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* '''Straight''': Bob is plain, unattractive and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking doesn't have even drive a Mercedes]]. He also scores a string of disproportionately attractive women.
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* '''Straight''': Bob is plain, unattractive unattractive, and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking doesn't have even drive a Mercedes]]. He also scores a string of disproportionately attractive women.
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** Bob is [[{{gonk}} hideous]], drinks constantly, beats women, and insults every woman he meets to her face. He gets more tail than you can imagine.
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** Bob is [[{{gonk}} [[{{Gonk}} hideous]], drinks constantly, beats women, and insults every woman he meets to her face. He gets more tail than you can imagine.
** Bob merely smiles at Alice, a total stranger. She strips nude on the spot and jumps into his arms.
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** Bob seeks plain-looking, insecure and/or dimwitted women as his girlfriends.
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** Bob seeks plain-looking, insecure and/or dimwitted [[TheDitz dimwitted]] women as his girlfriends.
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** Bob tries to hit on a girl who sees through every one of his tricks -- and calls him out on it.
** Bob is ashamed of his own promiscuity, and so he makes it difficult as possible for women to be able to sleep with him.
** Bob is ashamed of his own promiscuity, and so he makes it difficult as possible for women to be able to sleep with him.
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** Bob tries to hit on a girl Grace, who sees through every one of his tricks -- and calls him out on it.
** Bob is ashamed of his own promiscuity,and so he makes it difficult as possible for women to be able to sleep with him.
** Bob is ashamed of his own promiscuity,
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** Bob can pull the females, but he's an ExtremeDoormat throughout all of his relationships and is never truly happy int he end.
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** Bob can pull the females, but he's an ExtremeDoormat throughout all of his relationships and is never truly happy int he in the end.
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** What Bob lacks in powerful seductive charm he makes up for by being just an incredibly well-mannered, polite, and chivalrous gentleman.
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** What Bob lacks in powerful seductive charm and looks he makes up for by being just an incredibly well-mannered, polite, and chivalrous gentleman.gentleman and a good listener.
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** Bob ''only'' look ugly according to nowadays typical standards, but [[DeliberateValuesDissonance he is considered attractive in his hometown or his era]].
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** Bob ''only'' look looks ugly according to nowadays typical standards, standards nowadays, but [[DeliberateValuesDissonance he is considered attractive in his hometown or his era]].
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** AllWomenAreLustful in this setting, so they smitten with Bob no matter how unattractive he is. Especially if Bob is TheOneGuy or even {{Gendercide}} survivor.
** Bob ''only'' look ugly according to typical standards, but [[DeliberateValuesDissonance he is considered attractive in his hometown or his era]].
** Bob ''only'' look ugly according to typical standards, but [[DeliberateValuesDissonance he is considered attractive in his hometown or his era]].
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** AllWomenAreLustful in this setting, so they smitten with Bob no matter how unattractive unpleasant he is. Especially if Bob is TheOneGuy or even the {{Gendercide}} survivor.
survivor, and/or women around him fear of VirginShaming.
** Bob ''only'' look ugly according to nowadays typical standards, but [[DeliberateValuesDissonance he is considered attractive in his hometown or his era]].
** Bob ''only'' look ugly according to nowadays typical standards, but [[DeliberateValuesDissonance he is considered attractive in his hometown or his era]].
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** Bob has a FaceOfAThug, [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold and sometimes has the demeanor of one too]], but he could still get people liking him if he showed them his nicer side.
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** Bob ''only'' look ugly according to typical standards, but [[DeliberateValueDissonance he is considered attractive in his hometown or his era]].
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** Bob ''only'' look ugly according to typical standards, but [[DeliberateValueDissonance [[DeliberateValuesDissonance he is considered attractive in his hometown or his era]].
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** AllWomenAreLustful in this setting, so they smitten with Bob no matter how unattractive he is. Especially if Bob is TheOneGuy or even {{Gendercide}} survivor.
** Bob ''only'' look ugly according to typical standards, but [[DeliberateValueDissonance he is considered attractive in his hometown or his era]].
** Bob ''only'' look ugly according to typical standards, but [[DeliberateValueDissonance he is considered attractive in his hometown or his era]].
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* '''Lampshaded''': "For someone as ugly as you, you sure do get a lot of women."
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* '''Lampshaded''': '''Lampshaded''':
** "For someone as ugly as you, you sure do get a lot of women."
** "I guess inner beauty matters after all."
** "For someone as ugly as you, you sure do get a lot of women."
** "I guess inner beauty matters after all."
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** Bob's girlfriends are either one-night stands or end their relationships with him in less than a week.
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** Bob seeks plain-looking, insecure and/or dimwitted women as his girlfriends.
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** Bob only ''looks'' ugly, what with his out-of-shape build, his overgrown facial hair, and his tacky clothing. But he can charm anyone into bed within ''seconds''.
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* Bob can pull the females, but he's an ExtremeDoormat throughout all of his relationships and is never truly happy int he end.
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** Bob is ''very'' good at reading people and knowing what does and doesn't work.
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** Bob is insanely smart and ''very'' good at reading people and knowing what does and doesn't work.
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* Bob is mostly a CasanovaWannabe who gets rejected but asks enough women out that one out of 10 will say yes to him.
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The justified part about being chivalrous was incongruent with the no positive qualites part
* Bob is mostly a CasanovaWannabe who gets rejected but asks enough women out that one out of 10 will say yes to him.
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** Bob is just an incredibly well-mannered, polite, and chivalrous gentleman.
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** What Bob is lacks in powerful seductive charm he makes up for by being just an incredibly well-mannered, polite, and chivalrous gentleman.
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* '''Straight''': Bob is plain, unattractive and has no particularly positive qualities. He also scores a string of disproportionately attractive women.
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* '''Straight''': Bob is plain, unattractive and has no particularly positive qualities.[[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking doesn't have even drive a Mercedes]]. He also scores a string of disproportionately attractive women.
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** Bob is unattractive, but a quick wit and good nature gives him obvious charm and charisma despite his appearance. Many women like him but some still remain impervious to his sex appeal.
** Bob is somewhat attractive, but is a complete dork.
** Bob is somewhat attractive, but is a complete dork.
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** Bob is unattractive, but a quick wit and good nature gives him obvious charm and charisma despite his appearance. Many women like him but some still remain somewhat impervious to his sex appeal.
** Bob is somewhat conventionally attractive, but is a complete dork.
** Bob is somewhat conventionally attractive, but is a complete dork.