ''royalty''!\\
'''Noum:''' Royalty? ''(laughs)'' "Pog"'s a name we reserve for runts, short in size and vocabulary.
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* TheBusCameBack: The crew run into [[Recap/StarTrekTheNextGenerationS2E4TheOutrageousOkona Okona]] at the outpost. Turns out he's in some major trouble for smuggling, and ends up having to hitch a ride with them off the planet, after helping them evade their pursuers.
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* TheBusCameBack: CallBack: The crew run into [[Recap/StarTrekTheNextGenerationS2E4TheOutrageousOkona Thadiun Okona]] at the outpost. Turns out he's in some major trouble for smuggling, and ends up having to hitch a ride with them off the planet, after helping them evade their pursuers.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Dal, Gwyn, and Pog run into Janeway (the real one) and her officers, respectively, giving them several opportunities to explain who they are and what's so dangerous about the ''Protostar''. Instead, they either get sidetracked (Jankom), suspicious (Gwyn when she learns they have the Diviner), or get interrupted (Dal by Frex), eventually forcing them to run away instead, which makes them look suspicious and ultimately hostile. Rok, the only one who didn't talk to an officer, even points out how badly they screwed up.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Dal, Gwyn, and Pog run into Janeway (the real one) and her officers, respectively, giving them several opportunities to explain who they are and what's so dangerous about the ''Protostar''. Instead, they either get sidetracked (Jankom), (Jankom when he learns what "Pog" actually means), suspicious (Gwyn when she learns they have the Diviner), or get interrupted (Dal by Frex), when Frex shows up), eventually forcing them to run away instead, which makes them look suspicious and ultimately hostile. Rok, the only one who didn't talk to an officer, even points out how badly they screwed up.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Janeway gives Frex a bit of grief for failing to mention the dangerous saboteurs are a group of children.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Dal, Gwyn, and Pog run into Janeway (the real one) and her officers, giving them several opportunities to explain who they are and what's so dangerous about the ''Protostar'', but keep running away instead, which makes them look suspicious and ultimately hostile. Rok even points out how badly they screwed up.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Dal, Gwyn, and Pog run into Janeway (the real one) and her officers, respectively, giving them several opportunities to explain who they are and what's so dangerous about the ''Protostar'', but keep running ''Protostar''. Instead, they either get sidetracked (Jankom), suspicious (Gwyn when she learns they have the Diviner), or get interrupted (Dal by Frex), eventually forcing them to run away instead, which makes them look suspicious and ultimately hostile. Rok Rok, the only one who didn't talk to an officer, even points out how badly they screwed up.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Dal, Gwyn, and Pog run into Janeway (the real one) and her officers, giving them several opportunities to explain who they are and what's so dangerous about the ''Protostar'', but keep running away instead, which makes them look suspicious and ultimately hostile. Rok even points out how badly they screwed up.
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* HyperspeedEscape: The ''Protostar'' jumps to warp with the ''Dauntless'' hot on her heels. Her crew tries to guarantee their escape by jumping to protowarp, but this is {{defied}} when ''Dauntless'' fires a torpedo that cripples the third nacelle, knocking ''Protostar'' out of warp.
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* TheBusCameBack: The crew run into [[Recap/StarTrekTheNextGenerationS2E4TheOutrageousOkona Okona]] at the outpost. Turns out he's in some major trouble for smuggling, and ends up having to hitch a ride with them off the planet, after helping them evade their pursuers.
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** The security at the outpost is provided by [[Series/StarTrekEnterprise Xindi-Reptilians]].
** Frex is shown drunkenly relaying his story to a [[Series/StarTrekVoyager Kazon]].
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** The security at the outpost is provided by [[Series/StarTrekEnterprise Xindi-Reptilians]].
** Frex is shown drunkenly relaying his story to a [[Series/StarTrekVoyager Kazon]].
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The crew hides the ''Protostar'' on a smuggler outpost so they can hitch a ride to the Federation, but things go sound when Vice-Admiral Janeway arrives there at the same time, searching for the survivor of the destroyed comm relay.
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!!Tropes:
* FantasticSlur: A mild version is revealed to be the case with Jankom. "Pog" is not actually a last name, but a Tellarite word for "runt".
* RunForTheBorder: When the protowarp is disabled, the crew flees over the Neutral Zone border on Okana's advice, remodulating the shields so the Romulans won't notice. Janeway in her much larger ship, meanwhile, is caught by three Warbirds on border patrol and forced to retreat.
* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Janeway initially decides to cross the Neutral Zone in violation of treaty, because the alternative is the ''Protostar'' and its technology being captured by the Romulans. Her first officer refuses, believing she's being driven by her concern for Chakotay, and the Romulans guarding the border render it a moot point.
* SpannerInTheWorks: A simple plan to reach the Federation is scuttled by numerous cases of bad luck.
** Gwyn learns that her father is aboard the ''Dauntless'', and assumes he's in league with them somehow.
** Frex happens to be at the outpost, and tells Janeway that the crew is responsible for the destruction of the comm relay before Dal can give his side of the story.
** Finally, the newly hatched and now bipedal Murf sits on photon torpedo control during the chase and fires a torpedo at the ''Dauntless'', convincing Janeway that -- kids or not -- the crew are hostile.
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* FantasticSlur: A mild version is revealed to be the case with Jankom. "Pog" is not actually a last name, but a Tellarite word for "runt".
* RunForTheBorder: When the protowarp is disabled, the crew flees over the Neutral Zone border on Okana's advice, remodulating the shields so the Romulans won't notice. Janeway in her much larger ship, meanwhile, is caught by three Warbirds on border patrol and forced to retreat.
* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Janeway initially decides to cross the Neutral Zone in violation of treaty, because the alternative is the ''Protostar'' and its technology being captured by the Romulans. Her first officer refuses, believing she's being driven by her concern for Chakotay, and the Romulans guarding the border render it a moot point.
* SpannerInTheWorks: A simple plan to reach the Federation is scuttled by numerous cases of bad luck.
** Gwyn learns that her father is aboard the ''Dauntless'', and assumes he's in league with them somehow.
** Frex happens to be at the outpost, and tells Janeway that the crew is responsible for the destruction of the comm relay before Dal can give his side of the story.
** Finally, the newly hatched and now bipedal Murf sits on photon torpedo control during the chase and fires a torpedo at the ''Dauntless'', convincing Janeway that -- kids or not -- the crew are hostile.
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