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Michael, Sam and Fi help two teenagers named Corey and Tanya. Corey beat up a gang member named Felix who tried to abduct and assault his fifteen year old sister Tanya. Unfortunately Felix has a gang and a powerful boss named Tony Soto and the whole gang is after Corey.
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Michael, Sam and Fi help two teenagers named Corey and Tanya. Corey beat up a gang member named Felix who tried to abduct and assault his fifteen year old 15-year-old sister Tanya. Unfortunately Unfortunately, Felix has a gang and a powerful boss named Tony Soto Soto, and the whole gang is after Corey.
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-->'''Fiona:''' It seems this "man" - ''(To Corey and Tanya)'' Felix? ''(They nod)'' - he took Tanya for a ride in his car. ''(Gains a slight edge in her voice)'' And then he...attacked her. And she escaped, barely. ''(With a hint of pride)'' And then Corey went after him with a baseball bat.
-->'''Corey:''' I found her crying in the street. I just wanted to make sure he never tried to come back-
-->'''Fiona:''' No explanation necessary. Use a golf club next time; greater force to a smaller area.
-->''(Michael and Corey each give her an AsideGlance)''
** Noticeable is that when they first meet the two siblings Corey has an arm comfortingly around his little sister, especially while Fiona explains what's going on.
-->'''Corey:''' I found her crying in the street. I just wanted to make sure he never tried to come back-
-->'''Fiona:''' No explanation necessary. Use a golf club next time; greater force to a smaller area.
-->''(Michael and Corey each give her an AsideGlance)''
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-->'''Fiona:''' It seems this "man" - ''(To Corey and Tanya)'' Felix? ''(They nod)'' - he took Tanya for a ride in his car. ''(Gains a slight edge in her voice)'' And then he... attacked her. And she escaped, barely. ''(With a hint of pride)'' And then Corey went after him with a baseball bat.
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'''Corey:''' I found her crying in the street. I just wanted to make sure he never tried to comeback-
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'''Corey:''' I found her crying in the street. I just wanted to make sure he never tried to come
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'''Fiona:''' No explanation necessary. Use a golf club next time; greater force to a smaller
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* BreakTheCutie: Poor Tanya. The incident with Felix clearly left her traumatized at least in the beginning. When they first meet Team Westen, she doesn't speak except to greet Michael, and she has her head down and leaning against Corey for support, with him giving her a one-armed hug, while Fiona explains what happened to her. She seems to get better at the end of the episode.
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* BreakTheCutie: Poor Tanya. The incident with AttemptedRape by Felix clearly left her traumatized traumatized, at least in the beginning. When they first meet Team Westen, she doesn't speak except to greet Michael, and she has her head down and leaning against Corey for support, with him giving her a one-armed hug, while Fiona explains what happened to her. She seems to get better at the end of the episode.
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-->'''Coach Martin:''' Sam. You're asking me to hide?
-->'''Sam:''' Hide? Oh, no. No, of course not. I just need you to be someplace where no one can see you.
-->'''Sam:''' Hide? Oh, no. No, of course not. I just need you to be someplace where no one can see you.
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-->'''Coach Martin:''' Sam. You're asking me to hide?
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'''Sam:''' Hide? Oh, no. No, of course not. I just need you to be someplace where no one can see you.
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'''Sam:''' Hide? Oh, no. No, of course not. I just need you to be someplace where no one can see you.
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-->'''Corey:''' He fought his dad on - on Christmas?
-->'''Madeline:''' He was being a good big brother. Like you.
-->'''Madeline:''' He was being a good big brother. Like you.
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-->'''Corey:''' He fought his dad on - on Christmas?
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'''Madeline:''' He was being a good big brother. Like you.
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'''Madeline:''' He was being a good big brother. Like you.
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-->'''Madeline:''' He was being a good big brother. Like you.
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-->'''Madeline:''' He was being a good big brother. Like you.you.
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Tony Soto alludes to this in his meeting with Michael, noting that while Felix has been a good earner, his recent string of bad luck plus the sheer disrespect Michael and his crew dropped on him has made Tony question whether or not it's worth keeping Felix around. Tricking Felix into almost killing Tony is the last straw.
-->'''Tony:''' I can't afford to have weakness in my house.
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Tony Soto alludes to this in his meeting with Michael, noting that while Felix has been a good earner, his recent string of bad luck plus the sheer disrespect Michael and his crew dropped on him has made Tony question whether or not it's worth keeping Felix around. Tricking Felix into almost killing Tony is the last straw.
-->'''Tony:''' I can't afford to have weakness in my house.
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* HollywoodLaw: Sam says the Pakistani Consulate is foreign soil. That's the popular belief, but not true. Diplomatic missions have various immunities and privileges, and the host country can't enter without permission, but it's not foreign soil and the host country's laws still apply.
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* HollywoodLaw: Sam says the Pakistani Consulate is foreign soil. That's the popular belief, but not true. Diplomatic missions have various immunities and privileges, and the host country can't enter without permission, but it's not foreign soil and the host country's laws still apply.
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* BerserkButton: Hurting kids is a big one for Fiona. When describing Tanya and Corey's situation, she speaks with a clear undertone of TranquilFury, and she doesn't hesitate to agree to help them and refuses to budge on it. Lampshaded by Sam.
-->'''Sam:''' Hey just a heads-up, this one has Fi a little...fired up.
-->'''Sam:''' Hey just a heads-up, this one has Fi a little...fired up.
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* NotSoDifferent: Madeline points out that Michael once got into a fight to protect Nate from their father, just like how Corey protected his sister from Felix.
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* NotSoDifferent: Madeline points out that Michael once got into a fight to protect Nate from their father, just like how Corey protected his sister from Felix.
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* NotSoDifferent: Madeline points out that Michael once got into a fight to protect Nate from their father, just like how Corey protected his sister from Felix.Felix.
-->'''Corey:''' He fought his dad on - on Christmas?
-->'''Madeline:''' He was being a good big brother. Like you.
-->'''Corey:''' He fought his dad on - on Christmas?
-->'''Madeline:''' He was being a good big brother. Like you.
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* BatmanGambit: How Team Westen finally get rid of Felix; they drive Tony Soto, Felix's boss, to where he is planning to kill Corey, claiming it's where their operation is, so that Felix unwittingly takes a shot at his own boss. This causes Felix to go on the run.
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* BatmanGambit: How Team Westen finally get gets rid of Felix; they drive Tony Soto, Felix's boss, to where he is planning to kill Corey, claiming it's where their operation is, so that Felix unwittingly takes a shot at his own boss. This causes Felix to go on the run.
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* BatmanGambit: How Team Westen finally get rid of Felix; they drive Tony Soto, Felix's boss, to where he is planning to kill Corey, claiming it's where their operation is, so that Felix unwittingly takes a shot at his own boss. This causes Felix to go on the run.
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* CallBack: Maddie points out that she would never see Michael if he didn't bring his clients over, just like she did in an earlier episode to Virgil
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-->''"Sometimes I forget how complicated your life is."''
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-->''"Sometimes I forget how complicated your life is."''"''
* NoExceptYes:
-->'''Coach Martin:''' Sam. You're asking me to hide?
-->'''Sam:''' Hide? Oh, no. No, of course not. I just need you to be someplace where no one can see you.
* NotSoDifferent: Madeline points out that Michael once got into a fight to protect Nate from their father, just like how Corey protected his sister from Felix.
* NoExceptYes:
-->'''Coach Martin:''' Sam. You're asking me to hide?
-->'''Sam:''' Hide? Oh, no. No, of course not. I just need you to be someplace where no one can see you.
* NotSoDifferent: Madeline points out that Michael once got into a fight to protect Nate from their father, just like how Corey protected his sister from Felix.
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* BreakTheCutie: Poor Tanya. The incident with Felix clearly left her traumatized at least in the beginning. When they first meet Team Westen, she doesn't speak except to greet Michael, and she has her head down and leaning against Corey for support while Fiona explains what happened to her.
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* BreakTheCutie: Poor Tanya. The incident with Felix clearly left her traumatized at least in the beginning. When they first meet Team Westen, she doesn't speak except to greet Michael, and she has her head down and leaning against Corey for support support, with him giving her a one-armed hug, while Fiona explains what happened to her.her. She seems to get better at the end of the episode.
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* BerserkButton: Hurting kids is a big one for Fiona. When describing Tanya and Corey's situation, she speaks with a clear undertone of TranquilFury, and she doesn't hesitate to agree to help them and refuses to budge on it.
* BigBrotherInstinct: The whole reason Corey has Felix after him: Felix attacked his sister, so Corey went after him with a baseball bat.
* BigBrotherInstinct: The whole reason Corey has Felix after him: Felix attacked his sister, so Corey went after him with a baseball bat.
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* BerserkButton: Hurting kids is a big one for Fiona. When describing Tanya and Corey's situation, she speaks with a clear undertone of TranquilFury, and she doesn't hesitate to agree to help them and refuses to budge on it.
it. Lampshaded by Sam.
-->'''Sam:''' Hey just a heads-up, this one has Fi a little...fired up.
* BigBrotherInstinct: The whole reason Corey has Felix afterhim: Felix him:
-->'''Fiona:''' It seems this "man" - ''(To Corey and Tanya)'' Felix? ''(They nod)'' - he took Tanya for a ride in his car. ''(Gains a slight edge in her voice)'' And then he...attackedhis sister, so her. And she escaped, barely. ''(With a hint of pride)'' And then Corey went after him with a baseball bat.
-->'''Sam:''' Hey just a heads-up, this one has Fi a little...fired up.
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-->'''Fiona:''' It seems this "man" - ''(To Corey and Tanya)'' Felix? ''(They nod)'' - he took Tanya for a ride in his car. ''(Gains a slight edge in her voice)'' And then he...attacked
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* BreakTheCutie: Poor Tanya. The incident with Felix clearly left her traumatized at least in the beginning. When they first meet Team Westen, she doesn't speak except to greet Michael, and she has her head down and leaning against Corey for support while Fiona explains what happened to her.
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* Callback: Maddie points out that she would never see Michael if he didn't bring his clients over, just like she did in an earlier episode to Virgil
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* BigBrotherInstinct: When Corey found Tanya crying in the street, he went after Felix with a baseball bat. Fi actually encourages him and gives him advice on it:
-->'''Fiona:''' No explanation necessary. Use a golf club next time; Greater force to a smaller area.
-->'''Fiona:''' No explanation necessary. Use a golf club next time; Greater force to a smaller area.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: When The whole reason Corey found Tanya crying in the street, he has Felix after him: Felix attacked his sister, so Corey went after Felix him with a baseball bat. Fi actually encourages him and gives him advice on it:
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-->'''Corey:''' I found her crying in the street. I just wanted to make sure he never tried to come back-
-->'''Fiona:''' No explanation necessary. Use a golf club next time;Greater greater force to a smaller area.area.
-->''(Michael and Corey each give her an AsideGlance)''
-->'''Corey:''' I found her crying in the street. I just wanted to make sure he never tried to come back-
-->'''Fiona:''' No explanation necessary. Use a golf club next time;
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Mike, Sam and Fi go undercover as smartly dressed international car thieves. After a few attacks on Felix and his friends they trick him into attacking Corey's car while they and Tony Soto are in it. Soto is furious and plans to kill Felix so Felix and his gang leave time.
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Mike, Sam and Fi go undercover as smartly dressed international car thieves. After a few attacks on Felix and his friends they trick him into attacking Corey's car while they and Tony Soto are in it. Soto is furious and plans to kill Felix so Felix and his gang leave time.
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In the Burn Notice plot, Michael is investigating who blew up his loft and trying to keep Carla one step behind him. They find a name and a house and Fi goes to investigate. She triggers a fire trap and when Michael goes to find Fi the house is in ruins. When he gets back to the loft Fi is revealed to be alive but her phone was destroyed. Relieved Fi is alive, Michael kisses her.
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In the Burn Notice plot, Michael is investigating who blew up his loft and trying to keep Carla one step behind him. They find a name and a house and Fi goes to investigate. She triggers a fire trap and when Michael goes to find Fi the house is in ruins. When he gets back to the loft Fi is revealed to be alive but her phone was destroyed. Relieved Fi is alive, Michael kisses her.her.
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* BadassArmy: Invoked by Team Westen as Johnny and his crew. Discussed in the spy note:
-->''There's a reason armies wear uniforms, even though they make them easier to spot. Sometimes, that's what you want. Uniforms suggest organization, power, and numbers. These, in turn, inspire fear. And any good operative knows, there's no more effective weapon than fear.''
* BadassInANiceSuit: Michael's cover as Johnny.
* BerserkButton: Hurting kids is a big one for Fiona. When describing Tanya and Corey's situation, she speaks with a clear undertone of TranquilFury, and she doesn't hesitate to agree to help them and refuses to budge on it.
* BigBrotherInstinct: When Corey found Tanya crying in the street, he went after Felix with a baseball bat. Fi actually encourages him and gives him advice on it:
-->'''Fiona:''' No explanation necessary. Use a golf club next time; Greater force to a smaller area.
* BigEater: Corey while helping Maddie clear out her cabinet.
* {{Irony}}: Michael pointing out that the "friends" that got Nate out of jail are the same ones that put him ''in'' jail in the first place. Lampshaded by Madeline
-->''"Sometimes I forget how complicated your life is."''
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* BadassArmy: Invoked by Team Westen as Johnny and his crew. Discussed in the spy note:
-->''There's a reason armies wear uniforms, even though they make them easier to spot. Sometimes, that's what you want. Uniforms suggest organization, power, and numbers. These, in turn, inspire fear. And any good operative knows, there's no more effective weapon than fear.''
* BadassInANiceSuit: Michael's cover as Johnny.
* BerserkButton: Hurting kids is a big one for Fiona. When describing Tanya and Corey's situation, she speaks with a clear undertone of TranquilFury, and she doesn't hesitate to agree to help them and refuses to budge on it.
* BigBrotherInstinct: When Corey found Tanya crying in the street, he went after Felix with a baseball bat. Fi actually encourages him and gives him advice on it:
-->'''Fiona:''' No explanation necessary. Use a golf club next time; Greater force to a smaller area.
* BigEater: Corey while helping Maddie clear out her cabinet.
* {{Irony}}: Michael pointing out that the "friends" that got Nate out of jail are the same ones that put him ''in'' jail in the first place. Lampshaded by Madeline
-->''"Sometimes I forget how complicated your life is."''
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Michael, Sam and Fi help Corey and Tanya two teenagers. Corey beat up a gang member named Felix who tried to abduct and assault his sister. Unfortunately Felix has a gang and a powerful boss named Tony Soto and the whole gang is after Corey.
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Michael, Sam and Fi help two teenagers named Corey and Tanya two teenagers. Tanya. Corey beat up a gang member named Felix who tried to abduct and assault his sister.fifteen year old sister Tanya. Unfortunately Felix has a gang and a powerful boss named Tony Soto and the whole gang is after Corey.
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Michael, Sam and Fi help Corey and Tanya two teenagers. Corey beat up a gang member named Felix who tried to abduct and assault his sister. Unfortunately Felix has a gang and a powerful boss named Tony Soto and the whole gang is after Corey.
Mike, Sam and Fi go undercover as smartly dressed international car thieves. After a few attacks on Felix and his friends they trick him into attacking Corey's car while they and Tony Soto are in it. Soto is furious and plans to kill Felix so Felix and his gang leave time.
In the Burn Notice plot, Michael is investigating who blew up his loft and trying to keep Carla one step behind him. They find a name and a house and Fi goes to investigate. She triggers a fire trap and when Michael goes to find Fi the house is in ruins. When he gets back to the loft Fi is revealed to be alive but her phone was destroyed. Relieved Fi is alive, Michael kisses her.
Mike, Sam and Fi go undercover as smartly dressed international car thieves. After a few attacks on Felix and his friends they trick him into attacking Corey's car while they and Tony Soto are in it. Soto is furious and plans to kill Felix so Felix and his gang leave time.
In the Burn Notice plot, Michael is investigating who blew up his loft and trying to keep Carla one step behind him. They find a name and a house and Fi goes to investigate. She triggers a fire trap and when Michael goes to find Fi the house is in ruins. When he gets back to the loft Fi is revealed to be alive but her phone was destroyed. Relieved Fi is alive, Michael kisses her.
