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** Princess Alice is [[SpareToTheThrone the younger cousin/sister]] of Princess Robin, and Alice mainly thinks being royalty is boring because she hasn't done any ''ruling'' yet. When she complains about her life, Robin takes an assignment to check on [[CityOfAdventure Trope City,]] and [[YouAreInCommandNow tells Alice to help run things while she's gone.]] Alice finds out that TheChainsOfCommanding are heavy with diplomacy discussions, citizens asking for help, Sacred Hospitality for guests, and [[EasyLogistics all the logistics needed for the first three.]] Moreover, with Robin at Trope City and Alice filling in at the royal palace, the bodyguards she complained about soon [[ProperlyParanoid end up foiling]] an AssassinationAttempt. She quickly realizes that her role as the spare heir is VERY cushy, so she sends a fleet of messengers begging Robin to come home.
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** Princess Alice is [[SpareToTheThrone the younger cousin/sister]] of Princess Robin, and Alice mainly thinks being royalty is boring because she hasn't done any ''ruling'' yet. When she complains about her life, Robin takes an assignment to check on [[CityOfAdventure Trope City,]] and [[YouAreInCommandNow tells Alice to help run things while she's gone.]] Alice finds out that TheChainsOfCommanding are heavy with diplomacy discussions, citizens asking for help, Sacred Hospitality SacredHospitality for guests, and [[EasyLogistics all the logistics needed for the first three.]] Moreover, with Robin at Trope City and Alice filling in at the royal palace, the bodyguards she complained about soon [[ProperlyParanoid end up foiling]] an AssassinationAttempt. She quickly realizes that her role as the spare heir is VERY cushy, so she sends a fleet of messengers begging Robin to come home.
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** Princess Alice is [[SpareToTheThrone the younger cousin/sister]] of Princess Robin, and Alice mainly thinks being royalty is boring because she hasn't done any ''ruling'' yet. When she complains about her life, Robin takes an assignment to check on [[CityOfAdventure Trope City,]] and [[YouAreInCommandNow tells Alice to help run things while she's gone.]] Alice finds out that TheChainsOfCommanding are heavy with diplomacy discussions, citizens asking for help, Sacred Hospitality for guests, and [[EasyLogistics all the logistics needed for the first three.]] Moreover, with Robin at Trope City and Alice filling in for her, the bodyguards she complained about soon [[ProperlyParanoid end up foiling]] an AssassinationAttempt. She quickly realizes that her role as the spare heir is VERY cushy, so she sends a fleet of messengers begging Robin to come home.
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** Princess Alice is [[SpareToTheThrone the younger cousin/sister]] of Princess Robin, and Alice mainly thinks being royalty is boring because she hasn't done any ''ruling'' yet. When she complains about her life, Robin takes an assignment to check on [[CityOfAdventure Trope City,]] and [[YouAreInCommandNow tells Alice to help run things while she's gone.]] Alice finds out that TheChainsOfCommanding are heavy with diplomacy discussions, citizens asking for help, Sacred Hospitality for guests, and [[EasyLogistics all the logistics needed for the first three.]] Moreover, with Robin at Trope City and Alice filling in for her, at the royal palace, the bodyguards she complained about soon [[ProperlyParanoid end up foiling]] an AssassinationAttempt. She quickly realizes that her role as the spare heir is VERY cushy, so she sends a fleet of messengers begging Robin to come home.
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** Princess Alice is [[SpareToTheThrone the younger cousin/sister]] of Princess Robin, and Alice mainly thinks being royalty is boring because she hasn't done any ''ruling'' yet. When she complains about her life, Robin takes an assignment to check on [[CityOfAdventure Trope City,]] and [[YouAreInCommandNow tells Alice to help run things while she's gone.]] Alice finds out that TheChainsOfCommanding are heavy with diplomacy discussions, citizens asking for help, Sacred Hospitality for guests, and [[EasyLogistics all the logistics needed for the first three.]] Moreover, with Robin at Trope City and Alice filling in for her, the bodyguards she complained about soon [[ProperlyParanoid end up foiling]] an AssassinationAttempt. She quickly realizes that her role as the spare heir is VERY cushy, so she sends a fleet of messengers begging Robin to come home.
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** Princess Alice is the sole heir to the throne. When she runs of to escape palace life, she's effectively dooming the entire kingdom to falling into anarchy or being taken over by Emperor Evulz once her parents die and the only heir has run off to God knows where. [[WhatTheHellHero All because she felt bored.]]
** Alternately, she's seen as [[FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling a flighty and immature youth]] and gets unpleasantly surprised when her parents not only [[GoodIsNotDumb send out search parties for her the moment they realize she's missing,]] [[CrazyPrepared they ALSO send messengers to her next-oldest siblings/cousins]] and bring them to the palace [[SpareToTheThrone as a backup heir.]] When she's found and dragged back home after a few days, she's chewed out for her recklessness.
** Alternately, she's seen as [[FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling a flighty and immature youth]] and gets unpleasantly surprised when her parents not only [[GoodIsNotDumb send out search parties for her the moment they realize she's missing,]] [[CrazyPrepared they ALSO send messengers to her next-oldest siblings/cousins]] and bring them to the palace [[SpareToTheThrone as a backup heir.]] When she's found and dragged back home after a few days, she's chewed out for her recklessness.
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** Princess Alice is the sole heir to the throne. When she runs of off to escape palace life, she's effectively dooming the entire kingdom to falling into anarchy or being taken over by Emperor Evulz once her parents die and the only heir has run off to God knows where. [[WhatTheHellHero All because she felt bored.]]
**Alternately, she's Alice is seen as [[FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling a flighty and immature youth]] and gets unpleasantly surprised when her parents not only [[GoodIsNotDumb send out search parties for her the moment they realize she's missing,]] [[CrazyPrepared they ALSO send messengers to her next-oldest siblings/cousins]] and bring them to the palace [[SpareToTheThrone as a backup heir.]] When she's found and dragged back home after a few days, she's chewed out for her recklessness.
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** Alternately, she's seen as [[FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling a flighty and immature youth]] and gets unpleasantly surprised when her parents not only [[GoodIsNotDumb send out search parties for her the moment they realize she's missing,]] [[CrazyPrepared they ALSO send messengers to one of her siblings/cousins]] and bring them to the palace [[SpareToTheThrone as a backup heir.]]
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** Alternately, she's seen as [[FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling a flighty and immature youth]] and gets unpleasantly surprised when her parents not only [[GoodIsNotDumb send out search parties for her the moment they realize she's missing,]] [[CrazyPrepared they ALSO send messengers to one of her next-oldest siblings/cousins]] and bring them to the palace [[SpareToTheThrone as a backup heir.]]]] When she's found and dragged back home after a few days, she's chewed out for her recklessness.
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** Alternately, she's seen as [[FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling a flighty and immature youth]] and gets unpleasantly surprised when her parents not only [[GoodIsNotDumb send out search parties for her the moment they realize she's missing,]] [[CrazyPrepared they ALSO send messengers to one of her siblings/cousins]] and bring them to the palace [[SpareToTheThrone as a backup heir.]]
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* '''Inverted''': Princess Alice is a mild-mannered and proper PrincessClassic. However, she's the princess of a nation of pirates and adventurous rogues, and her reserved, demure nature makes her the black sheep of the royal family.
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** Princess Alice is a mild-mannered and proper PrincessClassic. However, she's the princess of a nation of pirates and adventurous rogues, and her reserved, demure nature makes her the black sheep of the royal family.
** Princess Alice is a mild-mannered and proper PrincessClassic. However, she's the princess of a nation of pirates and adventurous rogues, and her reserved, demure nature makes her the black sheep of the royal family.
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** Princess Alice is [[TomboyPrincess strong-willed and not as proper as the other princesses]], but is still completely loyal to her parents and accepts her role with pride.
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** Princess Alice is [[TomboyPrincess strong-willed and not as proper as the other princesses]], but is still completely loyal to her parents and accepts her role with pride. Meanwhile, all the "prim and proper" young noblewomen always rebel against their parents.
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** Princess Alice is strong-willed and not as proper as the other princesses, but is still supported by her parents and accepts her role with pride
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** Princess Alice is [[TomboyPrincess strong-willed and not as proper as the other princesses, princesses]], but is still supported by completely loyal to her parents and accepts her role with pridepride.
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** Alice's rebellion is portrayed in an unsympathetic light, as she's essentially whining about a privileged life.
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** Alice's rebellion is portrayed in an unsympathetic light, as she's essentially [[BourgeoisBohemian whining about a privileged life.life]]. She has no clue how the working class live or think about their current situation, but [[TheManIsStickingItToTheMan acts like she is fighting for the people's rights]], while in reality it's [[ItsAllAboutMe more of a publicity stunt to make her more liked]].
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** Alice is TheOjou who doesn't like her strict, wealthy family.
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** Alice is TheOjou a ProperLady who doesn't like her strict, wealthy family.
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** Princess Alice is strong-willed and not as proper as the other princesses, but is still supported by her parents and accepts her role with pride
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** Alice accepts that such things are in her life, so she makes the most of what she has.
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* '''Enforced''': "[[EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses We gotta have a princess]], but how will she convince her parents to let her run off with Bob?" "Easy, she just won't ask."
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* '''Enforced''': "[[EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses We gotta have a princess]], but how will she convince her parents to let her run off "Modern audiences are bored with Bob?" "Easy, she just won't ask.the PrincessClassic trope, so let's give Princess Alice more autonomy by having her reject her royal status."
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** Life in the castle didn't prepare Alice for the harsher realities outside. Since she ditched her duties, she's seen as a traitor, with her own (ex-)subjects viewing her with scorn.
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** Life in the castle didn't prepare Alice for the harsher realities outside. Since she ditched her duties, she's seen as a traitor, with her own (ex-)subjects former subjects viewing her with scorn.
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* '''Played for Drama''': After finding out that she's run away, the King and Queen are genuinely devastated and so is Alice's younger brother Charles, believing her to be dead. Alice is on an emotional high at first, but soon finds life outside the palace hardly satisfying; the first month, she's attacked by bandits and left for dead, with all of her money pilfered. When she reaches the next town over, it's a complete shithole run by thieves and other scum of the earth. Since she has no other skills, Alice is forced into [[TheOldestProfession walking the streets]] just to make a living. When Prince Charles comes across Alice decades later, he can hardly believe that this pitiful, barely recognizable being before him is his sister.
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* '''Justified''': Even if she's royalty, she's still a teenager looking to exert her own identity other than "the daughter of the King and Queen".
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Even if she's royalty, she's still a teenager looking to exert her own identity other than "the daughter of the King andQueen".Queen".
** Alice's parents are [[TheCaligula awful]] [[EvilOverlord rulers]] and Alice believes she could do better than them.
** Even if she's royalty, she's still a teenager looking to exert her own identity other than "the daughter of the King and
** Alice's parents are [[TheCaligula awful]] [[EvilOverlord rulers]] and Alice believes she could do better than them.
* '''Implied''': Princess Alice runs away from home, but it's never said why.
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** Alice's rebellion is portrayed in an unsympathetic light, as she's essentially whining about a privileged life.
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** Alice becomes the RebelLeader [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized and resorts to outright terrorism]] [[TheEvilPrincess to oppose her parents]], possibly even becoming the BigBad.
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** Alice becomes the RebelLeader [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized and resorts to outright terrorism]] [[TheEvilPrincess to oppose her parents]], possibly even becoming the BigBad.parents]].
