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* CommonalityConnection: After using magic to gain control Fang, Lula reads the memories of both her and Spear and discovers how the duo had lost their respective families--Lula then reads her own memories and remembers how she had lost her own child, which learns to her HeelFaceTurn.
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* CommonalityConnection: After using magic to gain control of Fang, Lula reads the memories of both her and Spear and discovers how the duo had lost their respective families--Lula then reads her own memories and remembers how she had lost her own child, which learns to her HeelFaceTurn.
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* KilledOffscreen: Lula dies this way, with her last living shot showing her right before her head is snapped off by the matriarch's wolf form. It immediately cuts to Fang regaining control of herself from Lula's magic, which indicates to Spear that Lula lost her life, making him grieve over her.
* LargeAndInCharge: Most of the witches are smaller than the average human. The matriarch is the size of normal human and gets even bigger when she transforms.
* LargeAndInCharge: Most of the witches are smaller than the average human. The matriarch is the size of normal human and gets even bigger when she transforms.
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* KilledOffscreen: Lula dies this way, with her the last living shot of her alive showing her right before her head is snapped off by the matriarch's wolf form. It immediately cuts to Fang regaining control of herself from Lula's magic, which indicates to Spear that Lula lost her life, making him grieve over her.
* LargeAndInCharge: Most of the witches aresmaller shorter than the average human. The matriarch is the size of normal human and gets even bigger when she transforms.
* LargeAndInCharge: Most of the witches are
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* OutsideContextProblem: While, until now, Spear and Fang mostly encountered [[PrehistoricMonster giant beasts]] and [[FrazettaMan savage hominids]], this time their opponents are magic-using, mystical witches led by an EldritchAbomination-like spirit. They don't really know how to deal with them, and would have been killed by them if not for one of the witches performing a HeelFaceTurn. Witnessing their ritual, Spear is no less terrified than he was by the Plague of Madness last episode, and only fights the witches when forced to by their pursuit.
* ReusedCharacterDesign: With his full brown beard, long brown hair and bulky pysique, the witches' first sacrifice looks like a less cartoony version of the Wild Man from the ''WesternAnimation/SamuraiJack'' episode "Jack Learns to Jump Good". Even his high-pitched screams are pretty similar to the Wild Man's speaking voice.
* ReusedCharacterDesign: With his full brown beard, long brown hair and bulky pysique, the witches' first sacrifice looks like a less cartoony version of the Wild Man from the ''WesternAnimation/SamuraiJack'' episode "Jack Learns to Jump Good". Even his high-pitched screams are pretty similar to the Wild Man's speaking voice.
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* OutsideContextProblem: While, While until now, now Spear and Fang mostly encountered [[PrehistoricMonster giant beasts]] and [[FrazettaMan savage hominids]], this time their opponents are magic-using, mystical witches led by an EldritchAbomination-like spirit. They don't really know how to deal with them, and would have been killed by them if not for one of the witches performing a HeelFaceTurn. Witnessing their ritual, Spear is no less terrified than he was by the Plague of Madness last episode, and only fights the witches when forced to by their pursuit.
* ReusedCharacterDesign: With his full brown beard, long brown hair and bulkypysique, physique, the witches' first sacrifice looks like a less cartoony version of the Wild Man from the ''WesternAnimation/SamuraiJack'' episode "Jack Learns to Jump Good". Even his high-pitched screams are pretty similar to the Wild Man's speaking voice.
* ReusedCharacterDesign: With his full brown beard, long brown hair and bulky
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* PteroSoarer: The matriarch of the coven rides a huge pterodactyl. It looks like a ''Pteranodon'', but appears to be the size of a ''Quetzalcoatlus'' and its beak is full of teeth.
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* TerrorDactyl: The matriarch of the coven rides a huge pterodactyl. It looks like a ''Pteranodon'', but appears to be the size of a ''Quetzalcoatlus'' and its beak is full of teeth. It acts quite hostile toward Spear, Fang and Lula, but it's unclear if it does so at its own will or under the matriarch's control.
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* MiseryBuildsCharacter: Once upon a time, Lula took part in the sacrificial ritual and received a child of her own. By losing her daughter, she feels empathy for Spear and Fang, who have gone through the same thing, and helps them escape.
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* TheDogBitesBack: Given the DeathGlare Lula sends the way of some witches after one hisses at her without any real provocation, it's clear that after losing her daughter she's become somewhat of an outcast, further explaining her decision to help Fang and Spear, thus sabotaging another witch's hope for an unnaturally obtained daughter.
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* TheDogBitesBack: Given the DeathGlare Lula sends the way of some witches after one hisses at her without any real provocation, it's clear that after losing her daughter she's become somewhat of an outcast, further explaining her decision to help Fang and Spear, thus sabotaging another witch's hope for an unnaturally obtained daughter.
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* OffModel: Fang's titular snaggletooth is briefly on the wrong side of her jaw in one shot.
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* OutsideContextProblem: While, until now, Spear and Fang mostly encountered [[PrehistoricMonster giant beasts]] and [[FrazettaMan savage hominids]], this time their opponents are magic-using, mystical witches led by an EldritchAbomination-like spirit. They don't really know how to deal with them, and would have been killed by them if not for one of the witches performing a HeelFaceTurn. Witnessing their ritual, Fang is no less terrified than he was by the Plague of Madness last episode, and only fights the witches when forced to by their pursuit.
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* OutsideContextProblem: While, until now, Spear and Fang mostly encountered [[PrehistoricMonster giant beasts]] and [[FrazettaMan savage hominids]], this time their opponents are magic-using, mystical witches led by an EldritchAbomination-like spirit. They don't really know how to deal with them, and would have been killed by them if not for one of the witches performing a HeelFaceTurn. Witnessing their ritual, Fang Spear is no less terrified than he was by the Plague of Madness last episode, and only fights the witches when forced to by their pursuit.
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* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: Not an actual fight, but Spear yells as hard as he can towards Fang in an attempt to break Lula's control of her. This causes Lula to find out why the two are companions to each other.
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* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: Not an actual fight, but Spear yells as hard as he can towards Fang in an attempt to break Lula's control of her. This causes almost works, causing Lula to find out why the two are companions to each other.
* MindControlEyes: Animals controlled by the witches gain blank, green-glowing eyes.
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* OutsideContextProblem: While, until now, Spear and Fang mostly encountered [[PrehistoricMonster giant beasts]] and [[FrazettaMan savage hominids]], this time their opponents are magic-using, mystical witches led by an EldritchAbomination-like spirit. They don't really know how to deal with them, and would have been killed by them if not for one of the witches performing a HeelFaceTurn.
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* OutsideContextProblem: While, until now, Spear and Fang mostly encountered [[PrehistoricMonster giant beasts]] and [[FrazettaMan savage hominids]], this time their opponents are magic-using, mystical witches led by an EldritchAbomination-like spirit. They don't really know how to deal with them, and would have been killed by them if not for one of the witches performing a HeelFaceTurn. Witnessing their ritual, Fang is no less terrified than he was by the Plague of Madness last episode, and only fights the witches when forced to by their pursuit.
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* SicklyGreenGlow: The witches' magic all glows an unpleasant green, as do their eyes when they're using it. Spear and Fang come across their ritual after investigating a column of swirling green light on the horizon.
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* CommonalityConnection: After using magic to gain control Fang, Lula reads the memories of both her and Spear and discovers how the duo had lost their respective families--Lula then reads her own memories and remembers how she had lost her own child, which learns to her HeelFaceTurn.
* GoodWitchVersusBadWitch: Although initially part of the same coven as the other evil witches, Lula goes through a HeelFaceTurn and helps Spear and Fang escape, and ends up duelling the evil matriarch of the coven.
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* NotSoDifferentRemark: After using magic to gain control Fang, Lula reads the memories of both her and Spear and discovers how the duo had lost their respective families--Lula then reads her own memories and remembers how she had lost her own child, which learns to her HeelFaceTurn.
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* SympathyForTheHero: After seeing Fang and Spear's pasts and learning how/why they bonded, Lula realizes they're not so different from her own tragedy, and makes her HeelFaceTurn.
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* SympathyForTheHero: After seeing Fang and Spear's pasts and learning how/why they bonded, Lula realizes they're not so different from her own tragedy, and makes her HeelFaceTurn. Even before properly deciding to help them, when painting Spear with the ritualistic markings, she gently tucks his hair behind his ear, clearly no longer simply seeing him as a sacrifice.
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* TheDogBitesBack: Given the DeathGlare Lula sends the way of some witches after one hisses at her without any real provocation, it's clear that after losing her daughter she's become somewhat of an outcast, further explaining her decision to help Fang and Spear, thus sabotaging another witch's hope for an unnaturally obtained daughter.
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There were no hints anyone else was an outcast.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Lula the good witch is treated with disdain and dirty looks by most of the other witches of the coven, even compared to other childless witches. This is implied to be due to how her own child died by her mistake, and considering [[EvenEvilHasLovedOnes how much care the witches give their magically-created spawn]], this is probably seen as a ''huge'' mark against her.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Lula the good witch is treated with disdain and dirty looks by most of the other witches of the coven, even compared to other childless witches.coven. This is implied to be due to how her own child died by her mistake, and considering [[EvenEvilHasLovedOnes how much care the witches give their magically-created spawn]], this is probably seen as a ''huge'' mark against her.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Lula the good witch is treated with disdain and dirty looks by most of the other witches of the coven, even compared to other childless witches. This is implied to be due to how her own child died by her mistake, and considering [[EvenEvilHasLovedOnes how much care the witches give their magically-created spawn]], this is probably seen as a ''huge'' mark against her.
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* DeathOfAChild: One of the witches lost a child not unlike Spear and Fang, though rather than getting eaten by predators, the child simply fell off a cliff after carelessly ChasingAButterfly.
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* DeathOfAChild: One of the witches (Lula) lost a child not unlike Spear and Fang, though rather than getting eaten by predators, the child simply fell off a cliff after carelessly ChasingAButterfly.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: As wicked as draining the life of others in order to obtain offspring is, the witches are shown to be quite caring and protective of the daughters that the matriarch creates for them.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: As wicked as draining the life of others in order to obtain offspring is, the witches are shown to be quite caring and protective of the daughters that the matriarch creates for them.them, to the point they'll snarl if they see any childless witches eying their daughters for too long.
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* LargeAndInCharge: Most of the witches are smaller than the average human. The matriarch is the size of normal human.
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* LargeAndInCharge: Most of the witches are smaller than the average human. The matriarch is the size of normal human.human and gets even bigger when she transforms.
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Witch Species cleanup for TRS. "Inherently magical species" to Mage Species; misuse and low-/no-context examples are deleted
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* AmbiguouslyHuman: It's unclear as to whether the witches are primitive humans or a human-like WitchSpecies.
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* AmbiguouslyHuman: It's unclear as to whether the witches are primitive humans or a human-like WitchSpecies.MageSpecies.
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Not So Different has been renamed, and it needs to be dewicked/moved
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* NotSoDifferent: After using magic to gain control Fang, Lula reads the memories of both her and Spear and discovers how the duo had lost their respective families--Lula then reads her own memories and remembers how she had lost her own child, which learns to her HeelFaceTurn.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: After using magic to gain control Fang, Lula reads the memories of both her and Spear and discovers how the duo had lost their respective families--Lula then reads her own memories and remembers how she had lost her own child, which learns to her HeelFaceTurn.
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* SympathyForTheHero: After seeing Fang and Spear's pasts and learning how/why they bonded, Lula realizes they're NotSoDifferent from her own tragedy, and makes her HeelFaceTurn.
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* SympathyForTheHero: After seeing Fang and Spear's pasts and learning how/why they bonded, Lula realizes they're NotSoDifferent not so different from her own tragedy, and makes her HeelFaceTurn.
