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* ToiletHumor: The Rick subplot's premise is mostly about the trope in play, just like in canon, including the AssShove Rick subjects Tony in.
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* PetTheDog: Like in canon, Rick gives some money to Tony's loved ones in his funeral.
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* PetTheDog: Like in canon, Rick gives some money to Tony's loved ones in his funeral.
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* BittersweetEnding: The chapter still would've received the same DownerEnding from the original R&M episode if it weren't for the additional scene that Leni was saved from the app and decides to go to the mall with Chaz.
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* HeelRealization: Having witnessed her grandfather's severe depression while undergoing a humiliating desrision from his holographic projections sitting on the toilet, Lisa comes to realize, EXACTLY WHY Rick doesn't want her to be like him; Rick has suffered a devestating loss that led him to be the nihilist ControlFreak Jerkass MadScientist that he is now.
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* HeelRealization: Having witnessed her grandfather's severe depression while undergoing a humiliating desrision derision from his holographic projections sitting on the toilet, Lisa comes to realize, EXACTLY WHY Rick doesn't want her to be like him; Rick has suffered a devestating loss that led him to be the nihilist ControlFreak Jerkass MadScientist that he is now.
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* MythologyGag: The brainwashed Leni wants to go to Scotland to date someone. This is alluding to ''[[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie The Loud House Movie]]'', where the Loud Family goes to Scotland.
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* MythologyGag: The brainwashed brainwashed Leni wants to go to Scotland to date someone. This is alluding to ''[[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie The Loud House Movie]]'', where the Loud Family goes to Scotland.
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* MythologyGag: The brainwashed Leni wants to go to Scotland to date someone. This is alluding to [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie ''The Loud House Movie''
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]], where the Loud Family goes to Scotland.
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* MythologyGag: The brainwashed brainwashed Leni wants to go to Scotland to date someone. This is alluding to [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie ''The ''[[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie The Loud House Movie''
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* MythologyGag: The brainwashed Leni wants to go to Scotland to date someone. This is alluding to ''[[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie The Loud House Movie
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]]'', where the Loud Family goes to Scotland.
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* MythologyGag: The brainwashed brainwashed Leni wants to go to Scotland to date someone. This is alluding to ''[[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie The [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie ''The Loud House Movie
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** [spoiler: Luan after suddenly seeing Benny at her doorstep.]
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* BittersweetEnding: The chapter still would've received the same DownerEnding from the original R&M episode if it weren't for the additional scene that Leni was saved from the app and decides to go to the mall with Chaz.
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** [spoiler: [[spoiler: Luan after suddenly seeing Benny at her doorstep.]
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* BittersweetEnding: The chapter still would've received the same DownerEnding from the original R&M episode if it weren't for theadditional additional scene that Leni was saved from the app and decides to go to the mall with Chaz.
* BittersweetEnding: The chapter still would've received the same DownerEnding from the original R&M episode if it weren't for the
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* WhamShot: [spoiler: Benny shows up at Luan's doorstep. This surprises her.]
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* WhamShot: [spoiler: [[spoiler: Benny shows up at Luan's doorstep. This surprises her.]]]
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* AnguishedOutburst: While chasing after Glootie, Luan, dressed in her Full House costume, smashes anything she can get the mallet on. Lincoln notes that Luan was actually venting her frustration and anger with Rick.
** [spoiler: Luan after suddenly seeing Benny at her doorstep.]
* BittersweetEnding: The chapter still would've received the same DownerEnding from the original R&M episode if it weren't for the additional scene that Leni was saved from the app and decides to go to the mall with Chaz.
* BittersweetEnding: The chapter still would've received the same DownerEnding from the original R&M episode if it weren't for the additional scene that Leni was saved from the app and decides to go to the mall with Chaz.
* JackBauerInterrogationTechnique: Lincoln and Luan subject Glootie into a torture via an animal cage containing Luan's pets, to force information on how to stop the app from him.
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* MythologyGag: The brainwashed Leni wants to go to Scotland to date someone. This is alluding to [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie ''The Loud House Movie'']], where the Loud Family goes to Scotland.
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* MythologyGag: The brainwashed brainwashed Leni wants to go to Scotland to date someone. This is alluding to [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie ''The ''[[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie The Loud House Movie'']], Movie
]]'', where the Loud Family goes toScotland.Scotland.
* NervesOfSteel: Tony towards Rick.
* SeriousBusiness: Just like in canon, Rick goes to every known length imaginable to find out the culprit that shat on his toilet. Lisa then points the ridiculousness of it out to Rick.
]]'', where the Loud Family goes to
* NervesOfSteel: Tony towards Rick.
* SeriousBusiness: Just like in canon, Rick goes to every known length imaginable to find out the culprit that shat on his toilet. Lisa then points the ridiculousness of it out to Rick.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: The same one like in canon. The holographic Ricks meant for mocking Tony are instead mocking Rick, as a fitting form of punishment for his character while Lisa looks on at her grandpa in pity and self-reflection. "King of Shit" he is indeed.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: The same one like in canon. The holographic Ricks meant for mocking Tony are instead mocking Rick, as a fitting form of punishment for his character while Lisa looks on at her grandpa in pity and self-reflection. "King of Shit" he is indeed.indeed.
* WhamShot: [spoiler: Benny shows up at Luan's doorstep. This surprises her.]
* WhamShot: [spoiler: Benny shows up at Luan's doorstep. This surprises her.]
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* BaitAndSwitch: Just like in canon, Rick's booby trap meant for Tony was actually a group of Holographic Ricks mocking him. Since Tony is dead and Rick realizes who he really is, he tries the rigged toilet on himself, crowning himself the "king of shit" as self-punishment. This is made more sad by the fact that ''Lisa Loud''is watching it, which also gave her the same realization.
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* BaitAndSwitch: Just like in canon, Rick's booby trap meant for Tony was actually a group of Holographic Ricks mocking him. Since Tony is dead and Rick realizes who he really is, he tries the rigged toilet on himself, crowning himself the "king of shit" as self-punishment. This is made more sad by the fact that ''Lisa Loud''is Loud'' is watching it, which also gave her the same realization.
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* MythologyGag: The brainwashed Leni wants to go to Scotland to date someone. This is alluding to [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie ''The Loud House Movie'']], where the Loud Family goes to Scotland.
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* MythologyGag: The brainwashed brainwashed Leni wants to go to Scotland to date someone. This is alluding to [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie ''The Loud House Movie'']], where the Loud Family goes to Scotland.
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'''Rick and Morty episode:''' [[Recap/RickAndMortyS4E2TheOldManAndTheSeat "The Old Man and the Seat"]]
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* MythologyGag: The brainwashed brainwashed Leni wants to go to Scotland to date someone. This is alluding to [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie ''The Loud House Movie'']], where the Loud Family goes to Scotland.
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** The siblings don't have selfish reasons to make Leni more assertive unlike in canon, as their CharacterDevelopment made sure it won't be the motivation. Lynn, the twins, and Luna's roles are mostly reduced in this rendition, with Lori, Leni Luan, Lincoln and Lisa taking most of the focus.
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** The siblings don't have selfish reasons to make Leni more assertive unlike in canon, as their CharacterDevelopment made sure it won't be the motivation. Lynn, the twins, Lucy and Luna's roles are mostly reduced in this rendition, with Lori, Leni Leni, Luan, Lincoln and Lisa taking most of the focus.
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* AntiRoleModel: When Lisa eggs on Rick about her understanding of his situation, Rick reminds Lisa on why she would act like a Rick.
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* AntiRoleModel: When Lisa eggs on Rick about her understanding of his situation, Rick reminds Lisa on why she would not act like a Rick.
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* BaitAndSwitch: Just like in canon, Rick's booby trap meant for Tony was actually a group of Holographic Ricks mocking him. Since Tony is dead and Rick realizes who he really is, he tries the rigged toilet on himself, becoming the "king of shit" as self-punishment. This is made more sad by the fact that ''Lisa Loud''is watching it, which also gave her the same realization.
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* BaitAndSwitch: Just like in canon, Rick's booby trap meant for Tony was actually a group of Holographic Ricks mocking him. Since Tony is dead and Rick realizes who he really is, he tries the rigged toilet on himself, becoming crowning himself the "king of shit" as self-punishment. This is made more sad by the fact that ''Lisa Loud''is watching it, which also gave her the same realization.realization.
* BigWhat: Lori after hearing the brainwashed Leni that she'll make Bobby her boyfriend.
* BigWhat: Lori after hearing the brainwashed Leni that she'll make Bobby her boyfriend.
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* DomainHolder: Rick rules over a lush, alien planet which is essentially a gigantic restroom for him to take a dump. It also is a place where he has total control of literally everything without the Loud siblings making him their glorified slave.
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* DomainHolder: Rick rules over a lush, alien planet which is essentially a gigantic restroom for him to take a dump. It also is a place where he has total control of literally everything without the Loud siblings making him their glorified slave.slave or anyone trying to object to his attitude.
* JerkassBall: Luan has Glootie create the app in direct defiance of Rick's warnings, just to spite him. This causes everyone using it to get brainwashed, forcing her and Lincoln to fix it themselves.
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* MythologyGag: The brainwashed Leni wants to go to Scotland to date someone. This is alluding to [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie ''The Loud House Movie'']], where the Loud Family goes to Scotland.
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* MythologyGag: The brainwashed brainwashed Leni wants to go to Scotland to date someone. This is alluding to [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie ''The Loud House Movie'']], where the Loud Family goes to Scotland.
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* MythologyGag: The brainwashed Leni wants to go to Scotland to date someone. This is alluding to [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie ''The Loud House Movie'']], where the Loud Family goes to Scotland.
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* MythologyGag: The brainwashed brainwashed Leni wants to go to Scotland to date someone. This is alluding to [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie ''The Loud House Movie'']], where the Loud Family goes to Scotland.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: The same one like in canon. The holographic Ricks meant for mocking Tony are instead mocking Rick, as a fitting form of punishment for his character. King of shit he is indeed. Lisa looks on at her grandpa in pity.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: The same one like in canon. The holographic Ricks meant for mocking Tony are instead mocking Rick, as a fitting form of punishment for his character. King of shit he is indeed. character while Lisa looks on at her grandpa in pity.pity and self-reflection. "King of Shit" he is indeed.
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* MythologyGag: The brainwashed Leni wants to go to Scotland to date someone. This is alluding to [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie ''The Loud House Movie'']], where the Loud Family goes to Scotland.
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* MythologyGag: The brainwashed brainwashed Leni wants to go to Scotland to date someone. This is alluding to [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie ''The Loud House Movie'']], where the Loud Family goes to Scotland.
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'''The Loud House episode:''' [[Recap/TheLoudHouseS3E11PastureBreakupShopGirl "Shop Girl"]]
'''Rick and Morty episode:''' [[Recap/RickAndMortyS4E2TheOldManAndTheSeat "TheOldManAndTheSeat"]]
'''Rick and Morty episode:''' [[Recap/RickAndMortyS4E2TheOldManAndTheSeat "TheOldManAndTheSeat"]]
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'''The Loud House episode:''' [[Recap/TheLoudHouseS3E11PastureBreakupShopGirl [[Recap/TheLoudHouseS3E11PastureBedtimeShopGirl "Shop Girl"]]
'''Rick and Morty episode:''' [[Recap/RickAndMortyS4E2TheOldManAndTheSeat"TheOldManAndTheSeat"]]"The Old Man and the Seat"]]
'''Rick and Morty episode:''' [[Recap/RickAndMortyS4E2TheOldManAndTheSeat
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* MythologyGag: The brainwashed Leni wants to go to Scotland to date someone. This is alluding to [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie ''The Loud House Movie'']], where the Loud Family goes to Scotland.
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* MythologyGag: The brainwashed brainwashed Leni wants to go to Scotland to date someone. This is alluding to [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie ''The Loud House Movie'']], where the Loud Family goes to Scotland.
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The Loud Siblings have to make Leni into an assertive person after having her bought shop items taken away out of innocuous generosity, so, against Rick's orders, they, without Lincoln's involvement, have space intern Glootie make an app that'll solve the Leni problem. Meanwhile, Lisa follows Rick after he goes off to his personal domain to check on whoever interloper pooped on his toilet.
'''The Loud House episode:''' [[Recap/TheLoudHouseS3E11PastureBreakupShopGirl "Shop Girl"]]
'''Rick and Morty episode:''' [[Recap/RickAndMortyS4E2TheOldManAndTheSeat "TheOldManAndTheSeat"]]
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** Lisa follows Rick throughout the chapter, curious about what he's up to, meaning her role in the original LH episode is altered.
** Rather than being TooDumbToLive like Jerry in canon, a jaded Luan has Glootie make the app that brainwashes Leni and all who use it, just to spite Rick. Lincoln doesn't take it too well at all.
** The siblings don't have selfish reasons to make Leni more assertive unlike in canon, as their CharacterDevelopment made sure it won't be the motivation. Lynn, the twins, and Luna's roles are mostly reduced in this rendition, with Lori, Leni Luan, Lincoln and Lisa taking most of the focus.
* AdaptationalJerkass: Luan had Glootie create the app that brainwashes everyone, including Leni, despite being visually warned not to, just to spite Rick, much to Lincoln's annoyance. He and Luan then have to stop the app.
* AntagonistInMourning: Rick attends Tony's funeral, just like in canon.
* AntiRoleModel: When Lisa eggs on Rick about her understanding of his situation, Rick reminds Lisa on why she would act like a Rick.
* ArmourPiercingResponse: When Lincoln insists that the app incident wasn't Rick's fault, Luan points out that Rick was too lazy to specifically warn the siblings in detail. This is the very reason Jerry fell to create the app in canon.
* BaitAndSwitch: Just like in canon, Rick's booby trap meant for Tony was actually a group of Holographic Ricks mocking him. Since Tony is dead and Rick realizes who he really is, he tries the rigged toilet on himself, becoming the "king of shit" as self-punishment. This is made more sad by the fact that ''Lisa Loud''is watching it, which also gave her the same realization.
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Glootie's app, like in canon, causes everyone to fall in love with random people. For instance, a brainwashed Leni suddenly wants Bobby to be her boyfriend, to Lori's shock, naturally.
* DisproportionateRetribution: Luan made Glootie make the brainwashing app just to spite Rick, despite Glootie specifically having a sign saying otherwise. Lincoln then calls her out for it.
* DomainHolder: Rick rules over a lush, alien planet which is essentially a gigantic restroom for him to take a dump. It also is a place where he has total control of literally everything without the Loud siblings making him their glorified slave.
--->'''Rick:''' You don't get it Lisa. It's my toilet. This whole planet is my special place. It's a place where I'm in complete control of everything. See, I don't often get that at home because your siblings are constantly blackmailing me.
* HeelRealization: Having witnessed her grandfather's severe depression while undergoing a humiliating desrision from his holographic projections sitting on the toilet, Lisa comes to realize, EXACTLY WHY Rick doesn't want her to be like him; Rick has suffered a devestating loss that led him to be the nihilist ControlFreak Jerkass MadScientist that he is now.
* LifeWillKillYou: Again, downplayed like in canon. Tony lives life to the fullest but gets cut short.
* MythologyGag: The brainwashed Leni wants to go to Scotland to date someone. This is alluding to [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie ''The Loud House Movie'']], where the Loud Family goes to Scotland.
* PetTheDog: Like in canon, Rick gives some money to Tony's loved ones in his funeral.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: The same one like in canon. The holographic Ricks meant for mocking Tony are instead mocking Rick, as a fitting form of punishment for his character. King of shit he is indeed. Lisa looks on at her grandpa in pity.
'''The Loud House episode:''' [[Recap/TheLoudHouseS3E11PastureBreakupShopGirl "Shop Girl"]]
'''Rick and Morty episode:''' [[Recap/RickAndMortyS4E2TheOldManAndTheSeat "TheOldManAndTheSeat"]]
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* AdaptationalContextChange:
** Lisa follows Rick throughout the chapter, curious about what he's up to, meaning her role in the original LH episode is altered.
** Rather than being TooDumbToLive like Jerry in canon, a jaded Luan has Glootie make the app that brainwashes Leni and all who use it, just to spite Rick. Lincoln doesn't take it too well at all.
** The siblings don't have selfish reasons to make Leni more assertive unlike in canon, as their CharacterDevelopment made sure it won't be the motivation. Lynn, the twins, and Luna's roles are mostly reduced in this rendition, with Lori, Leni Luan, Lincoln and Lisa taking most of the focus.
* AdaptationalJerkass: Luan had Glootie create the app that brainwashes everyone, including Leni, despite being visually warned not to, just to spite Rick, much to Lincoln's annoyance. He and Luan then have to stop the app.
* AntagonistInMourning: Rick attends Tony's funeral, just like in canon.
* AntiRoleModel: When Lisa eggs on Rick about her understanding of his situation, Rick reminds Lisa on why she would act like a Rick.
* ArmourPiercingResponse: When Lincoln insists that the app incident wasn't Rick's fault, Luan points out that Rick was too lazy to specifically warn the siblings in detail. This is the very reason Jerry fell to create the app in canon.
* BaitAndSwitch: Just like in canon, Rick's booby trap meant for Tony was actually a group of Holographic Ricks mocking him. Since Tony is dead and Rick realizes who he really is, he tries the rigged toilet on himself, becoming the "king of shit" as self-punishment. This is made more sad by the fact that ''Lisa Loud''is watching it, which also gave her the same realization.
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Glootie's app, like in canon, causes everyone to fall in love with random people. For instance, a brainwashed Leni suddenly wants Bobby to be her boyfriend, to Lori's shock, naturally.
* DisproportionateRetribution: Luan made Glootie make the brainwashing app just to spite Rick, despite Glootie specifically having a sign saying otherwise. Lincoln then calls her out for it.
* DomainHolder: Rick rules over a lush, alien planet which is essentially a gigantic restroom for him to take a dump. It also is a place where he has total control of literally everything without the Loud siblings making him their glorified slave.
--->'''Rick:''' You don't get it Lisa. It's my toilet. This whole planet is my special place. It's a place where I'm in complete control of everything. See, I don't often get that at home because your siblings are constantly blackmailing me.
* HeelRealization: Having witnessed her grandfather's severe depression while undergoing a humiliating desrision from his holographic projections sitting on the toilet, Lisa comes to realize, EXACTLY WHY Rick doesn't want her to be like him; Rick has suffered a devestating loss that led him to be the nihilist ControlFreak Jerkass MadScientist that he is now.
* LifeWillKillYou: Again, downplayed like in canon. Tony lives life to the fullest but gets cut short.
* MythologyGag: The brainwashed Leni wants to go to Scotland to date someone. This is alluding to [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouseMovie ''The Loud House Movie'']], where the Loud Family goes to Scotland.
* PetTheDog: Like in canon, Rick gives some money to Tony's loved ones in his funeral.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: The same one like in canon. The holographic Ricks meant for mocking Tony are instead mocking Rick, as a fitting form of punishment for his character. King of shit he is indeed. Lisa looks on at her grandpa in pity.
