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* LoveMakesYouStupid: Asmodeus was so willing to ensure Fizz's safety that he tried to sign the contract given to him be Crimson's lawyer as soon as he could, the stupidity comes in the fact that Ozzie would have signed the contract (which was rigged against him to a ludicrous degree) '''without even reading it!''' The fact that Stolas happened to be meeting with Ozzie at the time of the ransom video was sent and decided to stick around for the negotiations was the only thing that prevented Crimson from realizing his best case scenario.
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* LoveMakesYouStupid: Asmodeus was so willing to ensure Fizz's safety that he tried to sign the contract given to him be by Crimson's lawyer as soon as he could, the could. The stupidity comes in the fact that this was a LeonineContract that Ozzie would have signed the contract (which was rigged against him about to a ludicrous degree) '''without sign without even reading it!''' it. The fact that Stolas happened to be meeting with Ozzie at the time of the ransom video was sent and decided to stick around for the negotiations there was the only thing that prevented Crimson saved Ozzie from realizing his best case scenario.himself on that matter, as Stolas takes the time to ReadTheFinePrint and realize just how heavily the deck was stacked against Ozzie.
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** Asmodeus may be all about promoting lustful behavior, but he makes it clear to Stolas that he does ''not'' approve of {{love potion}}s, saying that lust shouldn't be forced.
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** Asmodeus may be all about promoting lustful behavior, but he makes it clear to Stolas that he does ''not'' approve of {{love potion}}s, saying that lust shouldn't be forced. Ozzie also won't tell Stolas why Fizzarolli hates Blitzo so much, since Ozzie feels it isn't his place to say something so personal to Fizz.
* IHatePastMe: Blitzo remarks that after setting the fire which destroyed their lives, Blitzo understands that [[ItsAllMyFault it's all his fault]], and that Fizz's hatred of Blitzo is totally justified. Blitzo starts to remark "I'd hate me, too. I mean, I ''do'' hate--" before he's cut off by one of Crimson's mooks, implying that Blitzo was about to say that he hates himself.
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* SexySecretary: Ozzi's assistant, who accidentally interrupts his and Fizz's romantic moment, is a [[BespectacledCutie bespectacled succubus]] with [[BuxomBeautyStandard large breasts]].
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* SexySecretary: Ozzi's Ozzie's assistant, who accidentally interrupts his and Fizz's romantic moment, is a [[BespectacledCutie bespectacled succubus]] with [[BuxomBeautyStandard large breasts]].
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* TheTapeKnewYouWouldSayThat: When Ozzie starts responding to Crimson's message, Stolas points out that it's likely a recording. Cue Crimson acknowledging in the recording that Ozzie likely has just said "YouHaveNoIdeaWhoYoureDealingWith".
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* TheTapeKnewYouWouldSayThat: When Ozzie starts responding to Crimson's message, message by asking if Crimson "[[YouHaveNoIdeaWhoYoureDealingWith has any idea who [he's] fucking with]]", Stolas points out that it's likely a recording. Cue Crimson acknowledging in the recording that Ozzie likely has probably just said "YouHaveNoIdeaWhoYoureDealingWith".asked that question, then laying into Ozzie with an insult that Crimson knows exactly who he's dealing with: "the weakest and most non-threatening of the Sins" whose relationship with Fizz is an OpenSecret.
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* WhamLine: "I ''DID'' CARE!" This line spoken by Blitzo leads to some clarification about what happened when Blitzo and Fizz were kids. Fizz believed that the fire that was set by Blitzo was an attempt on Fizz's life because Blitzo was jealous of the attention that Fizz always got. As Blitzo explains, and [[OnceMoreWithClarity the audience gets to see]], the fire was indeed Blitzo's fault, but it was an accident when Blitzo [[ATragedyOfImpulsiveness impulsively pushed an imp in frustration]], causing a cake with birthday candles to light the tent everyone was in on fire. This same flashback also features a moment where Blitzo says that Fizz has "no idea what [he also] lost in that fire" with a picture of Blitzo's mother and sister burning up in the flames, [[AccidentalMurder heavily implying that Blitzo's mother also died because of him]]. After this matter is cleared up, [[RelationshipSalvagingDisaster the strained relationship between Blitzo and Fizzarolli starts to mend]].
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* WhamLine: "I ''DID'' CARE!" This line spoken by Blitzo leads to some clarification about what happened when Blitzo and Fizz were kids. Fizz doesn't believe that the fire which destroyed their circus was an accident; instead, Fizz believed that the fire that was set by Blitzo was as an attempt on Fizz's life because Blitzo was jealous of the attention that Fizz always got. got, as evidenced by Blitzo running from Fizz and leaving him to die. As Blitzo explains, and [[OnceMoreWithClarity the audience gets to see]], the fire was indeed Blitzo's fault, but [[TragicMistake it really was an accident when accident]]. Blitzo [[ATragedyOfImpulsiveness impulsively pushed an imp in frustration]], frustration]] after seeing Fizz get more attention, causing a cake with birthday candles to light the tent everyone was in on fire. fire; Blitzo running away from Fizz was to try and get help. This same flashback also features a moment where Blitzo says that Fizz has "no idea what [he also] lost in that fire" with a picture of Blitzo's mother and sister burning up in the flames, [[AccidentalMurder heavily implying that Blitzo's mother also died because of him]]. After this matter is cleared up, [[RelationshipSalvagingDisaster the strained relationship between Blitzo and Fizzarolli starts to mend]].
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* KarmaHoudiniWarranty:
** Whereas Crimson came out foiled but mostly unscathed in his first appearance, here he is both foiled and ''definitely scathed'' when a building falls on him.
%%** The newspaper article Fizzarolli reads at the beginning reveals Cash Buckzo's circus business is defunct in the present.
** Whereas Crimson came out foiled but mostly unscathed in his first appearance, here he is both foiled and ''definitely scathed'' when a building falls on him.
%%** The newspaper article Fizzarolli reads at the beginning reveals Cash Buckzo's circus business is defunct in the present.
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* KarmaHoudiniWarranty:
** WhereasKarmaHoudiniWarranty: Crimson came out foiled but mostly unscathed in his first appearance, here he is appearance. Here, he's both foiled and ''definitely scathed'' when a building falls on him.
%%** The newspaper article Fizzarolli reads at the beginning reveals Cash Buckzo's circus business is defunct in the present.him, as well as both of his hostages killing several of his men and escaping with little difficulty.
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%%** The newspaper article Fizzarolli reads at the beginning reveals Cash Buckzo's circus business is defunct in the present.
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: The massive contract Crimson's lawyer brought with him to force Ozzie to sign ends up as his undoing, as trying to get it back into his briefcase prevents him from escaping while Asmodeus is reuniting with Fizz.
