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** Alice is an [[ActionGirl abnormal case]]: The [[MookFaceTurn average mook]] has [[TrappedInVillainy little chance of escape]] and so the policy persists. Bob's successor Charlie rules in his place, and institutes standard policy that [[YouHaveFailedMe the punishment for misbehavior]] is [[ReassignedToAntarctica to be assigned]] to [[UriahGambit hit squads]] targeting [[AssassinOutclassin Alice.]]
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** Alice is an [[OneManArmy extremely]] [[ActionGirl abnormal case]]: The [[MookFaceTurn average mook]] has [[TrappedInVillainy little chance of escape]] and so the policy persists. Bob's successor Charlie rules in his place, and institutes standard policy that [[YouHaveFailedMe the punishment for misbehavior]] is [[ReassignedToAntarctica to be assigned]] to [[UriahGambit hit squads]] targeting [[AssassinOutclassin Alice.]]
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* '''Played for Horror''': Anyone who tries to leave the Syndicate gets a CruelAndUnusualDeath for it.
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* '''Played for Horror''': Horror''':
** Anyone who tries to leave the Syndicate gets a CruelAndUnusualDeath forit.it.
** If Alice manages to successfully leave the Syndicate it's because she [[HumanoidAbomination is something way beyond mere mortals]] trying to contain, and who [[MookHorrorShow leaves violent bloodbaths in her wake]] that are most definitely not "ActionGirl kicking ass" but rather "ok, who the hell locked up these guys with the pack of cocaine-fueled grizzlies?"
** Anyone who tries to leave the Syndicate gets a CruelAndUnusualDeath for
** If Alice manages to successfully leave the Syndicate it's because she [[HumanoidAbomination is something way beyond mere mortals]] trying to contain, and who [[MookHorrorShow leaves violent bloodbaths in her wake]] that are most definitely not "ActionGirl kicking ass" but rather "ok, who the hell locked up these guys with the pack of cocaine-fueled grizzlies?"
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** Alice is an [[ActionGirl abnormal case]]: The [[MookFaceTurn average mook]] has [[TrappedInVillainy little chance of escape]] and so the policy persists. Bob's successor Charlie rules in his place, and institutes standard policy that [[ReassignedToAntarctica the punishment for misbehavior to be assigned to]] [[AssassinOutclassin hit squads targeting Alice.]]
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** Alice is an [[ActionGirl abnormal case]]: The [[MookFaceTurn average mook]] has [[TrappedInVillainy little chance of escape]] and so the policy persists. Bob's successor Charlie rules in his place, and institutes standard policy that [[YouHaveFailedMe the punishment for misbehavior]] is [[ReassignedToAntarctica the punishment for misbehavior to be assigned to]] assigned]] to [[UriahGambit hit squads]] targeting [[AssassinOutclassin hit squads targeting Alice.]]
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** Alice does a few jobs for the Syndicate. When Bob offers an upgrade from contract work to full time employment, she politely declines, and Bob has her killed.
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* '''Defied''': "I'm not going to kill someone just because they don't like their job."
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* '''Defied''': '''Defied''':
** "I'm not going to kill someone just because they don't like their job.""
** Alice is TheDreaded, and even ''Bob'' is scared of her. When she resigns, she promises to stay quiet... and warns him to "not make this harder than it has to be".
** "I'm not going to kill someone just because they don't like their job.
** Alice is TheDreaded, and even ''Bob'' is scared of her. When she resigns, she promises to stay quiet... and warns him to "not make this harder than it has to be".
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** Alice CAN leave, but not until she's finished a certain amount of years, usually a very long time. If she attempts to leave any time before that, Bob will order her death.
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** Alice CAN can leave, but not until she's finished a certain amount of years, usually a very long time. If she attempts to leave any time before that, Bob will order her death.
** Officially no one can leave, but some members dislike this policy and will help fellow members appear dead and agree to look the other way.
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* '''Played for Drama''': Alice is a MinionWithAnFInEvil, and desprealty wants to leave the Syndicate, but she's TrappedInVillainy because TheMobBossIsScarier.
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* '''Played for Drama''': Alice is a MinionWithAnFInEvil, and desprealty desperately wants to leave the Syndicate, but she's TrappedInVillainy because TheMobBossIsScarier.
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** Alice leaves but is still considered to be an associate of the Syndicate, and must do an occasional favor for them if they ever ask.
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** Alice leaves but is still considered to be an associate of the Syndicate, Syndicate and must do an occasional favor for them if they ever ask.
** Alice died while working for the Syndicate, but she's brought BackFromTheDead and told she may leave.
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** Bob's [[TheDragon right-hand man]] Charlie [[TheStarscream kills him and takes over his command]]. To assert his leaderships, he has [[ThePurge all ex-members hunted down and killed]].
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** Bob's [[TheDragon right-hand man]] Charlie [[TheStarscream kills him and takes over his command]]. To assert his leaderships, leadership, he has [[ThePurge all ex-members hunted down and killed]].
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-->'''Bob''' You can't just up and walk! The only way you leave this organisation is in a body bag!
--> '''Alice''': OK. [''[[ExactWords Zips herself into a body bag.]]'']
-->'''Bob''': Huh. [[ActuallyPrettyFunny Can't argue with that.]] You're excused.
--> '''Alice''': OK. [''[[ExactWords Zips herself into a body bag.]]'']
-->'''Bob''': Huh. [[ActuallyPrettyFunny Can't argue with that.]] You're excused.
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** Alice approaches Bob and announces her intention to leave the Syndicate. This precipitates:
--->'''Bob''' You can't just up and walk! The only way you leave this organisation is in a body bag!
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** Everyone in Bob's employ is kept in line purely by fear. None of his people shows any devotion whatsoever.
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** Everyone in Bob's employ Bob employs is kept in line purely by fear. None of his people shows any devotion whatsoever.
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** Bob is such a poor leader that even subordinates motivated by fear are still the best he could get.
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** Bob is [[GeneralFailure such a poor leader leader]] that even subordinates motivated by fear are still the best he could get.
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'''Basic Trope''': Nobody leaves the evil organization alive.
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'''Basic Trope''': Nobody leaves [[EvilInc the evil organization organization]] alive.
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* '''Exaggerated''': When Bob hears that Alice is trying to leave, he orders her entire family killed.
** Bob is a necromancer. Not even death is an excuse to leave his service.
* '''Downplayed''':
** Bob is a necromancer. Not even death is an excuse to leave his service.
* '''Downplayed''':
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** When Bob hears that Alice is trying to leave, he orders her entire family killed.
** Bob is a necromancer. Not even death is an excuse to leave hisservice.
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** When Bob hears that Alice is trying to leave, he orders her entire family killed.
** Bob is a necromancer. Not even death is an excuse to leave his
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** Alice leaves, but Bob tortures her for doing so when he retrieves her.
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** Alice leaves, but Bob [[ColdBloodedTorture tortures her her]] for doing so when he retrieves her.
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** Alice [[HeKnowsTooMuch knows too much]].
* '''Inverted''': Alice quits and then kills Bob.
* '''Subverted''': Alice asks Bob if she can leave, despite knowing that everyone else have never been heard from again. Bob offers her reasonable retirement package which includes a residence in an isolated location.
* '''Double Subverted''':
* '''Inverted''': Alice quits and then kills Bob.
* '''Subverted''': Alice asks Bob if she can leave, despite knowing that everyone else have never been heard from again. Bob offers her reasonable retirement package which includes a residence in an isolated location.
* '''Double Subverted''':
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** Alice [[HeKnowsTooMuch Alice knows too much]].
much.]]
*'''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** Alice quits and then kills Bob.
** Despite strong encouragement to resign from Bob, Alice stays with the Syndicate long past the time her contract nominally expired.
* '''Subverted''': Alice asks Bob if she can leave, despite knowing thateveryone nobody else have never who has done so has ever been heard from again. Bob offers her reasonable retirement package which includes a residence in an isolated location.
* '''DoubleSubverted''': Subverted''':
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** Alice quits and then kills Bob.
** Despite strong encouragement to resign from Bob, Alice stays with the Syndicate long past the time her contract nominally expired.
* '''Subverted''': Alice asks Bob if she can leave, despite knowing that
* '''Double
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** Bob's [[TheDragon right hand man]] Charlie [[TheStarscream kills him and takes over his command]]. To assert his leaderships, he has [[ThePurge all ex-members hunted down and killed]].
* '''Parodied''':
-->'''Bob''' You can't just up and walk! The only way you leave this orgiansion is in a body bag!
--> '''Alice''': Ok.''*[[ExactWords Zips herself into a body bag.]]*''
* '''Parodied''':
-->'''Bob''' You can't just up and walk! The only way you leave this orgiansion is in a body bag!
--> '''Alice''': Ok.''*[[ExactWords Zips herself into a body bag.]]*''
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** Bob's [[TheDragon right hand right-hand man]] Charlie [[TheStarscream kills him and takes over his command]]. To assert his leaderships, he has [[ThePurge all ex-members hunted down and killed]].
*'''Parodied''':
'''Parodied''':
-->'''Bob''' You can't just up and walk! The only way you leave thisorgiansion organisation is in a body bag!
--> '''Alice''':Ok.''*[[ExactWords OK. [''[[ExactWords Zips herself into a body bag.]]*'']]'']
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-->'''Bob''' You can't just up and walk! The only way you leave this
--> '''Alice''':
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Bob has a retirement package for his minions...but it turns out to be a case of being ReleasedToElsewhere...but it turns out Alice was being targeted by her rival so it's not normal practice...but it turns out it is normal practice after all and said rival actually sabotaged it so Alice could actually escape...Alice never actually quit and was being set up to [[TheMole feed false information to the police]]-but she [[DoubleReverseQuadrupleAgent betrayed the syndicate anyway at the last minute, allowing her to retire for good.]]
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* '''Zig Zagged''': '''Zig-Zagged''': Bob has a retirement package for his minions...minions, but it turns out to be a case of being ReleasedToElsewhere...but ReleasedToElsewhere. But it turns out Alice Alice's [[TheRival rival]] was being targeted by her rival targeting her, so it's not normal practice...practice ... but it turns out it is normal practice after all and said rival actually sabotaged it so Alice could actually escape...escape. Alice never actually quit and was being set up to [[TheMole feed false information to the police]]-but police]] -- but she [[DoubleReverseQuadrupleAgent betrayed the syndicate Syndicate anyway at the last minute, allowing her to retire for good.]]
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* '''Lampshaded''': "You can't quit this business of ours! [[ImpliedDeathThreat Well you can try...]]"
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* '''Lampshaded''': "You can't quit this business of ours! [[ImpliedDeathThreat Well Well, you can try...]]"
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* '''Discussed''': ???
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* '''Discussed''': ???'''Discussed''':
-->'''Alice''': I don't want to keep working here.
-->'''Carol''': I hear you, but you can't quit. I tried once and I was lucky to have my request politely declined.
-->'''Alice''': I don't want to keep working here.
-->'''Carol''': I hear you, but you can't quit. I tried once and I was lucky to have my request politely declined.
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** Everyone under Bob's employ is kept in line purely by fear. None of his people show any devotion whatsoever.
** This policy ends up biting Bob majorly as Alice ends up assassinating him and his enforcers so she can leave.
** Word of this policy spreads, resulting in Bob having trouble with finding people willing to work for him.
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** This policy ends up biting Bob majorly as Alice ends up assassinating him and his enforcers so she can leave.
** Word of this policy spreads, resulting in Bob having trouble with finding people willing to work for him.
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** Everyone under in Bob's employ is kept in line purely by fear. None of his people show shows any devotion whatsoever.
** This policy ends up biting Bob majorly as Alice ends up assassinating him and his enforcers so she canleave.
leave.
** Word of this policy spreads, resulting in Bob having troublewith in finding people willing to work for him.
*'''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** This policy ends up biting Bob majorly as Alice ends up assassinating him and his enforcers so she can
** Word of this policy spreads, resulting in Bob having trouble
*
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** For the same reason, most of the people who do work with Bob are loyal to the end, either out of fear or because [[UndyingLoyalty they have no]] [[InItForLife interest in leaving the syndicate.]]
* '''Played For Laughs''': The same rules apply to an innocuous job, like the national post.
* '''Played For Drama''': Alice is a MinionwithanFinEvil, and desprealty wants to leave the syndicate, but she's TrappedInVillainy because TheMobBossisScarier.
* '''Played For Laughs''': The same rules apply to an innocuous job, like the national post.
* '''Played For Drama''': Alice is a MinionwithanFinEvil, and desprealty wants to leave the syndicate, but she's TrappedInVillainy because TheMobBossisScarier.
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** For the same reason, most of the people who do work with Bob are loyal to the end, either out of fear or because [[UndyingLoyalty they have no]] [[InItForLife interest in leaving the syndicate.Syndicate.]]
* '''PlayedFor for Laughs''': The same rules apply to an innocuous job, like the national post.
postal service.
* '''PlayedFor for Drama''': Alice is a MinionwithanFinEvil, MinionWithAnFInEvil, and desprealty wants to leave the syndicate, Syndicate, but she's TrappedInVillainy because TheMobBossisScarier.TheMobBossIsScarier.
* '''Played for Horror''': Anyone who tries to leave the Syndicate gets a CruelAndUnusualDeath for it.
* '''Played
* '''Played
* '''Played for Horror''': Anyone who tries to leave the Syndicate gets a CruelAndUnusualDeath for it.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Bob is such a poor leader that even subordinates motivated by fear are still the best he could get.
** Alice is an [[ActionGirl abnormal case]]: The [[MookFaceTurn average mook]] has [[TrappedInVillainy little chance of escape]] and so the policy persists. Bob's successor Carl rules in his place, and institutes standard policy that [[ReassignedToAntarctica the punishment for misbehavior to be assigned to]] [[AssassinOutclassin hit squads targeting Alice.]]
** Alice is an [[ActionGirl abnormal case]]: The [[MookFaceTurn average mook]] has [[TrappedInVillainy little chance of escape]] and so the policy persists. Bob's successor Carl rules in his place, and institutes standard policy that [[ReassignedToAntarctica the punishment for misbehavior to be assigned to]] [[AssassinOutclassin hit squads targeting Alice.]]
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** Bob is such a poor leader that even subordinates motivated by fear are still the best he could get.
** Alice is an [[ActionGirl abnormal case]]: The [[MookFaceTurn average mook]] has [[TrappedInVillainy little chance of escape]] and so the policy persists. Bob's successorCarl Charlie rules in his place, and institutes standard policy that [[ReassignedToAntarctica the punishment for misbehavior to be assigned to]] [[AssassinOutclassin hit squads targeting Alice.]]
** Bob is such a poor leader that even subordinates motivated by fear are still the best he could get.
** Alice is an [[ActionGirl abnormal case]]: The [[MookFaceTurn average mook]] has [[TrappedInVillainy little chance of escape]] and so the policy persists. Bob's successor
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* '''Subverted''': Bob offers a reasonable retirement package to his people.
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* '''Subverted''': Alice asks Bob if she can leave, despite knowing that everyone else have never been heard from again. Bob offers a her reasonable retirement package to his people.which includes a residence in an isolated location.
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* '''Lampshaded''': "You can't quit this business of ours! [[ImpliedDeathThreat. Well you can try...]]"
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* '''Lampshaded''': "You can't quit this business of ours! [[ImpliedDeathThreat. [[ImpliedDeathThreat Well you can try...]]"
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** Alice is an [[ActionGirl abnormal case]]: The [[MookFaceTurn average mook]]] has [[TrappedInVillainy little chance of escape]] and so the policy persists. Bob's successor Carl rules in his place, and institutes standard policy that [[ReassignedToAntarctica the punishment for misbehavior to be assigned to]] [[AssassinOutclassin hit squads targeting Alice.]]
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** Alice is an [[ActionGirl abnormal case]]: The [[MookFaceTurn average mook]]] mook]] has [[TrappedInVillainy little chance of escape]] and so the policy persists. Bob's successor Carl rules in his place, and institutes standard policy that [[ReassignedToAntarctica the punishment for misbehavior to be assigned to]] [[AssassinOutclassin hit squads targeting Alice.]]
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Bob has a retirement package for his minions...but it turns out to be a case of being ReleasedToElsewhere...
but it turns out Alice was being targeted by her rival so it's not normal practice...but it turns out it is normal practice after all and said rival actually sabotaged it so Alice could actually escape. The final twist is that alice never actually quit and was being set up to [[TheMole feed false information to the police]]-but she [[DoubleReverseQuadrupleAgent betrayed the syndicate anyway at the last minute, allowing her to retire for good.]]
but it turns out Alice was being targeted by her rival so it's not normal practice...but it turns out it is normal practice after all and said rival actually sabotaged it so Alice could actually escape. The final twist is that alice never actually quit and was being set up to [[TheMole feed false information to the police]]-but she [[DoubleReverseQuadrupleAgent betrayed the syndicate anyway at the last minute, allowing her to retire for good.]]
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Bob has a retirement package for his minions...but it turns out to be a case of being ReleasedToElsewhere...
ReleasedToElsewhere...but it turns out Alice was being targeted by her rival so it's not normal practice...but it turns out it is normal practice after all and said rival actually sabotaged it so Alice could actually escape. The final twist is that alice escape...Alice never actually quit and was being set up to [[TheMole feed false information to the police]]-but she [[DoubleReverseQuadrupleAgent betrayed the syndicate anyway at the last minute, allowing her to retire for good.]]
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** Alice is an [[ActionGirl abnormal case]]: The [[MookFaceTurn average mook]]] has [[TrappedInVillanary little chance of escape]] and so the policy persists. Bob's successor Carl rules in his place, and institutes standard policy that [[ReassignedToAntarctica the punishment for misbehavior to be assigned to]] [[AssassinOutclassin hit squads targeting Alice.]]
** For the same reason, most of the people who do work with Bob are loyal to the end, either out of fear or because [[UndyingLoyalty they have no]] [[InITForLife interest in leaving the syndicate.]]
** For the same reason, most of the people who do work with Bob are loyal to the end, either out of fear or because [[UndyingLoyalty they have no]] [[InITForLife interest in leaving the syndicate.]]
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** Alice is an [[ActionGirl abnormal case]]: The [[MookFaceTurn average mook]]] has [[TrappedInVillanary [[TrappedInVillainy little chance of escape]] and so the policy persists. Bob's successor Carl rules in his place, and institutes standard policy that [[ReassignedToAntarctica the punishment for misbehavior to be assigned to]] [[AssassinOutclassin hit squads targeting Alice.]]
** For the same reason, most of the people who do work with Bob are loyal to the end, either out of fear or because [[UndyingLoyalty they have no]][[InITForLife [[InItForLife interest in leaving the syndicate.]]
** For the same reason, most of the people who do work with Bob are loyal to the end, either out of fear or because [[UndyingLoyalty they have no]]
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* '''Played For Drama''': Alice is a MinionwithanFinEvil, and desprealty wants to leave the syndicate, but she's TrappedInVillanary because TheMobBossisScarier
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* '''Played For Drama''': Alice is a MinionwithanFinEvil, and desprealty wants to leave the syndicate, but she's TrappedInVillanary TrappedInVillainy because TheMobBossisScarierTheMobBossisScarier.
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** Bob is a necromancer. Not even death is an excuse to leave his service.
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* '''Parodied''': ???
'''Parodied''':
-->'''Bob''' You can't just up and walk! The only way you leave this orgiansion is in a body bag!
--> '''Alice''': Ok.''*[[ExactWords Zips herself into a body bag.]]*''
-->'''Bob''': Huh. [[ActuallyPrettyFunny Can't argue with that.]] You're excused.
* '''Zig Zagged''':???Bob has a retirement package for his minions...but it turns out to be a case of being ReleasedToElsewhere...
but it turns out Alice was being targeted by her rival so it's not normal practice...but it turns out it is normal practice after all and said rival actually sabotaged it so Alice could actually escape. The final twist is that alice never actually quit and was being set up to [[TheMole feed false information to the police]]-but she [[DoubleReverseQuadrupleAgent betrayed the syndicate anyway at the last minute, allowing her to retire for good.]]
-->'''Bob''' You can't just up and walk! The only way you leave this orgiansion is in a body bag!
--> '''Alice''': Ok.''*[[ExactWords Zips herself into a body bag.]]*''
-->'''Bob''': Huh. [[ActuallyPrettyFunny Can't argue with that.]] You're excused.
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but it turns out Alice was being targeted by her rival so it's not normal practice...but it turns out it is normal practice after all and said rival actually sabotaged it so Alice could actually escape. The final twist is that alice never actually quit and was being set up to [[TheMole feed false information to the police]]-but she [[DoubleReverseQuadrupleAgent betrayed the syndicate anyway at the last minute, allowing her to retire for good.]]
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* '''Enforced''': The plot of the story revolves around Alice not being able to leave the Sydicate.
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* '''Lampshaded''': ???
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* '''Enforced''': The plot of the story revolves around Alice not being able to leave the Sydicate.
Syndicate.
* '''Lampshaded''':???"You can't quit this business of ours! [[ImpliedDeathThreat. Well you can try...]]"
* '''Lampshaded''':
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** Alice is an [[ActionGirl abnormal case]]: The [[MookFaceTurn average mook]]] has [[TrappedInVillanary little chance of escape]] and so the policy persists. Bob's successor Carl rules in his place, and institutes standard policy that [[ReassignedToAntarctica the punishment for misbehavior to be assigned to]] [[AssassinOutclassin hit squads targeting Alice.]]
** For the same reason, most of the people who do work with Bob are loyal to the end, either out of fear or because [[UndyingLoyalty they have no]] [[InITForLife interest in leaving the syndicate.]]
* '''Played For Laughs''': The same rules apply to an innocuous job, like the national post.
* '''Played For Drama''': Alice is a MinionwithanFinEvil, and desprealty wants to leave the syndicate, but she's TrappedInVillanary because TheMobBossisScarier
** For the same reason, most of the people who do work with Bob are loyal to the end, either out of fear or because [[UndyingLoyalty they have no]] [[InITForLife interest in leaving the syndicate.]]
* '''Played For Laughs''': The same rules apply to an innocuous job, like the national post.
* '''Played For Drama''': Alice is a MinionwithanFinEvil, and desprealty wants to leave the syndicate, but she's TrappedInVillanary because TheMobBossisScarier
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** Alice [[HeKnowsTooMuch knows to much]].
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** Alice [[HeKnowsTooMuch knows to too much]].
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...unless they know enough to bring down his organization, in which case he has them killed.
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...Subverted''':
** ...unless they know enough to bring down his organization, in which case he has themkilled.killed.
** Bob's [[TheDragon right hand man]] Charlie [[TheStarscream kills him and takes over his command]]. To assert his leaderships, he has [[ThePurge all ex-members hunted down and killed]].
** ...unless they know enough to bring down his organization, in which case he has them
** Bob's [[TheDragon right hand man]] Charlie [[TheStarscream kills him and takes over his command]]. To assert his leaderships, he has [[ThePurge all ex-members hunted down and killed]].
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** Alice leaves but is still considered to be an associate of the Syndicate, and must do an occasional favor for them if they ever ask.
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* '''Conversed''': ???"Alice is quitting, don't think things are going to go well for her."
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** Alice leaves, but [[InItForLife finds it hard to "truly" leave]].
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** Word of this policy spreads, resulting in Bob's Buisness having trouble with finding people willing to work.
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** Word of this policy spreads, resulting in Bob's Buisness Bob having trouble with finding people willing to work.work for him.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Everyone under Bob's employ is kept in line purely by fear. None of his people show any devotion whatsoever.
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* '''Deconstructed''': '''Deconstructed''':
** Everyone under Bob's employ is kept in line purely by fear. None of his people show any devotion whatsoever.
** Everyone under Bob's employ is kept in line purely by fear. None of his people show any devotion whatsoever.
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** This policy ends up biting Bob majorly as Alice ends up assassinating him and his enforcers so she can leave.
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**Alice CAN leave, but not until she's finished a certain amount of years, usually a very long time. If she attempts to leave any time before that, Bob will order her death.
**Alice leaves, but Bob tortures her for doing so when he retrieves her.
**Alice CAN leave, but not until she's finished a certain amount of years, usually a very long time. If she attempts to leave any time before that, Bob will order her death.
**Alice leaves, but Bob tortures her for doing so when he retrieves her.
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** Nobody in the Syndicate wants to be there, so Bob would lose everyone if he let them quit.
** Nobody in the Syndicate wants to be there, so Bob would lose everyone if he let them quit.
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* '''Straight''': Bob runs the Syndicate. When Alice tries to quit, he orders her killed because [[HeKnowsTooMuch she knows too much]]
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* '''Straight''': Bob runs the Syndicate. When Alice tries to quit, he orders her killed because [[HeKnowsTooMuch she knows too much]]killed.
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Nobody in the Syndicate wants to be there, so Bob would lose everyone if he let them quit.
** Alice [[HeKnowsTooMuch knows to much]].
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Alice quits and then kills Bob.
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Bob offers a reasonable retirement package to his people.
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** Alice [[HeKnowsTooMuch knows to much]].
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Bob lets people leave, figuring that they would betray him if he threatened them into staying.
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Bob's assassins are paid by the kill, and one of them convinces him to kill Alice.
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Alice quits the Syndicate to kick off a ThanatosGambit.
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* '''Implied''': Nobody else ever seems to consider quitting, and when they hear Alice talk about it they act like it would be suicide.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Everyone under Bob's employ is kept in line purely by fear. None of his people show any devotion whatsoever.
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'''Basic Trope''': Nobody leaves the evil organization alive.
* '''Straight''': Bob runs the Syndicate. When Alice tries to quit, he orders her killed because [[HeKnowsTooMuch she knows too much]]
* '''Exaggerated''': When Bob hears that Alice is trying to leave, he orders her entire family killed.
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* '''Straight''': Bob runs the Syndicate. When Alice tries to quit, he orders her killed because [[HeKnowsTooMuch she knows too much]]
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