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** Luz, Eda and Amity learn about the Collector between the events of "Knock, Knock, Knocking on Hooty's Door" and "Eclipse Lake".
** Hunter begins understanding Flapjack before the trip to Eclipse Lake.
** Meteora wasn't separated from her parents by the Magic High Commission in this timeline, but taken from them by Oberon.
** Luz, Eda and Amity learn about the Collector between the events of "Knock, Knock, Knocking on Hooty's Door" and "Eclipse Lake".
** Hunter begins understanding Flapjack before the trip to Eclipse Lake.
** Meteora wasn't separated from her parents by the Magic High Commission in this timeline, but taken from them by Oberon.
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** Luz, Eda and Amity learn about the Collector between the events of "Knock, Knock, Knocking on Hooty's Door" and "Eclipse Lake".
** Hunter begins understanding Flapjack before the trip to Eclipse Lake.
** Meteora wasn't separated from her parents by the Magic High Commission in this timeline, but taken from them by Oberon.
** Luz, Eda and Amity learn about the Collector between the events of "Knock, Knock, Knocking on Hooty's Door" and "Eclipse Lake".
** Hunter begins understanding Flapjack before the trip to Eclipse Lake.
** Meteora wasn't separated from her parents by the Magic High Commission in this timeline, but taken from them by Oberon.
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* EvilIsPetty: Emily started the school war because of her past, while Oberon sent an assassin after Luz and Amitybecause he felt his pride took a hit when they killed the Coachman.
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* EvilIsPetty: Emily started the school war because of her past, while Oberon sent an assassin after Luz and Amitybecause Amity because he felt his pride took a hit when they killed the Coachman.
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* OneWingedAngel: When Meteora gets pissed off enough, she decides to do away with subtly trying to kill Lumity and dragons up, [[TrashTheSet decimating Glandus in the process.]]
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Stella has been in an abusive relationship with Emily for a long time. Even after what Emily did to her, Stella admits she loves her and won't abandon her even while they're being arrested.
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** Athena kicks Nicole out of the house both for not putting Boscha's well-being first and so Tom can live with them without worrying about her.
** With everything the kids went through in the war Eda decides to lift Luz's grounding, allowing Amity to return to sharing Luz's room with her.
** With everything the kids went through in the war Eda decides to lift Luz's grounding, allowing Amity to return to sharing Luz's room with her.
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** With everything the kids went through in the war Eda decides to lift Luz's grounding, allowing Amity to return to sharing Luz's room with her.
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* ThrowTheDogABone:
** Athena kicks Nicole out of the house both for not putting Boscha's well-being first and so Tom can live with them without worrying about her.
** With everything the kids went through in the war Eda decides to lift Luz's grounding, allowing Amity to return to sharing Luz's room with her.
** Athena kicks Nicole out of the house both for not putting Boscha's well-being first and so Tom can live with them without worrying about her.
** With everything the kids went through in the war Eda decides to lift Luz's grounding, allowing Amity to return to sharing Luz's room with her.
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** Stella's name is revealed to be Glinda, as in [[Franchise/LandOfOz The Good Witch of the South]].
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* TongueOutInsult: For her final jab at Emily as she's taken away by scouts, Luz sticks her tongue out; this drives the disgraced illusionist into a hissy fit.
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* YouCouldHaveUsedYourPowersForGoodYouCouldHaveUsedYourPowersForGood: As part of her ReasonYouSuckSpeech towards Emily, Luz points out how Emily could have proven Glandus wrong about illusion magic being useless with her talents and inspired other kids to try their hands in it. Instead, she reinforced the school's prejudice on it and built a record of lies with Stella aiding her by giving her illusions form.
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* CantTakeCriticismCantTakeCriticism: Emily slowly starts to lose her cool as Luz/Maya talk down on her for reinforcing Glandus' illusion prejudice among all her other misdeeds.
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** Miss Heinous is slayed by Amity using the Sword of Adam for trying to kill her and Luz, though it's later downplayed when she's shown to have survived somehow.
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** Miss Heinous is slayed slain by Amity using the Sword of Adam for trying to kill her and Luz, though it's later downplayed when she's shown to have survived somehow.
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* AgonizingStomachWound: Because of Emily stabbing her, Nina slowly starts bleeding out. When Donna finds the werecat, she does everything she can to keep Nina alive.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Art by Crosshot: Crash X Fusion: ''[[Music/TheTemptations ♪ War! Huh! Yeah!]] [[TitleDrop What is it good for?]] [[BlatantLies Absolutely nothing! ♪]]''[[note]]Yeah, right...[[/note]]]]
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* AffectionateNickname: Since Brucy calls Luz "Boss", he calls Amity "Boss' girlfriend".
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* TheUnReveal: Brucy and Batters had to face cannibal Glandus students while the latter was trying to return Brucy to Luz. Just as Brucy begins to explain their adventure, we segue to Gus having his palisman returned by Hunter which leads to their talk.
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** The Order decides to have a trial to debate whether or not Eclipsa is guilty enough to recieve a proper punishment or release while also punishing Rhombulous for his past actions on the Magic High Commision.
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** The Order decides to have a trial to debate whether or not Eclipsa is guilty enough to recieve a proper punishment or release while also punishing Rhombulous for his past actions on the Magic High Commision.Commission.
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* TherapyIsForTheWeak: It's mentioned that Glandus High has no counselors for students because of this. As such, Luz suggests Gavin, Angmar, and Ukla contact Ms. Traveler to sort out their issues.
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* {{BFS}}: When Amity gains her "Abomi-Knight" armor, the Sword of Adam grows larger than it was before.
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** Emily's able to give her illusions a solid form because of Stella creating and controling stone puppets.
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** Emily's able to give her illusions a solid form because of Stella creating creates and controling controls stone puppets.puppets which she casts her illusions over.
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** Bo's parents run a clinic and one of them is a surgeon, meaning all of them are Healers.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Art by Crosshot: ''[[Music/TheTemptations ♪ War! Huh! Hah!]] Yeah!]] [[TitleDrop What is it good for?]] [[BlatantLies Absolutely nothing! ♪]]''[[note]]Yeah, right...[[/note]]]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:Art by Crosshot: ''♪ [[Music/TheTemptations ''[[Music/TheTemptations ♪ War! Huh! Haugh!]] [[TitleDrop What is it good for?]] [[BlatantLies Absolutely nothing!]]'' ♪ [[note]]Yeah, nothing!
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[[caption-width-right:350:Art by Crosshot: ''♪ [[Music/TheTemptations Absolutely]] War! Huh! Haugh!]] [[TitleDrop What is it good for?]] [[BlatantLies nothing!]][[note]]Yeah, Absolutely nothing!]]'' ♪ [[note]]Yeah, right...[[/note]]]]
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** The Sword of Adam grants Amity abomination armor and she says it seems to have called to her. [[spoiler:12 chapters later, it turns out the sword is linked to abomination magic and is an AncestralWeapon of the Blights]].
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** Boscha tells Athena that not only Boris has been part of a rebellion, but said rebellion got arrested during the Gland Prix.
* {{Irony}}: Emily, the master illusionist and utilizer of BreakThemByTalking speeches, ends up falling for an illusion of Stella standing up to her, which Gus conjured (he even points it out) and Luz and Maya's prodding which seals her downfall.
* {{Irony}}: Emily, the master illusionist and utilizer of BreakThemByTalking speeches, ends up falling for an illusion of Stella standing up to her, which Gus conjured (he even points it out) and Luz and Maya's prodding which seals her downfall.
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** Boscha tells Athena that not only had Boris has been part of a rebellion, but said rebellion got arrested during the Gland Prix.
* {{Irony}}: Emily, the master illusionist and utilizer of BreakThemByTalking speeches, ends up falling for an illusion of Stella standing up to her, which Gus conjured(he (and even points it out) and Luz and Maya's prodding which seals her downfall.fate.
* {{Irony}}: Emily, the master illusionist and utilizer of BreakThemByTalking speeches, ends up falling for an illusion of Stella standing up to her, which Gus conjured
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** Asi and Horace have managed to escape before the Emperor's Coven arrives, but nobody knows this.
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** Asi and Horace have managed to escape from Glandus before the Emperor's Coven arrives, but nobody knows this.
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* KilledOffForRealKilledOffForReal: Smee and Craig are confirmed to have died due to the injuries they received in the previous chapter.
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** Miss Heinous is slayed by Amity using the Sword of Adam, though it's later downplayed when she's shown to have survived somehow.
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** Miss Heinous is slayed by Amity using the Sword of Adam, Adam for trying to kill her and Luz, though it's later downplayed when she's shown to have survived somehow.
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** Nicole is confronted by Athena over Boscha's injuries, and she gets kicked out because her need for revenge against the Clawthornes has taken over the entirety of whatever common sense she had.
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: While having a moment alone with her mothers, Luz admits she feels that everything they've gone through in the last week was like "a really long story arc."
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: While having a moment alone with her mothers, Luz admits she feels that everything they've gone through in the last week was like "a really long story arc."
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** Nicole is confronted by Athena over Boscha's injuries, and she gets kicked out of their home because her need for revenge against the Clawthornes has taken over the entirety of whatever common sense she had.
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: While having a moment alone with her mothers, Luz admits she feels that everything they've gone through in the last week was like "a really long story arc.""[[note]]Given the gap between the release of the last three chapters being a month apart, this means the arc as a whole took ''4 months'' to complete, so she's not wrong.[[/note]]
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: While having a moment alone with her mothers, Luz admits she feels that everything they've gone through in the last week was like "a really long story arc.
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** The Sword of Adam is made of iron, and seems to be sentient and capable of some kind of mental communication.
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** The Sword of Adam is made of iron, iron (given that it injured Meteora), and seems to be sentient and capable of some kind of mental communication.communication.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: In Nina's flashbacks, Donna mentions that her key "found her", acts as a conduit when she casts spells, and can open any lock.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: {{Foreshadowing}}:
** In Nina's flashbacks, Donna mentions that her key "found her", acts as a conduit when she casts spells, and can open anylock.lock.
** Ukla is worried that the Inner Demon may come after Yuki.
** In Nina's flashbacks, Donna mentions that her key "found her", acts as a conduit when she casts spells, and can open any
** Ukla is worried that the Inner Demon may come after Yuki.
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* SharingABody: This is Luz's solution for making a truce with Maya for the time being: allowing her to share control of her body until they find a way to separate Maya's soul from Luz.
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** As it turns out, Stella's real name is "Glenda"; she's been going by [[MiddleNameBasis her middle name]] this whole time.
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** As it turns out, Stella's real name is "Glenda"; "Glinda"; she's been going by [[MiddleNameBasis her middle name]] this whole time.
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** The Boss will no doubt be gunning for the Clawthornes now, while Nicole will be seeking revenge for Athena kicking her out.
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** The Boss will no doubt be gunning for the Clawthornes now, while Nicole will be seeking revenge for against Athena for kicking her out.
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* ShownTheirWork: Felicity's disliking to Kitsuni seems to be a {{gender inverted}} case of the real-life instances where male foxes considering each other rivals and fight each other.
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The school war ends with a beatdown, serious battle to the finish, truths revealed between two friends, friends and Luz coming must come to terms with Maya.
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* AdaptationSpeciesChange: The Collector is revealed to be a powerful Fae in the Luz Clawthorne continuity.
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* AdaptationSpeciesChange: The Collector is revealed to be a powerful Fae in the Luz Clawthorne ''Luz Clawthorne'' continuity.
** Also at the beginning of the war, Darius and William have continued to avoid the mysterious entity chasing them. Now the chase ends with Darius escaping it while it consumes William.
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* TheBusCameBack: Max and Dolly return, the former having not been seen since "Grandmother Knows Best" and the latter having last appeared in "A Surprising Visitor".
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* BrokenWinLossStreak
BrokenWinLossStreak: Luz ''finally'' pulls out a win against Emily and mops the floor with her after two straight losses, Amity and Gus taking out Stella to give her and Maya the chance to take Emily head-on without any interference from the puppeteer.
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** Max and Dolly return, the former having not been seen since "Grandmother Knows Best" and the latter having last appeared in "A SurprisingVisitor".Visitor".
** Jiminy Cricket returns following his debut and previous appearance in "Escape".
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** Jiminy Cricket returns following his debut and previous appearance in "Escape".
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* DefeatMeansRespect: Luz manages to earn Ukla's respect for putting Emily in her place, though Ukla isn't an actual villain.didn't really participate in the war to begin with.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: The Graux sisters have completely disappeared without a trace, with no word on whether they were defeated or arrested.
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: While having a moment alone with her mothers, Luz admits she feels that everything they've gone through in the last week was like "a really long story arc."
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** Only one labraptor survived the siege, and it escapes into the woods.
** Lilith wonders if she's also capable of gaining a harpy form if she bonds with the Raven Beast.
** Lilith wonders if she's also capable of gaining a harpy form if she bonds with the Raven Beast.
