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* MindControlEyes: Red's pupils are reduced to dots after she falls under the Singing Cactus' spell.
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* SceneryPorn: The Aurora Fragglealis: a gorgeous phenomenon where the sky changes from dark blue to purple to light blue to orange, and so on...
-->'''Mokey:''' ''[in awe]'' Look. The Aurora Fragglealis!\\
'''Red:''' It's better than the book!
-->'''Mokey:''' ''[in awe]'' Look. The Aurora Fragglealis!\\
'''Red:''' It's better than the book!
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* WintryAuroralSky: The Aurora Fragglealis resembles this.
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* HeartfeltApology: When she and Mokey are nearly at the top of Wonder Mountain, Red apologizes for all the trouble she's caused.
-->'''Red:''' I was so busy protecting you, I've caused us a lot of trouble! I'm sorry. Ohhh, if I had stayed home, none of this would have happened!\\
''[They reach the top and gasp in awe at the changing colors of the Aurora Fragglealis.]''\\
'''Mokey:''' Look! Oh, Red! ''[A beat.]'' You know what? I'm really glad you followed me, 'cause... well, now I'm here with my best friend.
-->'''Red:''' I was so busy protecting you, I've caused us a lot of trouble! I'm sorry. Ohhh, if I had stayed home, none of this would have happened!\\
''[They reach the top and gasp in awe at the changing colors of the Aurora Fragglealis.]''\\
'''Mokey:''' Look! Oh, Red! ''[A beat.]'' You know what? I'm really glad you followed me, 'cause... well, now I'm here with my best friend.
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Could Have Avoided This Plot is when the characters realise in universe that the conflict could've been avoided
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Red wouldn't have gotten caught by the Singing Cactus or accidentally led herself and Mokey to the Avalanche Monster if she had just trusted Mokey to be able to take care of herself instead of following her.
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* MindControlMusic: [[DanceSensation The Singing Cactus' doo-wop song: "Do the Sashay."]] They sing it to ensnare anyone who gets too close to them into singing and dancing along.
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* MindControlMusic: [[DanceSensation The Singing Cactus' doo-wop song: "Do the Sashay."]] They sing it to ensnare anyone who gets too close to them into singing and dancing along.along for all eternity.
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* UnconventionalFoodUsage: Red and Mokey use radishes as earplugs.
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* UnconventionalFoodUsage: While leading the Avalanche Monster to the Singing Cactus, Red and Mokey use radishes as earplugs.
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* IShallTauntYou: Red and Mokey do this to the Avalanche Monster in order to lead him the Singing Cactus.
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* IShallTauntYou: Red and Mokey do this to the Avalanche Monster in order to lead him to the Singing Cactus.
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* IShallTauntYou: Red and Mokey do this to the Avalanche Monster in order to lead him the Singing Cactus.
-->'''Red:''' This way, Pebble Brain!\\
'''Mokey:''' [[MockingSingSong Nyah nyah nyah nyah nyah!]]
-->'''Red:''' This way, Pebble Brain!\\
'''Mokey:''' [[MockingSingSong Nyah nyah nyah nyah nyah!]]
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* InvoluntaryDance: The Singing Cactus hypnotize Red into singing and dancing with them.
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'''Red:''' ''[aside]'' So ''that's'' why she wasn't enchanted by the Singing Cactus!
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'''Red:''' ''[aside]'' [[AsideComment So ''that's'' THAT'S why she wasn't enchanted by the Singing Cactus!
Cactus!]]
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* AccidentalPublicConfession: Red does this while she and Mokey are hiding from the Avalanche Monster.
-->'''Mokey:''' Red, we're really in trouble now!\\
'''Red:''' Well, don't panic, Mokey. I came on this trip to protect you, and I will!\\
''[A {{Beat}}.]''\\
'''Mokey:''' You ''what''?\\
''[A longer beat.]''\\
'''Red:''' [[OhCrap Uh-oh...!]]
-->'''Mokey:''' Red, we're really in trouble now!\\
'''Red:''' Well, don't panic, Mokey. I came on this trip to protect you, and I will!\\
''[A {{Beat}}.]''\\
'''Mokey:''' You ''what''?\\
''[A longer beat.]''\\
'''Red:''' [[OhCrap Uh-oh...!]]
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* DistressBall: Red tries to put up a barrier to keep Mokey from getting too close to the Singing Cactus and causing them to sing their [[MindControlMusic mind-control music.]] While trying to decide how far away to put the barrier, she gets too close herself, and they begin singing, hypnotizing her into joining in. Mokey finds her and, wearing radishes as earplugs, drags Red away.
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* DistressBall: Red tries to put up a barrier to keep Mokey from getting too close to the Singing Cactus and causing them to sing their [[MindControlMusic mind-control music.]] While trying to decide how far away to put the barrier, she gets too close herself, and they begin singing, hypnotizing her into joining in. Mokey finds her and, wearing radishes as earplugs, drags Red her away.
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* EvilLaugh: The Avalanche Monster cackles evilly as he chases Red and Mokey.
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* RockMonster: The Avalanche Monster.
* ScalingTheSummit: Red and Mokey.
* ScalingTheSummit: Red and Mokey.
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* RockMonster: The Avalanche Monster.
Monster is made of gray rocks.
* ScalingTheSummit: Red andMokey.Mokey, climbing to the top of Wonder Mountain.
* ScalingTheSummit: Red and
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* StoppingTheBlameGame: After Red reveals her real reason for following Mokey...
-->'''Red:''' I only broke my promise because you're my best friend, and I was worried about you!\\
'''Mokey:''' If you were my best friend, you would have trusted me! You would have kept your promise. Ohhh! I can take care of myself. Hmmph.\\
'''Red:''' Oh, you can, you?\\
'''Mokey:''' I can, yes.\\
'''Red:''' Well, who marked the Invisible Bridge for you?\\
'''Mokey:''' ''What?''\\
'''Red:''' And who saved you from the Singing Cactus?\\
'''Mokey:''' ''[unable to believe what she's hearing]'' The Singing Cactus?\\
'''Red:''' And... and who got us into this mess with the Avalanche Monster?\\
'''Mokey:''' ''[furious]'' '''You''' did!
-->'''Red:''' I only broke my promise because you're my best friend, and I was worried about you!\\
'''Mokey:''' If you were my best friend, you would have trusted me! You would have kept your promise. Ohhh! I can take care of myself. Hmmph.\\
'''Red:''' Oh, you can, you?\\
'''Mokey:''' I can, yes.\\
'''Red:''' Well, who marked the Invisible Bridge for you?\\
'''Mokey:''' ''What?''\\
'''Red:''' And who saved you from the Singing Cactus?\\
'''Mokey:''' ''[unable to believe what she's hearing]'' The Singing Cactus?\\
'''Red:''' And... and who got us into this mess with the Avalanche Monster?\\
'''Mokey:''' ''[furious]'' '''You''' did!
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* BabysittingEpisode: Not quite babysitting, per se, but Red asks Mokey to plant-sit Lanford, while she's on her hike up Wonder Mountain. After deciding to secretly follow Mokey in order to protect her, Red gets Gobo, Wembley, and Boober to watch Lanford instead.
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* BabysittingEpisode: Not quite babysitting, per se, but Red asks Mokey to plant-sit Lanford, Lanford while she's on her hike up Wonder Mountain. After deciding to secretly follow Mokey in order to protect her, Red gets Gobo, Wembley, and Boober to watch Lanford instead.
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* EnthrallingSiren: The Singing Cactus.
