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Removing a Administrivia.Chained Sinkhole.
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** Bob gets his arm cut off and nervously states [[{{Understatement}} "Well that can't]] [[OhCrap be good."]]
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** Bob gets his arm cut off and nervously states [[{{Understatement}} "Well that can't]] [[OhCrap can't be good."]]
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** Bob is less concerned about the loss of his arm than he is that his favorite shirt was ruined in the process.
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** Bob is [[OffWithHisHead decapitated,]] and [[TheBerserker he doesn't even notice until after the battle.]]
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** Bob is [[OffWithHisHead [[LosingYourHead decapitated,]] and [[TheBerserker he doesn't even notice until after the battle.]]]]
** Bob's only reaction to getting his organs forcibly removed from him is a quiet "ouch".
** Bob's only reaction to getting his organs forcibly removed from him is a quiet "ouch".
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** Bob is perfectly okay with the spear sticking through his chest, but starts crying for mommy when he stubs his toe.
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** Bob is perfectly okay with the spear sticking through his chest, [[MinorInjuryOverreaction but starts crying for mommy when he stubs his toe.]]
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I am fixing grammatical errors
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** Bob's injury is so serious that is severed his nerve endings in that particular area.
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** Bob's injury is so serious that is it severed his nerve endings in that particular area.
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I am fixing spelling errors made.
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** Bob is tyrying to remain calm until he sees get medivcal aid so the injury does not get worse.
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** Bob is tyrying trying to remain calm until he sees get medivcal medical aid so the injury does not get worse.
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* '''Averted''': Bob has a reasonable pain threshhold.
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* '''Averted''': Bob has a reasonable pain threshhold.threshold.
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* '''Invoked''': Bob uses his seeming inablity to feel pain to unnerve his foes.
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* '''Invoked''': Bob uses his seeming inablity inability to feel pain to unnerve his foes.
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* '''Straight''': Bob gets his arm cut off, but shrugs it off as JustAFleshWound.
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* '''Straight''': Bob gets [[AnArmandaLeg his arm cut off, but shrugs it off as JustAFleshWound.severed off]], and just says "ow" nonchalantly.
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** Bob gets both arms cut off and is impaled but just yawns.
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** Bob gets both arms cut all of his limbs removed, but he shrugs it off and is impaled but just yawns.as being [[JustaFleshWound flesh wounds.]]
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* '''Downplayed''': Bob gets a nasty slash across his chest but only whimpers a little.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** Bob gets a nasty slash across his chest but only whimpers alittle.little.
** Bob gets his arm cut off and nervously states [[{{Understatement}} "Well that can't]] [[OhCrap be good."]]
** Bob gets a nasty slash across his chest but only whimpers a
** Bob gets his arm cut off and nervously states [[{{Understatement}} "Well that can't]] [[OhCrap be good."]]
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** Bob is tyrying to remain calm until he sees get medivcal aid so the injury does not get worse.
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** The injury is so serious that is severed the nerve endings.
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** The Bob's injury is so serious that is severed the his nerve endings.endings in that particular area.
