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-->-- '''[[http://www.eruditorumpress.com/blog/clinging-to-the-skin-of-this-tiny-little-world-the-tv-movie/ Dr. El Sandifer]]''', "[[{{Recap/DoctorWhoTVMTheTVMovie}} The TV Movie]]"
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-->-- '''[[http://www.eruditorumpress.com/blog/clinging-to-the-skin-of-this-tiny-little-world-the-tv-movie/ Dr. El Sandifer]]''', "[[{{Recap/DoctorWhoTVMTheTVMovie}} "[[Recap/DoctorWhoTVMTheTVMovie The TV Movie]]"
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-->-- '''[[http://docohobigfinish.blogspot.co.uk/2012/05/voyager-season-four.html Joe Ford]]''' on ''Series/StarTrekVoyager'', "Mortal Coil"
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-->-- '''[[http://docohobigfinish.blogspot.co.uk/2012/05/voyager-season-four.html Joe Ford]]''' on ''Series/StarTrekVoyager'', "Mortal Coil"
"[[Recap/StarTrekVoyagerS4E12MortalCoil Mortal Coil]]"
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-->-- ''WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons'', "[[Recap/TheSimpsonsS8E14TheItchyAndScrathcyAndPoochieShow The Itchy & Scratchy & Poochy Show]]"
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-->-- ''WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons'', "[[Recap/TheSimpsonsS8E14TheItchyAndScrathcyAndPoochieShow "[[Recap/TheSimpsonsS8E14TheItchyAndScratchyAndPoochieShow The Itchy & Scratchy & Poochy Show]]"
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->'''Jacob:''' So how is everyone enjoying the show?
->'''Audience:''' ''(Rigorous applause)''
->'''Jacob:''' ''({{Aside Glance}})'' It's just that easy.
-->-- '''[[https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCBODyKF0JMbUd6D9Bklyzbw Alpharad]]''', ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GWnoJav4Rs0 "Copypasta Theatre"]]''
->'''Audience:''' ''(Rigorous applause)''
->'''Jacob:''' ''({{Aside Glance}})'' It's just that easy.
-->-- '''[[https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCBODyKF0JMbUd6D9Bklyzbw Alpharad]]''', ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GWnoJav4Rs0 "Copypasta Theatre"]]''
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->''The mass is foolish, and since it pays it ''[the play]'', it is fair to speak foolish to give it joy.''
-->-- '''Creator/LopeDeVega'''
->''My standard for verisimilitude is simple and I came to it when I started to write prose narrative: fuck the average reader. I was always told to write for the average reader in my newspaper life. The average reader, as they meant it, was some suburban white subscriber with two-point-whatever kids and three-point-whatever cars and a dog and a cat and lawn furniture. He knows nothing and he needs everything explained to him right away, so that exposition becomes this incredible, story-killing burden. Fuck him. Fuck him to hell.''
-->-- '''Creator/LopeDeVega'''
->''My standard for verisimilitude is simple and I came to it when I started to write prose narrative: fuck the average reader. I was always told to write for the average reader in my newspaper life. The average reader, as they meant it, was some suburban white subscriber with two-point-whatever kids and three-point-whatever cars and a dog and a cat and lawn furniture. He knows nothing and he needs everything explained to him right away, so that exposition becomes this incredible, story-killing burden. Fuck him. Fuck him to hell.''
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->''My standard for verisimilitude is simple and I came to it when I started to write prose narrative: fuck the average reader. I
->''I was always told to write for the average reader in my newspaper life. The average reader, as they meant it, was some suburban white subscriber with two-point-whatever kids and three-point-whatever cars and a dog and a cat and lawn furniture. He knows nothing and he needs everything explained to him right away, so that exposition becomes this incredible, story-killing burden.
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-->-- ''WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}}''
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-->-- ''WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}}''
''WesternAnimation/{{Futurama}}'', "[[Recap/FuturamaS1E12WhenAliensAttack When Aliens Attack]]"
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-->-- ''WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons'', "The Itchy & Scratchy & Poochy Show"
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-->-- ''WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons'', "The "[[Recap/TheSimpsonsS8E14TheItchyAndScrathcyAndPoochieShow The Itchy & Scratchy & Poochy Show"
Show]]"
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-->--Writer '''Paul Dini''', [[http://kingofbreakfast.livejournal.com/72294.html describing cliches]] of animated features (mostly referring to the early 90's Creator/{{Disney}} features)
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-->--Writer '''Paul Dini''', '''Creator/PaulDini''', [[http://kingofbreakfast.livejournal.com/72294.html describing cliches]] of animated features (mostly referring to the early 90's Creator/{{Disney}} features)
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-->-- '''Creator/DaveChappelle''' after being drowned out at a stand-up show by the audience screaming "I'm Rick James, bitch!"
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-->-- '''Creator/DaveChappelle''' after being drowned out at a stand-up show by the audience screaming "I'm Rick James, Music/RickJames, bitch!"
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->"Their stupidity does not amaze me, its when they're smart that amazes me. It's baffling whenever you find someone who's smart; incredible. Soon you'll have zoos for such things."
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->"Their stupidity does not amaze me, its it's when they're smart that amazes me. It's baffling whenever you find someone who's smart; incredible. Soon you'll have zoos for such things."
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->''If somebody sends me a literate script do you know what I do with it? I throw it in the waste paper basket, that's what I do with it. It's no use making intelligent films. There aren't enough intelligent people to fill the cinemas''.
-->--'''Creator/IrwinAllen'''
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->''"Important writers! Remember when Creator/{{NBC}} tried to beef up their Sunday nights with important writers? Plays by Robert Sherwood -- Thornton Wilder -- Ferenc Molnar. Important enough for you? ...So what happened? I'll tell you what: Forty million people nearly broke off their dials turning back to Ed Sullivan to watch a dog fart 'The Star-Spangled Banner!'"''
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->''"Important writers! Remember when Creator/{{NBC}} tried to beef up their Sunday nights with important writers? Plays by Robert Sherwood -- — Thornton Wilder -- — Ferenc Molnar. Important enough for you? ...So what happened? I'll tell you what: Forty million people nearly broke off their dials [[LowestCommonDenominator turning back to Ed Sullivan Sullivan]] [[DancingBear to watch a dog fart 'The Star-Spangled Banner!'"''Banner!']]"''
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'''''*BUZZER*''''' "No, lose a point...the most relevant fact in the murder case was the fact that [='=][[AC:[[ShapedLikeItself somebody got murdered]] ]][='=], which I thought had only been put on the list for completeness’ sake! The game does shit like this quite a few times. Have you had any ambition to challenge us with actual deductive puzzles? or are you just content to poke us every 20 minutes so we don’t fall asleep?"
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'''''*BUZZER*''''' "No, lose a point...the most relevant fact in the murder case was the fact that [='=][[AC:[[ShapedLikeItself somebody got murdered]] ]][='=], murdered]]]][='=], which I thought had only been put on the list for completeness’ sake! The game does shit like this quite a few times. Have you had any ambition to challenge us with actual deductive puzzles? or Or are you just content to poke us every 20 minutes so we don’t fall asleep?"
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-->-- '''WebAnimation/TerribleWritingAdvice - [[https://youtu.be/npEX8uRvUEo DARK LORDS]]'''
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-->-- '''WebAnimation/TerribleWritingAdvice - — [[https://youtu.be/npEX8uRvUEo DARK LORDS]]'''
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->''"In any case, we felt *action* should be emphasized over *plot* -- especially avoiding any complicated story line -- to ensure the success of this series with its intended viewers."''
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->''"In any case, we felt *action* should be emphasized over *plot* -- — especially avoiding any complicated story line -- — to ensure the success of this series with its intended viewers."''
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->''It's why ''Literature/HarryPotterAndThePhilosophersStone'' was renamed ''Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone'', because studios are convinced you're one retarded spasm away from flopping into a river and drowning because [[TooDumbToLive the mittens pinned to your coat caught on a log]] at all times.''
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->''It's why ''Literature/HarryPotterAndThePhilosophersStone'' was renamed ''Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone'', because studios are convinced [[TooDumbToLive you're one retarded spasm away from flopping into a river and drowning drowning]] because [[TooDumbToLive [[EpicFail the mittens pinned to your coat caught on a log]] at all times.''
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->''"Remember how in ''[[VideoGame/MetalGearSolid2SonsOfLiberty Sons of Liberty]]'' Raiden was supposed to represent the player? It's no unforseen accident that he became unpopular. [[Creator/HideoKojima Kojima]] wanted to leave the series on a question mark, forcing players to examine and re-examine the game from every angle, until they found the deeper messages hidden between the lines. But, unfortunately for him, he overestimated the intelligence of his fanbase... This is where Raiden's transformation becomes iconic. Instead of listening to the advice of Snake, Raiden continued to allow his past to haunt him and determine his future. He [[AesopAmnesia didn't take a new name, start over, or see Rose for what she was.]] Likewise, players refused to give ''[=MGS2=]'' a second chance and find the deeper meanings; in this sense, Raiden [[StrawFan still represents the player]]... Seeing that his preaching was in vain, Kojima gave up on enlightening the players (like Snake [[SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids gave up on Philanthropy]],) and simply let Raiden become [[TestosteronePoisoning a badass killing machine with a big manly dick]]. Awesome!"''
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->''"Remember how in ''[[VideoGame/MetalGearSolid2SonsOfLiberty Sons of Liberty]]'' Raiden was supposed to represent the player? It's no unforseen accident that he became unpopular. [[Creator/HideoKojima Kojima]] wanted to leave the series on a question mark, forcing players to examine and re-examine the game from every angle, until they found the deeper messages hidden between the lines. But, unfortunately for him, he overestimated the intelligence of his fanbase... This is where Raiden's transformation becomes iconic. Instead of listening to the advice of Snake, Raiden continued to allow his past to haunt him and determine his future. He [[AesopAmnesia didn't take a new name, start over, or see Rose for what she was.]] Likewise, players refused to give ''[=MGS2=]'' a second chance and find the deeper meanings; in this sense, Raiden [[StrawFan still represents the player]]... Seeing that his preaching was in vain, Kojima gave up on enlightening the players (like Snake [[SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids gave up on Philanthropy]],) Philanthropy]]), and simply let Raiden become [[TestosteronePoisoning a badass killing machine with a big manly dick]]. Awesome!"''
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->''"The car now re-entered the main hall, but to [[spoiler:Sarah’s]] surprise the decor had changed. [[ItMakesSenseInContext Gone were the gothic furnishings of the haunted house, and in their place was a glitzy high school prom.]] Davina[[spoiler: and Neve]] were nowhere to be seen, but standing in the centre of the stage were a young couple, smiling and waving ecstatically to the audience. The guy was sporting a flashy suit and an outdated perm, while the girl had straight sandy hair and a billowing white dress. “Literature/{{Carrie}}”, whispered [[spoiler:Sarah]] to herself."''
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->''"The car now re-entered the main hall, but to [[spoiler:Sarah’s]] surprise the decor had changed. [[ItMakesSenseInContext Gone were the gothic furnishings of the haunted house, and in their place was a glitzy high school prom.]] Davina[[spoiler: and Davina [[spoiler:and Neve]] were nowhere to be seen, but standing in the centre of the stage were a young couple, smiling and waving ecstatically to the audience. The guy was sporting a flashy suit and an outdated perm, while the girl had straight sandy hair and a billowing white dress. “Literature/{{Carrie}}”, whispered [[spoiler:Sarah]] to herself."''
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->'''Director Stuart Baird''': So Picard's clone is just like him, then?\\
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->'''Director Stuart Baird''': Baird:''' So Picard's clone is just like him, then?\\
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'''Baird:''' But he's got to be bald. Because if he's not bald, then the audience -- even if we tell them -- still won't understand the he's Picard's clone, 'cause Picard is ''the bald Captain.'' If he's not bald then no one will understand what happ--\\
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'''Baird:''' But he's got to be bald. Because if he's not bald, then the audience -- — even if we tell them -- — still won't understand the he's Picard's clone, 'cause Picard is ''the bald Captain.'' If he's not bald then no one will understand what happ--\\happ—\\
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-->-- '''WebVideo/ThirdRateGamer''' on VideoGame/CoolSpot
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-->-- '''WebVideo/ThirdRateGamer''' on VideoGame/CoolSpot
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->'''Fry''': Married? Jenny can't get married.\\
'''Leela''': Why not? It's clever, it's unexpected.\\
'''Fry''': But that's not why people watch TV. Clever things make people feel stupid, and unexpected things make them feel scared.
'''Leela''': Why not? It's clever, it's unexpected.\\
'''Fry''': But that's not why people watch TV. Clever things make people feel stupid, and unexpected things make them feel scared.
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->You kids don't know what you want! That's why you're still kids -- ''' 'cause you're stupid!'''
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->You kids don't know what you want! That's why you're still kids -- ''' 'cause — '''[='=]cause you're stupid!'''
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->''Trust me, this process is so simple you could break out the Crayolas and storyboard the whole thing yourself using nothing more complicated than stick figures and tracings of your own hand. Be warned however, most studio execs don't have the attention span to follow the most energetic and entertaining of storyboard pitches for more than three minutes before they start checking their Blackberries for their lunch reservations. The good news is these story elements are so tried and true (translation: stale) that even the simplest of readers will get it and enthusiastically pass it along to their boss, who still won't read it but will take credit for all the amusing gags once he sees the completed picture.''
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->''Trust me, this process is so simple you could break out the Crayolas and storyboard the whole thing yourself using nothing more complicated than stick figures and tracings of your own hand. Be warned warned, however, most studio execs don't have the attention span to follow the most energetic and entertaining of storyboard pitches for more than three minutes before they start checking their Blackberries for their lunch reservations. The good news is these story elements are so tried and true (translation: stale) that even the simplest of readers will get it and enthusiastically pass it along to their boss, who still won't read it but will take credit for all the amusing gags once he sees the completed picture.''
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->''Yes, in those days plays were literally ''melo''-dramas; dramas with musical accompaniment somewhat on the order of the Warner Bros. movie music of the day which drove Creator/BetteDavis wild... halfway up the stairs Bette stopped and turned to fix the director, Irving Rapper, with her famed steely gaze. "Now tell me, Irving, before I waste any more time on acting, who is going up these stairs to die, [[SorryILeftTheBGMOn me or Max Steiner?]]" Like most of the great actresses she hated the schmaltzy movie music that was added later by some director-editor in order to nudge--[[{{Anvilicious}} shove]]--the audience into sobs or laughter.''
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->''Yes, in those days plays were literally ''melo''-dramas; dramas with musical accompaniment somewhat on the order of the Warner Bros. movie music of the day which drove Creator/BetteDavis wild... halfway up the stairs Bette stopped and turned to fix the director, Irving Rapper, with her famed steely gaze. "Now tell me, Irving, before I waste any more time on acting, who is going up these stairs to die, [[SorryILeftTheBGMOn me or Max Steiner?]]" Like most of the great actresses she hated the schmaltzy movie music that was added later by some director-editor in order to nudge--[[{{Anvilicious}} shove]]--the nudge — [[{{Anvilicious}} shove]] — the audience into sobs or laughter.''
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->"We had so many smart fans that bought into it hook, like and sinker...That's the beauty of it. Whenever anyone tells me they're a {{smart mark}}, I say, Yeah, but the key word there, still, is that you're a '''mark.'''
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->"We had so many smart fans that bought into it hook, like line and sinker...That's the beauty of it. Whenever anyone tells me they're a {{smart mark}}, I say, Yeah, but the key word there, still, is that you're a '''mark.'''
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->''The first clue]] is the hilarious profusion of clocks inside the TARDIS. Part of this is a matter of packing in the 'he’s British!' signifiers, which, in American, means having him [[QuintessentialBritishGentleman wear a frock coat and be old-fashioned]], so lots of clocks and candles in the TARDIS. But it also is the most crassly literal-minded interpretation of 'Time Lord' imaginable. The Doctor has a TARDIS full of clocks to demonstrate that he’s a Time Lord, and for no other reason.''
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->''The first clue]] clue is the hilarious profusion of clocks inside the TARDIS. Part of this is a matter of packing in the 'he’s British!' signifiers, which, in American, means having him [[QuintessentialBritishGentleman wear a frock coat and be old-fashioned]], so lots of clocks and candles in the TARDIS. But it also is the most crassly literal-minded interpretation of 'Time Lord' imaginable. The Doctor has a TARDIS full of clocks to demonstrate that he’s a Time Lord, and for no other reason.''
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-->-- '''Émilie Masse''', ''VideoGame/DeusExHumanRevolution
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-->-- '''Émilie Masse''', ''VideoGame/DeusExHumanRevolution
''VideoGame/DeusExHumanRevolution''
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->''[[StylisticSuck Okay, we ran out of budget]], but kids 6 to 10 will love it''
-->-- ''[[VillainEpisode GlomTales]]'' theme, ''WesternAnimation/DuckTales2017''
-->-- ''[[VillainEpisode GlomTales]]'' theme, ''WesternAnimation/DuckTales2017''
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->'''Jay:''' There's this line from Creator/YaphatKotto where he says, "ASH WAS A GODDAMN ANDROID!" He says it offscreen; it's ADR'ed. And that's the studio saying, "We need to explain what this milk-man is. They're not gonna get that [[RoboticReveal he's a robot.]]"\\
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->'''Jay:''' There's this line from Creator/YaphatKotto Creator/YaphetKotto where he says, "ASH WAS A GODDAMN ANDROID!" He says it offscreen; it's ADR'ed. And that's the studio saying, "We need to explain what this milk-man is. They're not gonna get that [[RoboticReveal he's a robot.]]"\\
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->You people! If there isn't a movie about it, it's not worth knowing, is it?!
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->''"Listen. The yucks who look at television don't know the difference between Creator/ErnestHemingway and ''Huntz Hall.'' What do they care about important writers? What they want is shows where [[{{Slapstick}} one guy kicks another guy in the belly]] while a dame leans over 'em with [[MaleGaze her cakes falling out of her negligee]]. Or domestic comedies where the whole family gets together to screw gruff old Dad. Or quiz shows where [[Series/TwentyOne people get put in isolation booths]] and develop coronary occlusion before your very eyes... Important writers! Remember when Creator/{{NBC}} tried to beef up their Sunday nights with important writers? Plays by Robert Sherwood -- Thornton Wilder -- Ferenc Molnar. Important enough for you? ...So what happened? I'll tell you what: Forty million people nearly broke off their dials turning back to Ed Sullivan to watch a dog fart 'The Star-Spangled Banner!'"''
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'''Sean / Beverly:''' ''Yes.''\\
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'''Sean / & Beverly:''' ''Yes.''\\
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->'''Creator/WayneBrady:''' (''in Southern accent'') Yea, [[Theatre/TheTwoGentlemenOfVerona the two revenuers from Verona approacheth]]!
->(''dead silence'')
->'''Wayne:''' (''in normal voice'') [[TakeThatAudience Read a book, people]]!
->(''dead silence'')
->'''Wayne:''' (''in normal voice'') [[TakeThatAudience Read a book, people]]!
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->'''Creator/WayneBrady:''' (''in Southern accent'') Yea, [[Theatre/TheTwoGentlemenOfVerona the two revenuers from Verona approacheth]]!
->(''dead silence'')
->'''Wayne:''' (''in normal voice'') [[TakeThatAudienceapproacheth]]!\\
''[dead silence]''\\
'''Wayne:''' Read a book,people]]!people!
->(''dead silence'')
->'''Wayne:''' (''in normal voice'') [[TakeThatAudience
''[dead silence]''\\
'''Wayne:''' Read a book,
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->Your opinions have been variously described as "rabid", "pig-ignorant" and "stultifyingly ill-informed". Thanks for those.
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->'''Jay:''' There's this line from Yaphat Kotto where he says, "ASH WAS A GODDAMN ANDROID!" He says it offscreen; it's ADR'ed. And that's the studio saying, "We need to explain what this milk man is. They're not gonna get that [[RoboticReveal he's a robot.]]"\\
'''Mike:''' "They're gonna think he's just filled with cum."\\
'''Mike:''' "They're gonna think he's just filled with cum."\\
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->'''Jay:''' There's this line from Yaphat Kotto Creator/YaphatKotto where he says, "ASH WAS A GODDAMN ANDROID!" He says it offscreen; it's ADR'ed. And that's the studio saying, "We need to explain what this milk man milk-man is. They're not gonna get that [[RoboticReveal he's a robot.]]"\\
'''Mike:'''"They're They're gonna think he's just filled with cum."\\\\
'''Mike:'''
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->''"I found that the greatest danger was overthinking things. [='=][[AC:what is the most relevant fact?]][='=] the game might ask, listing everything we have established from [[SherlockScan blundering around the given scene]]. 'Hmm' thinks I, 'well, perhaps the fact that the victim was killed with their own gun, indicating that the perpetrator probably hadn’t premeditated the crime. That seems like the biggest lead at present. Was that what I was supposed to click on?'"''\\\
'''''*BUZZER*'''''\\\
''"No, lose a point...the most relevant fact in the murder case was the fact that [='=][[AC:[[ShapedLikeItself somebody got murdered]] ]][='=], which I thought had only been put on the list for completeness’ sake! The game does shit like this quite a few times. Have you had any ambition to challenge us with actual deductive puzzles? or are you just content to poke us every twenty minutes so we don’t fall asleep?"''
'''''*BUZZER*'''''\\\
''"No, lose a point...the most relevant fact in the murder case was the fact that [='=][[AC:[[ShapedLikeItself somebody got murdered]] ]][='=], which I thought had only been put on the list for completeness’ sake! The game does shit like this quite a few times. Have you had any ambition to challenge us with actual deductive puzzles? or are you just content to poke us every twenty minutes so we don’t fall asleep?"''
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'Hmm' thinks I, 'well, perhaps the fact that the victim was killed with their own gun, indicating that the perpetrator probably hadn’t premeditated the crime. That seems like the biggest lead at present. Was that what I was supposed to click on?'"''\\\
''"No,
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->''"The more substance and talking points you have in a show, the less attention you'll pay to the commercial break. Your mind would be too busy digesting and pondering the new information that was just received. U.S. media just can't have that. That would be a bullet in the heart of consumerism, capitalism, and the American Dream."''
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->''"The 'wealth gap' we often hear about is equaled by the 'intelligence gap' that is kept secret...Instead of creating better ads, you destroy the type of thinking that resists ads. Instead of creating superior products, you emotionally cripple people to the point where they feel secretly desperate to buy your product simply in order to feel normal and accepted by society."''
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->''"The [[ThisIsGonnaSuck first clue]] is the hilarious profusion of clocks inside the TARDIS. Part of this is a matter of packing in the “he’s British!” signifiers, which, in American, means having him [[QuintessentialBritishGentleman wear a frock coat and be old-fashioned]], so lots of clocks and candles in the TARDIS. But it also is the most crassly [[LiteralMinded literal-minded]] interpretation of 'Time Lord' imaginable. The Doctor has a TARDIS full of clocks to demonstrate that he’s a Time Lord, and for no other reason."''
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->''"Cut back to the (sigh) vampire chicks drinking it up and talking about how wonderful they all are... Buffy, just for fun, smacks Lana across the room and down the stairs, killing her. That's a KO. She comes back from the dead, of course, amazingly happy that she'll live forever. Such extrapolation, I mean, I'm serious. [[CaptainObvious No one would have known vampires live forever]] without that extrapolating dialogue."''
-->-- '''Neal Bailey''' [[http://www.supermanhomepage.com/tv/tv.php?topic=reviews/smallville5-ep05 on]] ''{{Series/Smallville}}'' ("Thirst")
->''"Why do the writers feel the need to point out that this episode is about Neelix by him suddenly becoming flavour of the month in the pre-credits sequence? It's like they don’t trust us to think that he is invaluable without showing us. Seriously, [[TheMainCharactersDoEverything every bugger and his dog needs him for something]] in the opening five minutes! It would a far better jolt to the system had he fallen ill in the course of a normal episode. If you treat the audience like idiots you get an idiotic audience."''
-->-- '''Neal Bailey''' [[http://www.supermanhomepage.com/tv/tv.php?topic=reviews/smallville5-ep05 on]] ''{{Series/Smallville}}'' ("Thirst")
->''"Why do the writers feel the need to point out that this episode is about Neelix by him suddenly becoming flavour of the month in the pre-credits sequence? It's like they don’t trust us to think that he is invaluable without showing us. Seriously, [[TheMainCharactersDoEverything every bugger and his dog needs him for something]] in the opening five minutes! It would a far better jolt to the system had he fallen ill in the course of a normal episode. If you treat the audience like idiots you get an idiotic audience."''
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-->-- '''Neal Bailey''' [[http://www.supermanhomepage.com/tv/tv.php?topic=reviews/smallville5-ep05 on]] ''{{Series/Smallville}}'' ("Thirst")
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-->--Writer '''Paul Dini''', [[http://kingofbreakfast.livejournal.com/72294.html describing cliches]] of animated features (mostly referring to the early 90's Creator/{{Disney}} features)
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->''"Hello,\\\
With the rush of day operations, it's easy to lose focus and forget what the job is all about. As a reminder to all of you:\\\
1) Minds and emotions can be influenced by the media.\\
a) A crowd has the mental age of a 5 year old child.\\
b) It is our mission to orient and guide the child to higher understanding.\\
c) That understanding must keep the right interest at heart.\\\
2) Language and carefully chosen words are a form of influence.\\
a) Anyone can experience the world and express points of view.\\
b) Words are condensed ideas and the sole means for men to understand the world.\\
c) This is the power of Semiology and Rhetoric.\\\
3) Control is in the delivery of information.\\
a) Knowledge is power.\\
b) Today, knowledge is based on information.\\
c) Controlling access and the flow of information is the key to power.\\
d) With this power comes responsibility.\\\
A bit simplistic, I admit, but it gets the point across.\\\
Émilie Masse\\
Division Supervisor\\
Picus Confidential"''
-->-- '''Émilie Masse''', ''VideoGame/DeusExHumanRevolution
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->''"Hello,\\\
With the rush of day operations, it's easy to lose focus and forget what the job is all about. As a reminder to all of you:\\\
1) Minds and emotions can be influenced by the media.\\
a) A crowd has the mental age of a 5 year old child.\\
b) It is our mission to orient and guide the child to higher understanding.\\
c) That understanding must keep the right interest at heart.\\\
2) Language and carefully chosen words are a form of influence.\\
a) Anyone can experience the world and express points of view.\\
b) Words are condensed ideas and the sole means for men to understand the world.\\
c) This is the power of Semiology and Rhetoric.\\\
3) Control is in the delivery of information.\\
a) Knowledge is power.\\
b) Today, knowledge is based on information.\\
c) Controlling access and the flow of information is the key to power.\\
d) With this power comes responsibility.\\\
A bit simplistic, I admit, but it gets the point across.\\\
Émilie Masse\\
Division Supervisor\\
Picus Confidential"''
-->-- '''Émilie Masse''', ''VideoGame/DeusExHumanRevolution
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-->--'''Creator/SatyajitRay''', on UsefulNotes/{{Bollywood}}
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-->-- ''Series/WhoseLineIsItAnyway'', "Scenes from a Hat" suggestion "Outtakes from the Hillbilly Shakespeare Festival"
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-->-- '''WebAnimation/TerribleWritingAdvice - [[https://youtu.be/npEX8uRvUEo DARK LORDS]]'''
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-->--'''''WebComic/PennyArcade''''', [[https://www.penny-arcade.com/news/post/2004/12/03/on-discomfort news post]] for [[https://www.penny-arcade.com/comic/2004/12/03/ "On Discomfort"]]
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->''Explain {{webcomic/xkcd}}: It's 'cause you're dumb.''
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-->-- '''[[http://www.eruditorumpress.com/blog/clinging-to-the-skin-of-this-tiny-little-world-the-tv-movie/ Dr. Phil El Sandifer]]''', "[[{{Recap/DoctorWhoTVMTheTVMovie}} The TV Movie]]"
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-->--'''{{Creator/Seanbaby}}'''
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