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** Fanfic Lynn can't play ''soccer'' because her ''hand'' is bruised, but you don't use your hands in soccer.
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** Fanfic Lynn can't play ''soccer'' because her ''hand'' is bruised, but you don't use your hands in soccer. (Unless you're the goalie -- which she isn't.)
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* DeconstructionFic: ''My First Fanfic, I Know It's Really Bad'' is this towards a FandomSpecificPlot, having fanfic Luna briefly hit the RageBreakingPoint about how she's often seen as the 'nicest sister'.
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* HeadDesk: Lisa starts angrily banging her head against the wall after the line, "Bun-Bun who could done this to you," in ''Stuffed Anger'' and doesn't stop until Lincoln has to pick her up and put her to bed.
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* {{Irony}}: The story the Louds end up having the most positive reaction to is also the one that [[SelfDeprecation directly calls itself bad in the title.]]
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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: Lisa's reaction to hearing the second fic's SelfDeprecation-laden title is an exasperated, "Ohhh boy."
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**Also, in ''Stuffed Anger'', Luan apparently knows how to sew.
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* EarlyPersonalitySigns: As Lincoln and his sisters read ''My First Fanfic, I Know it's Really Bad'', fanfic Lola shouts that she's had her pocket mirror ever since she won her first beauty pageant at the age of four. The real Lola, however, actually won her first beauty pageant when she was three-and-a-half.
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* EarlyPersonalitySigns: As Lincoln and his sisters read In ''My First Fanfic, I Know it's Really Bad'', fanfic Lola shouts that she's had her pocket mirror ever since she won her first beauty pageant at the age of four. The real Lola, however, actually won her first beauty pageant when she was three-and-a-half.
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*EarlyPersonalitySigns: As Lincoln and his sisters read ''My First Fanfic, I Know it's Really Bad'', fanfic Lola shouts that she's had her pocket mirror ever since she won her first beauty pageant at the age of four. The real Lola, however, actually won her first beauty pageant when she was three-and-a-half.
* InSeriesNickname: Nolan is first introduced by his nickname "Noey", which confuses the Louds.
* LastNameBasis: The great-grandmother in ''Stuffed Anger'' is addressed as "Great-Grandma Loud".
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* InSeriesNickname: Nolan is first introduced by his nickname "Noey", which confuses the Louds.
* LastNameBasis: The great-grandmother in ''Stuffed Anger'' is addressed as "Great-Grandma Loud".
* LastNameBasis: The great-grandmother in ''Stuffed Anger'' is addressed as "Great-Grandma Loud".
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*AdaptationalSkill: In ''Lynn's Bruised Hand'', Lana can skateboard.
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** Fanfic Lincoln in ''Stuffed Anger'' once dressed as the Count from ''Series/SesameStreet''. Again, the Louds haven't heard of it but they have an equivalent show-- ''Poppy Avenue''.
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** Fanfic Lincoln in ''Stuffed Anger'' once dressed as the Count Amazing Mumford from ''Series/SesameStreet''. Again, the Louds haven't heard of it but they have an equivalent show-- ''Poppy Avenue''.
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The first one is ''Lynn's Bruised Hand'' and it opens on Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn on bikes and Fic!Lana on a skateboard. Then, who comes along on their scooter but ''the narrator'', accompanying a rollerskating Fic!Leni. This narrator is a teenage boy who a very acrobatic Fic!Leni addresses as "Noey".
After some tricks and both Fic!Lynn and the real Lynn showing off, they get to the park and get to work, because [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext apparently]] Fic!Rita and Fic!Lynn Sr. chose them to move a vending machine from the front of the park to the bathrooms.
Fic!Lynn notices her lucky ping pong ball has rolled behind the vending machine. Lynn says that she's not that scattered, only for her siblings to find some of her belongings in random places. Fic!Lynn goes to get her ball, but the others don't notice and push the vending machine, bruising her hand. She wants to keep working, but then decides to see a doctor... for a bruise.
Later, they arrive home (except Fic!Lynn, who apparently had to go to hospital) and "Noey" is sleeping over. When everyone's in bed, Fic!Lynn arrives home with her hand bandaged, goes to bed herself, and notes that she can't do anything. Wait a minute-- Fic!Lynn got injured because she made a bad choice, not out of incompetence, so maybe she's worried the injury will put her out of commission. But Lynn has been injured way worse in the past, and she starts listing her past injuries.
The next morning, Fic!Lynn's hand still hurts, so she's asked to be the shag in soccer. She refuses, claiming that everyone will laugh at her, even though, as the real Lynn points out, that would imply that for every practice they'd laugh at whoever was the shag, and being the shag may be a boring job but it's necessary.
"Noey", whose real name is Nolan, then shows up and Fic!Lynn asks him to be the shag. He objects because he somehow knows that's her job. He leaves, and she decides to stay hiding in the bush until her hand is better.
That evening, Fic!Lynn still hasn't come home, so Nolan, who's apparently sleeping over again, goes out to find her. She's a bit insecure at first, but then admits that she's been having trouble with her hand and feels she can't do anything. He cheers her up saying they're still friends, and that's it.
After some tricks and both Fic!Lynn and the real Lynn showing off, they get to the park and get to work, because [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext apparently]] Fic!Rita and Fic!Lynn Sr. chose them to move a vending machine from the front of the park to the bathrooms.
Fic!Lynn notices her lucky ping pong ball has rolled behind the vending machine. Lynn says that she's not that scattered, only for her siblings to find some of her belongings in random places. Fic!Lynn goes to get her ball, but the others don't notice and push the vending machine, bruising her hand. She wants to keep working, but then decides to see a doctor... for a bruise.
Later, they arrive home (except Fic!Lynn, who apparently had to go to hospital) and "Noey" is sleeping over. When everyone's in bed, Fic!Lynn arrives home with her hand bandaged, goes to bed herself, and notes that she can't do anything. Wait a minute-- Fic!Lynn got injured because she made a bad choice, not out of incompetence, so maybe she's worried the injury will put her out of commission. But Lynn has been injured way worse in the past, and she starts listing her past injuries.
The next morning, Fic!Lynn's hand still hurts, so she's asked to be the shag in soccer. She refuses, claiming that everyone will laugh at her, even though, as the real Lynn points out, that would imply that for every practice they'd laugh at whoever was the shag, and being the shag may be a boring job but it's necessary.
"Noey", whose real name is Nolan, then shows up and Fic!Lynn asks him to be the shag. He objects because he somehow knows that's her job. He leaves, and she decides to stay hiding in the bush until her hand is better.
That evening, Fic!Lynn still hasn't come home, so Nolan, who's apparently sleeping over again, goes out to find her. She's a bit insecure at first, but then admits that she's been having trouble with her hand and feels she can't do anything. He cheers her up saying they're still friends, and that's it.
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The first one is ''Lynn's Bruised Hand'' and it opens on Fic!Lincoln Lincoln and Fic!Lynn Lynn on bikes and Fic!Lana Lana on a skateboard. Then, who comes along on their scooter but ''the narrator'', accompanying a rollerskating Fic!Leni. Leni. This narrator is a teenage boy who a very acrobatic Fic!Leni Leni addresses as "Noey".
After some tricks and bothFic!Lynn fanfic Lynn and the real Lynn showing off, they get to the park and get to work, because [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext apparently]] Fic!Rita Rita and Fic!Lynn Lynn Sr. chose them to move a vending machine from the front of the park to the bathrooms.
Fic!Lynn Fanfic Lynn notices her lucky ping pong ball has rolled behind the vending machine. The real Lynn says that she's not that scattered, only for her siblings to find some of her belongings in random places. Fic!Lynn Fanfic Lynn goes to get her ball, but the others don't notice and push the vending machine, bruising her hand. She wants to keep working, but then decides to see a doctor... for a bruise.
Later, they arrive home (exceptFic!Lynn, Lynn, who apparently had to go to hospital) and "Noey" is sleeping over. When everyone's in bed, Fic!Lynn Lynn arrives home with her hand bandaged, goes to bed herself, and notes that she can't do anything. Wait a minute-- Fic!Lynn in the fanfic, Lynn got injured because she made a bad choice, not out of incompetence, so maybe she's worried the injury will put her out of commission. But Lynn has been injured way worse in the past, and she the real one starts listing her past injuries.
The next morning,Fic!Lynn's fanfic Lynn's hand still hurts, so she's asked to be the shag in soccer. She refuses, claiming that everyone will laugh at her, even though, as the real Lynn points out, that would imply that for every practice they'd laugh at whoever was the shag, and being the shag may be a boring job but it's necessary.
"Noey", whose real name is Nolan, then shows up andFic!Lynn Lynn asks him to be the shag. He objects because he somehow knows that's her job. He leaves, and she decides to stay hiding in the bush until her hand is better.
That evening,Fic!Lynn fanfic Lynn still hasn't come home, so Nolan, who's apparently sleeping over again, goes out to find her. She's a bit insecure at first, but then admits that she's been having trouble with her hand and feels she can't do anything. He cheers her up saying they're still friends, and that's it.
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Later, they arrive home (except
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"Noey", whose real name is Nolan, then shows up and
That evening,
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We open on Fic!Luna going home from school, tired. She ends up stepping on Fic!Lola's mirror, breaking it. Fic!Lola is mad and, just like Fic!Lincoln in Episode 10, thinks Fic!Luna is supposed to be the nicest sister. Then, Fic!Izzy climbs up Fic!Luna's leg and, mistaking her for a spider, kicks her, angering Fic!Lana who ''also'' claims Fic!Luna is meant to be the nicest sister.
Fic!Luna listens to music for half an hour, then Fic!Lincoln arrives and asks for homework help because Fic!Lori and Fic!Lisa are too busy and Fic!Leni is too dumb. He claims she's usually nicer, causing her to go into rant mode. Apparently it's one of those "deconstructing the genre" fanfics... but the Louds never had Luna on a pedestal.
She starts to feel guilty, then Fic!Lincoln and the twins come in to apologise (even though Fic!Lincoln had nothing to apologise for) and they hug it out. Later, Fic!Luan apologises for joking at a serious time, Fic!Luna says it was no big deal, they go to bed, and the fanfic ends.
Fic!Luna listens to music for half an hour, then Fic!Lincoln arrives and asks for homework help because Fic!Lori and Fic!Lisa are too busy and Fic!Leni is too dumb. He claims she's usually nicer, causing her to go into rant mode. Apparently it's one of those "deconstructing the genre" fanfics... but the Louds never had Luna on a pedestal.
She starts to feel guilty, then Fic!Lincoln and the twins come in to apologise (even though Fic!Lincoln had nothing to apologise for) and they hug it out. Later, Fic!Luan apologises for joking at a serious time, Fic!Luna says it was no big deal, they go to bed, and the fanfic ends.
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We open on Fic!Luna fanfic Luna going home from school, tired. She ends up stepping on Fic!Lola's Lola's mirror, breaking it. Fic!Lola Lola is mad and, just like Fic!Lincoln the Lincoln from the story in Episode 10, thinks Fic!Luna Luna is supposed to be the nicest sister. Then, Fic!Izzy still in the story, Izzy climbs up Fic!Luna's Luna's leg and, mistaking her for a spider, kicks her, angering Fic!Lana Lana who ''also'' claims Fic!Luna Luna is meant to be the nicest sister.
Fic!Luna Fanfic Luna listens to music for half an hour, then Fic!Lincoln Lincoln arrives and asks for homework help because Fic!Lori Lori and Fic!Lisa Lisa are too busy and Fic!Leni Leni is too dumb. He claims she's usually nicer, causing her to go into rant mode. Apparently it's one of those "deconstructing the genre" fanfics... but the Louds never had Luna on a pedestal.
She starts to feel guilty, thenFic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln and the twins come in to apologise (even though Fic!Lincoln Lincoln had nothing to apologise for) and they hug it out. Later, Fic!Luan fanfic Luan apologises for joking at a serious time, Fic!Luna Luna says it was no big deal, they go to bed, and the fanfic ends.
She starts to feel guilty, then
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It begins at night, with Fic!Lincoln looking for Bun-Bun. Fic!Lola complains and tells him to grow up, then Fic!Lincoln finds Bun-Bun and goes off to sleep, but she's still mad.
The next morning, Fic!Lincoln finds all his sisters looking worried. They have bad news: Bun-Bun apparently "got through a fight" with either Fic!Charles or Fic!Cliff and he's now broken. While the rest of the Louds wonder who could've taken Bun-Bun, Lisa is banging her head against the wall because the grammar is so bad.
Fic!Leni promises to fix Bun-Bun, along with Fic!Luan (odd, since the real Luan can't sew). Fic!Lincoln gets dressed, then notices the twins aren't present. He asks where they are and Fic!Lisa informs them that Fic!Lana is at the doctor's. Fic!Lucy wonders if it was actually Fic!Lola who tore Bun-Bun, so they go to the twins' room where she reveals that she did do it. Lisa keeps thumping her head, so Lincoln takes her upstairs.
Fic!Lola has a plan for making up for Fic!Lincoln, and Fic!Lisa wants to know why he likes Bun-Bun so much despite his age and how he got Bun-Bun. Fic!Lincoln tells his sisters that eight or so years ago, his great-grandmother gave Bun-Bun to him.
Lincoln comes back, having apparently gotten Lisa to fall asleep with a lullaby. Fic!Lincoln continues to reminisce about Bun-Bun, such as when he used him as a Halloween prop, and when he was in hospital because Fic!Lynn accidentally broke his arm (apparently, the real Lynn did that too, and called Lincoln a frail Nancy boy, but she also brought him Bun-Bun like Fic!Lynn did).
Fic!Lola tells the truth and gives him gifts to apologise: his victory undies and an action figure (even though, as the real Lincoln and Lola point out, he already has those). They hug, then everyone goes to Burpin' Burger except Fic!Leni.
The next morning, Fic!Lincoln finds all his sisters looking worried. They have bad news: Bun-Bun apparently "got through a fight" with either Fic!Charles or Fic!Cliff and he's now broken. While the rest of the Louds wonder who could've taken Bun-Bun, Lisa is banging her head against the wall because the grammar is so bad.
Fic!Leni promises to fix Bun-Bun, along with Fic!Luan (odd, since the real Luan can't sew). Fic!Lincoln gets dressed, then notices the twins aren't present. He asks where they are and Fic!Lisa informs them that Fic!Lana is at the doctor's. Fic!Lucy wonders if it was actually Fic!Lola who tore Bun-Bun, so they go to the twins' room where she reveals that she did do it. Lisa keeps thumping her head, so Lincoln takes her upstairs.
Fic!Lola has a plan for making up for Fic!Lincoln, and Fic!Lisa wants to know why he likes Bun-Bun so much despite his age and how he got Bun-Bun. Fic!Lincoln tells his sisters that eight or so years ago, his great-grandmother gave Bun-Bun to him.
Lincoln comes back, having apparently gotten Lisa to fall asleep with a lullaby. Fic!Lincoln continues to reminisce about Bun-Bun, such as when he used him as a Halloween prop, and when he was in hospital because Fic!Lynn accidentally broke his arm (apparently, the real Lynn did that too, and called Lincoln a frail Nancy boy, but she also brought him Bun-Bun like Fic!Lynn did).
Fic!Lola tells the truth and gives him gifts to apologise: his victory undies and an action figure (even though, as the real Lincoln and Lola point out, he already has those). They hug, then everyone goes to Burpin' Burger except Fic!Leni.
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It begins at night, with Fic!Lincoln Lincoln looking for Bun-Bun. Fic!Lola Lola complains and tells him to grow up, then Fic!Lincoln Lincoln finds Bun-Bun and goes off to sleep, but she's still mad.
The next morning,Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln finds all his sisters looking worried. They have bad news: Bun-Bun apparently "got through a fight" with either Fic!Charles Charles or Fic!Cliff Cliff and he's now broken. While the rest of the Louds wonder who could've taken Bun-Bun, Lisa (the real one) is banging her head against the wall because the grammar is so bad.
Fic!Leni Fanfic Leni promises to fix Bun-Bun, along with Fic!Luan Luan (odd, since the real Luan can't sew). Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln gets dressed, then notices the twins aren't present. He asks where they are and Fic!Lisa Lisa informs them that Fic!Lana Lana is at the doctor's. Fic!Lucy Lucy wonders if it was actually Fic!Lola Lola who tore Bun-Bun, so they go to the twins' room where she reveals that she did do it. Back in reality, Lisa keeps thumping her head, so Lincoln takes her upstairs.
Fic!Lola Fanfic Lola has a plan for making up for Fic!Lincoln, Lincoln, and Fic!Lisa Lisa wants to know why he likes Bun-Bun so much despite his age and how he got Bun-Bun. Fic!Lincoln Lincoln tells his sisters that eight or so years ago, his great-grandmother gave Bun-Bun to him.
Lincoln comes back, having apparently gotten Lisa to fall asleep with a lullaby.Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln continues to reminisce about Bun-Bun, such as when he used him as a Halloween prop, and when he was in hospital because Fic!Lynn accidentally broke his arm (apparently, the real Lynn did that too, and called Lincoln a frail Nancy boy, but she also brought him Bun-Bun like Fic!Lynn fanfic Lynn did).
Fic!Lola Fanfic Lola tells the truth and gives him gifts to apologise: his victory undies and an action figure (even though, as the real Lincoln and Lola point out, he already has those). They hug, then everyone goes to Burpin' Burger except Fic!Leni.
Fanfic Leni.
The next morning,
Lincoln comes back, having apparently gotten Lisa to fall asleep with a lullaby.
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Fic!Lynn in ''Lynn's Bruised Hand'' is more negative and insecure than the real Lynn and makes even more reckless choices, such as staying in the bush until her hand heals.
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Fic!Lynn Lynn in ''Lynn's Bruised Hand'' is more negative and insecure than the real Lynn and makes even more reckless choices, such as staying in the bush until her hand heals.
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* CharacterExaggeration: Lola has anger issues, but she wouldn't get angry about Lincoln having a stuffed animal like Fic!Lola does.
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* CharacterExaggeration: Lola has anger issues, but she wouldn't get angry about Lincoln having a stuffed animal like Fic!Lola fanfic Lola does.
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* EmbarrassmentPlot: ''Lynn's Bruised Hand'' is mostly about Fic!Lynn being embarrassed about being the shag due to her bruised hand.
* {{Facepalm}}: The Louds facepalm at the fanfic twins thinking Fic!Luna is meant to be the nicest.
* {{Facepalm}}: The Louds facepalm at the fanfic twins thinking Fic!Luna is meant to be the nicest.
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* EmbarrassmentPlot: ''Lynn's Bruised Hand'' is mostly about Fic!Lynn Lynn being embarrassed about being the shag due to her bruised hand.
* {{Facepalm}}: The Louds facepalm at the fanfic twins thinkingFic!Luna Luna is meant to be the nicest.
* {{Facepalm}}: The Louds facepalm at the fanfic twins thinking
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Fic!Luna cries a bit when she feels guilty about snapping at Fic!Lincoln and the twins, kicking Fic!Izzy, and breaking Fic!Lola's mirror.
* {{Neologism}}: Fic!Lincoln in ''Stuffed Anger'' is described as doing something "whiling" doing something else instead of "while".
* OutOfCharacter: While Fic!Lynn starts off in character (superstitious, wanting to work through the pain), once injured she becomes uncharacteristically mopey and jumpy about her bruised hand, wanting a doctor and complaining of not being able to do anything.
* {{Neologism}}: Fic!Lincoln in ''Stuffed Anger'' is described as doing something "whiling" doing something else instead of "while".
* OutOfCharacter: While Fic!Lynn starts off in character (superstitious, wanting to work through the pain), once injured she becomes uncharacteristically mopey and jumpy about her bruised hand, wanting a doctor and complaining of not being able to do anything.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Fic!Luna Fanfic Luna cries a bit when she feels guilty about snapping at Fic!Lincoln Lincoln and the twins, kicking Fic!Izzy, Izzy, and breaking Fic!Lola's Lola's mirror.
* {{Neologism}}:Fic!Lincoln Lincoln in ''Stuffed Anger'' is described as doing something "whiling" doing something else instead of "while".
* OutOfCharacter: WhileFic!Lynn fanfic Lynn starts off in character (superstitious, wanting to work through the pain), once injured she becomes uncharacteristically mopey and jumpy about her bruised hand, wanting a doctor and complaining of not being able to do anything.
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* OutOfCharacter: While
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** Nolan, Fic!Leni, Fic!Lynn, Fic!Lincoln, fanfic Leni, fanfic Lynn, fanfic Lincoln, and Fic!Lana fanfic Lana being chosen by the fanfic Loud parents to move a vending machine from the front of the park to the bathrooms raises a lot of questions:
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** Fic!Lynn can't play ''soccer'' because her ''hand'' is bruised, but you don't use your hands in soccer.
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** Fic!Lynn Fanfic Lynn can't play ''soccer'' because her ''hand'' is bruised, but you don't use your hands in soccer.
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** In ''My First Fanfic, I Know it's Really Bad'', Fic!Luan says that the situation of Fic!Luna breaking Fic!Lola's pocket mirror requires "reflection".
** In ''Stuffed Anger'', Fic!Luan claims she can sew because she can "keep Mr. Coconuts in stitches". Then, she says, "I'll be brief on it" about Fic!Lincoln's being in his undies.
** In ''Stuffed Anger'', Fic!Luan claims she can sew because she can "keep Mr. Coconuts in stitches". Then, she says, "I'll be brief on it" about Fic!Lincoln's being in his undies.
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** In ''My First Fanfic, I Know it's Really Bad'', Fic!Luan fanfic Luan says that the situation of Fic!Luna Luna breaking Fic!Lola's Lola's pocket mirror requires "reflection".
** In ''Stuffed Anger'',Fic!Luan fanfic Luan claims she can sew because she can "keep Mr. Coconuts in stitches". Then, she says, "I'll be brief on it" about Fic!Lincoln's Lincoln's being in his undies.
** In ''Stuffed Anger'',
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** Fic!Lincoln is described as "peddling" instead of "pedalling" in ''Lynn's Bruised Hand''.
** In ''Stuffed Anger'', Fic!Lincoln is described as "wimpier" instead of "whimpering".
** In ''Stuffed Anger'', Fic!Lincoln is described as "wimpier" instead of "whimpering".
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** Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln is described as "peddling" instead of "pedalling" in ''Lynn's Bruised Hand''.
** In ''Stuffed Anger'',Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln is described as "wimpier" instead of "whimpering".
** In ''Stuffed Anger'',
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** Fic!Lincoln in ''Stuffed Anger'' once dressed as the Count from ''Series/SesameStreet''. Again, the Louds haven't heard of it but they have an equivalent show-- ''Poppy Avenue''.
* TearsOfJoy: Fic!Luna cries tears of joy at Fic!Lincoln and the twins' apology.
* TearsOfJoy: Fic!Luna cries tears of joy at Fic!Lincoln and the twins' apology.
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** Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln in ''Stuffed Anger'' once dressed as the Count from ''Series/SesameStreet''. Again, the Louds haven't heard of it but they have an equivalent show-- ''Poppy Avenue''.
* TearsOfJoy:Fic!Luna Fanfic Luna cries tears of joy at Fic!Lincoln Lincoln and the twins' apology.
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We open on Lincoln, Lisa, Lynn, and the twins sitting on the couch as normal. Today, they'll be spicing things up and reading three short stories instead of one longer one. Lynn uses a food-related analogy and Lisa asks a question: Do these stories have a theme? Lincoln says yes-- they're all the authors' early stories.
The first one is ''Lynn's Bruised Hand'' and it opens on Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn on bikes and Fic!Lana on a skateboard. Then, who comes along on their scooter but ''the narrator'', accompanying a rollerskating Fic!Leni. This narrator is a teenage boy who a very acrobatic Fic!Leni addresses as "Noey".
After some tricks and both Fic!Lynn and the real Lynn showing off, they get to the park and get to work, because [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext apparently]] Fic!Rita and Fic!Lynn Sr. chose them to move a vending machine from the front of the park to the bathrooms.
Fic!Lynn notices her lucky ping pong ball has rolled behind the vending machine. Lynn says that she's not that scattered, only for her siblings to find some of her belongings in random places. Fic!Lynn goes to get her ball, but the others don't notice and push the vending machine, bruising her hand. She wants to keep working, but then decides to see a doctor... for a bruise.
Later, they arrive home (except Fic!Lynn, who apparently had to go to hospital) and "Noey" is sleeping over. When everyone's in bed, Fic!Lynn arrives home with her hand bandaged, goes to bed herself, and notes that she can't do anything. Wait a minute-- Fic!Lynn got injured because she made a bad choice, not out of incompetence, so maybe she's worried the injury will put her out of commission. But Lynn has been injured way worse in the past, and she starts listing her past injuries.
The next morning, Fic!Lynn's hand still hurts, so she's asked to be the shag in soccer. She refuses, claiming that everyone will laugh at her, even though, as the real Lynn points out, that would imply that for every practice they'd laugh at whoever was the shag, and being the shag may be a boring job but it's necessary.
"Noey", whose real name is Nolan, then shows up and Fic!Lynn asks him to be the shag. He objects because he somehow knows that's her job. He leaves, and she decides to stay hiding in the bush until her hand is better.
That evening, Fic!Lynn still hasn't come home, so Nolan, who's apparently sleeping over again, goes out to find her. She's a bit insecure at first, but then admits that she's been having trouble with her hand and feels she can't do anything. He cheers her up saying they're still friends, and that's it.
While the Louds find it kind of a decent story, and Lisa likes how Nolan doesn't hog the spotlight, Lynn is a bit dissatisfied at her portrayal as a "wimpy sad-sack".
Onto the next story, which is called, oh boy, ''My First Fanfic, I Know it's Really Bad''.
We open on Fic!Luna going home from school, tired. She ends up stepping on Fic!Lola's mirror, breaking it. Fic!Lola is mad and, just like Fic!Lincoln in Episode 10, thinks Fic!Luna is supposed to be the nicest sister. Then, Fic!Izzy climbs up Fic!Luna's leg and, mistaking her for a spider, kicks her, angering Fic!Lana who ''also'' claims Fic!Luna is meant to be the nicest sister.
Fic!Luna listens to music for half an hour, then Fic!Lincoln arrives and asks for homework help because Fic!Lori and Fic!Lisa are too busy and Fic!Leni is too dumb. He claims she's usually nicer, causing her to go into rant mode. Apparently it's one of those "deconstructing the genre" fanfics... but the Louds never had Luna on a pedestal.
She starts to feel guilty, then Fic!Lincoln and the twins come in to apologise (even though Fic!Lincoln had nothing to apologise for) and they hug it out. Later, Fic!Luan apologises for joking at a serious time, Fic!Luna says it was no big deal, they go to bed, and the fanfic ends.
Lisa concludes that it was a decent story despite not knowing why some people think Luna is the nicest. Now, onto the last one, ''Stuffed Anger''.
It begins at night, with Fic!Lincoln looking for Bun-Bun. Fic!Lola complains and tells him to grow up, then Fic!Lincoln finds Bun-Bun and goes off to sleep, but she's still mad.
The next morning, Fic!Lincoln finds all his sisters looking worried. They have bad news: Bun-Bun apparently "got through a fight" with either Fic!Charles or Fic!Cliff and he's now broken. While the rest of the Louds wonder who could've taken Bun-Bun, Lisa is banging her head against the wall because the grammar is so bad.
Fic!Leni promises to fix Bun-Bun, along with Fic!Luan (odd, since the real Luan can't sew). Fic!Lincoln gets dressed, then notices the twins aren't present. He asks where they are and Fic!Lisa informs them that Fic!Lana is at the doctor's. Fic!Lucy wonders if it was actually Fic!Lola who tore Bun-Bun, so they go to the twins' room where she reveals that she did do it. Lisa keeps thumping her head, so Lincoln takes her upstairs.
Fic!Lola has a plan for making up for Fic!Lincoln, and Fic!Lisa wants to know why he likes Bun-Bun so much despite his age and how he got Bun-Bun. Fic!Lincoln tells his sisters that eight or so years ago, his great-grandmother gave Bun-Bun to him.
Lincoln comes back, having apparently gotten Lisa to fall asleep with a lullaby. Fic!Lincoln continues to reminisce about Bun-Bun, such as when he used him as a Halloween prop, and when he was in hospital because Fic!Lynn accidentally broke his arm (apparently, the real Lynn did that too, and called Lincoln a frail Nancy boy, but she also brought him Bun-Bun like Fic!Lynn did).
Fic!Lola tells the truth and gives him gifts to apologise: his victory undies and an action figure (even though, as the real Lincoln and Lola point out, he already has those). They hug, then everyone goes to Burpin' Burger except Fic!Leni.
The episode ends with Lynn apologising for Lisa's having to go to bed.
!! This episode provides examples of
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Fic!Lynn in ''Lynn's Bruised Hand'' is more negative and insecure than the real Lynn and makes even more reckless choices, such as staying in the bush until her hand heals.
* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Izzy once peed on Lola's bed, but lizards don't pee-- they poop like birds instead.
* CharacterExaggeration: Lola has anger issues, but she wouldn't get angry about Lincoln having a stuffed animal like Fic!Lola does.
* ContinuityNod: Lynn remembers Luna threatening Lincoln for taking Luan's side in an argument over a fog machine, which happened in "Garage Banned".
* DeathGlare: Lola gives Lana a "pointed look" about Izzy peeing on her bedsheets.
* DeliciousDaydream: When Lynn compares the episode to serving three specific appetisers, she ends up rubbing her tummy with a dreamy expression.
* EmbarrassmentPlot: ''Lynn's Bruised Hand'' is mostly about Fic!Lynn being embarrassed about being the shag due to her bruised hand.
* {{Facepalm}}: The Louds facepalm at the fanfic twins thinking Fic!Luna is meant to be the nicest.
* IncrediblyLameFun: Nolan likes being the shag.
* InstantlyProvenWrong: Lynn claims that nothing she owns is ever out of place, only for Lincoln to find her fingerless gloves in his pocket, Lisa to find Lynn's eye black in her (Lisa's) pocket, Lola to find Lynn's shin guards under the couch, and Lana to find Lynn's tennis ball ''in her (Lana's) mouth''.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Fic!Luna cries a bit when she feels guilty about snapping at Fic!Lincoln and the twins, kicking Fic!Izzy, and breaking Fic!Lola's mirror.
* {{Neologism}}: Fic!Lincoln in ''Stuffed Anger'' is described as doing something "whiling" doing something else instead of "while".
* OutOfCharacter: While Fic!Lynn starts off in character (superstitious, wanting to work through the pain), once injured she becomes uncharacteristically mopey and jumpy about her bruised hand, wanting a doctor and complaining of not being able to do anything.
* InSeriesNickname: Nolan is first introduced by his nickname "Noey", which confuses the Louds.
* LastNameBasis: The great-grandmother in ''Stuffed Anger'' is addressed as "Great-Grandma Loud".
* PlotHole:
** Nolan, Fic!Leni, Fic!Lynn, Fic!Lincoln, and Fic!Lana being chosen by the fanfic Loud parents to move a vending machine from the front of the park to the bathrooms raises a lot of questions:
*** Why were they asked? Aren't there people who are paid to do that sort of thing?
*** Why would a vending machine even be needed at the bathrooms?
*** How did the fanfic versions of the Loud parents even get permission to ask their kids (and their kids' friend) to move the vending machine?
** Fic!Lynn can't play ''soccer'' because her ''hand'' is bruised, but you don't use your hands in soccer.
* {{Pun}}:
** In ''My First Fanfic, I Know it's Really Bad'', Fic!Luan says that the situation of Fic!Luna breaking Fic!Lola's pocket mirror requires "reflection".
** In ''Stuffed Anger'', Fic!Luan claims she can sew because she can "keep Mr. Coconuts in stitches". Then, she says, "I'll be brief on it" about Fic!Lincoln's being in his undies.
* RogueAnglesOfSatin:
** Fic!Lincoln is described as "peddling" instead of "pedalling" in ''Lynn's Bruised Hand''.
** In ''Stuffed Anger'', Fic!Lincoln is described as "wimpier" instead of "whimpering".
* SelfDeprecation: The second story has "I know it's really bad" in its title.
* SelfInsertFic:
** ''Lynn's Bruised Hand'' features the narrator as a character.
** Lana once wrote a story about herself and Blarney the Dinosaur.
* ShoutOut:
** ''Lynn's Bruised Hand'' is based on an episode of ''WesternAnimation/TheodoreTugboat'', which the Louds haven't heard of but they have an equivalent called ''Samuel Steamship''.
** Fic!Lincoln in ''Stuffed Anger'' once dressed as the Count from ''Series/SesameStreet''. Again, the Louds haven't heard of it but they have an equivalent show-- ''Poppy Avenue''.
* TearsOfJoy: Fic!Luna cries tears of joy at Fic!Lincoln and the twins' apology.
* TwitchyEye: Lisa has one of the "angry eye twitch" variety when she's annoyed with the grammar problems so her eye twitches.
* UrineTrouble: Apparently, Izzy once peed on Lola's bedsheets.
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The first one is ''Lynn's Bruised Hand'' and it opens on Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Lynn on bikes and Fic!Lana on a skateboard. Then, who comes along on their scooter but ''the narrator'', accompanying a rollerskating Fic!Leni. This narrator is a teenage boy who a very acrobatic Fic!Leni addresses as "Noey".
After some tricks and both Fic!Lynn and the real Lynn showing off, they get to the park and get to work, because [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext apparently]] Fic!Rita and Fic!Lynn Sr. chose them to move a vending machine from the front of the park to the bathrooms.
Fic!Lynn notices her lucky ping pong ball has rolled behind the vending machine. Lynn says that she's not that scattered, only for her siblings to find some of her belongings in random places. Fic!Lynn goes to get her ball, but the others don't notice and push the vending machine, bruising her hand. She wants to keep working, but then decides to see a doctor... for a bruise.
Later, they arrive home (except Fic!Lynn, who apparently had to go to hospital) and "Noey" is sleeping over. When everyone's in bed, Fic!Lynn arrives home with her hand bandaged, goes to bed herself, and notes that she can't do anything. Wait a minute-- Fic!Lynn got injured because she made a bad choice, not out of incompetence, so maybe she's worried the injury will put her out of commission. But Lynn has been injured way worse in the past, and she starts listing her past injuries.
The next morning, Fic!Lynn's hand still hurts, so she's asked to be the shag in soccer. She refuses, claiming that everyone will laugh at her, even though, as the real Lynn points out, that would imply that for every practice they'd laugh at whoever was the shag, and being the shag may be a boring job but it's necessary.
"Noey", whose real name is Nolan, then shows up and Fic!Lynn asks him to be the shag. He objects because he somehow knows that's her job. He leaves, and she decides to stay hiding in the bush until her hand is better.
That evening, Fic!Lynn still hasn't come home, so Nolan, who's apparently sleeping over again, goes out to find her. She's a bit insecure at first, but then admits that she's been having trouble with her hand and feels she can't do anything. He cheers her up saying they're still friends, and that's it.
While the Louds find it kind of a decent story, and Lisa likes how Nolan doesn't hog the spotlight, Lynn is a bit dissatisfied at her portrayal as a "wimpy sad-sack".
Onto the next story, which is called, oh boy, ''My First Fanfic, I Know it's Really Bad''.
We open on Fic!Luna going home from school, tired. She ends up stepping on Fic!Lola's mirror, breaking it. Fic!Lola is mad and, just like Fic!Lincoln in Episode 10, thinks Fic!Luna is supposed to be the nicest sister. Then, Fic!Izzy climbs up Fic!Luna's leg and, mistaking her for a spider, kicks her, angering Fic!Lana who ''also'' claims Fic!Luna is meant to be the nicest sister.
Fic!Luna listens to music for half an hour, then Fic!Lincoln arrives and asks for homework help because Fic!Lori and Fic!Lisa are too busy and Fic!Leni is too dumb. He claims she's usually nicer, causing her to go into rant mode. Apparently it's one of those "deconstructing the genre" fanfics... but the Louds never had Luna on a pedestal.
She starts to feel guilty, then Fic!Lincoln and the twins come in to apologise (even though Fic!Lincoln had nothing to apologise for) and they hug it out. Later, Fic!Luan apologises for joking at a serious time, Fic!Luna says it was no big deal, they go to bed, and the fanfic ends.
Lisa concludes that it was a decent story despite not knowing why some people think Luna is the nicest. Now, onto the last one, ''Stuffed Anger''.
It begins at night, with Fic!Lincoln looking for Bun-Bun. Fic!Lola complains and tells him to grow up, then Fic!Lincoln finds Bun-Bun and goes off to sleep, but she's still mad.
The next morning, Fic!Lincoln finds all his sisters looking worried. They have bad news: Bun-Bun apparently "got through a fight" with either Fic!Charles or Fic!Cliff and he's now broken. While the rest of the Louds wonder who could've taken Bun-Bun, Lisa is banging her head against the wall because the grammar is so bad.
Fic!Leni promises to fix Bun-Bun, along with Fic!Luan (odd, since the real Luan can't sew). Fic!Lincoln gets dressed, then notices the twins aren't present. He asks where they are and Fic!Lisa informs them that Fic!Lana is at the doctor's. Fic!Lucy wonders if it was actually Fic!Lola who tore Bun-Bun, so they go to the twins' room where she reveals that she did do it. Lisa keeps thumping her head, so Lincoln takes her upstairs.
Fic!Lola has a plan for making up for Fic!Lincoln, and Fic!Lisa wants to know why he likes Bun-Bun so much despite his age and how he got Bun-Bun. Fic!Lincoln tells his sisters that eight or so years ago, his great-grandmother gave Bun-Bun to him.
Lincoln comes back, having apparently gotten Lisa to fall asleep with a lullaby. Fic!Lincoln continues to reminisce about Bun-Bun, such as when he used him as a Halloween prop, and when he was in hospital because Fic!Lynn accidentally broke his arm (apparently, the real Lynn did that too, and called Lincoln a frail Nancy boy, but she also brought him Bun-Bun like Fic!Lynn did).
Fic!Lola tells the truth and gives him gifts to apologise: his victory undies and an action figure (even though, as the real Lincoln and Lola point out, he already has those). They hug, then everyone goes to Burpin' Burger except Fic!Leni.
The episode ends with Lynn apologising for Lisa's having to go to bed.
!! This episode provides examples of
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Fic!Lynn in ''Lynn's Bruised Hand'' is more negative and insecure than the real Lynn and makes even more reckless choices, such as staying in the bush until her hand heals.
* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Izzy once peed on Lola's bed, but lizards don't pee-- they poop like birds instead.
* CharacterExaggeration: Lola has anger issues, but she wouldn't get angry about Lincoln having a stuffed animal like Fic!Lola does.
* ContinuityNod: Lynn remembers Luna threatening Lincoln for taking Luan's side in an argument over a fog machine, which happened in "Garage Banned".
* DeathGlare: Lola gives Lana a "pointed look" about Izzy peeing on her bedsheets.
* DeliciousDaydream: When Lynn compares the episode to serving three specific appetisers, she ends up rubbing her tummy with a dreamy expression.
* EmbarrassmentPlot: ''Lynn's Bruised Hand'' is mostly about Fic!Lynn being embarrassed about being the shag due to her bruised hand.
* {{Facepalm}}: The Louds facepalm at the fanfic twins thinking Fic!Luna is meant to be the nicest.
* IncrediblyLameFun: Nolan likes being the shag.
* InstantlyProvenWrong: Lynn claims that nothing she owns is ever out of place, only for Lincoln to find her fingerless gloves in his pocket, Lisa to find Lynn's eye black in her (Lisa's) pocket, Lola to find Lynn's shin guards under the couch, and Lana to find Lynn's tennis ball ''in her (Lana's) mouth''.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Fic!Luna cries a bit when she feels guilty about snapping at Fic!Lincoln and the twins, kicking Fic!Izzy, and breaking Fic!Lola's mirror.
* {{Neologism}}: Fic!Lincoln in ''Stuffed Anger'' is described as doing something "whiling" doing something else instead of "while".
* OutOfCharacter: While Fic!Lynn starts off in character (superstitious, wanting to work through the pain), once injured she becomes uncharacteristically mopey and jumpy about her bruised hand, wanting a doctor and complaining of not being able to do anything.
* InSeriesNickname: Nolan is first introduced by his nickname "Noey", which confuses the Louds.
* LastNameBasis: The great-grandmother in ''Stuffed Anger'' is addressed as "Great-Grandma Loud".
* PlotHole:
** Nolan, Fic!Leni, Fic!Lynn, Fic!Lincoln, and Fic!Lana being chosen by the fanfic Loud parents to move a vending machine from the front of the park to the bathrooms raises a lot of questions:
*** Why were they asked? Aren't there people who are paid to do that sort of thing?
*** Why would a vending machine even be needed at the bathrooms?
*** How did the fanfic versions of the Loud parents even get permission to ask their kids (and their kids' friend) to move the vending machine?
** Fic!Lynn can't play ''soccer'' because her ''hand'' is bruised, but you don't use your hands in soccer.
* {{Pun}}:
** In ''My First Fanfic, I Know it's Really Bad'', Fic!Luan says that the situation of Fic!Luna breaking Fic!Lola's pocket mirror requires "reflection".
** In ''Stuffed Anger'', Fic!Luan claims she can sew because she can "keep Mr. Coconuts in stitches". Then, she says, "I'll be brief on it" about Fic!Lincoln's being in his undies.
* RogueAnglesOfSatin:
** Fic!Lincoln is described as "peddling" instead of "pedalling" in ''Lynn's Bruised Hand''.
** In ''Stuffed Anger'', Fic!Lincoln is described as "wimpier" instead of "whimpering".
* SelfDeprecation: The second story has "I know it's really bad" in its title.
* SelfInsertFic:
** ''Lynn's Bruised Hand'' features the narrator as a character.
** Lana once wrote a story about herself and Blarney the Dinosaur.
* ShoutOut:
** ''Lynn's Bruised Hand'' is based on an episode of ''WesternAnimation/TheodoreTugboat'', which the Louds haven't heard of but they have an equivalent called ''Samuel Steamship''.
** Fic!Lincoln in ''Stuffed Anger'' once dressed as the Count from ''Series/SesameStreet''. Again, the Louds haven't heard of it but they have an equivalent show-- ''Poppy Avenue''.
* TearsOfJoy: Fic!Luna cries tears of joy at Fic!Lincoln and the twins' apology.
* TwitchyEye: Lisa has one of the "angry eye twitch" variety when she's annoyed with the grammar problems so her eye twitches.
* UrineTrouble: Apparently, Izzy once peed on Lola's bedsheets.
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