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At a fair hosted by Silvia, Dana ruins a chance to impress William -in fact, driving Becca into his arms- while Marcus wins a pig he names Oinkers. After he sees how depress Dana is over loosing William, Marcus gets his hands on a device lost by a time traveler from the future and uses it to go back in time and help Dana fix her mistake at the cost of his new pet. Despite his optimistic behavior, Dana immediately feels guilty, wondering if Marcus is really sad about losing Oinkers.
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At a fair hosted by Silvia, Dana ruins a chance to impress William -in fact, driving Becca into his arms- while Marcus wins a pig he names Oinkers. After he sees how depress depressed Dana is over loosing William, Marcus gets his hands on a device lost by a time traveler from the future and uses it to go back in time and help Dana fix her mistake at the cost of his new pet. Despite his optimistic behavior, Dana immediately feels guilty, wondering if Marcus is really sad about losing Oinkers.
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At a fair hosted by Silvia, Dana ruins a chance to impress William -in fact, driving Becca into his arms- while Marcus wins a pig he names Oinkers. After he sees how depress Dana is over loosing William, Marcus gets his hands on a device lost by a time traveler from the future and uses it to go back in time and help Dana fix her mistake at the cost of his new pet. And although he knows he can just get another pig, Dana wonders if it's worth being with William.
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At a fair hosted by Silvia, Dana ruins a chance to impress William -in fact, driving Becca into his arms- while Marcus wins a pig he names Oinkers. After he sees how depress Dana is over loosing William, Marcus gets his hands on a device lost by a time traveler from the future and uses it to go back in time and help Dana fix her mistake at the cost of his new pet. And although he knows he can just get another pig, Despite his optimistic behavior, Dana wonders immediately feels guilty, wondering if it's worth being with William.Marcus is really sad about losing Oinkers.
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At a fair hosted by Silvia, Dana ruins a chance to impress William -in fact, driving Becca into his arms- while Marcus wins a pig he names Oinkers. After he sees how depress Dana is over loosing William, Marcus gets his hands on a device lost by a time traveler from the future and uses it to go back in time and help Dana fix her mistake at the cost of his new pet. And although he knows he can just get another pig, Dana wonders if it was worth it.
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At a fair hosted by Silvia, Dana ruins a chance to impress William -in fact, driving Becca into his arms- while Marcus wins a pig he names Oinkers. After he sees how depress Dana is over loosing William, Marcus gets his hands on a device lost by a time traveler from the future and uses it to go back in time and help Dana fix her mistake at the cost of his new pet. And although he knows he can just get another pig, Dana wonders if it was it's worth it.being with William.
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The ninth story of FanWorks/GravityFallsRule63.
At a fair hosted by Silvia, Dana ruins a chance to impress William -in fact, driving Becca into his arms- while Marcus wins a pig he names Oinkers. After he sees how depress Dana is over loosing William, Marcus gets his hands on a device lost by a time traveler from the future and uses it to go back in time and help Dana fix her mistake at the cost of his new pet. And although he knows he can just get another pig, Dana wonders if it was worth it.
At a fair hosted by Silvia, Dana ruins a chance to impress William -in fact, driving Becca into his arms- while Marcus wins a pig he names Oinkers. After he sees how depress Dana is over loosing William, Marcus gets his hands on a device lost by a time traveler from the future and uses it to go back in time and help Dana fix her mistake at the cost of his new pet. And although he knows he can just get another pig, Dana wonders if it was worth it.
