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* MostWritersAreWriters: "...the notion of this exotic, beautiful, older woman who comes to you and gets excited by watching you write is like the most ridiculous idea! Only a writer would come up with that." Ronald D Moore [[http://memory-alpha.wikia.com/wiki/The_Muse_(episode) Memory-alpha]]
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* MostWritersAreWriters: "... the notion of this exotic, beautiful, older woman who comes to you and gets excited by watching you write is like the most ridiculous idea! Only a writer would come up with that." Ronald D Moore [[http://memory-alpha.wikia.com/wiki/The_Muse_(episode) Memory-alpha]]
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Deanna Troi's half-brother is never brought up again, despite her appearances in the TNG films, ''Voyager'', and ''Picard''. He is only finally named and appears in the ebook ''The Insolence of Office'' (in the ''Slings and Arrows'' miniseries) and in two of the Marvel's DS9 comics, as well as a short story and novel which take place during the Dominion War.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Deanna Troi's half-brother is never brought up again, despite her appearances in the TNG films, ''Voyager'', and ''Picard''. He is only finally named and appears in the ebook ''The Insolence of Office'' (in the ''Slings and Arrows'' miniseries) and in two of the Marvel's DS9 [=DS9=] comics, as well as a short story and novel which take place during the Dominion War.
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* LoveConfession: Though he tries some hollow platitudes to satisfy Jeyal, he doesn't buy it. So Odo lets it fly from the Changeling equivalent of a heart.
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* LoveConfession: Though he Odo tries some hollow platitudes to satisfy Jeyal, he doesn't buy it. So Odo lets it fly from the Changeling equivalent of a heart.
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** Onaya mentions "Tarbolde," an alien artist quotes in the original series episode "Where No Man Has Gone Before."
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** Onaya mentions "Tarbolde," an alien artist quotes quoted in the original series episode "Where No Man Has Gone Before."
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Jakes hangs around the Promenade people watching and thinking up ideas for stories. His eyes land on a mysterious woman from far away. Meanwhile. Lwaxana Troi shows up in Odo's office, crying and pregnant! She explains that she's on the run from her husband, a Tavnian, who treats her like his possession and means to take her newborn son away from her.
At the replimat, the mysterious woman notices Jake writing and introducers herself as Onaya, and she's got a thing for artists. She's helped many artists unlock their true potential, including a famous Cardassian architect. With a generous helping of erotic subtext, she offers to help Jake with his writing, and he agrees. Jake cancels on a trip with his father and Kasidy Yates to keep an appointment he makes with Onaya. She gifts him a pen and tells him to start writing in a stream of consciousness. He does, and ideas start pouring out of him. Unbeknownst to him, however, Onaya is draining his life force as he writes.
Lwaxana is bummed and, being a telepath, bumming everyone else out at Quark's bar, so Odo comes in to distract her. She manages to invite herself into his quarters and is amazed by his shapeshifting furniture. Odo provides a shoulder for her to sleep on (turning himself into a pillow and blanket) and later plays hide and seek with her to keep her occupied. But her husband, Jeyal, finally arrives. Odo confronts him, but Jeyal won't be dissuaded from exercising his custody over his son. Odo hatches a plan marry Lwaxana in a Tavnian ceremony to transfer custody of her child to him. But in the process, he'll have to convince Jeyal that his love for Lwaxana is genuine.
At the replimat, the mysterious woman notices Jake writing and introducers herself as Onaya, and she's got a thing for artists. She's helped many artists unlock their true potential, including a famous Cardassian architect. With a generous helping of erotic subtext, she offers to help Jake with his writing, and he agrees. Jake cancels on a trip with his father and Kasidy Yates to keep an appointment he makes with Onaya. She gifts him a pen and tells him to start writing in a stream of consciousness. He does, and ideas start pouring out of him. Unbeknownst to him, however, Onaya is draining his life force as he writes.
Lwaxana is bummed and, being a telepath, bumming everyone else out at Quark's bar, so Odo comes in to distract her. She manages to invite herself into his quarters and is amazed by his shapeshifting furniture. Odo provides a shoulder for her to sleep on (turning himself into a pillow and blanket) and later plays hide and seek with her to keep her occupied. But her husband, Jeyal, finally arrives. Odo confronts him, but Jeyal won't be dissuaded from exercising his custody over his son. Odo hatches a plan marry Lwaxana in a Tavnian ceremony to transfer custody of her child to him. But in the process, he'll have to convince Jeyal that his love for Lwaxana is genuine.
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At the replimat, the mysterious woman notices Jake writing and
Lwaxana is bummed and, being a telepath, bumming everyone else out at Quark's bar, so Odo comes in to distract her. She manages to invite herself into his quarters and is amazed by his shapeshifting furniture. Odo provides a shoulder for her to sleep on (turning himself into a pillow and blanket) and later plays hide and seek with her to keep her occupied. But her husband, Jeyal, finally arrives. Odo confronts him, but Jeyal won't be dissuaded from exercising his custody over his son. Odo hatches a plan to marry Lwaxana in a Tavnian ceremony to transfer custody of her child to him. But in the process, he'll have to convince Jeyal that his love for Lwaxana is genuine.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Odo realizes that acording to Tavnian law, custody of a woman's male child goes to her "husband," not the father, so he marries her to take custody away from the father.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Odo realizes that acording according to Tavnian law, custody of a woman's male child goes to her "husband," not the father, so he marries her to take custody away from the father.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Deanna Troi's half-brother is never brought up again, despite her appearances in the TNG films, ''Voyager'', and ''Picard''.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Deanna Troi's half-brother is never brought up again, despite her appearances in the TNG films, ''Voyager'', and ''Picard''. He is only finally named and appears in the ebook ''The Insolence of Office'' (in the ''Slings and Arrows'' miniseries) and in two of the Marvel's DS9 comics, as well as a short story and novel which take place during the Dominion War.
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* LoveConfession: Though he tries some hollow platitudes to satisfy Jayel, he doesn't buy it. So Odo lets it fly from the Changeling equivalent of a heart.
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* LoveConfession: Though he tries some hollow platitudes to satisfy Jayel, Jeyal, he doesn't buy it. So Odo lets it fly from the Changeling equivalent of a heart.
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* PleaseDontLeaveMe: Odo to Lwaxana when she changes plans to go back to Betazed to have her baby instead of having it on the station. It's less about romantic love and more that Odo is very lonely and Lwaxana gives him someone to take care of. Lwaxana recognizes that he's in love with Kira, and gently rebuffs him, saying that she doesn't want to '''make''' him fall for her. She wants him to be happy.
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* PleaseDontLeaveMe: Odo to Lwaxana when she changes plans to go back to Betazed to have her baby instead of having it on the station. It's less about romantic love and more that Odo is very lonely and Lwaxana gives him someone to take care of. Lwaxana recognizes that he's in love with Kira, and gently rebuffs him, saying that she doesn't want to '''make''' make him fall for her. She wants him to be happy.
