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** When Hazel learns that she's a train person, the first thing she asks Grace is if she hates her. This causes Grace to start doubting her philosophy and mindset towards the denizens.
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** When Hazel learns that she's a train person, "train person", the first thing she asks Grace is if she hates her. This causes Grace to start doubting her philosophy and mindset towards the denizens.
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-->'''Grace:''' She’s ''six'', Simon! [[ArmorPiercingQuestion Can't you even take]] ''[[ArmorPiercingQuestion one second]]'' [[ArmorPiercingQuestion to remember how you felt when The Cat left you?]]
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-->'''Grace:''' She’s She's ''six'', Simon! [[ArmorPiercingQuestion Can't you even take]] ''[[ArmorPiercingQuestion one second]]'' [[ArmorPiercingQuestion to remember how you felt when The Cat left you?]]
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Cry Cute now dewicked
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* CryCute: Hazel and Grace break into tears during Tuba's funeral.
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->Written by Lindsay Katai\\
Storyboarded by Kellye Perdue, Ryann Shannon, & Jessie Wong
Storyboarded by Kellye Perdue, Ryann Shannon, & Jessie Wong
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There's only one car left before the Apex are home, but Hazel wants to stop and remember an old friend.
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The Apex are just a car away! They're almost home! But first they have to make it through a forest full of pinecone camp counselors.
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There's only one car left before the Apex are
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-->'''Grace:''' She’s ''six'', Simon! Can't you even take ''one second'' to remember how you felt when The Cat left you?
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-->'''Grace:''' She’s ''six'', Simon! [[ArmorPiercingQuestion Can't you even take ''one second'' take]] ''[[ArmorPiercingQuestion one second]]'' [[ArmorPiercingQuestion to remember how you felt when The Cat left you?you?]]
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* {{Cliffhanger}}: The episode ends with Grace, Simon and Hazel passing by Amelia, which is when Simon's sensor starts picking up that huge cluster of numbers. Amelia then enters the same car the trio just entered asking what they've been doing to the cars.
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* TemptingFate: When Simon sees how that big blip of numbers on his sensor is behind him, he's in disbelief on they could've just passed them. Cue Amelia sticking her head back into the car.
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* KickTheDog: Simon continues to be a douche as he denies a funeral for Hazel and states how Hazel will love being with other ''passengers'' all while not noticing Hazel's total disgust at him.
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* KickTheDog: Simon continues to be a douche as he denies tries to deny Hazel the chance to give Tuba a funeral for Hazel and states only backs down when Grace insists on allowing it, and talks about how Hazel will love being with other ''passengers'' ''passengers'', all while not noticing Hazel's total disgust at him.
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* CryCute: Hazel and Grace break into tears during Tuba's funeral.
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* CryCute: Hazel and Grace break into tears during Tuba's funeral.
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* FiveSecondForeshadowing: Grace and Simon pass by Amelia on their way to the next car, which is when Simon's Number detector starts blinking...
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* BluntYes: Grace gets fed up with Simon's behavior and outright gives him an order as the leader of the Apex. Simon, clearly surprised and a little bit hurt, asks if she's pulling rank on him, and she responds with this.
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* TranquilFury:
** Hazel remains in this mode towards Simon for pretty much the whole episode as a result of him killing Tuba. The "tranquil" part is primarily because she needs to stay calm and avoid getting upset so she doesn't transform into her turtle form; she and Grace both fear that Simon will kill her like he killed Tuba if he learns that she's a denizen.
** One particular moment crops up near the end of the episode, where Simon insensitively encourages Hazel to get over Tuba and promises to make Hazel a character in his book when they get back to the Apex. Unsurprisingly, this does ''not'' make her feel better ''at all'', but after silently glaring for a long moment, she finally musters up some fake enthusiasm about it.
** Hazel remains in this mode towards Simon for pretty much the whole episode as a result of him killing Tuba. The "tranquil" part is primarily because she needs to stay calm and avoid getting upset so she doesn't transform into her turtle form; she and Grace both fear that Simon will kill her like he killed Tuba if he learns that she's a denizen.
** One particular moment crops up near the end of the episode, where Simon insensitively encourages Hazel to get over Tuba and promises to make Hazel a character in his book when they get back to the Apex. Unsurprisingly, this does ''not'' make her feel better ''at all'', but after silently glaring for a long moment, she finally musters up some fake enthusiasm about it.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: When Hazel learns that she's a train person, the first thing she asks Grace is if she hates her. This causes Grace to start doubting her philosophy and mindset towards the denizens.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: AnimateInanimateObject: The Campfire Car is full of living camping supplies, pinecones, and rocks.
* ArmorPiercingQuestion:
** When Hazel learns that she's a train person, the first thing she asks Grace is if she hates her. This causes Grace to start doubting her philosophy and mindset towards the denizens.
* ArmorPiercingQuestion:
** When Hazel learns that she's a train person, the first thing she asks Grace is if she hates her. This causes Grace to start doubting her philosophy and mindset towards the denizens.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Downplayed. Simon gets on the receiving end of one from Grace for his callous disregard for Hazel’s feelings.
-->'''Grace:''' She’s ''six'', Simon! Can’t you even take ''one second'' to remember how you felt when The Cat left you?
-->'''Grace:''' She’s ''six'', Simon! Can’t you even take ''one second'' to remember how you felt when The Cat left you?
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* WhatTheHellHero: Downplayed. Simon gets on the receiving end of one from Grace for his callous disregard for Hazel’s feelings.
Hazel's feelings, but it fails to stick.
-->'''Grace:''' She’s ''six'', Simon!Can’t Can't you even take ''one second'' to remember how you felt when The Cat left you?
-->'''Grace:''' She’s ''six'', Simon!
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* TogetherInDeath: Grace hopes that Tuba can be with her children now since she passed on.
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* TogetherInDeath: Grace Hazel hopes that Tuba can be with her children now since she passed on.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The stages of grief fell into are denial and bargaining; now who ''else'' on the train previously fell into those?
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The stages of grief Hazel fell into are denial and bargaining; now who ''else'' on the train previously fell into those?
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** Grace gives Simon one in her WhatTheHellHero moment on him, but it doesn't stick.
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* FiveStagesOfGrief: Hazel falls into Denial and Bargaining over Tuba's death.
* KickTheDog: Simon continues to be a douche as he states how Hazel will love being with other ''passengers'' and that he will write her as a character in his story all while not noticing Hazel's total disgust at him.
* KickTheDog: Simon continues to be a douche as he states how Hazel will love being with other ''passengers'' and that he will write her as a character in his story all while not noticing Hazel's total disgust at him.
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* FiveStagesOfGrief: Hazel falls into Denial and Bargaining over Tuba's death.
death and learns to move onto Acceptance.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: The stages of grief fell into are denial and bargaining; now who ''else'' on the train previously fell into those?
* KickTheDog: Simon continues to be a douche as he denies a funeral for Hazel and states how Hazel will love being with other ''passengers''and that he will write her as a character in his story all while not noticing Hazel's total disgust at him.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: The stages of grief fell into are denial and bargaining; now who ''else'' on the train previously fell into those?
* KickTheDog: Simon continues to be a douche as he denies a funeral for Hazel and states how Hazel will love being with other ''passengers''
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Grace slowly realizes that she has been a ''horrible'' person on treating the denizens as lesser to the passengers when she talks about how Tuba was kind and caring.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: When Hazel learns that she's a train person, the first thing she asks Grace is if she hates her. This causes Grace to start doubting her philosophy and mindset of the denizens.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: When Hazel learns that she's a train person, the first thing she asks Grace is if she hates her. This causes Grace to start doubting her philosophy and mindset of towards the denizens.
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* CryCute: Grace breaks into tears during Tuba's funeral.
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* CryCute: Hazel and Grace breaks break into tears during Tuba's funeral.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Simon gets on the receiving end of one from Grace for his callous disregard for Hazel’s feelings.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Downplayed. Simon gets on the receiving end of one from Grace for his callous disregard for Hazel’s feelings.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Simon gets on the receiving end of one from Grace for his callous disregard for Hazel’s feelings.
-->'''Grace:''' She’s ''six'', Simon! Can’t you even take ''one second'' to remember how you felt when The Cat left you?
-->'''Grace:''' She’s ''six'', Simon! Can’t you even take ''one second'' to remember how you felt when The Cat left you?
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* ChekhovsGun: The large rock Tuba carried in the satchel is used as a makeshift "corpse" for her funeral.
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* FiveStagesOfGrief: Hazel falls into Denial and Bargaining over Tuba's death.
* KickTheDog: Simon continues to be a douche as he states how Hazel will love being with other ''passengers'' and that he will write her as a character in his story all while not noticing Hazel's total disgust at him.
* MoodWhiplash: After the eulogy and Grace and Hazel hugging, Hazel changes the mood by stating she has to go to the bathroom.
* KickTheDog: Simon continues to be a douche as he states how Hazel will love being with other ''passengers'' and that he will write her as a character in his story all while not noticing Hazel's total disgust at him.
* MoodWhiplash: After the eulogy and Grace and Hazel hugging, Hazel changes the mood by stating she has to go to the bathroom.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: When Hazel learns that she's a train person, the first thing she asks Grace is if she hates her. This causes Grace to start doubting her philosophy and mindset of the denizens.
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* TogetherInDeath: Grace hopes that Tuba can be with her children now since she passed on.
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* CryCute: Grace breaks into tears during Tuba's funeral.
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* BreatherEpisode: After the ending of the previous episode, this episode is about Hazel and Grace bonding and them having a funeral for Tuba.
* SecretKeeper: Grace decides that she'll keep Hazel's transformation secret from Simon.
* SecretKeeper: Grace decides that she'll keep Hazel's transformation secret from Simon.
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* WhamShot: The person that Grace, Simon and Hazel pass by on their way to the next car is ''Amelia''.
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* TomatoInTheMirror: As it turns out, even ''Hazel'' didn't know about her not being human. Once she notices, she panics before she's able to shift back, unsure of what's going on and why she's suddenly got scales and a shell.
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The Apex are just a car away! They're almost home! But first they have to make it through a forest full of pinecone camp counselors.
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