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->Some level of repetition is to be expected and can be beneficial. It is also important to be consistent in your use of words when precise terminology is appropriate. However, needless repetition can make your document less than vigorous and discourage readers. For example, use of the word “said” when attributing dialogue is acceptable a couple of times, but if it is the only word you use, it will lose its impact quickly. People can “indicate,” “point out,” “share,” and “mention” as easily as they can “say” words or phrases. Synonyms are useful in avoiding the boredom of repetition.
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->Some level of repetition is to be expected and can be beneficial. It is also important to be consistent in your use of words when precise terminology is appropriate. However, needless repetition can make your document less than vigorous and discourage readers. For example, use of the word “said” when attributing dialogue is acceptable a couple of times, but if it is the only word you use, it will lose its impact quickly. People can “indicate,” “point out,” “share,” and “mention” as easily as they can “say” words or phrases. Synonyms are useful in avoiding the boredom of repetition.
-->--'''Business Communication for Success''', ''[[https://open.lib.umn.edu/businesscommunication/chapter/7-3-style-revisions/ Chapter 7.3 Style Revisions]]''
->Some level of repetition is to be expected and can be beneficial. It is also important to be consistent in your use of words when precise terminology is appropriate. However, needless repetition can make your document less than vigorous and discourage readers. For example, use of the word “said” when attributing dialogue is acceptable a couple of times, but if it is the only word you use, it will lose its impact quickly. People can “indicate,” “point out,” “share,” and “mention” as easily as they can “say” words or phrases. Synonyms are useful in avoiding the boredom of repetition.
-->--'''Business Communication for Success''', ''[[https://open.lib.umn.edu/businesscommunication/chapter/7-3-style-revisions/ Chapter 7.3 Style Revisions]]''
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->''Side note: the teacher banned the class from using the word "said" in any of our writing, so that's why there's a lot of... awkward exclamations.''
-->--''WebAnimation/TheOdd1sOut'', "A Book I Made as a Kid"
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->''Masterful writers use "said" and "asked".''''
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->''We would never ever say, "[[Literature/HarryPotter Snape]] scathed" -- we would say, "Snape '''said scathingly'''."''
-->--''Podcast/PotterFicWeekly''
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->''We would never ever say, "[[Literature/HarryPotter Snape]] scathed" -- we would say, "Snape '''said scathingly'''."''
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->''Unskilled writers use "said" and "asked".''
->''Amateur writers use "whispered", "shouted" and "questioned"''
->''Skilled writers use "demonstrated", "ejaculated", "murmured", "explained", "queried" and "demanded"''
->''Masterful writers use "said" and "asked".''
->''Unskilled writers use "said" and "asked".''
->''Amateur writers use "whispered", "shouted" and "questioned"''
->''Skilled writers use "demonstrated", "ejaculated", "murmured", "explained", "queried" and "demanded"''
->''Masterful writers use "said" and "asked".''
