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* ImAlive: Jaune mentally says this while hyperventilating after using the Force to cushion his fall after being catapulted off a cliff.
-->'''Jaune:''' ''[thinking]'' I'm… I'm alive! Oh thank the Brothers I'm alive, but what was that!?
-->'''Jaune:''' ''[thinking]'' I'm… I'm alive! Oh thank the Brothers I'm alive, but what was that!?
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* MythologyGag:
** Jaune says the famous "I've got a bad feeling about this" line when he and Pyrrha are in front of the Death Stalker's cave.
** Nora riding on top of a Grimm during her initiation to Beacon. While she rode atop an Ursa in canon, here she rides on a Death Stalker.
** Jaune says the famous "I've got a bad feeling about this" line when he and Pyrrha are in front of the Death Stalker's cave.
** Nora riding on top of a Grimm during her initiation to Beacon. While she rode atop an Ursa in canon, here she rides on a Death Stalker.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Even though Jaune and Pyrrha avoid entering the Death Stalker's cave, the scorpion Grimm still ends up attacking the students at the ruins because Nora and Ren entered the cave instead and disturbed its slumber.
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* OneDialogueTwoConversations: As in canon, while explaining Aura to Jaune, Pyrrha asks him if he's ever felt like he was BeingWatched. Jaune responds by saying "Yeah… yeah I have." Pyrrha's question was using the context that someone was protectively looking out for him. However, Jaune believed that she was asking if he ever got the feeling that he was being stalked, which he currently was due to being able to sense that Nihilus' ghost was secretly observing him.
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* QuizzicalTilt: Pyrrha tilts her head in confusion when Jaune abruptly shouts out "So that's what it was!" after hearing her explain to him how Aura and Semblances worked. Noticing her confusion, he tells her about how he unlocked his Aura after running into a cave to escape a Beowolf, though leaves out the part about finding the Mask of Nihilus.
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* IfOnlyYouKnew: When Nora and Ren come across the Death Stalker's cave, she has this to say:
-->'''Nora:''' Ahh! A cave! What do you think Renny? Do you think there's a secret treasure inside? Maybe the lost artifact of a mysterious, sinister intergalactic cult?
-->'''Nora:''' Ahh! A cave! What do you think Renny? Do you think there's a secret treasure inside? Maybe the lost artifact of a mysterious, sinister intergalactic cult?
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: When Nora and Ren come across the Death Stalker's cave, she has this to say:
-->'''Nora:''' Ahh! A cave! What do you think Renny? Do you think there's a secret treasure inside? Maybe the lost artifact of a mysterious, sinister intergalactic cult?
-->'''Nora:''' Ahh! A cave! What do you think Renny? Do you think there's a secret treasure inside? Maybe the lost artifact of a mysterious, sinister intergalactic cult?
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* NarrationEcho: When the narrator says "Jaune wheezed", it is immediately followed by Jaune [[SayingSoundEffectsOutLoud verbally saying the word "wheeze" out loud]].
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* SayingSoundEffectsOutLoud: When Jaune wheezes, he does it by saying the word "wheeze" when the narration describes him wheezing.out loud.
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* AllUpToYou: Pyrrha tells Jaune that only he can catch Weiss using his telekinesis. That isn't entirely true as Pyrrha believes she could use her Polarity to catch Weiss or Weiss could just use her own glyphs. However, Pyrrha sees this as the perfect moment to help Jaune practice using his newfound powers.
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* ThisIsSomethingHesGotToDoHimself: Pyrrha tells Jaune that only he can catch Weiss using his telekinesis. That isn't entirely true as Pyrrha believes she could use her Polarity to catch Weiss or Weiss could just use her own glyphs. However, Pyrrha sees this as the perfect moment to help Jaune practice using his newfound powers.
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* DieOrFly: Jaune first unlocks his Force powers when he is catapulted into the Emerald Forest and is terrified that he's going to die. It's at this moment when he first releases a telekinetic blast that cushions his fall.
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* DieOrFly: DieOrFly:
** Jaune first unlocks his Force powers when he is catapulted into the Emerald Forest and is terrified that he's going to die. It's at this moment when he first releases a telekinetic blast that cushions hisfall.fall.
** According to Pyrrha, it's not that uncommon for people to unlock their Aura in high-stress situations. Stories of mothers unlocking their Auras to lift cars off their children are said to be an archetypal example of such a scenario.
** Jaune first unlocks his Force powers when he is catapulted into the Emerald Forest and is terrified that he's going to die. It's at this moment when he first releases a telekinetic blast that cushions his
** According to Pyrrha, it's not that uncommon for people to unlock their Aura in high-stress situations. Stories of mothers unlocking their Auras to lift cars off their children are said to be an archetypal example of such a scenario.
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* ImAlive: Jaune mentally says this while hyperventilating after using the Force to cushion his fall after being catapulted off a cliff.
-->'''Jaune:''' ''[thinking]'' I'm… I'm alive! Oh thank the Brothers I'm alive, but what was that!?
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* IfOnlyYouKnew: When Nora and Ren come across the Death Stalker's cave, she has this to say:
-->'''Nora:''' Ahh! A cave! What do you think Renny? Do you think there's a secret treasure inside? Maybe the lost artifact of a mysterious, sinister intergalactic cult?
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* OhMyGods: Jaune says "Oh thank the Brothers" when he sees Weiss rush in and save Ruby from the Death Stalker's stinger.
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* OhMyGods: Jaune says "Oh thank the Brothers" twice. The first time he says it in his head after using his Force powers for the first time to survive his fall and the second time he says it out loud when he sees Weiss rush in and save Ruby from the Death Stalker's stinger.
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* OhMyGods: Jaune says "Oh thank the Brothers" when he sees Weiss rush in and save Ruby from the Death Stalker's stinger.
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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Said verbatim by Weiss when she realizing that Jaune overheard her talking about him the other day but completely misread her dismissal as an attraction.
