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** Well, congratulations on killing what little bit of compassion and wonder was inside Bob, Evulz. Because now that Bob [[HeroicHeelizationSpeech bought what you are selling]], it's going to be a very long and awful march into the dark for everybody else and even when/[[EvilVersusEvil if]] they come back into the light, [[JadeColoredGlasses things will be a little more boring]].
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* '''Enforced''': The author want to show the audience how off from most people's sense of morality Evulz is.
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* '''Enforced''': '''Enforced''':
** The author want to show the audience how off from most people's sense of morality Evulz is.
** The author want to show the audience how off from most people's sense of morality Evulz is.
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-->'''[[TheChick Alice]]''': It's a waste of time talking to him, Bob.
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** ShutUpHannibal
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%%* '''Implied''': ???
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-->'''[[TheHero Bob]]''': [[LukeIAmYourFather Dear father]], why are you making life miserable for the people? You plunge the whole world into war just to ensure there is a strong ruler that will end war once and for all. Is violence the only answer to the world's problems?\\
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-->'''[[TheHero Bob]]''': [[LukeIAmYourFather [[LukeYouAreMyFather Dear father]], why are you making life miserable for the people? You plunge the whole world into war just to ensure there is a strong ruler that will end war once and for all. Is violence the only answer to the world's problems?\\
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** The setting runs on GrayAndGrayMorality. Bob is an AntiHero and Evulz is an AntiVillain, so BothSidesHaveAPoint.
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'''Alice''': Why... you... you... ABOMINATION!
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'''Alice''': [[YouMONSTER Why... you... you... ABOMINATION!ABOMINATION]]!
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** Bob's KirkSummation is something along the line of ArsonMurderAndJaywalking. And then Emperor Evulz denies his logic on the basis of ''[[YouMakeMeSic improper grammar]]''.
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** Bob's KirkSummation is something along the line of ArsonMurderAndJaywalking. And then Emperor Evulz denies his logic on the basis of ''[[YouMakeMeSic ''[[GrammarCorrectionGag improper grammar]]''.
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Dewicking per TRS.
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'''[[BigBad Emperor Evulz]]''': So why are you pointing that impudent sword at me, son? ...But enough of this nonsense. I see you've gathered friends from across the world. Do you think it will do you any good in the long run? [[AndThenWhat What will you and your so-called "friends" do]] [[EnemyMine when your common enemy is gone]]? Turn on each other like starving rats, plunging the world into chaos once again? Or will you [[NotSoDifferent follow my example]], and force them to your heel?
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'''[[BigBad Emperor Evulz]]''': So why are you pointing that impudent sword at me, son? ...But enough of this nonsense. I see you've gathered friends from across the world. Do you think it will do you any good in the long run? [[AndThenWhat What will you and your so-called "friends" do]] [[EnemyMine when your common enemy is gone]]? Turn on each other like starving rats, plunging the world into chaos once again? Or will you [[NotSoDifferent [[NotSoDifferentRemark follow my example]], and force them to your heel?
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* '''Defied''': [[TalkToTheFist Emperor Evulz shoots Bob before he can deliver his]] KirkSummation.
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** [[TalkToTheFist Emperor Evulz shoots Bob before he can deliver his]] KirkSummation.
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** Bob swears to his friends he will deliver his speech in a fashion that his father will never be able to contest. [[ExactWords He delivers it]] as an extended BondOneLiner.
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'''[[BigBad Emperor Evulz]]''': So why are you pointing that impudent sword at me, [[spoiler: son]]?
'''[[BigBad Emperor Evulz]]''': So why are you pointing that impudent sword at me, [[spoiler: son]]?
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-->'''[[TheHero Bob]]''': [[spoiler: [[LukeIAmYourFather Dear father]]]], father]], why are you making life miserable for the people? You plunge the whole world into war just to ensure there is a strong ruler that will end war once and for all. Is violence the only answer to the world's problems?\\
'''[[BigBad Emperor Evulz]]''': So why are you pointing that impudent sword at me,[[spoiler: son]]?son?
'''[[BigBad Emperor Evulz]]''': So why are you pointing that impudent sword at me,
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'''[[BigBad Emperor Evulz]]''': So why are you pointing that impudent sword at me, [[spoiler: son]]? ...But enough of this nonsense. I see you've gathered friends from across the world. You've done something that I will never be able to do; you've gained ThePowerOfFriendship. [[RousseauWasRight You are right, people are fundamentally moral]]. My time in this world is over." *drinks cyanide*
'''[[BigBad Emperor Evulz]]''': So why are you pointing that impudent sword at me, [[spoiler: son]]? ...But enough of this nonsense. I see you've gathered friends from across the world. You've done something that I will never be able to do; you've gained ThePowerOfFriendship. [[RousseauWasRight You are right, people are fundamentally moral]]. My time in this world is over." *drinks cyanide*
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-->'''[[TheHero Bob]]''': [[spoiler: [[LukeIAmYourFather Dear father]]]], father]], why are you making life miserable for the people? You plunge the whole world into war just to ensure there is a strong ruler that will end war once and for all. Is violence the only answer to the world's problems?\\
'''[[BigBad Emperor Evulz]]''': So why are you pointing that impudent sword at me,[[spoiler: son]]? ...son? ...But enough of this nonsense. I see you've gathered friends from across the world. You've done something that I will never be able to do; you've gained ThePowerOfFriendship. [[RousseauWasRight You are right, people are fundamentally moral]]. My time in this world is over." *drinks cyanide*
'''[[BigBad Emperor Evulz]]''': So why are you pointing that impudent sword at me,
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-->'''[[TheHero Bob]]''': [[spoiler: [[LukeIAmYourFather Dear father]]]], why are you making life miserable for the people? You plunge the whole world into war just to ensure there is a strong ruler that will end war once and for all. Is violence the only answer to the world's problems?\\
'''[[BigBad Emperor Evulz]]''': So why are you pointing that impudent sword at me, [[spoiler: son]]? ...But enough of this nonsense. I see you've gathered friends from across the world. Do you think it will do you any good in the long run? [[AndThenWhat What will you and your so-called "friends" do]] [[EnemyMine when your common enemy is gone]]? Turn on each other like starving rats, plunging the world into chaos once again? Or will you [[NotSoDifferent follow my example]], and force them to your heel?
'''[[BigBad Emperor Evulz]]''': So why are you pointing that impudent sword at me, [[spoiler: son]]? ...But enough of this nonsense. I see you've gathered friends from across the world. Do you think it will do you any good in the long run? [[AndThenWhat What will you and your so-called "friends" do]] [[EnemyMine when your common enemy is gone]]? Turn on each other like starving rats, plunging the world into chaos once again? Or will you [[NotSoDifferent follow my example]], and force them to your heel?
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-->'''[[TheHero Bob]]''': [[spoiler: [[LukeIAmYourFather Dear father]]]], father]], why are you making life miserable for the people? You plunge the whole world into war just to ensure there is a strong ruler that will end war once and for all. Is violence the only answer to the world's problems?\\
'''[[BigBad Emperor Evulz]]''': So why are you pointing that impudent sword at me,[[spoiler: son]]? ...son? ...But enough of this nonsense. I see you've gathered friends from across the world. Do you think it will do you any good in the long run? [[AndThenWhat What will you and your so-called "friends" do]] [[EnemyMine when your common enemy is gone]]? Turn on each other like starving rats, plunging the world into chaos once again? Or will you [[NotSoDifferent follow my example]], and force them to your heel?
'''[[BigBad Emperor Evulz]]''': So why are you pointing that impudent sword at me,
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'''[[CorruptCorporateExecutive President Evulz]]''': What are you talking about? I was just going to spread the virus so that my Evil Incorporated would be able to sell the vaccine — and name our own price! That whole "save the planet" line was just something I fed those silly [[AnimalWrongsGroup eco-terrorists]] so they'd work for me for free! Those idiots!\\
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'''[[CorruptCorporateExecutive President Evulz]]''': What are you talking about? I was just going to spread the virus so that my Evil Incorporated would be able to sell the vaccine — and name our own price! [[StrawHypocrite That whole "save the planet" line was just something I fed those silly silly]] [[AnimalWrongsGroup eco-terrorists]] so they'd work for me for free! Those idiots!\\
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