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** Alice has limerence and stalks Bob because she constantly thinks about him and wants to be with him all the time.
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** Alice is a StalkerWithOutACrush and mercenary hired to kill Bob. He gets [[InLoveWithTheMark her to fall in love with him]], [[LoveRedeems thinking it'll lessen her intrusive and homicidal behavior towards him]]. [[{{Yandere}} But it actually makes things worse]].
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** Alice is a StalkerWithOutACrush StalkerWithoutACrush and mercenary hired to kill Bob. He gets [[InLoveWithTheMark her to fall in love with him]], [[LoveRedeems thinking it'll lessen her intrusive and homicidal behavior towards him]]. [[{{Yandere}} But it actually makes things worse]].
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** It looks like Alice is stalking Bob at first, from what Bob can see of her, but it turns out to be a string of unlucky coincidences because she lives near him. She is though quite madly in love with him.
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** Alice tells Bob she was his girlfriend before his mind was wiped.
** It looks like Alice is stalking Bob at first, from what Bob can see of her, but it turns out to be a string of unlucky coincidences because she lives near him. She isthough thought quite madly in love with him.
** It looks like Alice is stalking Bob at first, from what Bob can see of her, but it turns out to be a string of unlucky coincidences because she lives near him. She is
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* '''Double Subverted''': Alice managed to [[BecomingTheMask fall in love with Bob for real while spying on him]].
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* '''Double Subverted''': Subverted''':
** Alice managed to [[BecomingTheMask fall in love with Bob for real while spying onhim]].him]].
** Alice lied.
** Alice managed to [[BecomingTheMask fall in love with Bob for real while spying on
** Alice lied.
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** Bob stalks Alice, but she instantly falls in love with him the moment Bob [[{{Literature/Twilight}} pretends he's a vampire while doing it]].
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** Bob stalks Alice, but she instantly falls in love with him the moment Bob [[{{Literature/Twilight}} [[Literature/TheTwilightSaga pretends he's a vampire while doing it]].
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** Alice decides to ditch the stalking idea.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Alice knows everything about Bob, his family, his favorite food, what color underwear he wears, and even his routine for getting up in the morning. And she can recite all of it from memory.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Laughs''':
** Alice knows everything about Bob, his family, his favorite food, what color underwear he wears, and even his routine for getting up in the morning. And she can recite all of it from memory.
** Alice knows everything about Bob, his family, his favorite food, what color underwear he wears, and even his routine for getting up in the morning. And she can recite all of it from memory.
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** Bob: "Alice, either tell me your feelings or stop following me everywhere."
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** Bob's favourite songs are Rockwell's "Somebody's Watching Me" and The Police's "Every Breath You Take".
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** Alice has a crush on Bob and makes him follow her around
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** Alice has a crush on Bob and makes him follow her aroundaround.
** Alice's crush on Bob makes her hide and run away from him.
** Alice's crush on Bob makes her hide and run away from him.
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'''Basic Trope''': A character stalks a person he[=/=]she loves.
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'''Basic Trope''': A character stalks a person he[=/=]she loves.they love.
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** Alice has a crush on Bob and makes him follow her around
