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** Stellof threatens a minion with death if he screws up again. Then the heroes kill said minion, and Stellof doesn't have to do the honors.
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** The heroes are hyper-competent, but the Mook left behind [[JustOneLittleMistake a clue]], no matter how [[SherlockScan insignificant]] or [[ConvictionByContradiction how]] absurdly [[ConvictionByCounterfactualClue and]] utterly [[BatDeduction contrived]]. The Mook is still to blame, somehow.
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** Stellof’s operation is top secret. Stellof can’t afford to risk letting the mook’s incompetence screw it up, but if he fires the mook, the mook may not keep his secrets.
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** In a moment of frustration and anger, Stellof kills one of his subordinates. Unfortunately, this particular minion had an ''very'' important skill that Stellof's plan was ''very'' dependent on (i.e. a getaway driver). Because of this, Stellof [[NiceJobFixingItVillain makes himself a sitting duck for the authorities]], who easily surround, overpower, and arrest him.
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** In a moment of frustration and anger, Stellof kills one of his subordinates. Unfortunately, this particular minion had an ''very'' important skill that Stellof's plan was ''very'' dependent on (i.e. a getaway driver).driver and/or computer hacker). Because of this, Stellof [[NiceJobFixingItVillain makes himself a sitting duck for the authorities]], who easily surround, overpower, and arrest him.
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** In a moment of frustration and anger, Stellof kills one of his subordinates. Unfortunately, this particular minion had an ''very'' important skill that Stellof's plan was ''very'' dependent on (i.e. a getaway driver). Because of this, Stellof [[NiceJobFixingItVillain makes himself a sitting duck for the authorities]], who easily surround, overpower, and arrest him.
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** Stellod doesn't kill the mook, but gives him a punishment so brutal [[FateWorseThanDeath it'll make him wish he were]].
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** Stellod Stellof doesn't kill the mook, but gives him a punishment so brutal [[FateWorseThanDeath it'll make him wish he were]].
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** Stellod doesn't kill the mook, but gives him a punishment so brutal [[FateWorseThanDeath it'll make him wish he were]].
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**Stellof calls out the minion who failed him.
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** The Mook is afraid of this happening, but Stellof is reasonable enough to explain that his mistake was not harsh enough to merit execution [[MistakesAreNotTheEndOfTheWorld and that future minor ones won't, either]].
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** Stellof still makes clear that any future mistakes, if they get to the level of "potential threat to the cause", ''[[ImpliedDeathThreat will]]'' become "the end of the [Mook's] world".
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'''Basic Trope''': Minion fails his task. Villain kills the minion for that.
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'''Basic Trope''': Minion fails his task. Villain kills the minion executes his minions for that.failing a task.
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** Stellof refuses to kill the Mook because if he starts killing all his men for failures, [[MookDepletion he'll eventually run out.]]
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** Stellof becomes powerless since he has killed the best of his minions and others are turning against him and performing [[HeelFaceTurn Heel Face Turns]] in fear of getting killed by him.
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** Same as Defied. Stellof becomes powerless since he has killed the best of his minions and others are turning against him and performing [[HeelFaceTurn Heel Face Turns]] in fear of getting killed by him.
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** Stellof kills the mook in a rage, but is immediately [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone horrified]] over it.
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** Stellof kills the mook in a rage, but is immediately [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone horrified]] over it.it and apologises to the other mooks for having to see him do that, assuring them it was a one-off.
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** Stellof kills the mook in a rage, but is immediately [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone horrified]] over it.
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** The mook's screwup has doomed Stellof to a humiliating defeat and painful death.
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** The Mook's screw up proved to be so astronomically costly, he deserved to get whacked.
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** The mook was explicitly told "Do ''not'' do this" but did it anyway. Since he can't/won't follow orders, Stellof executes him for being a liability.
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** Stellof is about to execute the mook, but when they accept responsibility for there actions, he decides to spare them.
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** Stellof is about to execute the mook, but when they accept responsibility for there their actions, he decides to spare them.
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** Stellof executes {{Mook}}s for failing even the most [[DisproportionateRetribution mundane tasks]], like delivering a [[SpotOfTea lukewarm cup of tea]] or missing a spot while dusting.
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** Stellof executes {{Mook}}s for failing even the most [[DisproportionateRetribution mundane tasks]], like delivering a [[SpotOfTea lukewarm cup of tea]] tea or missing a spot while dusting.
