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** After winning the duel, Bob’s heart temporarily stops from exhausting his powers, and he [[ConvenientComa falls into a coma]] (or even worse, it stops permanently and he dies).
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** After winning the duel, Bob’s heart temporarily stops from exhausting his powers, and he [[ConvenientComa falls into a coma]] (or even worse, [[DyingMomentOfAwesome it stops permanently and he dies).dies]]).
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** After winning the duel, Bob’s heart temporarily stops from exhausting his powers, and he [[ConvenientComa falls into a coma]] or (or even worse, it stops permanently and he dies.dies).
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* '''Averted''': Bob doesn’t collapse.is perfectly fine after the battle.
* '''Deconstructed''': Bob collapses after killing Emperor Evulz...[[NotQuiteDead but it turns out that Evulz isn't quite done yet.]] Evulz uses this opportunity to kill Bob while he's defenseless.
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* '''Justified''': Said magical powers were already established as a DangerousForbiddenTechnique, and Bob had been warned against overusing them.
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** Said magical powers were already established as a DangerousForbiddenTechnique, and Bob had been warned against overusingthem.them.
** All Bob's magic is CastFromHitPoints, leaving him physically weaker anyway.
** Long and difficult fights are naturally tiring and you don't come off without injuries.
** Said magical powers were already established as a DangerousForbiddenTechnique, and Bob had been warned against overusing
** All Bob's magic is CastFromHitPoints, leaving him physically weaker anyway.
** Long and difficult fights are naturally tiring and you don't come off without injuries.
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* '''Straight''': After winning a long, epic duel with [[BigBad the Emperor,]] Bob blacks out from overuse of his magical powers.
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* '''Straight''': After winning a long, epic duel with [[BigBad the Emperor,]] Emperor Evulz,]] Bob blacks out from overuse of his magical powers.
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'''Basic Trope''': Someone collapses after completing an awesome but strenuous task.
* '''Straight''': After winning a long, epic duel with [[BigBad the Emperor,]] Bob blacks out from overuse of his magical powers.
* '''Exaggerated''':
**After winning the duel, Bob’s heart temporarily stops from exhausting his powers, and he [[ConvenientComa falls into a coma.]]
**Bob blacks out after systematically defeating all evil in the entire universe, defeating all members of his totalitarian government, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking and swallowing several jalapeño peppers.]]
* '''Downplayed''': After the duel, Bob is extremely winded and lightheaded.
* '''Justified''': Said magical powers were already established as a DangerousForbiddenTechnique, and Bob had been warned against overusing them.
* '''Inverted''': After winning the duel, Bob is completely revitalized and more energetic than ever.
* '''Subverted''':
**Alice, seeing how winded Bob looks, rushes to his side after his victory (expecting this to come into play.) Bob assures her that he’s fine, and stays standing.
**As a result of Bob’s use of BottledHeroicResolve beforehand, he stays standing after the duel...
* '''Double Subverted''':
**Bob lied to make sure that Alice wouldn’t worry; he knows his own limits, and passes out as soon as she is out of sight.
**..but the side effects are enough to bring him down a few minutes later.
* '''Parodied''': After winning a particularly stressful arm-wrestling match, Bob dramatically swoons out of his chair.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Several characters complete feats of the same caliber - some of them collapse afterwards, some of them are perfectly fine.
* '''Averted''': Bob doesn’t collapse.
* '''Enforced''': “Okay, so in order for this story arc to work, Bob needs to not be present - he’d just overpower everyone. Why don’t we just have him be unconscious and exhausted during it?”
* '''Lampshaded''': “He won! …This is the part where he collapses dramatically, right?"
* '''Invoked''': ???
* '''Exploited''': The Emperor’s [[TheDragon second-in-command]], who is still alive, knows the hero is going to collapse after defeating his boss. He waits until he’s unconscious to [[DragonTheirFeet take his revenge.]]
* '''Defied''': “What are you talking about? I’m not going to collapse, I’m perfectly fine!"
* '''Discussed''': “You think you can defeat him with this [[DangerousForbiddenTechnique technique?]] Well, maybe, but you’re going to collapse afterwards if you use as much of it as you say you need to."
* '''Conversed''': ???
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* '''Straight''': After winning a long, epic duel with [[BigBad the Emperor,]] Bob blacks out from overuse of his magical powers.
* '''Exaggerated''':
**After winning the duel, Bob’s heart temporarily stops from exhausting his powers, and he [[ConvenientComa falls into a coma.]]
**Bob blacks out after systematically defeating all evil in the entire universe, defeating all members of his totalitarian government, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking and swallowing several jalapeño peppers.]]
* '''Downplayed''': After the duel, Bob is extremely winded and lightheaded.
* '''Justified''': Said magical powers were already established as a DangerousForbiddenTechnique, and Bob had been warned against overusing them.
* '''Inverted''': After winning the duel, Bob is completely revitalized and more energetic than ever.
* '''Subverted''':
**Alice, seeing how winded Bob looks, rushes to his side after his victory (expecting this to come into play.) Bob assures her that he’s fine, and stays standing.
**As a result of Bob’s use of BottledHeroicResolve beforehand, he stays standing after the duel...
* '''Double Subverted''':
**Bob lied to make sure that Alice wouldn’t worry; he knows his own limits, and passes out as soon as she is out of sight.
**..but the side effects are enough to bring him down a few minutes later.
* '''Parodied''': After winning a particularly stressful arm-wrestling match, Bob dramatically swoons out of his chair.
* '''Zig Zagged''': Several characters complete feats of the same caliber - some of them collapse afterwards, some of them are perfectly fine.
* '''Averted''': Bob doesn’t collapse.
* '''Enforced''': “Okay, so in order for this story arc to work, Bob needs to not be present - he’d just overpower everyone. Why don’t we just have him be unconscious and exhausted during it?”
* '''Lampshaded''': “He won! …This is the part where he collapses dramatically, right?"
* '''Invoked''': ???
* '''Exploited''': The Emperor’s [[TheDragon second-in-command]], who is still alive, knows the hero is going to collapse after defeating his boss. He waits until he’s unconscious to [[DragonTheirFeet take his revenge.]]
* '''Defied''': “What are you talking about? I’m not going to collapse, I’m perfectly fine!"
* '''Discussed''': “You think you can defeat him with this [[DangerousForbiddenTechnique technique?]] Well, maybe, but you’re going to collapse afterwards if you use as much of it as you say you need to."
* '''Conversed''': ???
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