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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: After Chloe learns of some of the horror stuff Ash has experienced, she asks why they didn't get to have these talks sooner. Ash glumly admits that it's because neither of them didn't properly ask one another, with him also adding that he shouldn't have confronted Chloe sooner than fully believing Goh's remark of "my friend's not a Pokemon lover anymore".
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: After Chloe learns of some of the horror stuff Ash has experienced, she asks why they didn't get to have these talks sooner. Ash glumly admits that it's because neither of them didn't properly ask asked one another, with him also adding that he shouldn't should have confronted Chloe sooner rather than fully believing Goh's remark of "my friend's not a into Pokemon lover anymore".
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: After Chloe learns of some of the horror stuff Ash has experienced, she asks why they didn't get to have these talks sooner. Ash glumly admits that it's because neither of them didn't properly ask one another.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: After Chloe learns of some of the horror stuff Ash has experienced, she asks why they didn't get to have these talks sooner. Ash glumly admits that it's because neither of them didn't properly ask one another.another, with him also adding that he shouldn't have confronted Chloe sooner than fully believing Goh's remark of "my friend's not a Pokemon lover anymore".
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Chloe is ''not'' instantly free from the aftermaths of the bullying and hazing she got from the hands of Sara and her classmates with the co-author revealing that she was asking Ash for what he liked about her after she was ''brutally'' called out by her bully for the reasons why she was turned into the class's punching bag.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: {{Downplayed}}. During her talk with Ash over the phone, Chloe ends up asking him if he even likes her, especially after he brings up the other girls who didn't like Pokémon but then ended up going over the moon for them and comparing them to why he never clicked with the Professor's daughter. While Ash ''is'' momentarily stunned, he manages to stay calm, with the question ultimately showing how Chloe is ''still'' stuck in her own retelling of events, acting like they're fact when the reality is far more complicated.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: {{Downplayed}}. During her talk with Ash over the phone, Chloe ends up asking him if he even likes her, especially after he brings up the other girls who didn't like Pokémon but then ended up going over the moon for them and comparing them to why he never clicked "clicked" with the Professor's daughter. While Ash ''is'' momentarily stunned, he manages to stay calm, with the question ultimately showing how Chloe is ''still'' stuck in her own retelling of events, acting like they're fact when the reality is far more complicated.
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* WhamShot: Alain's figment as Dreams isn't Saint Ash, it's ''St. Sycamore''.
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** Austen Plane gets his first physical description, and he looks ''just like Sycamore''.
** Alain's figment as Dreams isn't Saint Ash, it's ''St. Sycamore''.
** Austen Plane gets his first physical description, and he looks ''just like Sycamore''.
** Alain's figment as Dreams isn't Saint Ash, it's ''St. Sycamore''.
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* WhamShot: Alain's figment as Dreams isn't Saint Ash, it's ''St. Sycamore''.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: {{Downplayed}}. During her talk with Ash over the phone, Chloe ends up asking him if he even likes her. While Ash ''is'' momentarily stunned, he manages to stay calm, with the question ultimately showing how Chloe is ''still'' stuck in her own retelling of events, acting like they're fact when the reality is far more complicated.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: {{Downplayed}}. During her talk with Ash over the phone, Chloe ends up asking him if he even likes her.her, especially after he brings up the other girls who didn't like Pokémon but then ended up going over the moon for them and comparing them to why he never clicked with the Professor's daughter. While Ash ''is'' momentarily stunned, he manages to stay calm, with the question ultimately showing how Chloe is ''still'' stuck in her own retelling of events, acting like they're fact when the reality is far more complicated.
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* YouDidntAsk: Ash ''wants'' to say that this is the reason why Chloe didn't learn so much about him, but admits that it's also hypocritical at how ''he'' is also to blame for not even considering avenues outside Pokémon and accepting Goh's answer as the default.
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* YouDidntAsk: Defied. Ash ''wants'' to say that this is the reason why Chloe didn't learn so much about him, but he swiftly admits that it's also hypocritical at how ''he'' is also to blame for not even considering avenues outside Pokémon and accepting Goh's answer as the default.default instead of just talking to Chloe and asking her directly.
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* ContinuityNod: Before Chloe can make a remark that Ash isn't into "girl things", he immediately brings up the multiple times he's had to crossdress and his temporary stint as a Pokémon Coordinator in Sinnoh.
