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--> G. Iroh: "You two are so busy fighting, you fail to notice your ship has launched!"
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--> G. General Iroh: "You two are so busy fighting, you fail to notice your ship has launched!"
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--> Iroh: "It is not a proverb! Look! ({{Beat}}) Maybe it should be a proverb..."
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--> General Iroh: "It is not a proverb! Look! ({{Beat}}) Maybe it should be a proverb..."
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* * IceCreamKoan: lampshaded
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FunnyBackgroundEvent: Iroh imitating the weird grin of the monkey statue while Zuko is first talking to the pirates.
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* FunnyBackgroundEvent: Iroh imitating the weird grin of the monkey statue while Zuko is first talking to the pirates.
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* * IceCreamKoan: lampshaded
--> G. Iroh: "You two are so busy fighting, you fail to notice your ship has launched!"
--> Prince Zuko: "This is no time for your proverbs, uncle."
--> Iroh: "It is not a proverb! Look! ({{Beat}}) Maybe it should be a proverb..."
FunnyBackgroundEvent: Iroh imitating the weird grin of the monkey statue while Zuko is first talking to the pirates.
--> G. Iroh: "You two are so busy fighting, you fail to notice your ship has launched!"
--> Prince Zuko: "This is no time for your proverbs, uncle."
--> Iroh: "It is not a proverb! Look! ({{Beat}}) Maybe it should be a proverb..."
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: After yelling at Aang and seeing him cry, Katara immediately feels bad for what she said and apologizes sincerely. Then she does the same for Momo, who had been whipped earlier by a failed water whip.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: After yelling at Aang and seeing him cry, Katara immediately feels bad for what she said and apologizes sincerely. Then she does the same for Momo, who had been whipped earlier by a failed water whip. And the look Sokka gives her after she yells at Aang clearly said "[[WhatTheHellHero What the heck is wrong with you]]?!"
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* TemptingFate:
-->'''Sokka''': Oh, what? I'm not good enough to kidnap?
-->''[Cue to a net being thrown at him and gets dragged away]''
-->'''Sokka''': Oh, what? I'm not good enough to kidnap?
-->''[Cue to a net being thrown at him and gets dragged away]''
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* ItsAllMyFault, Katara says.
-->'''Aang:''' No, Katara, it isn't.
-->'''Iroh:''' Yeah, it kind of is.
-->'''Aang:''' No, Katara, it isn't.
-->'''Iroh:''' Yeah, it kind of is.
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* RecurringExtra: The Cabbage Merchant returns. He should've stayed in Omashu.
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* TalkingTheirWayOut: Sokka attempts this. Zuko [[GenreSavvy sees through it instantly]] -- the pirates do not.
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* TalkingTheirWayOut: TalkingYourWayOut: Sokka attempts this. Zuko [[GenreSavvy sees through it instantly]] -- the pirates do not.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Iroh's Pai Sho piece. The lotus tile is actually a part of his secret code to contacting 'The Order of the White Lotus', of which he is a grand master.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Iroh's Pai Sho piece. The lotus tile is actually a part of his secret code to contacting 'The The Order of the White Lotus', Lotus, of which he is a grand master.
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* InsistentTerminology: They're not pirates, they're 'high risk traders'.
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* InsistentTerminology: They're not pirates, they're 'high "high risk traders'.traders."
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* SpoofAesop: The lesson is, "stealing is wrong... unless its from pirates!"... which, if nothing else, refreshingly keeps the episode from being {{Anvilicious}}.
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* ShutUpAndSaveMe:
-->'''Aang:''' Hey, you did the Water Whip!
-->'''Katara:''' I couldn't have done it without your help!
-->'''Sokka:''' ''(being restrained by three pirates)'' Will you two quit congratulating each other and help me out?!
* SpoofAesop: The lesson is, "stealing is wrong... unless its from pirates!"... which, if nothing else, refreshingly keeps the episode from being{{Anvilicious}}.{{Anvilicious}}.
* TalkingTheirWayOut: Sokka attempts this. Zuko [[GenreSavvy sees through it instantly]] -- the pirates do not.
* [[ThisIsNoTimeForKnitting This Is No Time For Flute Practice!]]
-->'''Aang:''' Hey, you did the Water Whip!
-->'''Katara:''' I couldn't have done it without your help!
-->'''Sokka:''' ''(being restrained by three pirates)'' Will you two quit congratulating each other and help me out?!
* SpoofAesop: The lesson is, "stealing is wrong... unless its from pirates!"... which, if nothing else, refreshingly keeps the episode from being
* TalkingTheirWayOut: Sokka attempts this. Zuko [[GenreSavvy sees through it instantly]] -- the pirates do not.
* [[ThisIsNoTimeForKnitting This Is No Time For Flute Practice!]]
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Wrong trope.
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* BrokenAesop: On purpose- the lesson is, stealing is wrong...unless its from pirates!
** Which, if nothing else, refreshingly keeps the episode from being {{Anvilicious}}.
** Which, if nothing else, refreshingly keeps the episode from being {{Anvilicious}}.
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* ShipTease: It's widely agreed that this episode is when the concept of "Zutara" really took off.
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* ShipTease: It's widely agreed that this episode is when the concept of "Zutara" really took off.off.
* SpoofAesop: The lesson is, "stealing is wrong... unless its from pirates!"... which, if nothing else, refreshingly keeps the episode from being {{Anvilicious}}.
* SpoofAesop: The lesson is, "stealing is wrong... unless its from pirates!"... which, if nothing else, refreshingly keeps the episode from being {{Anvilicious}}.
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** Which, if nothing else, refreshingly keeps the episode from being {{Anvillicious}}.
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** Which, if nothing else, refreshingly keeps the episode from being {{Anvillicious}}.{{Anvilicious}}.
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** Which, if nothing else, refreshingly keeps the episode from being {{Anvillicious}}.
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* ChekhovsGunman: This won't be the last we see of these pirates...
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* BreatherEpisode: A plot-significant episode which provides a break from the previous two-parter, especially with the darker "Jet" to follow.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: After yelling at Aang and seeing him cry, Katara immediately feels bad for what she said and apologizes sincerely. Then she does the same for Momo, who had been whipped earlier by a failed water whip.
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my mistake. He did use it at the beginning, right?
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** Also, on the pirate ship, Sokka mentions looking at their "collection of boomerangs".
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** Also, on the pirate ship, Sokka mentions looking at their "collection of boomerangs".
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* ShipTease: It's widely agreed that this episode is when the concept of "Zutara" really took off.
* TastyGold: A quote from this episode is the TropeNamer.
* TastyGold: A quote from this episode is the TropeNamer.
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* ShipTease: It's widely agreed that this episode is when the concept of "Zutara" really took off.
* TastyGold: A quote from this episode is the TropeNamer.off.
* TastyGold: A quote from this episode is the TropeNamer.
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* ShipTease: It's widely agreed that this episode is when the concept of "Zutara" really took off.
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* ShipTease: It's widely agreed that this episode is when the concept of "Zutara" really took off.off.
* TastyGold: A quote from this episode is the TropeNamer.
* TastyGold: A quote from this episode is the TropeNamer.
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The gang stops in a village for supplies, although they are running dangerously low on money. However, while shopping, they come across interest merchandise sold by rather questionable pirates- er, I mean, 'high risk traders'. Among their wares is an expensive water bending scroll, which Katara steals to help both herself and Aang learn water bending. To her annoyance, it seems Aang quickly surpasses her in the skill, and her jealousy begins to take control. Meanwhile, Iroh goes shopping for his missing Pai Sho piece, and Zuko catches wind that the pirates are after a familiar sounding trio, and so they join forces.
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The gang stops in a village for supplies, although they are running dangerously low on money. However, while shopping, they come across interest interesting merchandise sold by rather questionable pirates- er, I mean, 'high risk traders'. Among their wares is an expensive water bending scroll, which Katara steals to help both herself and Aang learn water bending. To her annoyance, it seems Aang quickly surpasses her in the skill, and her jealousy begins to take control. Meanwhile, Iroh goes shopping for his missing Pai Sho piece, and Zuko catches wind that the pirates are after a familiar sounding trio, and so they join forces.
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* LintValue: Aang tries to haggle for the waterbending scroll. He offers one copper piece. Then, okay, how about two copper pieces? (He gets kicked out of the shop.)
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* LintValue: Aang tries to haggle for the waterbending scroll. He offers one copper piece. Then, okay, how about two copper pieces? (He gets kicked out of the shop.)pieces?
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* LintValue: Aang tries to haggle for the waterbending scroll. He offers one copper piece. Then, okay, how about two copper pieces? (He gets kicked out of the shop.)
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* LintValue: Aang tries to haggle for the waterbending scroll. He offers one copper piece. Then, okay, how about two copper pieces? (He gets kicked out of the shop.))
* ShipTease: It's widely agreed that this episode is when the concept of "Zutara" really took off.
* ShipTease: It's widely agreed that this episode is when the concept of "Zutara" really took off.
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* InsistentTerminology: They're not pirates, they're 'high risk traders'.
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* InsistentTerminology: They're not pirates, they're 'high risk traders'.traders'.
* LintValue: Aang tries to haggle for the waterbending scroll. He offers one copper piece. Then, okay, how about two copper pieces? (He gets kicked out of the shop.)
* LintValue: Aang tries to haggle for the waterbending scroll. He offers one copper piece. Then, okay, how about two copper pieces? (He gets kicked out of the shop.)
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* ChekhovsGun: Aang's bison whistle, and in the later seasons too.
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* ChekhovsGun: ChekhovsGun[=/=]ChekhovsBoomerang: Aang's bison whistle, and in the later seasons too.whistle.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Appa!
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* ChekhovsGun: Aang's bison whistle, and in the later seasons too.
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-->"I'll save you from the pirates."
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Iroh's Pai Sho piece. [[spoiler: The lotus tile is actually a part of his secret code to contacting 'The Order of the White Lotus', of which he is a grand master.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Iroh's Pai Sho piece. [[spoiler: The lotus tile is actually a part of his secret code to contacting 'The Order of the White Lotus', of which he is a grand master.]]
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* ForeShadowing: Iroh's Pai Sho piece. [[spoiler: The lotus tile is actually a part of his secret code to contacting 'The Order of the White Lotus', of which he is a grand master.]]
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* ForeShadowing: {{Foreshadowing}}: Iroh's Pai Sho piece. [[spoiler: The lotus tile is actually a part of his secret code to contacting 'The Order of the White Lotus', of which he is a grand master.]]]]
* FruitCart: The Cabbage Merchant and his cabbages.
* FruitCart: The Cabbage Merchant and his cabbages.
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* Foreshadowing: Iroh's Pai Sho piece. [[spoiler: The lotus tile is actually a part of his secret code to contacting 'The Order of the White Lotus', of which he is a grand master.]]
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* Foreshadowing: ForeShadowing: Iroh's Pai Sho piece. [[spoiler: The lotus tile is actually a part of his secret code to contacting 'The Order of the White Lotus', of which he is a grand master.]]
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* BrokenAesop: On purpose- the lesson is, stealing is wrong...unless its from pirates!
* ForeShadowing: Iroh's Pai Sho piece. [[spoiler: The lotus tile is actually a part of his secret code to contacting 'The Order of the White Lotus', of which he is a grand master.]]
* ForeShadowing: Iroh's Pai Sho piece. [[spoiler: The lotus tile is actually a part of his secret code to contacting 'The Order of the White Lotus', of which he is a grand master.]]
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* BrokenAesop: On purpose- the lesson is, stealing is wrong...unless its from pirates!
pirates!
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* Foreshadowing: Iroh's Pai Sho piece. [[spoiler: The lotus tile is actually a part of his secret code to contacting 'The Order of the White Lotus', of which he is a grand master.]]
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* Foreshadowing: Iroh's Pai Sho piece. [[spoiler: The lotus tile is actually a part of his secret code to contacting 'The Order of the White Lotus', of which he is a grand master.]]
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* BrokenAesop: On purpose- the lesson is, stealing is wrong...unless its from pirates!
* CantGetAwayWithNothing: Averted. The trio gets to keep the water bending scroll, and the actual stealing from the pirates isn't painted particularly badly.
* CantGetAwayWithNothing: Averted. The trio gets to keep the water bending scroll, and the actual stealing from the pirates isn't painted particularly badly.
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* BrokenAesop: On purpose- the lesson is, stealing is wrong...unless its from pirates!
* CantGetAwayWithNothing: Averted. The trio gets to keep the water bending scroll, and the actual stealing from the pirates isn't painted particularly badly.pirates!
* CantGetAwayWithNothing: Averted. The trio gets to keep the water bending scroll, and the actual stealing from the pirates isn't painted particularly badly.